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| Onion | Mar 31 2011, 09:00 PM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Orion Basic Character Information Name: Evan Edwards Nickname: The Black Hat Swordsman Age: 20 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Pirate Bounty: 0 Profession: Doctor A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. They also get various other related knowledge in terms of poisons, nutrients, animals, anatomy and certain history. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew. They also do not need to pay upkeep on the drugs/poisons they use. Weapon Specialist A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons. Position: (TBAL) Physical Appearance Height: 5’8 Weight: 197Ilb Hair: Powder Blue Eyes: Icy Blue Clothing/Accessories: A button down, long sleeve dark blue shirt with black strips. The first two buttons from the top are unbutton. The shirt is tucked into his black slacks. Around waist is a black leather belt. He has black socks and dark blue shoes. On his head he wears his trademarked black fedora hat. General Appearance: Evan is a pretty fit guy; he’s has muscles but they don’t really show unless his clothing is taken off. His hair is rather long, around mid-back length and is well combed and kept hanging behind his back. His clothes are always kept ironed and neat. Evan Edwards The Character Personality: Evan is a generally cheerful guy, good to get along with. He’s the type of person anyone can make friends with and if not friends at least respect. He can be a bit sarcastic at times but it’s not an often thing. He’s really hard to piss off; he normally just brushes off any insults thrown his way. It’s normally when he is put into a situation where fighting is the only way out that he will fight. Even then he is cheerful while fighting. He dreams of journeying around the world and learning about new advances in medicine. Hometown: Gray Island History: Age 0-5: Evan was born into a generally poor family. He was an only child because he parents couldn’t afford to raise any other kids. His father was a Pirate who was never home so Evan’s mother was the one who raised him. She was a very intelligent woman who inspired Evan to do great things. The two of them lived off Evan’s fathers earnings. Every month they would get a small amount of money to get them by. He wasn’t a very successful Pirate but Evan looked up to him. Every few months his father would come back and share stories of the freedom of the sea. His father’s crew never made it to the grand line, they were captured before entering. That was the month that the money his father sent stopped coming. His mother took up a job on a farm after they lost their home around the time Evan turned 4. They moved in with an old farmer and his wife and helped them work on the farm. Age 5-15: Evan and his mother lived on the farm and worked with the old Farmer and his wife in order to help pay for their rooms there. The old farmer and his wife didn’t have any kids of their own so they thought of Evan and his mother as a daughter and grandchild. Evan’s father sent out letters to his family, he reminisced in his letters about adventured he had. Evan continued to look up to his father and dreamed of one day venturing out to sea like him. The farmer’s wife was somewhat of a doctor and helped take care of the sick animals; she also taught Evan how to treat the animals and how to make medicine for both humans and animals. He was a bit of a savant when it came to surgically treating people. The old Farmer himself was an ex-marine swordsman who helped train Evan at night so in case of emergencies he could protect the farm and the people around him. He taught Evan everything he knew about swordsmanship using a special sword which broke apart into duel swords. Evan became incredibly skilled in both one handed sword style and two handed sword style. At age 14 he became the farms own personal mobile scare crow. The farmer had him chase down birds, catch them and let them go in order to improve his speed. He loved the farm but being the sun of a pirate made him want to set out to sea and venture out into the world like his father did. Age 16-20: Around the age of 17 the old farmer and his wife passed away and left their fortune and the farm to Evan and his mother. By that age Evan was already working in the island clinic, they had heard of his skills with surgery so they hired him even though he had no medical license. But during his time working in the clinic he was on his way to becoming a certified doctor. By age 19 he completed the necessary test and became a certified doctor. But he still felt empty on the inside like something was missing. He had always wanted to do more than just stay on his island. He continued to receive the letters from his father about his travels and decided he was old enough to leave the island and travel on the seas. He wanted to see what else lay out there in this big world. He wanted to learn about new medical treatments and possibly meet up with his father out on the seas. These aspirations were normal; he was the son of a pirate after all, searching for something greater in this world was in his blood. His mother had hired some people from town to help her with the farm just like the old farmer and his wife did for Evan and herself. She was in good hands so he bought a small boat and set sail. Abilities and Possessions Combat: He is a great swordsman, he is very skilled in one sword style and two sword style. He rarely uses his hands in combat, only if he intends to not truly harm his opponent. Weaponry: Dual Swords A black titanium blade with a titanium silver and striped black guard. The hilt is in the shape of a eye when together and is chrome black. Just like the original swords this sword can also be slid apart down the middle of it and separated into two blades. The blade as a whole is 4'6 and remains that way even when broken apart. Items: Surgical needles, surgical stitches, scalpels, bandages, adrenaline pills, anesthesia pills, sharpening stone, rubbing alcohol, blue and red medical herbs (from his farm, blue herbs used for making adrenaline pills, red herbs used for anesthesia pills), blue and red herb seeds (for resupplying the herbs once he runs out), empty gel capsules (For inserting the crushed herb powder to make it pill form). Beli: 2,925,000 Upkeep: 0 SD Earned: 72 Stats:
Sonic Speed (2 Traits) - This character's speed is boosted by 40%. Weapon Mastery [Sword(s)] (1 Trait) – The character masters the use of a specific weapon type. All techniques involving the weapon get a free one rank upgrade, and the max rank for techniques involving this weapon is two higher than the natural maximum. Anatomical Strike (1 Trait) – By using their extensive knowledge of the human anatomy, these doctors can aim specifically for areas that will cause very serious, even fatal wounds. The character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck. Fate of the Cunning [1 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of [# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3] to your accuracy stat.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 52 Used Regular Technique Points: 36 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
Development History Edit Log: Evan's Progress
Edited by Onion, Oct 30 2011, 10:52 PM.
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| Yaksha | Apr 2 2011, 02:58 PM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fairy Killer
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Lightning Surge only gives you a total alter of +1 for now. You're not...using Anatomical Strike. Wanna switch it? Lightning Whirlwind...is that 2 total or 2 each? If it's 2 each you'll need a rank 8. You can branch Two Sword lightning off of One Sword lightning if you like. |
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| Onion | Apr 2 2011, 04:53 PM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fixed Lightning surge. I wanna keep the anatomical strike for future uses, I have an idea for an attack I think at the moment wont be allowed because its too strong. Lightning Whirlwind is a total of 2 cuts. |
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| ♠ Shamma | Apr 3 2011, 06:52 AM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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no fun
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The character is quite... bland in terms of personality. You could include his aspirations to explain the 'But he still felt empty on the inside like something was missing.' line in his History. Mastered is a strong term, tone it down to adept. As a starter character, they are unlikely to be the master of anything. Need to specify that the blades are made of iron. Where is he getting the anaesthetic pills from? Doctors need to have techniques to make their medicines. Could you put all your techniques in one table, please. White Lightning - the line 'He slices his opponent at the waist with a flash, appearing behind his opponent while sheathing his blade.'. If he is creating a flash to 'disappear' and then 'appear' simply by slashing, this techniques is far beyond Rank 4. |
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| Onion | Apr 3 2011, 02:36 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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How's that? Any better? | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Yaksha | Apr 5 2011, 02:26 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fairy Killer
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Yeah, that can work. Topic is flagged for approval. |
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![]() Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok Pirates • Bounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78 Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61 Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location: Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30 Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Onion | Apr 6 2011, 06:50 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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whats my upkeep cost? | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Nary | Apr 9 2011, 06:05 AM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Artsy Lurker
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Zero. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Onion | Apr 9 2011, 11:26 AM Post #9 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Ok the upkeep was added, anything else? | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Nary | Apr 10 2011, 12:32 AM Post #10 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Reflagged. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' Osgrave • Artisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55 Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51 Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Hideo | Apr 13 2011, 04:34 PM Post #11 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Now a banana man
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