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| Aoi Akemi | Mar 28 2011, 08:23 AM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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That One Bitch
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Aoi Akemi Basic Character Information Name: Aoi Akemi Nickname: Luna, 'Demon Doctor' Age: 16 Gender: Female Race: Human Affiliation: Pirate Bounty: 28,000,000 Achievements: -Assisted In Successful Robbery Of Doskoi Panda Profession: ~Weapon Specialist (Primary) A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons. A weapon specialist will be allowed to start with more melee weapons than normal. ~Doctor (Secondary) A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. They also get various other related knowledge in terms of poisons, nutrients, animals, anatomy and certain history. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew. Position: (Jigsaw Pirates) Surgeon Physical Appearance Height: 5'7" Weight: 127 lbs Hair: White messy, tied into a pony tail Eyes: Sky Blue Clothing/Accessories: Wears a white sleeveless jacket, with a grey shirt under it with a grey denim miniskirt. Wears boots with a zipper that wraps around the leg of them. Wears a choker and earrings. She has her right arm constantly in a light metal gauntlet. General Appearance: She is a petite girl, very slim and fit. She has a small nose. She also has hair that is constantly a mess to the point where she gave up on making it look any better than her usual style. Her bust, hip, and waist sizes are well proportioned. Her teeth are slightly more shark-like than other people. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: She is cool and calm, very easy to respect in many ways. She is a lover not a fighter. Well, that isn't entirely true. She is one of those reluctant warrior types. Despite being a master of the katana, to the point where she can even wield all four she owns at one time, she hates fighting and will try to find a peaceful way to approach things. She stands by her belief that all people have some good in them to the point where she is considered a horrible judge of character, just so that she doesn't have to fight people. This standing she still gets herself one hell of a body count, because some people don't know when to stop. She had a very high need to care for the wounded, even if they don't want help or are a complete monster. She tries to be everyone's friend, but don't push her. Hometown: Dawn Island (East Blue) History: In her past, Aoi was raised by a sadistic medical professional who specialized in amputations and transplants. Her parents were quite evil in that respect and tried giving her life lessons, like that money talks wherever you go, or that people are naturally evil. Needless to say that she had great spite for her parents. However, she did have the access to a library of medical references for study. From a young age she spent her days helping wounded animals, and bandaging up people. She performed very minor surgeries like bone placement and the like to fix broken bones. From that age she was also taught by her mother to wield a blade. She excelled in single edged blades, and even more so, in katanas. Katanas were her specialty. Soon she ran away from home in a small boat to the open seas when she was 7. Taking her mom's supply of stock katanas. She has since been looking to join a pirate crew, to best avoid her parents, however she needs someone with the right stuff. Since then, she has trained more than ever with her combat weapon of Katanas. Despite never wanting to use them, she will never allow herself to dull her skills, in case she has to, which happens quite often since she is considered 'hot' and is frequently hit on by perverted men. Abilities and Possessions Combat: She wields up to 4 Katanas (for now) simultaneously. When fighting with more than three she holds the weapons in between her joints in odd positions (one in the mouth at all times though) and shifts them mid-attack as needed. (Think Killer Bee) When in a bind, she will make use of her special sword, Soluna. She uses its unique structure and lightweight, not only to look more threatening, but more or less to become more threatening. She uses the whole of it as the main force of offense but will separate it when she needs a more beat-down oriented attack. Weaponry: 4 Iron Katanas (In variously colored sheaths) about 3 feet long as blades Exacto-Gauntlet A gauntlet with fingers and knuckles that are sharpened to a very fine point. These can be used for stabbing and cutting enemies when Luna is disarmed. Made of iron. Another, more delicate ability, is that its tips are so sharp that they can have small surgical uses, such as a makeshift scalpel. Serves a good defense. ~Soluna A sword similar in size to that of a Buster Sword, composed of feathersteel, a lightweight metal with the strength of steel. This weapon, though it looks ridiculously heavy, is actually only about 3.8 lbs, that of a typical display katana. It is taller than Luna by a head, and almost as wide. This blade has a second handle, attached to the side that would be considered the flat, which allows it to break off into a smaller sword. The overall structure of the blade, is a large zweihander, the smaller blade is a long sword, which is bladed all around, except for the handle which is on the back making the long sword look like a crescent-typed blade. The main blade is basically a giant sword, the handle has a guard that extends up from its base that curves up and leaves a mere slit to get through. The short sword fits into the flat of the main blade, blade first, allowing easy access to the handle of the second blade. For the sake of not being stupidly easy to counteract, there is a trigger on the main blade which releases the clamps that hold the small blade in place, and the small blade is otherwise impossible to remove. For simplicity's sake, here is a reference picture of Soluna Items:1 Knockmeout Pear Vial, Various Medical Tools, Special Bandaging Beli: 5,550,000 Upkeep: 200,000 SD Earned: 56 Stats:
Anatomical Strike (1 Trait) – By using their extensive knowledge of the human anatomy, these doctors can aim specifically for areas that will cause very serious, even fatal wounds. The character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck. Weapon Mastery [Soluna] (1 Trait) – The character masters the use of Soluna. All techniques involving Soluna get a free one rank upgrade, and the max rank for techniques involving this weapon is two higher than the natural maximum. Technically Adept (1 Trait) – The character gains 8 additional Technique Points, and their maximum technique rank is two higher than their natural maximum. Techniques Regular Technique Points: 66 Used Regular Technique Points: 66 Special Technique Points: 0 Used Special Technique Points: 0
[/table] Development History Gains/Losses: - Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Aoi Akemi, Sep 28 2011, 05:18 PM.
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'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64 Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24 Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Yaksha | Mar 28 2011, 10:50 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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The way our system works, your tin gauntlent actually offers just as much defense as an iron one. I'd really prefer you save it for later. You don't need to specify Multiple Katanas, just put Katana. Everything else is good, though history doesn't explain why she has any interest in being a pirate. |
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| Aoi Akemi | Mar 28 2011, 10:58 AM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64 Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24 Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♠ Shamma | Mar 29 2011, 08:25 AM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Topic is flagged for approval. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot Rockets • Bounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • Fiore • Rank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line Other Characters
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| JOLS | Mar 29 2011, 12:02 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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157 what for weight? lbs or kilos isn't petite or slim at 5' 7". Fix both of these problems. Starters are pretty average level. Aoi doesn't have 7 katana. Also note that at Aoi's current stats (4 accuracy is below the average marine.) Aoi isn't going to wield 4 very well. Especially with uh, elbow-wielding. Remove references to being 'master' of katana and the 7 katana wielding from personality. Katana need length. One hit kills require a high tech rank, despite the wording of anatomical strike. Remove this reference from combat. Put Aoi's techniques in one table. Calf needs to mention it uses anatomical strike. Edited by JOLS, Mar 29 2011, 12:06 PM.
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Assuming it's approved Official OPRP collectable trading card.
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| Aoi Akemi | Mar 29 2011, 01:01 PM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Fixed some things up, edited stats to keep multi-wielding up to four, changed my fated to help accuracy so that she can track her weaponry movement as she interchanges positions. Fixed the table... I think it got done... | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64 Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24 Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| Yaksha | Mar 29 2011, 09:09 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Yep, reflagged. | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
![]() Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok Pirates • Bounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78 Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61 Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location: Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30 Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♠ Shamma | Mar 30 2011, 10:57 AM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Keep in mind that wielding all four at a time will be awkward and not as effective till the character has some more SD. Part of the experience is improving though. Your character has been approved. From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines. Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here. |
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Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot Rockets • Bounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • Fiore • Rank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line Other Characters
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