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Account Name: Aoi Akemi


Basic Character Information
Name: Aoi Akemi
Nickname: Luna, 'Demon Doctor'
Age: 16
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 28,000,000
Achievements:
-Assisted In Successful Robbery Of Doskoi Panda
Profession: ~Weapon Specialist (Primary)
A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons. A weapon specialist will be allowed to start with more melee weapons than normal.
~Doctor (Secondary)
A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. They also get various other related knowledge in terms of poisons, nutrients, animals, anatomy and certain history. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew.
Position: (Jigsaw Pirates) Surgeon


Physical Appearance
Height: 5'7"
Weight: 127 lbs
Hair: White messy, tied into a pony tail
Eyes: Sky Blue
Clothing/Accessories: Wears a white sleeveless jacket, with a grey shirt under it with a grey denim miniskirt. Wears boots with a zipper that wraps around the leg of them. Wears a choker and earrings. She has her right arm constantly in a light metal gauntlet.
General Appearance: She is a petite girl, very slim and fit. She has a small nose. She also has hair that is constantly a mess to the point where she gave up on making it look any better than her usual style. Her bust, hip, and waist sizes are well proportioned. Her teeth are slightly more shark-like than other people.

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The Character
Personality: She is cool and calm, very easy to respect in many ways. She is a lover not a fighter. Well, that isn't entirely true. She is one of those reluctant warrior types. Despite being a master of the katana, to the point where she can even wield all four she owns at one time, she hates fighting and will try to find a peaceful way to approach things. She stands by her belief that all people have some good in them to the point where she is considered a horrible judge of character, just so that she doesn't have to fight people. This standing she still gets herself one hell of a body count, because some people don't know when to stop. She had a very high need to care for the wounded, even if they don't want help or are a complete monster. She tries to be everyone's friend, but don't push her.

Hometown: Dawn Island (East Blue)
History: In her past, Aoi was raised by a sadistic medical professional who specialized in amputations and transplants. Her parents were quite evil in that respect and tried giving her life lessons, like that money talks wherever you go, or that people are naturally evil. Needless to say that she had great spite for her parents. However, she did have the access to a library of medical references for study. From a young age she spent her days helping wounded animals, and bandaging up people. She performed very minor surgeries like bone placement and the like to fix broken bones.

From that age she was also taught by her mother to wield a blade. She excelled in single edged blades, and even more so, in katanas. Katanas were her specialty.

Soon she ran away from home in a small boat to the open seas when she was 7. Taking her mom's supply of stock katanas. She has since been looking to join a pirate crew, to best avoid her parents, however she needs someone with the right stuff. Since then, she has trained more than ever with her combat weapon of Katanas. Despite never wanting to use them, she will never allow herself to dull her skills, in case she has to, which happens quite often since she is considered 'hot' and is frequently hit on by perverted men.


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: She wields up to 4 Katanas (for now) simultaneously. When fighting with more than three she holds the weapons in between her joints in odd positions (one in the mouth at all times though) and shifts them mid-attack as needed. (Think Killer Bee)

When in a bind, she will make use of her special sword, Soluna. She uses its unique structure and lightweight, not only to look more threatening, but more or less to become more threatening. She uses the whole of it as the main force of offense but will separate it when she needs a more beat-down oriented attack.
Weaponry: 4 Iron Katanas (In variously colored sheaths) about 3 feet long as blades
Exacto-Gauntlet
A gauntlet with fingers and knuckles that are sharpened to a very fine point. These can be used for stabbing and cutting enemies when Luna is disarmed. Made of iron. Another, more delicate ability, is that its tips are so sharp that they can have small surgical uses, such as a makeshift scalpel. Serves a good defense.
~Soluna
A sword similar in size to that of a Buster Sword, composed of feathersteel, a lightweight metal with the strength of steel. This weapon, though it looks ridiculously heavy, is actually only about 3.8 lbs, that of a typical display katana. It is taller than Luna by a head, and almost as wide.

This blade has a second handle, attached to the side that would be considered the flat, which allows it to break off into a smaller sword. The overall structure of the blade, is a large zweihander, the smaller blade is a long sword, which is bladed all around, except for the handle which is on the back making the long sword look like a crescent-typed blade.

The main blade is basically a giant sword, the handle has a guard that extends up from its base that curves up and leaves a mere slit to get through. The short sword fits into the flat of the main blade, blade first, allowing easy access to the handle of the second blade. For the sake of not being stupidly easy to counteract, there is a trigger on the main blade which releases the clamps that hold the small blade in place, and the small blade is otherwise impossible to remove.

For simplicity's sake, here is a reference picture of Soluna

Items:1 Knockmeout Pear Vial, Various Medical Tools, Special Bandaging
Beli: 5,550,000
Upkeep: 200,000
SD Earned: 56
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 68
  • Used for Fortune: 20

    • Strength: 23
    • Speed: 18
    • Stamina: 13
    • Accuracy: 14
    • Fortune: 29
Traits: Advanced Weapon Mastery [Katanas] (2 Traits) – The character masters this weapon to the level that very few can best them. All techniques involving this weapon are raised two ranks for free, and the maximum rank for techniques involving this weapon is three higher than the natural maximum.
Anatomical Strike (1 Trait) – By using their extensive knowledge of the human anatomy, these doctors can aim specifically for areas that will cause very serious, even fatal wounds. The character can use up to a quarter of their Technique Points in techniques which hit vital points in the body. Striking vital points allows characters to do damage and cause a stat debuff related to the area struck.
Weapon Mastery [Soluna] (1 Trait) – The character masters the use of Soluna. All techniques involving Soluna get a free one rank upgrade, and the max rank for techniques involving this weapon is two higher than the natural maximum.
Technically Adept (1 Trait) – The character gains 8 additional Technique Points, and their maximum technique rank is two higher than their natural maximum.

Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 66
Used Regular Technique Points: 66
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Techniques
Quad Dash (5+2=7)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Aoi dashes forward wielding 4 blades. As she passes the intended target she will slash the opponent 4 times, creating a large asterisk-like shape where they are hit.
Quad-Shred (8+2=10)
[Branched from Quad-Dash]
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Luna, using 4 swords will dash through a crowd of enemies, slashing through all of them really quickly multiple times. This causes deep gashes in a crowd of enemies, all in the shape of asterisks.
Star Shot (12+2=14)
[Branched from Quad-Shred]
Type: Offensive
Range: Long
Stats: N/A
Description: Luna slashes four swords, sending a thin asterisk-shaped bladed wind wave at a small group of enemies. This will cut into them, and overall will make a large asterisk gash in the enemies.
Twist (2+2=4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Wielding 4 (or more) swords, Luna spins around once with the blades pointing out in various directions, cutting surrounding enemies, a pretty general move.
Spin (6+2=8)
[Branched From Twist]
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Wielding 4 (or more) swords, Luna spins around rapidly with the blades pointing out in various directions, cutting surrounding enemies vigorously, more efficient than her usual spin, though taking a bit more time.
Flip Spin (8+2=10)
[Branched From Spin]
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Wielding 4 (or more) swords, Luna will spin around with a few flips, and cuts at enemies quickly and rapidly, with the blades pointing out in various directions, cutting enemies rapidly, allows Luna to get more angles on the enemies, while also moving a bit through a crowd, allowing her to get through crowds quickly.
Dark Mode (14)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Stats: +9 Strength
Description: Luna taps into her inner reservoirs of rage, causing her personality to altogether warp into a darker version of her usual personality. While active she thinks less about rationality and more about killing, allowing her to go all out. Lasts for 5 posts then can't be used for 7 afterwards.
Soluna Slicer (3+1=4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: N/A
Description: Luna swings her sword with more force than she normally does, causing deeper gashes than her normal swings.
Soluna Cut (7+1=8)
[Branched from Soluna Slicer]
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: N/A
Description: Luna slices the enemy with her full strength and dashes past them. By doing this, she can get past an enemy while dealing heavy damage to them.
Unlimited Slash (13+1=14)
[Branched from Soluna Cut]
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid Range
Stats: N/A
Description: Luna swings Soluna as fast as she can, so fast that it leaves afterimages. After a short delay, she slashes her enemy at full strength, causing a short barrage of further slashing randomly around the enemy by the after image blades, not even delayed. They don't linger and cannot block anything, but they have the cutting power of a standard iron sword.
Calf (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: -2 to speed
Description: Aoi gives a precise physical strike to the calf muscle of a single enemy, causing it to ache and give the enemy a harder time moving that leg, reducing their speed by two. Uses Anatomical Strike.
Ichiken Stance (3+2=5)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Stats: +3 Speed
Description: Luna takes a steady stance, and prepares to attack. This stance holds a blade loosely with a single hand, while keeping her feet firmly on the ground. Her knees slightly bent to allow for faster reflexes with her legs and stuff. It increases her speed some. Uses one sword.
Footwork (4+2=6)
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Stats: +3 Speed
Description: Luna stretches her legs for a few moments to loosen the tension on the muscles. Afterwards, she can move her legs quite well and moves more gracefully. This technique allows her to move faster, attack, and dodge faster. Can be used in tandem with stances. Lasts for 2 posts.
Bandage (4)
Type: Supplementary
Range: One Target
Stats: None
Description: Luna puts a nice patch of bandaging on one wound, with allows it to heal up. This stops the wound from becoming infected and eases pain in the area unless it is touched. This also stops bleeding in the area the bandaging is placed. Requires a bit of time, but is very useful after difficult battles.
Bandaging (8)
[Branched from Bandage]
Type: Supplementary
Range: One Target
Stats: None
Description: Luna practically mummifies any given area where wounds are. This stops bleeding, and infection of the wound and eases pain in the area. The bandaging is special because it hardens. Acts as a cast for any area because it of this (it functions as such as well). Requires a little bit of time, both to apply and to harden but it is great for use after battle.



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Edited by Aoi Akemi, Sep 28 2011, 05:18 PM.
'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line

Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64


Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues

Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24


Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue

Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11
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Yaksha
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The way our system works, your tin gauntlent actually offers just as much defense as an iron one. I'd really prefer you save it for later.

You don't need to specify Multiple Katanas, just put Katana.

Everything else is good, though history doesn't explain why she has any interest in being a pirate.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Edited
'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line

Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64


Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues

Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24


Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue

Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11
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Shamma
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Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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157 what for weight? lbs or kilos isn't petite or slim at 5' 7". Fix both of these problems.

Starters are pretty average level. Aoi doesn't have 7 katana. Also note that at Aoi's current stats (4 accuracy is below the average marine.) Aoi isn't going to wield 4 very well. Especially with uh, elbow-wielding. Remove references to being 'master' of katana and the 7 katana wielding from personality.

Katana need length.

One hit kills require a high tech rank, despite the wording of anatomical strike. Remove this reference from combat.

Put Aoi's techniques in one table.

Calf needs to mention it uses anatomical strike.
Edited by JOLS, Mar 29 2011, 12:06 PM.
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Fixed some things up, edited stats to keep multi-wielding up to four, changed my fated to help accuracy so that she can track her weaponry movement as she interchanges positions. Fixed the table... I think it got done...
'Dragon Warrior' Suzume • Medic • Doctor/Weapon Specialist/Inventor/Merchant • Crewless • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 167 • Beli: 31,900,000 • L: Grand Line

Strength: 48 Speed: 49 Stamina: 25 Accuracy: 26 Fortune: 64


Musashi • Heavy Combat • Thief/Weapon Specialist • No Crew • Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 12,500,000 • Location: Blues

Strength: 42 Speed: 17 Stamina: 20 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 24


Scarlet Carnation • Cook • Inventor/Chef • No Crew • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 13 • Beli: 3,750,000 • Location: East Blue

Strength: 8 Speed: 14 Stamina: 8 Accuracy: 15 Fortune: 11
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Yep, reflagged.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Keep in mind that wielding all four at a time will be awkward and not as effective till the character has some more SD. Part of the experience is improving though.

Your character has been approved.

From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines.

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Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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