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| Alpha | Mar 22 2011, 06:31 PM Post #1 | ||||||||||||||
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Character Template [-----] Account Name: Alpha Basic Character Information Name: Shou Riley Nickname: Zeroth Age: 19 Gender: Female Race: Human Affiliation: Pirate Bounty: 0 Profession: ~Martial Artist A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Martial artists get one free rank 4 technique that is a stat-altering technique, used on themselves. ~Chef A Chef, Cook, Bartender or any other distinct related profession gives kitchen skills and knowledge about food, flavoring, ingredients, drink, and nutrients. Position: Captain Physical Appearance Height: 6 ft Weight: 170 pounds Hair: Dark brown with white bangs. Spiky, about shoulder length, bangs are eye length Eyes: Yellow green Clothing/Accessories: Riley usually wears old jeans with some random zippers and patches. She also wears a zip up sleeveless vest, with a hood, usually open but not always. The hoodie is colored white and the inside is black. The zipper is gold. Underneath she wears a common t-shirt with some design or words. Seldom, she goes without a shirt, having only a bikini top on. The vest, however, stays on at all times. Around her wrists and palms she wraps bandages, to prevent injuries. On top, she usually put on black leather gloves with the tips cut off. She also carries a pair of gold and copper colored goggles, with blue lenses, usually around her neck or pushed to her forehead. Commonly, she has a blue sash tied around her waist, to carry her sword, and a light tan leather belt with some pouches. However, in the ship she usually leaves these items in storage. General Appearance: Riley is tall and lanky. She usually stands with one hand in her pocket and one on her sword, with eyes half closed. She tends to look mad, due to her eyes and eyebrows. However this is counteracted by a usual slasher grin, giving her a slightly crazed look. She has a large Y shaped scar on the left size of her forehead and a light line scar on her right cheek. On the sides of her face she usually applies whisker-like marks. This is makeup, not tattoos. Spoiler: click to toggle The Character Personality: Riley appears laid-back and cheeky most of the time. She is usually curious and happy. She can be really introspective and philosophic but most people assume she is a idiot, mostly because of the way she acts. Riley is always eager to learn and explore, so she can get very bored when listening to people talk about things she already knowns. Given she knows a lot and can be rather rash, she can appear quite rude to the common observer. Despite this happy-go-lucky personality, Riley can change dramatically when faced with something that upsets her. Injustice, discrimination and mocking people are things that leave her furious and the culprits usually pay. Riley is usually either speaking very fast or, if tired or bored, slurring her speech. When she is upset, her voice also drops a good half-octave intirely. She speaks much more clearly. Despite her fearless disposition, Riley cannot stand birds. The reasons for this are unknown. Riley's dreams are confusing. It's more of an anxiety to dream than a proper dream. It could be said her dream is to live fully. Her most remarkable feature comes from this. Riley has a steel will and never gives up. This tends to cause more bad than good, as her determination leads her to push herself to hard. Despite being fairly intelligent, Riley has difficulty concentrating at times, due to thinking about too many things. This seems to lessen as she gets more determined to fulfill a goal. Hometown: None History: Riley was born on a merchant ship. Her father died a few months prior and her mother died shortly after, from disease. While they were growing up, her brother taught her fighting, so she could defend herself from other merchant kids. It was from one of these spars that Riley obtained the scar on her cheek. Riley only looked up to a few people: The great pirates of ages past, her brother and an old merchant man, who was a retired Marine. However, one day, while docked on an old town, a war broke out. The villagers were tired of living under the control of a vicious Marine squad. The old man from the ship took Riley and ran to a safe place while her brother stood back and fought off both villagers and marines, who simply did not know who they were. Her brother disappeared and was assumed dead. Riley was about 10. The old man took upon himself to care for Riley. They lived on the other side of the island, away from town. Riley spent her days running on the forest and learning how to fight with blades. She got her second scar from an encounter with a bear. Ultimately, she won. It was also in this forest she found a Devil Fruit. Despite the old man's protests, Riley left the island as soon as she turned 19 and has been wandering ever since. Abilities and Possessions Combat: Depending on how concentrated she is, Riley will fight brashly or more calculating. Her combat style is flashy and unpredictable, mostly because Riley herself isn't sure of what she will do next. She tends to add unnecessary flair and jumps just to look cool. This tends to disappear when she's mad but opens another problem, as she becomes more predictable. To fight, Riley mostly uses martial arts as she isn't as skilled with her sword. It is usually reserved for finishing, when the opponent can't dodge as much. Weaponry: Riley's main sword is a big, around 3 ft tall, tsurugi (japanese broadsword. Think Cloud's sword from FF7 but not exactly. I'm sorry I cannot find better examples, it's not very common). The blade is painted copper but it's simple iron. The guard is magnolia shaped, with the inside of the flower pointing towards the blade. The hilt is blue, with small white diamonds. The pommel is hexagonal. Both the pommel and the guard are slightly blue tinted steel. Items: Goggles Beli: 500,000 Upkeep: 0 SD Earned: 0 Stats:
Random Devil Fruit (3 Traits) - A character who wishes to may start with a randomly selected devil fruit. The fruit will be chosen from a master list kept by the administrators and will be determined based on dice roll. The power that the character is given is final, and may not be reversed by making a new character. The random list will contain a great variety of powers, representing all three types (Zoan, Paramecia, and Logia) and will range from moderate to strong. There is a small chance of getting a stronger devil fruit than you'd be allowed to choose with the Specific Devil Fruit trait. Training of the Kitchen (1 Trait) – After spending so long in front of the open fires in the kitchen, the character gains immunity to heat-based attacks similar to having an iron body. Any heat-based attack that wouldn’t damage iron won’t harm them.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 16 Used Regular Technique Points: 11 Special Technique Points:0 Used Special Technique Points:0
Development History Gains/Losses: Edit Log: Spoiler: click to toggle
Edited by Alpha, Mar 30 2011, 10:31 AM.
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| Shou Riley • Captain • Martial Artist • Goggle Pirates • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500.000 • Location: East Blue | |||||||||||||||
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| Versesai | Mar 23 2011, 05:51 AM Post #2 | ||||||||||||||
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Cipher Pol 0 Leader
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Zoan - Choose between: Hitsu Hitsu no Mi (Sheep Zoan), Yagi Yagi no Mi(Goat Zoan) or Reyo Reyo no Mi (Antelope Zoan) | ||||||||||||||
Ovae Sevault Dachrinne • Doctor/Weapon Specialist • This Man's A Doctor • 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 77 • Beli: 16,700,000 • Location: God Only Knows. These Other Inactives
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| Alpha | Mar 23 2011, 11:11 AM Post #3 | ||||||||||||||
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I'll take the Reyo Reyo no Mi :) | ||||||||||||||
| Shou Riley • Captain • Martial Artist • Goggle Pirates • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500.000 • Location: East Blue | |||||||||||||||
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| Yaksha | Mar 23 2011, 12:46 PM Post #4 | ||||||||||||||
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Fairy Killer
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Then please put it in the DF section, and add the techniques as listed in the rules. | ||||||||||||||
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| Alpha | Mar 23 2011, 01:01 PM Post #5 | ||||||||||||||
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Okay, done. I think that's everything :) | ||||||||||||||
| Shou Riley • Captain • Martial Artist • Goggle Pirates • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500.000 • Location: East Blue | |||||||||||||||
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| Hideo | Mar 26 2011, 10:34 AM Post #6 | ||||||||||||||
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Now a banana man
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-Your maximum technique rank is 4 -You still need to add your two free zoan transformation techniques. One allows you to go to hybrid form and the other allows full animal form. Both give you a +10 to allocate to any of your stats while in that form. -You also still have a free rank 4 buff from Martial artist. -Remove the last 2 sentences from your Chef profession. |
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| Alpha | Mar 26 2011, 01:07 PM Post #7 | ||||||||||||||
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Okay, NOW it's done. I think? I fixed everything I was told to fix :D | ||||||||||||||
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| Hideo | Mar 26 2011, 02:18 PM Post #8 | ||||||||||||||
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-Sword isn't upkeep, your upkeep will be 0 -By power I'm going to assume you mean strength? If so change it to that. It's fine as it is, but just making sure you know that the 10 can be distributed however you like. +5 strength and +5 speed. +3 stamina +4 strength +3 speed, etc. If you want to keep it as is though, that's fine as well. -Iron Will can only distribute up to a +2 and the way you have it currently is 1 to all stats (which is 4) -Since you had to lower the rank of blade Driver also remove the part about sending the enemy flying. Fix this and you're good to go |
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| Alpha | Mar 26 2011, 04:05 PM Post #9 | ||||||||||||||
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Fixed. | ||||||||||||||
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| Hideo | Mar 26 2011, 04:17 PM Post #10 | ||||||||||||||
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| Yaksha | Mar 27 2011, 08:02 PM Post #11 | ||||||||||||||
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Iron Will doesn't really change anything physically, so I'm afraid it's a rank 14. Why don't you try some sort of stance? | ||||||||||||||
![]() Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok Pirates • Bounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78 Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61 Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location: Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30 Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23 | |||||||||||||||
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| Alpha | Mar 28 2011, 11:26 AM Post #12 | ||||||||||||||
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What, really? It's sorta like getting the will to fight, pushing our limits. Like an athlete concentrating to win a match? Would that really be a rank 14? What exactly is a stance? |
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| ♠ Shamma | Mar 29 2011, 08:33 AM Post #13 | ||||||||||||||
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Concentration would not warrant a stat change at such a low rank. Stances would offer a slight stat change, due to the body position taken. Could you be more descriptive on the Hybrid Form, please. |
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| Alpha | Mar 29 2011, 01:23 PM Post #14 | ||||||||||||||
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Fixed, but please don't ask me to elaborate on the stance, I know shit about the mechanics behind martial arts. | ||||||||||||||
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| Yaksha | Mar 29 2011, 09:12 PM Post #15 | ||||||||||||||
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Let me give an example. "He places his legs shoulder width apart. By doing so, he allows himself superior balance, letting him put greater force behind blows." That's a perfectly fine stat buff, since it does in some manner change your physical capabilities. Using willpower to raise stamina is different from growing your muscles by screaming only in degree. Your stances needn't be scientific and tested by true martial arts. They only need to explain what exactly he looks like when using it. Something as simple as saying he positions himself so that he can easily turn solid hids into glancing blows to reduce their effectiveness can raise stamina. |
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![]() Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok Pirates • Bounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78 Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61 Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location: Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30 Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23 | |||||||||||||||
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