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Xocoyatl Iztopalotl; Character registration [Flagged]
Topic Started: Feb 12 2011, 10:28 PM (1,047 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Xocoyatl Iztopalotl
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Age: Seventeen years old
Gender: Female
Race Human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 8,000,000
Profession:~Ranger
A ranger is a person that has dedicated a large portion of their life to the art of monitoring all aspects of The Wild. Whether it be the patterns of wildlife, locations of wild growth, or anything else that pertains to the nature of the untamed wilderness, a Ranger has a good knowledge of it and by extension has a good handle of tracking and trapping. Usually good with animals, though not in the Beast-Handler way, but more in the way that they know how to deal with animals should they come charging/flying/pouncing at them. Rangers have their upkeep costs for food waived as they are able to hunt and trap their own food nearly anywhere.
~Martial Artist
A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body.
Position: Has no crew yet.


Physical Appearance
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 118lbs
Hair: Black
Eyes: Greenish-blue
Clothing/Accessories: As she first appears Xocoyatl lives alone in the forest wearing rags and animal skins.
General Appearance: Despite having lived most of her life in the wild Xocoyatl is curvy, but with visible muscle definition at odds with her soft facial features; Red lips, soft-looking and sun darkened skin, and delicate eyebrows. She has long legs and arms for her size so she seems taller at first glance. Often times her eyes are described as "intense," or "Powerful." Minor scars cover her hands, legs, arms, and sides. Years of living alone has left Xocoyatl carrying little for her personal appearance, so her hair is often tangled and wild.


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The Character
Personality: Xocoyatl is naturally cautious, especially of new things. Her survival instincts are far more honed than a civilized person. Jokes often escape her, giving her a distinctly serious air; though she is a fun loving woman. Her lack of social interaction growing up as left her very lonely, it causes her to be very nice and eager to make new friends once she gets past her initial but natural mistrust. Life alone has made her independent, strong, and clever. But she is woefully ignorant as well, of culture, civilization, and people. She's intense in everything she does, and even in the depths of her emotions; but she seeks inner peace. It is for this inner passion that she was selected by her master. However the teachings of his martial arts strive for inner peace. She's curious naturally but life has taught her caution first. And time alone has made Xocoyatl very introspective as well. She often finds herself dwelling on mistakes.

Hometown: Xocoyatl was born in a very small fishing village on an unmarked island in the South Blue. Little more than a thousand people live on the tropical speck. A volcano plumes from the middle of the island with a tropical forest dominating the center. Its large enough that there are a few apex predators on the island, mostly salt water crocs, and a jungle cat with spots who hunts the local pigs, rats, birds, and anything else it can get its paws on. Even Xocoyatl. The only village is on the north face, right on the white sandy beach.

History:
When she is a little girl a ship wrecked man lands on their island. He is strong, but aged and weak from the sea. A week later a pirate ship comes upon the village. The raiders pillage the people for what little possessions they have, those who resist are killed. Xocoyatl's parents are among them. One takes an eye to her, and tries to drag her aboard ship before they leave.

Just before she can be done in Xocoyatl kills one of the ruffians with his own knife. Then appears the old man, a martial arts master who fends off the attack and rescues Xocoyatl. Rather than leave her to starve alone in the island, or get picked up by whoever came by next, the Master took her into the forest.

There in seclusion he sought enlightenment. Along the way he teaches Xocoyatl all he knows. How to survive; how to defender herself. Why and when she should defend herself. Together they lived off the land for a long time. Xocoyatl grew from a young girl to a young woman in that jungle. But it could not last forever for the Master was old. He died with a smile upon his aged face.

Xocoyatl continued to live alone in the jungle, still trying to perfect her art. It is not long after her master's death I expect Xocoyatl to be picked up by a pirate crew and begin her adventures on the high seas!


Abilities and Possessions
Combat:Xocoyatl is calm in a fight, unless pressed. The more she is pressed the more fierce she becomes. She utilizes Muay Thon when forced to defend herself. It becomes Muay Thai the more passionate she becomes.

Weaponry: Xocoyatl prefers to fight with her hands and feet, open handed. Though on occasion she uses a standard survival knife, but she rarely wishes to risk a blade and take a life she does not have to. [/b]

Items:
Beli: 22,687,500
Upkeep:0
SD Earned:70
Stats:102
  • Used for Stats:102
  • Used for Fortune:0

    • Strength:30
    • Speed:32(23+9)
    • Stamina:22
    • Accuracy:27
    • Fortune:25
Traits:
Martial Art Mastery [Muay Thai] (1 Trait) – The character masters a style of unarmed combat. All techniques which are based on the central theme of this style will get a free one rank upgrade, and the max rank for these techniques is two higher than the natural maximum.

Fate of the Swift [3 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of [# of traits in fated, multiplied by 3] to your speed stat.

Hardened Fighter (1 Trait) – Through excessive training in breaking planks, punching rocks, and all those durability-building exercises, the character’s arms, up to their elbows, and their legs, up to their knees, have gained skin that is as hard as wood, making them much more resistant to physical damage.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name:
Devil Fruit Type: N/A
Devil Fruit Ability: N/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 40
Used Regular Technique Points: 10
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Techniques
Egg Breaker 8
Type: Attack
Range: Close range
Stats:
Description: The combination of relentless iron body training and practice with Muay Thai Xocoyatl can deliver a devastating downward elbow attack capable of breaking a man’s bone. When applied to the weaker section at the top of the skull it can be an especially deadly technique with a depression in the skull.

Egg Scrambler (Branch 8+2) 10
Type: Assault
Range: Close range
Stats:
Description: Usually applied by leaping forward and planting both her knees on either side of the targets neck. Then Xocoyatl smashes both her elbows straight down into the top of her opponent’s skull for a doubly destructive attack. Any chance where Xocoyatl can bring both elbows down upon a target will be sufficient to create the bone crushing effects however.


Development History
Gains/Losses:Gained 14 SD and 3,437,500 Beli -An Eye for Gold
Gained: 7 SD and 1,750,000 Beli -Maelstrom Pirates
Gained 5 SD and 5,000,000 Beli -April Contest
Gains/Losses:Gained 19 SD and 9,500,000 Beli -Trust your heart if the seas catch fire
Gains/Losses:Gained 6 SD and 3,000,000 Beli -Cactus Crisis
Gains/Losses:Gained 19 SD and 9,000,000 Beli -Cactus Crisis part 2


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Edited by Yuni Kataki, Aug 3 2011, 06:06 PM.
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Fixed your tables as best I could.

Cat Claws can have it's Stats section removed.
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Ok I fixed everything I was told needs fixing :)
Xocoyatl Iztopalotl • Chef • Ranger • [url]None[/url] • Bounty: 8,000,000 • SD Earned: 51 • Beli: 13,687,500 • Location: Grandline - cactus cactus island

Tetsu-ko Toronaga • None• Entertainer -Weapon specialist • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,00 • Location: na
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Stats are buff or debuffs to stats. Cat Claws can be seen or viewed as an offensive technique, so technically it wouldn't provide anything to stats.
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It can be but its not really, at least I didn't mean it to be. She doesn't just strike with the cat claws she blocks with them too. It basically marks a change in her philosophy. All Xoco's movements become sharper, quicker, and stronger. More ferocious in other words while when they're hooked Xoco focuses on accuracy, technique, fluidity, and smoothness. Is it still not a buff then?
Xocoyatl Iztopalotl • Chef • Ranger • [url]None[/url] • Bounty: 8,000,000 • SD Earned: 51 • Beli: 13,687,500 • Location: Grandline - cactus cactus island

Tetsu-ko Toronaga • None• Entertainer -Weapon specialist • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,00 • Location: na
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You cannot attack and debuff without the proper traits at the same time, more importantly, attacking faster does not give you more accuracy nor is curling your fingers into claw-like shapes.
Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' OsgraveArtisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line
Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55

Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues
Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51

Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues
Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33
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Well the hand adjustments are basically the physical manifestation of Xoco's change in attitude. When in hooks her focus is on accuracy. Through meditations her movements become more smooth, purposeful, and accurate. When like claws the focus is on power, brutality, and ferocity.

I'm not sure what you mean by "having the proper traits."
Xocoyatl Iztopalotl • Chef • Ranger • [url]None[/url] • Bounty: 8,000,000 • SD Earned: 51 • Beli: 13,687,500 • Location: Grandline - cactus cactus island

Tetsu-ko Toronaga • None• Entertainer -Weapon specialist • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,00 • Location: na
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Critical Hit allows you to strike and debuff at the same time.

The main concern is that 'focusing' won't raise your stats, since those stats you see are your character at the very threshold of their limits. Wanting to lift something more than you did 3 seconds ago won't give you a literal strength boost, since your strength as you see it is your strength when you're pouring every ounce of muscle strength into it. To raise your stats by sheer willpower requires you to quite literally overcome your body's built in limits by wanting it badly enough, and that needs a rank of about 14.

To put it simply, stat alters need to make a literal physical change that would allow you to put more force behind your blows, more easily pull or lift things, and so on. Not just thinking about how you want to punch this guy really, really badly.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Ok I fixed everything
Xocoyatl Iztopalotl • Chef • Ranger • [url]None[/url] • Bounty: 8,000,000 • SD Earned: 51 • Beli: 13,687,500 • Location: Grandline - cactus cactus island

Tetsu-ko Toronaga • None• Entertainer -Weapon specialist • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 500,00 • Location: na
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Topic is flagged for approval.
Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' OsgraveArtisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line
Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55

Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues
Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51

Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues
Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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I don't know how we missed this, but your used TP is 8, not 0; 1 for every 1 rank on a technique, unless a trait is altering it.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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