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Topic Started: Feb 6 2011, 09:29 PM (1,605 Views)
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Account Name: Rayne


Basic Character Information
Name: Rayne Kazehara A.K.A Sorrow
Nickname: The Dead Angel
Age: 20
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Pirate
Bounty: 18,000,000 (extra 250 000 anonymous bounty)
Profession:

~Thief
The Thief is a job closely related to the assassin. They both provide stealth capabilities, though a Thief gains lockpicking skills instead of poison knowledge, can generally know their way around the ways of barter and trade, and pickpocketing. Thieves don't have it hard to find 'underground info' in most cities, either. Thieves will gain an extra 10% in Beli rewards in all Storylines they complete (for themselves).

~Weapon Specialist [Swords]
A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons.

Position:* Captain – The one who runs the crew, and gives the orders.


Physical Appearance
Height: 7ft 4in
Weight: 100 kilos
Hair: Long in a bushy black pony tail
Eyes: Red
Clothing/Accessories: Rayne: necklace, with a red and white japanese style fan as a pendant. wears an open yellow shirts with short sleeves and blue beach shorts.

Sorrow: When dressed as Sorrow he wears black trousers with boots of the same colour, a long sleeved onyx top and a matching body length coat to complete the outfit also black with a hood that is usually pulled up. The mask he wears is reminiscent of the theatre masks of days gone by, plain white with an expressionless mouth and a purple lightning emblem going across the right eye. Both the way he carries himself and the way his jacket often flares out behind him when he finishes off foes at speed have given birth to rumours of him looking somewhat angelic on the battlefield this then giving rise to the handle "The dead Angle" as his eyes seem void of life and it is believed no living human could be as merciless as he.
General Appearance:
Rayne is a tall guy with an athletic build. Rayne is fairly ordinary in terms of clothing, and doesn't wear any particularly unique items other than his fan shaped pendant. His overall appearance, however, is not as normal. He keeps his eyes constantly narrowed to slits, rarely ever opening his eyes which are found to be a deep crimson red.Although he appears to be an early to mid twenty-year-old person, he is unusually thin and tall with very sharp features giving him a skeletal appearance. He also keeps his face set in a wide mocking smile, which he only wipes off on rare occasions of annoyance, surprise, confusion, or even sadness.

Rayne


Sorrow


The Character
Personality: Rayne is a relaxed individual, never getting worked up no matter how dire the situation. always calm and level headed he can at times use humour too diffuse rising tensions or conversely his open minded and uninhibited manner of speaking can also shock people into forgetting their grievances due to the way that if he is thinking something he will likely say it since the consequences neither scare nor bother him. He can seem to be rather lazy and is not the sort too do more work than is requried at the utmost but alternately nor is he one too see those who do not deserve it enjoying high status and if he feels there is a situation of that nature occuring he will likely rectify it with or without force.

Hometown: Factoria, an island in South Blue
History:
Rayne was always a little different from those around him, he didnt speak the same, he didnt act the same and on a more prominent note he didnt think the same. This lead to a high frequeny of altercations between himself and those around him, he wasnt much one for fighting but did hold the ability to hold his own in a fight and didnt much enjoy being pushed about by those inferior too him, but the most distinguishing feature in these scraps was that whilst most people are bound by the obvious codes of right and wrong that exist in the world trying too adhere to what is morally acceptable, Rayne never did he just took the route that seemed most logical and got the job done with the least effort. An example of this is that on one such day involving one of these explosions of agreesion to the young black hand, A boy and several of his friends surounded Rayne too set upon him all at once. Knowing he was clearly out numbered and yet not wanting to run the child pirate kicked a hunk of rubble into the air grasping it out of the air before charging at the groups leader and smashing it directly into his face filling the air with a spray of blood. As a group of wild nine year olds none had ever seen such scenes of gore and pure violence, in truth neither had Rayne but unlike them who fled screaming he merely headed back home to sleep as soundly as if this had never happened.

From there on he was Jailed, someone like that could not be left too roam the streets, But what was not understood was that he was not innately bad, merely unrestrained by social conventions unlike the rest of the populace. But different is not something that is often smiled upon and thusly he was left too rot in a small metal cell. With his ability too detach himself from surrounding situations he served his time with ease, his laxidasical attitude along side unyielding will power meant other inmates grew a respect for him which left him with a fair few connections upon leaving the institution.

Upon his 19th birthday his time was served and he was released, so now he was left with the world ahead of him. Which path to take? that was his choice and his alone but he wasn't too bothered where the world took him just eager to see the results.

Since his departure from factoria Rayne’s life has been fraught with adventure and peril, his first stop was greensland, a somewhat plain island that had little to offer other than rolling hills and sprawling meadows. But it was exactly this aspect he was able to take advantage off during his stay there, with it’s low economical value it posed little value to the world government and thus was not particularly well guarded, all of these being prime features in making it a fairly susceptible target. It was a bank robbery he had committed here, his first foray into the criminal underworld and for a debut performance it had gone rather well. Humans being the predictable creatures they were had as always proved unchallenging to manipulate and before he knew it he already had the bank vault open and was processing the cash for removal. But alas it had not been as easy as hoped and the banks security manager quickly became an unforeseen factor in Rayne’s formula for success one that he quickly had to deal with, It had been a fierce battle with him quickly realizing that the powers hidden in this world were not as meek as he had once thought and that simply reading of techniques and polishing his skill theoretically was not enough what he was going to need to amass was experience and until then he was simply a little fish swimming with sharks.

The security manager was not his only problem, it seemed the marines had been called which led to the involvement of one “captain cuddles” a marine posing as nothing more than a simple house cat, Rayne’s first
encounter with a devil fruit user and so early on in his career, in the end he found himself fighting along side Al the banks head of security in order the nullify the threat he himself had signaled, finally overpowering it the feline albeit leaving the two both heavily injured. This was one of the first times the pirate was able to witness first hand personal bonds in their rawest form, namely those between al and reg and it was valuable experience.

Form there it was to ketsuraku island the culmination of his accidental crossing of the entire distance between south and north blue, The island wasn’t much to speak of but during his time there he found himself befriended by a zoan using pirate who paired up with him in their efforts to drain the island of it’s wealth and escape only to be impeded by a crew known as the golem pirates and their monster trio of pebbles, boulder and captain golemn himself with his paramecia style abilities that gave him a rock hard defense. The whole escapade was somewhat time consuming but it was probably the pirates first big payout since his gains from greensland became somewhat limited after the tangle with both the security forces and the marines.

Next a brief stint in osula an island built on foundations of crime before coming across Gray Island where he found himself caught up in an athletics’ competition looking to nab first price and with it a decent chunk of wealth, unfortunately as was often the case with his luck this was no where near as simple as it appeared at first glance, the race was actually a ruse used by the island to trap pirates and hand them in for their bounty a somewhat clever plan some might say, upon realizing this he was forced to vacate knowing that capture meant imprisonment and his travels were becoming far too enjoyable for that to be an option.

Then it was the island of Torino one of the more arduous of his adventures, a place where logic became lost within myth and lore. On his travels he’d stolen a map from some drunk in a bar and with no better direction to head had planned to steal the bounty to which it led. Unfortunately he did not realize the magnitude of the people from which he was stealing although that was to come about later. Arriving on the island he was quickly confronted by the native inhabitants who demanded he reveal his intentions to them, upon spouting a lie he found he was faced with a man who somehow possessed the ability to easily see through deceit and was drugged and imprisoned. He awoke side by side with a bounty hunter he’d met earlier during his time their and was put through a thorough investigation though luckily no cavity search before being dragged from the imprisoning dungeon and taken to see the islands king.

He was a man with eyes like the pirates own, filled to the brim with deceit and not a word of what he said rung true but before he had the chance to challenge this the question of weather he would or would not have never to be awnsered they were interrupted by reports of an attack on the island by some unknown force of titanic proportions. Chaos quickly enveloped those around them and Rayne as well as the bounty hunter who coincidently shared his name were left to scramble for their freedom, which they did without hesitation. Encountering a few obstacles during their sprint to freedom the duo found their intentions coinciding and thusly ended up working together, swiftly arriving at the beach they found themselves confronted by what appeared to be a pirate armada almost, the whole scene strewn with chaos and the elites from the crew off of which he had stolen storming the beach in force.

They were a power to be reckoned with and both Rayne’s found themselves brutally beaten in the conflict that ensued and yet still somehow managed to arise victorious, but it was still not at it’s end. They had the pirate’s captain to deal with which turned out to actually be a midget operating an animatronic cyborg suit as if this wasn’t weird enough the same man who had both captured and interrogated the pair as well as acting as the islands war chief was revealed to be the pirates younger brother and in a world shaking clash the two paired off against one another diverting attentions away form both pirate and bounty hunter.
With the captain distracted and his forces whittled the two were free to overrun the ship and make it their own, using it for a quick get away and bringing to a close the entire torino chapter as a whole, leaving the pair to breath a sigh of relief.

Rayne was a loner and whilst he had made many temporary alliances during his time as a pirate not one of them had he held over and extended period but this all changed when he reach the island known as Aurum. This was the most critical turning point in the young adults piracy career, now somewhere between his escapades on torino island and his arrival at aurum two things happened; 1. His birthday arrived and he hit the age of 20 2. He took a ferry ride that forever changed him and granted him the abilities of the bomu bomu no mi a devil fruit that made our hero a bomb man allowing him to freely create explosions as he chose this being probably his favorite of the events that had occurred to him during his excursions. BY the time he arrived at aurum he was a very different man but little did he know he was only in for more change.

He took up work as a mercenary, working for the island government and taking care of a rather large rebellion problem they were having, and along the way met and was assisted by a pirate by the name of daisuke G. fist now unbeknownst to Rayne Daisuke actually originated from this island and was in fact here because he saw something he needed to set right after having returned to see his family and witnessed a massive degradation in the peoples standard of living, unlike Rayne who couldn’t possess less interest in the welfare of his homelands people Daisukes view was far more patriotic and he set about trying to free them from their self imposed capitalist shackles, for a time his objectives oddly coincided with Rayne’s own and they become somewhat of a duo, during which whilst Rayne continually found himself disappointed in the man’s immaturity, lack of forward thinking and general all round simplicity he did have to give credit to his skills as a combatant which physically speaking were somewhat close to his own. By the end of the whole endeavour he found himself swayed by notions of adventuring across the grand line and opted to join the man aboard his ship as traveling partners.

Now this decision carried a lot of weight with it, traveling with others was far more attention drawing than moving alone and whilst thus far he had managed to keep his head low and his bounty even lower this alongside use of his rather signatory devil fruit powers meant the government was likely to start taking notice of him, and fast. Knowing that the life of a pirate was not necessarily one he would wish to keep eternally he needed a back out plan that was impossible if his face was plastered on bounty boards around the world, thus he came up with Sorrow. Sorrow was a disguise he would be using from here on out in his life as a pirate, his attire would change and he would wear a mask constantly to hide his features meaning that any future actions he committed would be attached to this new persona rather than he himself. If he wanted out all he had to do was relinquish his use of the garments and quell his devil fruit abilities and nobody would be any the wiser and thus began the next chapter in his tales as a pirate.


Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Rayne is a calculating individual hitting the opponent with critical strikes or letting them fall deep within a trap before closing it around them. He is an offensive type, Who would rather begin the attack on the enemy rather then let them strike him first.
Weaponry:

2 Pressurised Titanium Katana
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Twin Steel Desert Rat Pistol's
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A Deck of 52 Steel Playing Cards
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Items: Pygmy Elephant Whistle
Beli: 45,717, 500
Upkeep: 25, 000
SD Earned:230
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 262
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 50
    • Speed: 90 (87+3)
    • Stamina:50
    • Accuracy: 75
    • Fortune: 65
Traits:


Specific Devil Fruit (4 traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited to Paramecia and Zoan, and further limited based on moderator discretion.

Devil Fruit Adept (1 Trait) – All that work in the mastery of their devil fruit has paid off these people are now more efficient at creating new techniques based on their devil fruit. They gain special Technique Points which can only be used on their Devil fruit techniques, of the amount of half their fortune.

In-Training (2 Traits) – This is the equivalent of Fated for the character’s Professional Skills, but no paths exist for this. General traits may not be spent to purchase In-Training.

Fate of the Swift [1 Traits] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of 3 to your speed stat.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Bomu Bomu no Mi (Bomb Bomb Fruit)
Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia
Devil Fruit Ability: The Bomu Bomu no Mi makes its consumer a Bomb-person. They are capable of making explosions erupt from their body or body parts. This can extend to their entire body, an arm or hand, or even their spit and breath. Even after these detonations, the user remains whole and completely unharmed - in fact, they have a near immunity to explosions and very high resistance against fire and heat.


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 120
Used Regular Technique Points: 72
Special Technique Points: 32
Used Special Technique Points: 18

Sword Techniques

Karmic splitting (15)
Type: Offensive
Range: close
Stats: N/A
Description: Rayne becomes one with his sword clearing his mind of external stimuli before releasing a slash with all the strength and speed behind it he can muster allowing for maximum damage.

Winds of change (16)
Branched from Karmic Splitting
Type: Offensive
Range: 10m
Stats: N/A
Description: Rayne releases a slash with all the force he has available to him, such is his proficiency with the blade that the attack releases a a wave of cutting force that will travel forward after the attack has been performed cutting into any impediment's it meet's. after 10m the wave will dissipate into nothing



Devil Fruit Techniques
Bomu Bomu no mi
Free DF technique
Type: Supplementary
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
Description: The basic ability of the Bomu Bomu no Mi allows Rayne to cause any and all parts or products of his body to explode with great force while leaving her completely unharmed.

0.1 megaton Blow(15)
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: N/A
Description:
In this technique Rayne uses his devil fruit powers to add an explosion to a hand to hand combat attack.

0.5 Megaton Blow (16)
Branched from 0.1 Megaton Blow
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: N/A
Description:
An advancement on his previous technique Rayne here wait's for the blow to connect before shaping the explosion he produces so that it is focused into the target causing much greater damage and giving the chance for internal injuries to be incurred.

1 Megaton Blow (16)
Branched from 0.1 Megaton Blow
Type: Offensive
Range: 20m
Stats: N/A
Description: An advancement on the parent technique but taking a different direction than the 0.5 Megaton Blow Rayne now releases an explosion when a strike is performed but now shapes it so that it blast is condensed and directed forward in a cone like shape allowing him to create a ranged explosion decimating that which is caught within it.

Frag Grenade (8 Special TP)
Type: Offensive
Range: 10-15m
Stats: N/A
Description: Using the same principle of shaped explosion's seen earlier Rayne charges and explosion in his foot before forcing it downward through the use of a stomping motion this causes the ground around him to be violently displaced and causes debris to fly up all around him, a second explosion this time emanating from his entire body then causes the debris to fly outward from him tearing into anything that may stand in it's path.

Resonance Wall (10)
Type: /Defensive
Range: Close
Stats: N/A
Description: Rayne holds out his hand palm facing ahead and fingers spread and simultaneously releases an explosion from each finger plus the palm, this can also be done with the foot. These explosions are designed to be high in force and minimalistic in firepower thus creating a wall of force that can repel incoming attack's

Resonance Barrier (12 2 Special TP[\i])
Branched from Resonance wall[\i]
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Stats: N/A
Description: This works on the same premise as Resonance wall except the explosions are now released from both the hand and entire forearm giving a greater level of protection. Or conversely the foot and entire shin can be utilised for this.

Resonance Blockade (14)
Branched from Resonance Wall
Type: Defensive
Range: 5m on either side of rayne
Stats: N/A
Description: This utilizes the same principles as the other two except Rayne stands spread eagle and the explosions are released from the entire front of his body providing the maximum level of protection yet. This technique is on a large enough scale that it can even provide protection for those behind him.

Flash Step (14)
Type: Supplementry
Range: Self
Stats: N/A
Description: A movement technique that uses explosions released usually from the feet or hands to give a momentary boost to speed, augment the height of jumps or even allow for mid air movement.

Flash Grenade (8 Special TP)
Type: Supplementary
Range: 20m
Stats: N/A
Description: Rayne releases (often from the hand) an explosion, but the explosion is manipulated so that rather than destructive force what it focuses on is releases an initial blinding flash and a loud blast, this can temporarily blind and stun anyone who witnesses it heavily within a 20m radius, outside of that it's effects are severely weakened, obviously the closer you are to the detonation the more severe the effects.

Volatile Slash (16)
Branched from Karmic Splitting
Type: Offensive
Range: Close
Stats: N/A
Description:This is the final product of rayne's mission to combine his swordsmanship with the new found abilities of his devil fruit. Building on the concept formulated for Karmic splitting rayne incorporates and explosion as the technique is performed that propels his arm ahead in the plane of the attack, this means the strike is dealt with far more force and speed than could naturally be achieved. The side effect of this is that due to the fact enemies will usually be ahead of him the explosion is generally directed towards him meaning he becomes swamped in the ash and smoke of the aftermath obscuring his form and making it briefly harder to see him and harder for him to see out.



Development History
Gains/Losses:
69SD and 34M beli from Vibrant Tones and Subtle Shades

Pygmy whistle

5SD, 5M beli and a red cotton T shirt for April 2011 Competition

6SD and 1,650,000 beli for Here

-19,200,000 beli for This

35 SD 8,750,000 beli +6,500,000 bounty From End of the Golden Age

15 SD 3,437,500 from An Eye for Gold

-2.5mill for cannonballs

35SD 7,750 000 beli from Welcome to the Jungle

6SD 1,400 000 beli and the bomu bomu no mi from-Are we there yet?!?!?!

5 SD christmas contest 2010

Scooping Old Rayne +54SD +5,380,000 beli

Edit Log:
Added Gains from "Vibrant Tones and Subtle Shades"
Added santanmas gift

Added Gains from "Lunars Will be commin round the mountain"

Paid for katana

Added Gains from "End of the Golden Age"

Added to clothing, added picture, added to history, changed age to 20

Added 100 sd general trait and special technique points

added 100 sd prof trait

Added gains from "welcome to the jungle" and edited contest SD gain for christmas from 2 to 5

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Edited by Singularity, Jul 6 2011, 02:26 PM.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Saying how much SD and Beli and items you're carrying over from your old character would be nice. That way I can know if I need to price those items of yours, and whether or not you've deducted the appropriate amount of beli.

Your appearance bleeds a little into your personality, might want to look at that.

Your fortune has a random +3 in it, and I'm quite confused as to where this came from. It should be 22, since you haven't spent any points on it. That also changes your regular and special technique points available.

I don't have any problem with Devil's Fruit Adept, but I'll let another mod comment on that.

Also, you could probably put your free rank 4 df technique under your techniques.
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all done i believe as for the weapons i figured they would be okay to carry over since this is basically going into the same person he's not really changing at all.
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Can't start with a T4 Devil Fruit. Nor can you scoop into one without doing an SL for it, and to my knowledge no one has done an SL for the fruit yet.
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oh poopsicle kewl well can you delete this pl0x and ill just SL for it :D
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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So for now, he's asking for this to be inactivated and for his scoop-da-whoop to be cancelled. Sounds reasonable to me.
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All done :)
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Retrieved.
Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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sweet, couple edits made and were all ready for review :D
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Your old character needs links to all his gains and loses so we can know what's going on.
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Sorry dude all altered, links added in the edit log :)
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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You sure you want to leave your techs empty?
Fran C. 'Bull-Skull' OsgraveArtisan Pirates • Navigator/Chef • Bounty: 57,000,000 • SD Earned: 208 • Beli: 78,800,000 • Location: Grand Line
Strength: 55 / Speed: 30 / Stamina: 118 / Accuracy: 35 / Fortune: 55

Jager 'Hitman' Foon • ??? • Chef/Assassin • Threat: 30 • SD Earned: 187 • Beli: 58, 200,000 • Location: Blues
Strength: 101 / Speed: 40 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 50 / Fortune: 51

Cobalt Cross • Merchant/Weapon Specialist • Rank: Lieutenant • SD Earned: 102 • Beli: 17,755,000 • Location: Blues
Strength: 53 / Speed: 24 / Stamina: 30 / Accuracy: 30 / Fortune: 33
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yeh please don't wanna sort techs till i do the Df SL
Izuru & Yogi • Crew Position: Captain • Weapon Specialist • Frostbite PiratesBounty: 350,000,000 • SD Earned: 1192 • Beli: 345,100,000 • Location: Florian Triangle • Theme:

Kazuki • Crew Position:N/A • Assassin • N/ACommendations: 88 • SD Earned: 356 • Beli: 165,500,000 • Location: Little Garden

Xavros • Crew Position:Fool • Entertainer • Theme tuneBounty: 103,000,000 • SD Earned: 406 • Beli: 191,000,000 • Location: Machine Island

Anthrax • Crew Position:N/A • Inventor • N/ABounty: 0 • SD Earned: 186 • Beli: 74,000,000 • Location:Gesso Island

Kuma • Crew Position:N/A • Smith • N/AThreat: 30 • SD Earned: 181 • Beli: 16,900,000 • Location:Custom Island
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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