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Topic Started: Jan 3 2011, 06:26 AM (1,087 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Evelynn Carter
Nickname: Eve
Age: 20
Gender: Female
Race: Human
Affiliation: Other
Threat: 9

Achievements:
Got caught up in some sort of bank robbery.
Would-be robbers captured her.
Got sold into slavery by said robbers.
Escaped slavery with Rose.
Gained Threat and Beli for turning in slavers.
Met Benjamin T. and was hired for a job with Rose.
Searched for an elusive flower and fought a mud monster with Rose.
Bought a ship with Rose, and slowly started to learn how to sail it.

Profession:
Chef
A Chef, Cook, Bartender or any other distinct related profession gives kitchen skills and knowledge about food, flavoring, ingredients, drink, and nutrients. With a chef on board, food upkeep costs are waived for the entire crew. They can also create foods which affect those who eat it, strengthening them.

Entertainer[Fire Dancer]
An entertainer makes his/her living through putting on shows. This profession is always specialized towards a specific type, and includes Dancer, Musician, Juggler and many more. Knowledge granted is job-specific.

Position: Chef


Physical Appearance
Height: 152cm/5’
Weight: 44kg/98lbs
Hair: White, goes down to the shoulder blade, usually tied up in a ponytail, singed ends.
Eyes: Dull sea green, large and deceivingly innocent.

Clothing/Accessories: Simple white hair tie. Loose long sleeved circular open neck shirt, sleeves end in a wide flair, with enough space to either hide your hands in or push the sleeves back so they don’t get in the way of dexterous activity, the shirt is slightly longer than normal and reaches halfway down the thigh. The background of the shirt is black but has a flaming theme to it, along the bottom is a ring of red and orange flames that reach up to just below the chest at the front and up most of the back, at the end of the sleeves is the same design though they only reach the elbow before they stop. Under this is a thick-strapped black singlet which provides the needed support. Tight black trousers in the Jodhpur style are used for pants and soft, black leather boots are used for footwear.

General Appearance: Evelynn is rather well built, though she uses her clothes to hide it well, her arms are well muscled, her posture straight and her legs sturdy. Her face holds an honest and open expression most of the time, even when she is feeling anything but. Her facial features are all on the smaller side, giving it an almost childlike appearance, though it is ruined by her lack of baby fat. In fact most of her is on the small side, and I don’t just mean her height. Her hands and feet are small and the hands are especially dexterous, perfect for running around a kitchen or spinning a fire staff around.

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The Character
Personality: Evelynn is an extremely nice person, even to people she does not like. She finds it easier to deal with people this way as it prevents issues from forming and generally means she does not make enemies. She loves her jobs and exploring, though was never very good with directions, to the point where it was deemed by her parents she should never leave her town without an escort. While she is a nice person she is not beyond ignoring orders and demands, depending on what they are of course.

More often than not Evelynn looks on the bright side of things; though when the mood strikes her she can be an extreme pessimist. She is quick minded and always on the move (except for first thing in the morning), no adventure is too big or too small, though she is smart enough to know when it is time to call it quits and will do her best keep out of situations that are beyond her. She tries to be practical in all things, including charity; if she has the time to she will take a vagrant and teach him to fish rather than giving him a coin, though if he refuses this then she is not above just walking away from the ungrateful idiot.

Hometown: Dawn Island, East blue

History: Evelynn started her life the way everyone does, by being born; it was a very easy birth with no complications so she was lucky enough to come into a full and healthy family, and it lasted! Well sort of. She was the first born of three children, the other two being identical twin boys born two years later and thus her first true enemies, in that way that only similar aged siblings can be. By the time she was eight she couldn’t stand the twins, always playing pranks, teasing and tormenting her. She ran away several times over the next five years though in the end she just figured that staying away from them and keeping to herself was the best thing to do.

After finally reaching this point of (sort of) mental maturity the young girl quickly discovered that she had a knack for cooking, in order to keep away from her siblings and make a bit of cash on the side she ended up getting hired by a local pub as a chef’s assistant, slowly but surely she developed her skill and love of cooking until two years later she was given her own chef position, which let her mentor finally have the days off he was hoping for, oddly he had told her that she was ready a year earlier and that the only thing that held her back was that the owner did not feel a fourteen year old was prepared to be lead chef; no matter how good they were.

Oddly it was when she was fourteen that she found her interest in the entertainer’s art, the pub owner had hired a group of travelling entertainers to keep the patrons busy for a few weeks. Of course one of them was a fire dancer, and after viewing the beauty and skill of his performance she instantly fell in love with the art. One night after her shift she went to the entertainer’s room and asked him to teach her, he slammed the door in her face without a word. What he didn’t realise was that he had left his fire staff outside and Evelynn, deciding it was probably better to teach herself, took it. For some reason the theft was never reported and she continued working at the pub until the entertainers left, at which point she took her prize and started to teach herself.

With these two skills under her belt she lapsed into a relatively quiet time until her sixteenth birthday when she got hit with a massive case of wanderlust. She started to explore her town, then the outlying area, then most of the island that she could reach on her own. After one particularly long adventure in which she had got lost for a week (but found a rather interesting looking fruit) her parents scolded her and informed her that from that point on she would have to take her brothers with her whenever she left the town itself. She did at first, not wanting to cause trouble, but after a while it was evident that the two didn’t like going out as far as she did and she started to sneak out more and more often.

After that long adventure in which she found that interesting fruit Evelynn made a note of where she had found it and travelled back several times to see if any more were to find, thinking that she might have found some rare and unusual item that she could use to improve her dishes, she finally decided to give up on the attempt and just make a smoothie with it. She had never really payed attention to the existence of Devil Fruit and had no idea what she was doing, though she did remember that using such a disgusting fruit would not encourage people to come back to her cooking. Up until this point in life she had had beautifully bright sea green eyes, the day of the smoothie incident the brightness disappeared and her current dull colour appeared.

The following years were full of more exploring, more cooking and the occasional private performance using her fire staff for her friends and family. She didn’t really know that she had eaten a devil fruit and sort of just rolled with life. The only real interesting thing that happened was when she discovered that baths were no longer safe, after nearly drowning in one after her horrid fruit smoothie experience. It was really irritating.

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: When it comes to combat Evelynn does not like to rush in like a madwoman, she tries to keep back and generally right out of combat if possible, though if her friends are taking a beating she will run in and give a hand. Her main weapon is her firestaff, and she wields this much line a regular staff fighter when it is not lit, when it is light she avoids letting either end hit the ground, as that generally puts the fire out, and uses the flaming ends more than the staff itself for her attacks. When her staff is out or the picture she falls back on her trusty soup ladle, brandishing it much like one would a club. She is reasonably well rounded in her skills and does not have a truly set system of attack or defence, so she generally tries to fit herself into wherever she is needed within a fight.

Weaponry:
Firestaff: The body of the firestaff is iron. It is around 152cm/5’ long and has a radius of 3cm/1”. On each end is an iron cap that holds several hours of lighting fluid for the fire and is designed not to spill, a wick is also held within the cap to prevent damage for when it is not being used. Around the wick is a small bit of flint integrated into the item so that when the cap is removed quickly it lights the wick.
Soup ladle: This is a simple iron soup ladle, it has treated to prevent rusting or poisoning (at least from the iron) the food it is used for. Its design makes it more resistant to bending and thus a viable weapon.

Items:
Small black backpack
Odd assortment of fruits and vegetables
Chopping knife
Folding Pan
Plastic cookie jar
10 cookies
Small book titled: Edible fungi and their lookalikes
T-Shirt (Red, low quality cotton, has that Pokemon "Fighting type" style fist on it in black over the chest)
Beli: 26,750,000
Upkeep:

SD Earned: 114
Stats:
  • Used for Stats: 46
  • Used for Fortune: 100

    • Strength: 11
    • Speed: 11
    • Stamina: 12
    • Accuracy: 12
    • Fortune: 73 (11+60+2)
Traits:
Performer-Fighter (1 Trait) – Entertainers are allowed to get a complex weapon that is custom-designed to be incorporated into their performance item of choice, be it an instrument, a costume or a prop, for free.

Specific Devil Fruit (3 traits) - The player may choose a specific Devil Fruit, either canon or custom, for their character. These fruits are limited to Paramecia and Zoan, and further limited based on moderator discretion.

Fate of the Emperor [2 Trait(s)] - By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of [# of traits in fated] to your fortune.

Training of the Kitchen (1 Trait) – After spending so long in front of the open fires in the kitchen, the character gains immunity to heat-based attacks similar to having an iron body. Any heat-based attack that wouldn’t damage iron won’t harm them.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Hebi Hebi no Mi [Snake Snake Fruit] – Model: Inland Taipan
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan
Devil Fruit Ability: A Zoan fruit allows the user to transform into one other species. This type of fruit provides three forms: the user's natural human form, a fully transformed Inland Taipan form, and a human-Inland Taipan hybrid form.


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 146
Used Regular Technique Points: 123
Special Technique Points: 0
Used Special Technique Points: 0

Transformation Techniques
Inland Taipan Form (4) Free DF technique
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stats: +10 Speed
Description: Evelynn becomes a 160cm/5’3” long Inland Taipan. The scale colouration depends on the temperature, either brown in the winter/cooler areas or Olive in the summer/warmer areas. Other than the slightly smaller than average size this form is the same as any other Inland Taipan.
Hybrid Form (31 [4+27]) Free DF technique
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stats: +8 Strength, +8 Speed, +13 Stamina, +8 Accuracy
Description: Evelynn becomes a half-human half-Inland Taipan hybrid. Her legs lengthen and fuse into a scale covered a tail that holds her up at her regular height, even with the extra length. The scales reach up to just below her bellybutton at the front and back and slightly further up the sides, before stopping and her human flesh returning. Her jaw shifts slightly so that it can be opened wider, her eye teeth (upper canines) lengthen slightly into fangs and her tongue becomes forked. Her scales are the olive of the Inland Taipan in summer, regardless of the temperature of the area around her. Evelynn’s eyes lose all lustre to the point of seeming pure black, though her senses are sharpened slightly by the snake’s natural abilities.


Fighting Techniques
Defensive Spin (4)
Type: Defensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Evelynn spins her firestaff in front of her, blocking a blow and creating a momentary flaming circle if the staff is lit.
Flaming Spin (14)(Branched from Defensive Spin)
Type: Defensive
Range: Close
Stats: N/A
Description: Evelynn rapidly spins her lit firestaff in a figure eight in front of her causing a wall of flames and heat to form in a semicircle in front of her. Things caught in the area can catch fire. The wall disappears moments after she stops spinning.
Dragon Flame (28)(Branched from Flaming Spin)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid-range
Status: N/A
Description: Evelynn rapidly spins her lit firestaff out in front of her, causing an intense gathering of very hot flames in a circle around it. A moment later an equally hot dragon-head shaped pillar of flame flies out from the circle to strike her target. Thing caught in the area can catch fire and the area around the strike remains very hot for a short time after. This technique burns through lighter fluid at a much faster rate than normal, requiring the staff to be completely refilled after three uses.
Taipan's Bite (10)
Type: Support
Range: Close
Stats: -6 Stamina
Description: While biting someone when in hybrid or full Taipan form Evelynn can inject her snake poison. Debuff lasts for 5 posts.


Food Techniques
Good Cook (1)
Type: Support
Range: Food
Stats: N/A
Description: Evelynn cooks really tasty food.
Breakfast of Champions (31) (Branch off Good Cook)
Type: Support
Range: Food
Stats: +23 Stamina
Description: Evelynn makes a really good breakfast that gives her friend enough energy to start the day. Buff lasts for 24 IC hours.
Super Cookies! (28)(Branch off Good Cook)
Type: Support
Range: Food
Stats: +21 Strength
Description: Evelynn’s awesome cookies give strength to those who eat them. Must be all the sugar in them or something… Buff lasts for 24 IC hours.


Development History
Gains/Losses:
April (Non)Contest: 5SD, 5M Beli, and a T-Shirt (Red, low quality cotton, has that Pokemon "Fighting type" style fist on it in black over the chest)
I NEED YOUR BELI~~: 9SD, 2,250,000 Beli
Slaves: 39 SD, 9,750,000 Beli, 9 threat
Just a better meeting.: 11SD, 2,750,000 Beli
-6,000,000 Beli for Effloresca
Sometimes it all falls together: 32 SD, 8 Million Beli
Bringing a Girl Home for the First Time: 18 SD, 4,500,000 Beli

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Edited by Randumb, Oct 26 2011, 01:20 PM.
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Evelynn Carter • Captain/Cook • Chef/Entertainer • Looking to form a crew • Threat: 9 • SD Earned: 132 • Beli: 23,100,000 • Location: West Blue

Elaine • Lieutenant, Apprentice Shipwright • Carpenter/Martial Artist • Division 5Commendations: 6 • SD Earned: 49 • Beli: 12,050,000 • Location: Grand Line

Dr. Mary Elizabeth Smith • Tagalong • Inventor/Doctor/Marksman/Martial Artist • Cyrus Fangirl • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 28,012,000 • Location: Route 4, Grand Line

Scoop FodderBounty: 3,000,000 • SD Earned: 43 • Beli: 11,050,000 • Location: Grand Line
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hainen (2:36:07 PM): Hebi Hebi no Mi (Snake)

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There we go, model chosen.
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Evelynn Carter • Captain/Cook • Chef/Entertainer • Looking to form a crew • Threat: 9 • SD Earned: 132 • Beli: 23,100,000 • Location: West Blue

Elaine • Lieutenant, Apprentice Shipwright • Carpenter/Martial Artist • Division 5Commendations: 6 • SD Earned: 49 • Beli: 12,050,000 • Location: Grand Line

Dr. Mary Elizabeth Smith • Tagalong • Inventor/Doctor/Marksman/Martial Artist • Cyrus Fangirl • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 28,012,000 • Location: Route 4, Grand Line

Scoop FodderBounty: 3,000,000 • SD Earned: 43 • Beli: 11,050,000 • Location: Grand Line
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Regardless of Model, without any actual poisonous technique you are literally... well... without poison. So long as you know this, everything checks out.

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Well, I BELIEVE that you'd need inventor for that fire staff. It's a bit tricky to make and maintain yourself.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Is it possible for it to fall under the Performer-Fighter trait at all?

And if not to what extent would I have to modify it?
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Evelynn Carter • Captain/Cook • Chef/Entertainer • Looking to form a crew • Threat: 9 • SD Earned: 132 • Beli: 23,100,000 • Location: West Blue

Elaine • Lieutenant, Apprentice Shipwright • Carpenter/Martial Artist • Division 5Commendations: 6 • SD Earned: 49 • Beli: 12,050,000 • Location: Grand Line

Dr. Mary Elizabeth Smith • Tagalong • Inventor/Doctor/Marksman/Martial Artist • Cyrus Fangirl • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 28,012,000 • Location: Route 4, Grand Line

Scoop FodderBounty: 3,000,000 • SD Earned: 43 • Beli: 11,050,000 • Location: Grand Line
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Performer-fighter doesn't let you make or maintain things you couldn't normally. If you had inventor as well, I wouldn't mind this at all.

Otherwise, it'd be a little less...automated.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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I'm not sure if that is better but it’s a lot less mechanical now, I also took out my second technique because it was too dependent on that item.
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Evelynn Carter • Captain/Cook • Chef/Entertainer • Looking to form a crew • Threat: 9 • SD Earned: 132 • Beli: 23,100,000 • Location: West Blue

Elaine • Lieutenant, Apprentice Shipwright • Carpenter/Martial Artist • Division 5Commendations: 6 • SD Earned: 49 • Beli: 12,050,000 • Location: Grand Line

Dr. Mary Elizabeth Smith • Tagalong • Inventor/Doctor/Marksman/Martial Artist • Cyrus Fangirl • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 28,012,000 • Location: Route 4, Grand Line

Scoop FodderBounty: 3,000,000 • SD Earned: 43 • Beli: 11,050,000 • Location: Grand Line
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Yes. That works much better.

Reflagged.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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I think I'm doing this right >.<

New Techniques

Taipan's Bite (4)
Type: Support
Range: Close
Stats: -2 Stamina
Description: While biting someone when in hybrid or full Taipan form Evelynn can inject her snake poison. Debuff lasts for 5 posts.
Good Cook (1)
Type: Support
Range: Food
Stats: N/A
Description: Evelynn cooks really tasty food.
Breakfast of Champions (4) (Branch off Good Cook)
Type: Support
Range: Food
Stats: +2 Stamina
Description: Evelynn makes a really good breakfast that gives her friend enough energy to start the day. Buff lasts for 24 IC hours.

Edited by Randumb, Apr 6 2011, 03:09 PM.
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Evelynn Carter • Captain/Cook • Chef/Entertainer • Looking to form a crew • Threat: 9 • SD Earned: 132 • Beli: 23,100,000 • Location: West Blue

Elaine • Lieutenant, Apprentice Shipwright • Carpenter/Martial Artist • Division 5Commendations: 6 • SD Earned: 49 • Beli: 12,050,000 • Location: Grand Line

Dr. Mary Elizabeth Smith • Tagalong • Inventor/Doctor/Marksman/Martial Artist • Cyrus Fangirl • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 58 • Beli: 28,012,000 • Location: Route 4, Grand Line

Scoop FodderBounty: 3,000,000 • SD Earned: 43 • Beli: 11,050,000 • Location: Grand Line
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