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Topic Started: Jul 23 2010, 03:12 PM (2,192 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name:Mark Loafair
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Age:26
Gender:male
Race:Human
Affiliation:Bounty Hunter Shining Tears
Achievements:
Threat:6
Profession:

~Smith
A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy. Smiths will get a 20% discount on any weapon upgrades or new weapons that they buy for themselves.

~Weapon Specialist

A much more general fighter-type profession, a Weapon Specialist is someone who has to a large or small degree devoted his/her life to the mastery of a single weapon or weapon type, such as Swords, Axes or Whips. This profession applies generally to melee weapons.

Position:Vice-Commander

Physical Appearance
Height:5.8 ft
Weight:150 pounds
Hair:crimson, long hair reaching the base of his neck, messy and a little bit curly
Eyes:turquoise
Clothing/Accessories: Black Beanie, White shirt, Black cargo pants, Black boots, blood red sash
General Appearance:Allways wearing a Black Beanie which keeps his crimzon hair out of his eyes, the White shirt is untucked and allows free movement the white shirt has a decorative pattern of water running around the bottom of the shirt and around the sleeves the colour of the pattern is Black, his Black pants are a little baggy and has the decorative pattern mensioned before along the bottom of the pants but in white, his Sash lies wrapped around his waist multiple times with the remaining one meter blowing in the wind, his Black Boots have no laces and are instead tied with small iron chains, His body is of a muscular build but also has countless burns and cut these are signs from his early years of learning how to be a smith,


The Character
Personality:Mark is generally serious but if he wants to can have a kind heart and can see the good in people, overall he's pretty laid back only fighting if needed or forced, he doesn't care much for the world his ambition is to create the greatest swords and use it to become the worlds greatest swordsman, He fairly trust worthy never selling out friends. He is also non dependant on allies wanting to take out his enemies one on one in a fair fight though this isn't always the case with his opponent

Hometown:Shimotsuki Village, East Blue
History:
Mark Loafair, born on a small island in the east blue in shimosuki village. Brought up in a relatively poor background due to this his family lacked the money to send him to school so instead he learned the ways of how to be a Smith and how to forge beautiful weapons but more importantly he could do this with the man that inspired him the most his farther, through this experience he learned many ways of how to form a variety of different weapons, the child had become quite a talented blacksmith at young age of 11.

However over these 11 years he was bullied by the other children due the fact that he didn't go to school with them this alone labled an outcast from the start, there was multiple incidents involving him being beaten by a group of boys but none too serious. He didn't really fight back his mentality being if he doesn't react they'll get bored and leave, but as he reached the age of 13 the group approuched him one of them was weilding a blade of some sort, Mark had guessed that the reason they had it wasn't going to be one he liked. Mark attempted to run but they caught up and attemted to stab him. At that instant a stranger appeared and took them out, looking around he realised he was out side a swordsman dojo, after paying thanks he returned home.

once at home he kept running the scenario through his head over and over before long he realised that he was not only interested in the process of creating such beautiful weapons but he wanted to weild them as well, soon after he seeked his farthers acknowledgement to which he answered "Son I won't stop you from forging your own path if this is what you wish then who am I to say no"after that he was the happiest child in the world.

After that he split the week in two half the week training in the dojo the other half with his farther in the Smithy it wasn't long until his skills in being a swordsman improved and he moved on to using a 2 sword style along with some of his own techniques. Before long his farther couldn't work in the dojo because of his old age yet mark continued to do his best in both aspects of life being a Smith and Swordsman.

At the age of 20 his farther was bedridden with an unknown desiease, each day mark would visit to tell him how his day had been as well as checking up on the old man until the fateful day of his death, though on that day he didn't cry tears of sadness but tears of happiness knowing that his farther had lived a full life wit hMark at his side. After his fathers death Mark practiced with much more determination than before. At the age of 25 he left Shimotsuki Village so he could test his skills as a talented swordsman and Smith by becoming a bounty hunter,


Abilities and Possessions
Combat:In combat Mark is well trained in the art of Bushido with preference to weilding two Katana's utilizing them with expert speed and precision. In battle he will face an enemy head on rather than striking from behind as he considers that cowardly, his general fighting style involves Mark using his swords as leverage using them to adapt to the situation, for example stabbing one in the ground to make a sudden turn whilst running, most of his techniques he developed on his own which involving using the terrain to gain an advantage

Weaponry:

Items:0
Beli: 2,750,000
Upkeep:0
SD Earned:42
Stats:
  • Used for Stats:74
  • Used for Fortune:0

    • Strength:24 (20+4)
    • Speed:25
    • Stamina:17
    • Accuracy:12
    • Fortune:18
Traits:

Weapon Specialist

* Advanced Weapon Mastery [Katana] (2 Traits) – The character masters this weapon to the level that very few can best them. All techniques involving this weapon are raised two ranks for free, and the maximum rank for techniques involving this weapon is three higher than the natural maximum.

Smith

* Forge Furnace (1 Trait) – After spending that much time welding weapons and having to put up with the extreme temperatures of the furnace, the character gains immunity to heat-based attacks similar to having an iron body. Any heat-based attack that wouldn’t damage iron won’t harm them.

Mighty Strength (1 Trait)- This character's strength is boosted by 20%.


Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name:N/A
Devil Fruit Type:N/A
Devil Fruit Ability:N/A


Techniques
Regular Technique Points:36
Used Regular Technique Points:16
Special Technique Points:0
Used Special Technique Points:0

Techniques
Deddopijon 6 (4+2)
Type:offensive
Range:melee
Stats:N/A
Description:He moves both hands so that one sword is facing up and the other facing down, then he rushes towards his opponent slashing one sword downwards and the other one up simultaniously causing 2 vertical cuts on his opponents torso
Suteki o kiru 6 (4+2)
Type:offensive
Range:melee
Stats:N/A
Description:He charges at his opponent holding both swords on his right, as he rushes past his opponent he uses all his strength to slash with both swords at once towards his opponents mid section leaving 2 horizontal cuts on there torso
Ken no mai 10 (8+2)
Type:offensive
Range:Close
Stats:N/A
Description: Mark starts with both swords sheathed charging his opponents, once he come's in range he quickly unsheaths his swords and unleashed a flurry of sword swings from different angles. After he has rushed past his target the swords are spun and slowly sheathed in a traditional samurai way. The attack is designed for taking out large crowds of weaker enemies.



Development History

Gains/Losses

Gained 6 SD, ::beli:: 1,450,000 from Floatin
Gained Makachi from Makachi
Gained 14 SD, 2 threat and ::beli:: 3,500,000 from Three of a Kind
Gained 17 SD, 4 threat and ::beli:: 4,250,000 from Disserters Of The Ocean
Paid ::beli:: 6,000,000 towards the Shining Star
Gained Tsubasa from Tsubasa
Gained 5 SD, ::beli:: 1.75 mil from A day for recovering
Sold Makachi and Tsubasa in Sell 2 swords buy 1...wait what? the Beli that was left was given to Eleanor Loafair

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Edited by Uploaf, Oct 24 2011, 08:08 AM.
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Deddopijon seems possible except the whole pole vaulting part.

Suteki o kiru is horribly comboish. To be fair they both do. If you want to work them out then I'd say ask another mod for the time being.
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right i edited the techniques to make them more realistic and hopefully not comboish
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Suteki o Kiro: No "or worse". Not now.

Describe your katanas besides length please; ornamentation? Discoloration?

Specify any items he has. ANY items.

0 upkeep.
Edited by Yaksha, Jul 26 2010, 02:42 PM.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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ok i've made the edits,

if you suggest anything I essentially need for items i'm just gonna leave it as it is
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If you don't want any items, just put none.

Topic is flagged for approval.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Techniques
Ken no mai 10 (8+2)
Type:offensive
Range:Close
Stats:N/A
Description: Mark starts with both swords sheathed charging his opponents, once he come's in range he quickly unsheaths his swords and unleashed a flurry of sword swings from different angles. After he has rushed past his target the swords are spun and slowly sheathed in a traditional samurai way. The attack is designed for taking out large crowds of weaker enemies.
Edited by Uploaf, Feb 19 2011, 11:38 PM.
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It was fine up till

'After he has rushed past his target the swords are sheathed once more giving the appearence he never unsheathed his swords in the first place.'

The character isn't really fast enough for that, nor the Tech rank high enough for that effect.
Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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Ok edited

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After he has rushed past his target the swords are spun and slowly sheathed in a traditional samurai way
Edited by Uploaf, Feb 19 2011, 11:39 PM.
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Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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Mhmm. Approved.



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I greatly appreciate the detailed edit log.

Mods subtract upkeep for SL supplies themselves, so Mark's beli should be 100,000 higher.

Remove the spoilers for Gains/Losses and the professions.

Put a link in your Gains/Losses for Makachi. You can copy and paste this code for it:

[url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_RP/topic/3776497/1/#post819417]Makachi[/url]
Assuming it's approved
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Thanks for the heads up man ^_^ I made the edits
Edited by Uploaf, Apr 14 2011, 01:25 PM.
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