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Topic Started: May 6 2010, 06:28 PM (2,454 Views)
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Alright, here we go.

I added the 20SD and extra cash i got from my latest SL, added all 20SD to my stats, recalculated fortune, added in extra technique points, and deducted upkeep. New techniques time! Yay!

Techniques
Dragons claw (6)
Type: offensive
Range: short
Stats: N/A
Description: Kaji pulls his arm back to his hip and twists left, sending out his hands in claw formation digging his hauntlets into his opponant.


Blazing Hurricane (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Kaji leaps into the air and uses a spin kick, rotating his entire body to put more momentum into the blow

Spitfire (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Mid range
Stats: N/A
Description: Kaji pours lighter fluid into his mouth, holds his lighter up and spits it out, which ignites into a small flamethrower


Rush Techniques
Dragons Stampede (7)
Type: offensive
Range: short
Stats: N/A
Description: Can only be used after Dragon's Rampage. Kaji charges forward at full speed and launches a flurry of Dragon's Claw's at his opponant with both hands


Support Techniques
Dragon's Rampage (7)
Type: Defensive
Range: Himself
Stats: Speed +3
Description: Kaji pumps up the muscles in his legs to give him a boost of speed.

Edited by Kaji.Dragon.Jones, Dec 5 2010, 04:06 PM.
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Spitfire's more of a rank 8, since it's difficult to do without burning yourself.

Flurry=gatling=rank 8.

Pumping up your muscles through force of will? More than rank 7.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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You know i hate it when you mods have conflicting opinians, Yakash-GAAH, you and your minor name changes...

Alright, i suppose i can drop spitfire for a bit, but as for the others...

Take a look at this.
Thanks to this trait, all dragon style kung fu techniques are boosted two free ranks, which means...

Techniques
Dragons claw (8)
Type: offensive
Range: short
Stats: N/A
Description: Kaji pulls his arm back to his hip and twists left, sending out his hands in claw formation digging his hauntlets into his opponant.


Blazing Hurricane (6)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Kaji leaps into the air and uses a spin kick, rotating his entire body to put more momentum into the blow


Rush Techniques
Dragons Stampede (9)
Type: offensive
Range: short
Stats: N/A
Description: Can only be used after Dragon's Rampage. Kaji charges forward at full speed and launches a flurry of Dragon's Claw's at his opponant with both hands


Support Techniques
Dragon's Rampage (9)
Type: Defensive
Range: Himself
Stats: Speed +4
Description: Kaji pumps up the muscles in his legs to give him a boost of speed.

Edited by Kaji.Dragon.Jones, Dec 6 2010, 03:20 PM.
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Your martial arts has to focus on a single aspect. Kicks, punches, etc. Your punches, or your kicks will gain the benefit of the trait.

This is to avoid techniques such as your Dragon Rampage from gaining the benefit of your bonus when it literally isn't a martial art technique based around your martial art.

Blazing Kick is rank 8. The rest is fine except your Buff.

I'll need you to show the actual bonus of your MA trait beside your technique score IE 8 (6+2)

Before I can flag anything.
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The bonus is all the techniques are boosted two ranks for free, and the maximum for the moves is three higher then normal.

And dragon style kung-fu uses the arms and legs, it's the form used that defines the martial art. All the techniques are very bendy and twisty, like a dragon moving it's body. This is where the confusion came from. .

For example, you grab someone's left arm and pull them forward, spinning your body counter-clockwise so you end up behind them, then use the momentum from the rotation and the movement of your twisting hips and shoulder to make the dragon's claw more powerful, them maybe follow up by getting lower and kicking. The motion of Dragon Rampage makes it Dragon Kung-Fu because as you're advancing your bending from left to right, up and down in sort of a sideways 8 shape while using the dragons claw technique repeatedly as you move. See?

If you just want me to focus on the main point of the martial art, then i suppose it would be the claw moves (Thrusting, pulling, and throwing). With some re-wording, dragons rush and claw still fit this bill. This will however take the stat buff out of it. However i could still come up with a different stat buff that doesn't involve sheer willpower, so no major problem there.

Oh, and one last thing, it annoys me when I get techniques approved, then when i go to change something someone else says "Hey, this shouldn't be!". I have no problem bumping down techniques, but when their techniques that have already been approved, i get the rage itch.


Techniques
Dragons claw (8)
Type: offensive
Range: short
Stats: N/A
Description: Kaji pulls his arm back to his hip and twists left, sending out his hands in claw formation digging his hauntlets into his opponant.


Rising fang (8)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Kaji bends down, comes in close, and makes an uppercut, aiming for the opponents chin with his palm, and using whiever hand is free to push against his elbow to add extra force to the blow.

Rush Techniques
Dragons Stampede (9)
Type: offensive
Range: short
Stats: N/A
Description: Can only be used after Dragon's Rampage. Kaji charges forward at full speed and launches a flurry of Dragon's Claw's at his opponent with both hands


Support Techniques
Dragon's Rampage (7)
Type: Defensive
Range: Himself
Stats: Speed +4
Description: Kaji flexes the muscles in his legs to temporarily increase speed
Edited by Kaji.Dragon.Jones, Jan 3 2011, 07:30 AM.
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Your techniques need a theme, IE Punches, Kicks, Grapples, Etc. Naturally your buff can't fall into that because it can neither be a Punch, Kick, or Grapple what have you. Which is why when selecting a martial arts, it's often requested you go into detail as to what it does. True styles such as Kung-Fu, Jeet Kun Do, Gun-kata or whatever kids play with these days focus on kicks and punches. You select either the punching aspect or the kicking aspect. Fix that first and then we'll talk.
Edited by Invictus, Jan 18 2011, 08:26 AM.
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If you just want me to focus on the main point of the martial art, then i suppose it would be the claw moves (Thrusting, pulling, and throwing). With some re-wording, dragons rush and claw still fit this bill.
I though this would cover it, but it seems I wasn't specific enough. The stat buff was covering only Dragons claw, rampage, and rising fang, which all deal with the thrusting claw movements. This is the aspect I hope to focus on. More specifically quick, swift movements that involve twisting around opponents and using the claws to stab and cut them. Is that good enough?
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The buff doesn't just cover said techniques. It covers you as a whole, it just works in contrast to those techniques. If a buff gives you +5 strength and you decide to freeform a series of punches and kicks it still applies.

You can very well do that. By all means, but you won't be gaining the benefit of your Martial Arts Mastery when doing so.
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OK then, I think i understand now.

So martial arts mastery trait should cover everything except the stat buff right? I can still use the buff using regular technique points. Everything should be cool now.
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Yeah, these seem cool.

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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Quite. Techniques are approved.
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