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H.P. Locke; Mushi Mushi no Mi, Model: Locust [Flagged] [Flagged]
Topic Started: Apr 24 2010, 03:58 PM (1,135 Views)
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Basic Character Information
Name: Howard Percy (H.P.) Locke
Nickname: Locke
Age: 22
Gender: Male
Race: Human
Affiliation: Marine, Division Θ
Rank (Commendations): Ensign (0)

Profession:

Martial Artist
A Martial Artist is someone who specializes in hand-to-hand combat, completely or very close to unarmed. They usually have good insight in the aspects of weight, balance and movement of the body. Martial artists get one free rank 4 technique that is a stat-altering technique, used on themselves.

Smith
A Smith is a man or woman who makes weapons and tools out of metal. Generally swords, since they fetch the best price, but it is in no way limited to this. Making cannons and parts for inventors is also part of their business, and they also get good knowledge within metallurgy.

Position: Captain

Physical Appearance
Height: 6'1
Weight: 173
Hair: Locke has dark brown, chin length hair that is kept loosely slicked back and held in place under a bandana.
Eyes: Dark Hazel

Clothing/Accessories: Locke prefers comfort over formality and dresses as such. He wears a loose, long-sleeved white cotton button-up shirt that he wears with the buttons unfastened and the sleeves rolled up to his elbows. Over this he wears a long black sleeveless vest with gold trim that he keeps completely unbuttoned at all times, on the back of which the kanji for the marine slogan "Justice" is embroidered in gold as well, and the inside of the vest is red violet. Locke wears a simple bandana, also red violet on his head holding his slicked back hair in place. He wears fingerless black leather gloves, dark blue jeans, and standard issue black leather boots. A pair of tinted glasses with rectangular frames sit squarely in front of his eyes.

General Appearance: Locke is a tall man with a slender but athletic build. His arms and legs are especially sculpted, while in comparison his torso and back are merely toned. He has a scar consisting of three jagged lines that runs from his right cheek down into the side of his neck. His face is rather distinct, with a straight bridged nose and young complexion. He has a scruffy goatee with no mustache and generally keeps the rest of his facial hair trimmed to a five o' clock shadow.

The Character
Personality: Even though Locke believes justice is something that should be upheld, he has always had a capacity of respect and almost admires the free spirit of pirates. He has a laid back persona that's coupled with a lazy, procrastinating nature. Locke follows his own method of justice that he believes is more realistic than the "Absolute Justice" that other marines believe in. He wouldn't penalize a pirate for being a pirate, and only takes down people who he believes have been unjust enough to deserve punishment. He's got a great sense of humor and enjoys laughing and having a good time.

Hometown: Bausyer Island

History: Locke was raised in a family with a stay at home mother and a father who was the local smith. The household was a comfortable one, with enough money coming in to live without any serious financial problems while not being spoiled. From his father he learned the trade and the skills of the smithy, while from long uneventful days staying home with his mother he gained his calm, lazy nature. His main childhood hobby was practicing martial arts and fighting with his small group of close friends.

Throughout his years he regularly competed in the triennial competitions of Bauyser Island, and made a name for himself as a great fighter. One year during his late teens a special competition was held, the prize of which was a locked chest confiscated from pirates. He won this competition and in the chest was a devil fruit, which he ate after much debate. Shortly after the competition, he was approached by a marine scout who was looking for recruits, and enlisted the same week. Over the years he's been busy mastering his devil fruit and perfecting the style of fighting he developed.

Abilities and Possessions
Combat: Locke practices a simple yet effective fighting style that focuses on jumping, striking with the feet, and counter attacking by grappling and throwing enemies. Generally when on the offense striking with the lead foot is key, and attempts to cripple enemies by attacking points like limbs and the head are the norm. Grappling and throwing enemies are used mostly when forced into a defensive position to counter attack, or to position enemies for stronger strikes. Jumping around and making quick but fluid movements allows proper positioning for strong kicks.
Weaponry: -
Items: -
Beli: 2,750,000
Upkeep:
SD Earned: 9
Stats: 32
  • Used for Stats: 41
  • Used for Fortune: 0

    • Strength: 8
    • Speed: 11
    • Stamina: 14
    • Accuracy: 8
    • Fortune: 10
Traits:

Random Devil Fruit (3 Traits) - A character who wishes to may start with a randomly selected devil fruit. The fruit will be chosen from a master list kept by the administrators and will be determined based on dice roll. The power that the character is given is final, and may not be reversed without making a new character. The random list will contain a great variety of powers, representing all three types (Zoan, Paramecia, and Logia) and will range from moderate to strong. There is a small chance of getting a stronger devil fruit than you'd be allowed to choose with the Specific Devil Fruit trait.

Forging Master (1 Trait) – All the experience the character has gained in making weapons allows them to produce them more cheaply. These smiths get a 30% discount for any weapons they make, and they are nice enough that this discount applies to their crew members as well.

Devil Fruit
 
Devil Fruit Name: Mushi Mushi no Mi, Model: Locust
Devil Fruit Type: Zoan
Devil Fruit Ability: Allows Locke to transform into a locust-human hybrid and/or a full locust. Some advantages to the locust model include a boost in speed from their long, powerful hind legs, and a boost in accuracy gained from sensitive hairs and antennae, while their chitinous exoskeleton adds some physical protection.


Techniques
Regular Technique Points: 16
Used Regular Technique Points: 16
Special Technique Points: 4
Used Special Technique Points: 4

Devil Fruit Techniques
Hybrid Form (4)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stats: +4 Speed, +4 Accuracy, +2 Stamina
Description:
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Full Form (4)
Type: Support
Range: Self
Stats: +7 Speed, +3 Stamina
Description: Locke transforms into a small gray locust that's about 2 1/2 inches long. In this form he becomes much faster and is able to jump great distances due to his smaller size, strong legs, and wings; and his chitinous body gives him some extra protection. This form is capable of bio-luminescence just like the hybrid form.
Pepier (4)
Type: Support
Range: Audible Range
Stats: -2 Accuracy
Description: While in hybrid or full form Locke rubs his wings against each other, causing a loud, ear piercing chirping sound that can disorient the closest person who hears it.


Techniques
Fouet (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Locke delivers a quick roundhouse kick, making contact with the toe of his foot.
Revers (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: A variant of Fouet, Locke instead makes a hooking kick and makes contact with the heel.
Pisto (4)
Type: Offensive
Range: Melee
Stats: N/A
Description: Locke delivers a strong piston-like kick, making contact with the sole of his foot.
Jaunte (4)
Type: Supportive
Range: Self
Stats: +2 Speed
Description: Locke kicks off of his back foot when he strikes, adding to the speed of his attacks.

Development History
Gains/Losses: + 6 SD and ::beli:: 1,500,000 beli from Division Θ Makes a Move!
+ 3 SD and ::beli:: 750,000 beli from Operation Mucha Lucha
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Edited by ThtGyNmdFsh, Jul 21 2011, 10:34 AM.
Nei -- Inventor, Doctor, Marksman, Navigator -- Threat: 0
SD Earned: 110 Beli: 10,100,000 Location: Grand Line
Strength: 30 Speed: 30 Stamina: 27 Accuracy: 50 Fortune: 37 Focus: 65

Dialogue Color: #6B8E23
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Versesai
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I know that in the past Sen Sen no mi was accepted, but once Doflamingo's power was revealed it's become a kind of no-no fruit. Too similar and too much risk of the same kinda stuff. Doflamingos is banned and Sen Sen is kind of banned too by comparison.

If another mod wants to overturn me (Not a Slave) then I'll accept that, but by all accounts Sen Sen no Mi is not allowed. Sorry Fush. D=
Ovae Sevault Dachrinne • Doctor/Weapon Specialist • This Man's A Doctor • No IdeaBounty: ::beli:: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 77 • Beli: ::beli:: 16,700,000 • Location: God Only Knows.

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ThtGyNmdFsh
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Changed a couple aspects of the character regarding profession and combat, and altered history to match. I've also decided to RDF.
Edited by ThtGyNmdFsh, Apr 26 2010, 01:30 AM.
Nei -- Inventor, Doctor, Marksman, Navigator -- Threat: 0
SD Earned: 110 Beli: 10,100,000 Location: Grand Line
Strength: 30 Speed: 30 Stamina: 27 Accuracy: 50 Fortune: 37 Focus: 65

Dialogue Color: #6B8E23
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Versesai
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Cipher Pol 0 Leader
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Knowing you, the roll you just got scares the living hell out of me. I feel like I'm handing a free license to mindfuck to you...

Anyway: Zoan - Mushi Mushi no Mi (Bug): Choose your own model.
Ovae Sevault Dachrinne • Doctor/Weapon Specialist • This Man's A Doctor • No IdeaBounty: ::beli:: 5,000,000 • SD Earned: 77 • Beli: ::beli:: 16,700,000 • Location: God Only Knows.

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ThtGyNmdFsh
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Mushi Mushi no Mi, Model: Locust is my choice. There are quite a few branches, I hope I did my math right.
Nei -- Inventor, Doctor, Marksman, Navigator -- Threat: 0
SD Earned: 110 Beli: 10,100,000 Location: Grand Line
Strength: 30 Speed: 30 Stamina: 27 Accuracy: 50 Fortune: 37 Focus: 65

Dialogue Color: #6B8E23
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Yaksha
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I think you're fine.

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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Shamma
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Whilst I understand your angle, these Sauterelle techniques are different, 'stronger' as you like to put and would require branching from the originals at a higher rank to be acceptable. Otherwise you're getting far too many 'free' techniques.

The easier alternative is to scrap the Sauterelle altogether and just use the techniques in the Hybrid form with their original names but with less of these 'technique is better and stronger for free'.
Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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ThtGyNmdFsh
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While when I first did make the techniques my intention was to have the ones used in hybrid be stronger, I decided against it after learning I wouldn't have enough technique points. They are supposed to be the same level of the standard techniques and are variants meant to take advantage of the claws on his feet, and I forgot to edit their descriptions to reflect that, which I've done now.

Edit: Fuck it, I've removed Sauterelle for now.
Edited by ThtGyNmdFsh, May 2 2010, 02:03 PM.
Nei -- Inventor, Doctor, Marksman, Navigator -- Threat: 0
SD Earned: 110 Beli: 10,100,000 Location: Grand Line
Strength: 30 Speed: 30 Stamina: 27 Accuracy: 50 Fortune: 37 Focus: 65

Dialogue Color: #6B8E23
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Yaksha
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"to cripple enemies by attacking points like limbs and the head are the norm"

Do remember that without critical hit this part shouldn't be played up. Other than that, you're fine.

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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Your character has been approved.

From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines.

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Piper • Pirate • Martial Artist/Weapon Specialist • Hot RocketsBounty: 343,000,000 • SD Earned: 881 • Beli: 259,500,000 • Location: Raijin Island

Jija Juju • Marine • Inventor/Marksman/Scholar/Doctor • FioreRank: Rear Admiral • SD Earned: 579 • Beli: 188,000,000 • Location: Couture Island, Grand Line

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Yaksha
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Inactive, fruit reclaimed.
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Yaksha (Laneh) • Assassin • Martial Artist • Navigator • Thief • Ragnarok PiratesBounty: 75,000,000 • SD Earned: 0/300 • Beli: 35,350,000 • Location: Weatheria
Strength: 57------Stamina:50------Speed:75--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:78

Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island
Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61

Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location:
Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30

Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island
Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Reactivated, fruit reclaimed.
Delgado Brundlefly • "Chef" • Scientist/Chef • Iron RoseBounty: 16,000,000 • SD Earned: 158 • Beli: 41,654,166 • Location: Blue Brick Island

Cosmo S. Periwinkle • Nurse • Martial Artist/Doctor • Cobalt BraveThreat: 0 • SD Earned: 18 • Beli: 6,500,000 • L: Garland Island, North Blue.

Mattei of White Bay • Crew Position • Profession Name • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 21 • Beli: 2,280,000 • Location: The Hood, North Blue

Icarus Moccasin • Crew Position • Shipwright/Artist • [url=insert crew URL here]Crew (if applicable)[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 4 • Beli: 1,450,000 • L: The location your character is at – At least mention which Blue.

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