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♠ The Unspeakable
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Account Name: The Unspeakable
Basic Character Information Name: Dr. Kurtz Rosencrantz Nickname: Age: 29 Gender: Male Race: Human Affiliation: Pirate Bounty: 23,000,000. Profession:- Primary: Doctor
A Doctor, on a ship or otherwise, gains large medical knowledge. They also get various other related knowledge in terms of poisons, nutrients, animals, anatomy and certain history. Suturing and cleaning wounds, making bandages out of various materials and preparing drugs, is all part of a Doctor's job. Doctors are the only ones capable of healing serious injuries on the crew. They also do not need to pay upkeep on the drugs/poisons they use.
- Secondary: Inventor
An inventor is a man or woman with knowledge in how various mechanical devices work. They have good insight in how blueprints work, and can upgrade weapons, build explosives and battle engines if they have enough materials.
Position: Doctor
Physical Appearance Height: 6'3" Weight: 129lbs Hair: Dark Purple Eyes: Cobalt Blue Clothing/Accessories: Kurtz's most noticeable piece of attire is his black lab coat, stitched with detailed scenes of faceless humans dying various horrific deaths(in white thread). Beneath this he wears a purple, collared button-up shirt, thin stovepipe-cut black slacks, and polished black boots with slightly tapered tips, thick heels, and hematite-buckled bootstraps up the length. General Appearance: His left eye lacks a discernable pupil. A long, thin white scar runs down his face from the middle this eye, but not up from it.
Dr. Kurtz Rosencrantz  Illustrated by DoulbeStomach
The Character
Personality: Kurtz is always wearing a slight, unreadable grin. His brilliant cobalt eyes are piercing, particularly his left, always looking as if he's staring through rather than at someone. He wears a knowing expression, as if he's already figured out everything that matters to him. When annoyed or angry his grin broadens slightly. Kurtz is soft-spoken, his voice just a touch higher in pitch than seems normal, his tone usually calm and blank.
In typical social interactions, Kurtz usually starts out politely, offering small talk or remaining quiet while he attempts to pick up details about those around him that may give him insights into their personalities or lives. When he's comfortable that somebody is a known quantity, he will subtly and actively attempt to shift interactions to make the person uneasy. He's especially fond of spooking friends and crewmates.
Because of the nature of both his fruit and personality, Kurtz has had almost no success at keeping the trust or confidence of others in the past. His attempts at being friendly often end in failure or misunderstanding. All the same, when he does occasionally find someone he likes, he puts a bit of effort into building the bridge, even if it is sometimes difficult.
Hometown: Marijois History: Spoiler: click to toggle Kurtz was born a slave to the Tenryuubito, like his parents were before him. Hidden and raised for the first five years of his life in the noble's library, his existence a secret, he had access to an enormous amount of knowledge. Sometime, shortly before he turned six, he was discovered by another slave and forced into work. Due to the understanding of the outside world he'd been given by the books he read in his early childhood, Kurtz grew up deeply resentful of his life as a slave.
Some time later, a terrible pox broke out among the slaves. Large and by most survived due to their constant exposure to disease; their immune systems could naturally handle the illness. Because he'd been indulging in bare-handed beating of his staff, however, the World Noble contracted the disease, his previously perfect health leaving him with no natural defenses. Embittered at his impending doom, he ordered all of his slaves killed before him.
The last to die, Kurtz managed to stab the Tenryuubito with a makeshift syringe that contained a vaccination to the disease Kurtz had made himself. Though he had the child tortured horribly for days, for the crime of striking at a Tenryuubito, he released the boy when he discovered he had been cured, thereafter grooming him to be his doctor.
Around the time Kurtz was 20, he was given a devil's fruit by his owner, to make him an even more valuable oddity. The young doctor accidentally used his new ability on his owner, learning in the process that he had become a terrorman. Faced with the choice of a near-certain failed escape or certain death, the youth decided to take his chances, however slim, and leapt from the Red Line into the New World.
Saved from death by sheer serendipity, Kurtz was caught by a bird zoan user who saw him falling from very high up due to the day's clear skies. The man convinced him to join the Marines and his outfit, offering him a chance to start over new. He accepted, becoming a Marine field medic.
As time went on, Kurtz found that the combination of his upbringing as a slave, his advanced intellect, and his new abilities made it very hard to make friends with ordinary people. Though originally enthusiastic and eager to please, he became more alienated by and disdainful of his peers over time. Eventually he was labelled "The Black Doctor" and rumors of the imaginary horrors he perpetrated began to spread amongst the Marines.
After an incident in which an entire ship (save Kurtz, who was immunated in Marijois) contracted a horrible blinding fever, Kurtz was court marshalled and charged with conspiracy and treason. The event earned him the nickname "The Black Madness", due to stories of the (entirely fake) horrors he perpetrated against the helpless members of the ship during that time.
Rather than face an unfair trial for crimes he didn't commit, Kurtz engineered his escape, winding up in East Blue. Becoming a pirate, he's since wandered aimless, enjoying such adventures as: joining a crew and watching them all get slaughtered, joining a crew and watching them all get slaughtered, joining a crew and watching them all get slaughtered.
Currently, he has found a group of people he has hopes will not all be slaughtered, and optimistically sails towards the future with them.
Abilities and Possessions Combat: In combat, Kurtz fights by relying on his agility and natural endurance, as well as an in-depth knowledge of human anatomy. Though his form is gaunt and frail in appearance, he capable of sustaining a great deal of damage.
Because of his regular work with dangerous substances, he regimentally takes small doses of every toxin or dangerous drug he carries. This has rendered him highly mithridated and he needn't worry about suffering any ill effects from ought but extremely high doses of any of the poisons in his possession.
Weaponry: Cane - 25mm thick black cane, it's shaft made of a ring of graphite with a polished black finish. Both the gunhandle-grip at the top and the ring at the cane's tip are polished hematite. Inside the shaft of the cane is a reservoir which can hold about 5000cc's of fluid. From a small hole in center of the cane's bottom tip, a needle of high-carbon steel can be rapidly extended through the use of an internal mechanism, injecting any desired amount of the reservoir's contents. Additionally, tiny channels all along the cane's surface can be used to coat the weapon's surface or produce an atomized mist. Syringes - Eight dozen 20cc glass syringes hidden inside his lab coat. He keeps these filled with a variety of poisons and medicines, for use on both friends and foes.
Items: - A variety of medicines, poisons, and disease cultures in a reinforced pouch he keeps hidden in his coat and usually hides before combat. - Med Gear - Rorschach mask
Beli: 51,500,000 Upkeep: SD Earned: 209 Stats:
- Used for Stats: 186
- Used for Fortune: 55
- Strength: 25
- Speed: 52
- Stamina: 63
- Accuracy: 52
- Fortune: 79
Traits: Custom Devil Fruit - Tier 1 (7/7 Traits) Skilled Use of Medicines (1 Trait) – Because of their expertise, these doctors have become extremely adept at producing their own medicines to aid others, or in the opposite case, poisons to harm them. They gain special Technique Points which can only be used on their creations, of the amount of half their fortune. Fate of the Mighty (2 Traits) – By placing traits in Fated, you lock them until the next time you earn a trait. You may put as many traits as you have into fated. In the meantime, you get a temporary boost of 6 to your stamina.
- Devil Fruit
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Devil Fruit Name: Tero Tero no Mi Devil Fruit Type: Paramecia Devil Fruit Ability: The Tero Tero no mi grants it's user the ability to see and manipulate the primal fears dormant in all things. Range is [F]meters.
Techniques Regular Technique Points: 150 Used Regular Technique Points: 106 Special Technique Points: 37 Used Special Technique Points: 32
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Terror (Rank 4, Base DF Technique) Type:Support Range:Long Stats: -
| Description: This technique is the most basic application of the powers of the Tero Tero no mi. Inspiring primal fear with no apparent source into the enemy, Kurtz disrupts their ability to use logic and reason in a fight. This will have varying effects, largely depending on the target. Those much weaker than him will flee in terror, while those of similar strength will become frightened and extremely uncomfortable, finding their reflexes dulled, actions slow, and basic logic eluding their grasp. Those much stronger than the doctor become unsettled and uncomfortable with the Doctor's presence.
| What Lurks Beneath (Rank 4) Type:Support Range:Long Stats: -
| Description: This technique lets Kurtz see the fears of all living things. The strongest and most present fears are clearly visible to him, while mild fears or fears that are not currently being experienced are very difficult to see, if at all. This is not obstructed by line of site through inatimate objects, but living beings may obstruct eachother, i.e. it is difficult to pick a specific fear out of a crowd.
| Paranoia (Rank 8) Type:Support Range:Long Stats: -
| Description: By manipulating a target's specific fears, Kurtz attempts to make his victim react in a specific fashion (i.e. to run from an ally, to defend himself from something harmless, etc.). He must be able to communicate with the target in some way to use this ability.
| Tox (Rank 8) Type:Offensive Range:Medium Stats: -
| Description: By focusing his fear on a single target at controlled levels, Kurtz causes their respiration to quicken and their heart to beat faster. This causes any toxins in the system to cause more damage than they normally would, but also causes them to run their course sooner. This technique causes harm at the cost of one dose of poison being removed from the target's system.
| Pulse (Rank 12) Type:Support Range:Medium Stats: - 8 Acc
| Description: Kurtz sends a piercing rush of terror through his target, causing them to tremor and quake with the physical side effects of fear.
| The Shining (Rank 24 - Pulse) Type:Support Range:Medium Stats: - 8 Sta, - 8 Acc
| Description: Kurtz forces such a deep and primal fear into his target that their body betrays them, causing violent tremoring and chills. The effects of this fear are so severe that the target's physical constitution will actually be weakened by it.
| Kurtz World (Rank 14) Type:Support, Offensive Range:Long Stats: -
| Description: By concentrating all of his power onto a single poisoned target, Kurtz is able to force them into a catatonic state of hallucination. This requires that the victim be under the effects of his special Toxic Terror drug.
During this time, the material world around the victim is swallowed up by a shadow that extends from them. They can see only themselves and Kurtz. While this effect persists, the victim is trapped in a nightmare that is entirely controlled by Kurtz. The target can do nothing to stop the illusions and terrors that beset him under the influence of His World. Because of the intense amount of physical stress this causes, the victim takes damage as if struck by a single blow [Fortune vs. Stamina] every post.
While using this technique, neither Kurtz nor his victim may move; both appear motionless. Kurtz simply seems to be staring intently into the distance, while his opponent has a look of vacant, overwhelming terror. This technique takes one round to prepare and is ended if either party is violently disturbed from the outside. If the victim is in imminent danger of outside harm, they snap out of the effect. Afterwards, all the Toxic Terror in the opponent's system is removed, and they are immune to fear effects for a post.
This technique lasts for 3 posts at equal fortune, plus or minus one post for every difference of 5 fortune. |
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Starfall (Rank 14) Type:Offensive Range:Medium Stats: -
| Description: Loading several syringes between his fingers on both hands, Kurtz flings them all towards one or more targets in a split second, creating a barrage that is difficult to dodge completely. The deft force of the throw creates a small shockwave around the needles, causing those that do not pierce anything to explode more violently.
| Ragdoll (Rank 14) Type:Defensive Range:Medium Stats: -
| Description: Using his profound knowledge of human anatomy in combination with surgeries he performed on his own joint and organs, Kurtz has developed a technique by which he instinctively guards and protects his vital parts from damage during attacks. When not taken off guard, he reflexively folds and twists with blows, tensing and loosening the proper muscles inside his body. Resultantly, attacks landing on him feel as if they are being made against a nearly weightless target, much like a rag doll.
| Medic! (Rank 14) Type:Support Range:Close Stats: -
| Description: Using a combination of first aid and combat drugs, Kurtz is able to very rapidly heal some of the wounds himself of his colleagues have sustained. Because of the short-sighted nature of this treatment, it is ineffectual if administered more than once per fight, as long-term care is needed to further aid the recipient. |
| Poison Techniques |
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Toxic Terror (Rank 8) Type:Support Range: - Stats: -
| Description: This is a special hallucinogen that has been formulated to work with Kurtz' ability. While under the effect of Toxic Terror, the victims will see their fears materialized around them. This affect persists for 5 posts per dose, up to 25 posts. Intravenous, intramuscular, topical, inhaled.
| Cloudkill (Rank 18) Type:Offensive Range: - Stats: -
| Description: This toxin appears to be pitch black. When exposed to air, the poison immediately boils, spreading an incredibly dense, black, creeping fog. This fog rolls along the ground, slowly at first and faster over time. It is attracted to respiration, and thus rolls towards anyone who breathes, friend or foe. On contact with the skin or injection, the toxin produces extreme localized pain, cramping, and spasms. Lasts 3 posts per dose, up to 15 posts.
| Stimpack (Rank 12) Type:Support Range: - Stats: +4 Spd, +4 Str
| Description: A powerful combination of various drugs and hormones that causes muscle and nervous stimulation in whoever it's applied to. The effects of the drug are powerful, but short-lived. Intravenous only. Lasts 3 posts. |
Development History Gains/Losses:
Spoiler: click to toggle Reclaimed -64 SD, 18M Beli, +9M Bounty Lost In Transition - SL, 15 SD, 3.75M Beli, +6M Bounty Between The Line - SL, 9 SD The Blue King Returns - 24 SD Out of the Blue: A New Adventure - 15 SD, 3.7M Beli, +1M Bounty OPRP Aniversary - 12 SD Brave Pre-New World - 20 SD, 4.95M Beli Iron and Blues - 10 SD, +6M Bounty That Fearsome Melody - 31 SD, 15.25M Beli, +1M Bounty Kashing In - 9 SD, 4.45M Beli Edit Log:
Spoiler: click to toggle 4/1/10 - Organized Techniques 4/27/10 - Added SD, Beli 9/28/10 - Edited in christmas present, updated language 10/19/10 - Edited in new techs, SD, Beli 4/12/11 - Edited in new SD, Bounty 6/14/11 - Edited in new SD, Beli, Bounty 7/23/11 - Fixed spoiler tags 8/26/11 -Added SD, Beli
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Feb 28 2010, 10:26 AM
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Original Sheet
Changed the history to a summary.
Changed several technique names and fixed errors in/clarified the descriptions, but did not make any mechanical changes.
Removed one tech, the cane iai, due to poison changes (may need more ranks).
Waiting a bit to spend the rest of my tech points and do poisons. Just getting it approved for archival/signature purposes for now.
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Mar 7 2010, 07:57 AM
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Just be aware that pulling out random things without the tech for it will make me very sad.
Your character has been approved.
From here on, you can go find some people to RP with, and start getting into some Storylines.
Make sure you enter the appropriate information into your signature, the details of which can be found here.
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Looking to modify/add the following techniques.
| Poison Techniques |
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Toxic Terror (Rank 8) Type:Support Range: - Stats: -
| Description: This is a special hallucinogen that has been formulated to work with Kurtz' ability. While under the effect of Toxic Terror, the victims will see their fears materialized around them. This affect persists for 5 posts per dose, up to 25 posts. Intravenous, intramuscular, topical, inhaled.
| Cloudkill (Rank 18) Type:Offensive Range: - Stats: -
| Description: This toxin appears to be pitch black. When exposed to air, the poison immediately boils, spreading an incredibly dense, black, creeping fog. This fog rolls along the ground, slowly at first and faster over time. It is attracted to respiration, and thus rolls towards anyone who breathes, friend or foe. On contact with the skin or injection, the toxin produces extreme localized pain, cramping, and spasms. Lasts 3 posts per dose, up to 15 posts.
| Stimpack (Rank 12) Type:Support Range: - Stats: +4 Spd, +4 Str
| Description: A powerful combination of various drugs and hormones that causes muscle and nervous stimulation in whoever it's applied to. The effects of the drug are powerful, but short-lived. Intravenous only. Lasts 3 posts. |
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Tox (Rank 8) Type:Offensive Range:Medium Stats: -
| Description: By focusing his fear on a single target at controlled levels, Kurtz causes their respiration to quicken and their heart to beat faster. This causes any toxins in the system to cause more damage than they normally would, but also causes them to run their course sooner. This technique causes harm at the cost of one dose of poison being removed from the target's system.
| Pulse (Rank 12) Type:Support Range:Medium Stats: - 8 Acc
| Description: Kurtz sends a piercing rush of terror through his target, causing them to tremor and quake with the physical side effects of fear.
| The Shining (Rank 24 - Branched from Pulse) Type:Support Range:Medium Stats: - 8 Sta, - 8 Acc
| Description: Kurtz forces such a deep and primal fear into his target that their body betrays them, causing violent tremoring and chills. The effects of this fear are so severe that the target's physical constitution will actually be weakened by it. |
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Starfall (Rank 14) Type:Offensive Range:Medium Stats: -
| Description: Loading several syringes between his fingers on both hands, Kurtz flings them all towards one or more targets in a split second, creating a barrage that is difficult to dodge completely. The deft force of the throw creates a small shockwave around the needles, causing those that do not pierce anything to explode more violently.
| Ragdoll (Rank 14) Type:Defensive Range:Medium Stats: -
| Description: Using his profound knowledge of human anatomy in combination with surgeries he performed on his own joint and organs, Kurtz has developed a technique by which he instinctively guards and protects his vital parts from damage during attacks. When not taken off guard, he reflexively folds and twists with blows, tensing and loosening the proper muscles inside his body. Resultantly, attacks landing on him feel as if they are being made against a nearly weightless target, much like a rag doll.
| Medic! (Rank 14) Type:Support Range:Close Stats: -
| Description: Using a combination of first aid and combat drugs, Kurtz is able to very rapidly heal some of the wounds himself of his colleagues have sustained. Because of the short-sighted nature of this treatment, it is ineffectual if administered more than once per fight, as long-term care is needed to further aid the recipient. |
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Sep 28 2010, 05:19 PM
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Can we describe some vague durations for the poisons and buffs? Posts might be better than minutes.
Wasn't really aware your fruit got 1-1 ratios on stat alters. That a typo or what?
The Combat techniques are okay.
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Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61
Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location: Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30
Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Sep 28 2010, 05:43 PM
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Added durations to all three, updated to posts. And yeah, I feel like 1/1 isn't a horrible return ratio from a t1 DF as compared to no DF buffs. The combat and poison buffs obey the normal rules by rank.
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Sep 28 2010, 05:45 PM
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Got no problem with the DF alters.
Sure, seems fine.
Techniques flagged.
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Malikai • Marksman • Smith • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 34.5 • SD Earned: 0/177 • Beli: 18,750,000 • Location: Candy Island Strength: 45------Stamina:39------Speed:40--------Accuracy:60-------Fortune:61
Juan • Inventor • Weapon Specialist Bounty: 5,000,000 • SD Earned:0/88 • Beli: 23,350,000 • Location: Strength: 45------Stamina:35------Speed:25--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:30
Ahriman (Savlin) • Doctor • Scientist • N/A • Threat: 2 • SD Earned: 0/47 • Beli: 8,270,000 • Location: Pharsalus Island Strength: 15------Stamina:13------Speed:19--------Accuracy:25-------Fortune:23
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Can we get a rule about this some place before I approve it? I mean I'm for it and all... but I'd like to see it in the rules section or something.
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| Toko Hotaro • Navigator • Jigsaw Pirates • Bounty: 7,500,000 • SD Earned: 105 • Beli: 8,250,000 •Location: Mirror Ball
| Spd: C • Str: D • Acc:C • Sta: B- |
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| Ex Balanus • Marine • Combat Specialist • Rank:PO • Beli: 41,725,000 • SD Earned:200 • Location: Brick Blues Island
| Spd: A- • Str: A • Acc:A • Sta: B |
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 | Pavo Budgerigar • Sniper • Soge Kihei • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 6,2850,000 • Location: Loguetown
| Spd: C • Str: D • Acc:B • Sta:D |
| "DEAD!" |
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| Calico Rackham • Scientist • Cold Hearted Coward • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 150,000 • Location: Osula
| Spd: D • Str: D • Acc:D • Sta:D |
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Sep 28 2010, 06:41 PM
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Sep 28 2010, 10:10 PM
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Toxic Terror at rank 8 seems to be a bit much.
Tox... I could have sworn you told me this fruit can't directly effect someone in this fashion. So it's more or less controlling their heart rate/how they're effected by the fears now? At rank 8?
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| Toko Hotaro • Navigator • Jigsaw Pirates • Bounty: 7,500,000 • SD Earned: 105 • Beli: 8,250,000 •Location: Mirror Ball
| Spd: C • Str: D • Acc:C • Sta: B- |
| "The Show Goes On" |
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| Ex Balanus • Marine • Combat Specialist • Rank:PO • Beli: 41,725,000 • SD Earned:200 • Location: Brick Blues Island
| Spd: A- • Str: A • Acc:A • Sta: B |
| "Learn To Fly" |
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 | Pavo Budgerigar • Sniper • Soge Kihei • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 6,2850,000 • Location: Loguetown
| Spd: C • Str: D • Acc:B • Sta:D |
| "DEAD!" |
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| Calico Rackham • Scientist • Cold Hearted Coward • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 150,000 • Location: Osula
| Spd: D • Str: D • Acc:D • Sta:D |
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Sep 28 2010, 10:16 PM
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I said it couldn't control their reactions, so I suppose I did after a fashion. I suppose that I should have been more clear.
Controlling physiological reactions here, instead of controlling expressed, mental reactions. People experiencing fear have increased heart rates, hyperventilate, etc. I just made a single, specific technique that only causes that, instead of mental and physical fear.
Rank 8 is fine, because it's t1. The tier of a fruit determines how powerful it is. A rank 4 t1 logia technique would let you turn into something like mercury, control it at a distance, etc. A rank 8 t1 ability that speeds up somebody's heartrate and breathing doesn't seem too whacky wild.
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Sep 28 2010, 11:10 PM
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Okay, I looked over them and such. They're legit enough for a 1/2.
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Delgado Brundlefly • "Chef" • Scientist/Chef • Iron Rose • Bounty: 16,000,000 • SD Earned: 158 • Beli: 41,654,166 • Location: Blue Brick Island
Cosmo S. Periwinkle • Nurse • Martial Artist/Doctor • Cobalt Brave • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 18 • Beli: 6,500,000 • L: Garland Island, North Blue.
Mattei of White Bay • Crew Position • Profession Name • [url=insert pirate crew link here]Pirate Crew[/url] • Bounty: 0 • SD Earned: 21 • Beli: 2,280,000 • Location: The Hood, North Blue
Icarus Moccasin • Crew Position • Shipwright/Artist • [url=insert crew URL here]Crew (if applicable)[/url] • Threat: 0 • SD Earned: 4 • Beli: 1,450,000 • L: The location your character is at – At least mention which Blue.
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Sep 29 2010, 05:31 AM
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| Toko Hotaro • Navigator • Jigsaw Pirates • Bounty: 7,500,000 • SD Earned: 105 • Beli: 8,250,000 •Location: Mirror Ball
| Spd: C • Str: D • Acc:C • Sta: B- |
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| Ex Balanus • Marine • Combat Specialist • Rank:PO • Beli: 41,725,000 • SD Earned:200 • Location: Brick Blues Island
| Spd: A- • Str: A • Acc:A • Sta: B |
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 | Pavo Budgerigar • Sniper • Soge Kihei • SD Earned: 60 • Beli: 6,2850,000 • Location: Loguetown
| Spd: C • Str: D • Acc:B • Sta:D |
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| Calico Rackham • Scientist • Cold Hearted Coward • SD Earned: 0 • Beli: 150,000 • Location: Osula
| Spd: D • Str: D • Acc:D • Sta:D |
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Boundary of Absolute Terror (Rank 28) Type:Defensive Range:Close Stats: -
| Description: Kurtz focuses his devil fruit ability in a single direction, creating a semi-invisible wall of "Absolute Terror." This boundary is a flat, roughly three by three meters, and can be established anywhere between one and thirty centimeters from himself. It is visible by a subtle and jagged vibration of the air away from it's center, pulsing outward in concentric rings. The concentrated horror of this barrier is so powerful that nothing may cross it; the terror is so "absolute" that not even unliving matter will pass through.
If an object or living being comes into contact with the barrier, it is stopped as if by an invisible wall. When struck, the vibrations in the barrier become violently active, radiating in concentric rings from the point of impact. Additionally, a loud, extremely high-pitched shrieking noise will fill the air for the duration of contact as the very matter of which the object of being is made of cries out in primal terror which transcends awareness. Any living being also suffers from the effects of his "Terror" technique for the duration of contact with the boundary
A blow of sufficient force will pierce the boundary, causing an extremely loud shrieking noise and dissipating the barrier, as determined by [Strength/Fortune vs. Fortune]. Light and other forms of energy pass through the barrier as normal. While concentrating on maintaining the Boundary of Absolute Terror, Kurtz may not use his devil fruit abilities for any other purpose. |
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