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| Dusk | Oct 21 2013, 02:36 PM Post #1 |
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http://s1.zetaboards.com/One_Piece_New_Age_RP/topic/5254397/1/#new Small thread with lots written, hope you guys enjoy it ^^ |
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| Nicho Kiennes | Oct 21 2013, 03:38 PM Post #2 |
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Hi dusk well done on ur first SL OK i liked ur detail in setting the space and mood. Good complex paragraphs. Story line was a bit simple but its just a starting SL introducing the character. ur achieved points are 3 for this SL. MODs have a marking system so that sl's cant be spammed ect. It might seem harsh but I've had sl's for my character last two months and only get 7 points. So if you think about it its not bad. I'm mainly giving u this on quality and flow of your posts. I think most MODs will agree normally if its 1 person posting id expect 5 pages and each post should be as big as the ones u have done here. Then u will be hitting big points. That's my advice. Like i said in also being nice on ur first SL so try to get 2-3 pages next time with that quality and you will be sitting pretty. As i say, it always depends how much time you want to commit to the rp and playing solo. I really want to learn more about this character she's pretty evil cutting off hands lol. So to summarize 3sp 1 progress point. 6,000 beli bounty for maiming people and disturbing the peace. U will get a poster. Coz u left people alive lol. |
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