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| [Graded] My Town; the start of a journey! | |
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| Topic Started: Jan 15 2012, 02:58 PM (135 Views) | |
| Post #1 Jan 15 2012, 02:58 PM | conthecool |
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Atr was sitting in the park, drinking from a cup of delicious green tea. Tommorow I am leaving you Lougetown. Atr thought to himself, I cant say when I shall return....but I shall miss you. Atr stood up from the old stone bench and began to stroll. For the rest of the day he wandered his home town. He thought of all the good times and the bad ones, each one bringing on diffrent emotions. Then the night was upon him. Atr then realized it would be smart for him to get home. He was nearing his abode when he rounded a corner. In the alley way he heard a woman say "help me". He looked down the alley. lying on the ground was a woman he had seen around town quite a few times. Above here were three slimey looking men in Marine outfits. |
 
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| Post #2 Jan 15 2012, 06:52 PM | 水MrMuffen |
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"SLIMEY!? I HEARD SOMEONES INNER MONOLOGUE SAY SLIMEEEEEEEEYYYY!" Screamed a man from the other end of the alley. "Your uniforms are FILLLLTHY!" Screamed he. These marines were a blasphemy against all that was clean and tidy... I mean how can you have even the slightest stain on your shirt amongst... THOMAS BUBBLES! Picture "YOU AT THE END OF THE ALLEY HELP ME CLEAN THE DIRT OUT OF THEIR SOULS!!!!" Screamed the man at the top of his lungs like he didn't even care, he extended his right arm outwards and from that produced a bazooka... Made out of SOAP! And from his left his hands began to bubble with the glorious power of the awa awa no mi! He slowly began to walk closer to the marines with his eyes filled with the gaze of a madman... Thomas Bubbles only goal on this planet... Was to clean the dirty! Immediately the marines from the middle of the alley began to stare at the crazed man slowly walking towards them, and began to back peddle slowly towards Atr. They didn't know whether they should fear this bubble man or laugh... |
 
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| Post #3 Jan 15 2012, 07:06 PM | conthecool |
| Atr stared at the man. "I don't think you could ever clean these monsters" he responded back to Thomas. Atr snatched up his cane, which he had dropped in the confusion of Mr.Bubbles sporatic entrance. Atr then proceeded to unsheath the blade hidden within the cane. He shook his arm which held his blade. Atr then leaped forward and brought down his sword into the closest marine. "Hurry, get out of here NOW"! he yelled to the stunned woman. "Thomas would you kindly do something please" Atr said calmly. As the first marine slumped to the ground. |
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| Post #4 Jan 15 2012, 07:20 PM | 水MrMuffen |
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"CLEAN CLEAN CLEAN CLEAN CLEAN CLEAN CCCCCLEEEEEAAAAAAANNNN" He screamed into the high heavens running full fledge and jumping onto the right most alley wall, then shifting his weight into a leap off the wall for some more air, "YOU NEED CLEEEEEANNNNED" He said swinging his left hand towards the closest marine to him, immediately three bars of soap came out of the cloud of bubbles surrounding his left hand, and slammed into the marine, exploding into a bubbly mess. As he landed on the ground he stared behind him, it was a direct hit. The marine was clean and unconsious on the ground, as well as rounded off, the man could be considered one of those things you keep in your room to punch that always bounce back... The woman saw the spectacle happening before them and quickly began to run, scared of what would become of her were she too stay because... She did have a little bit of dirt on her shirt... But Thomas had dirtier things to attend to. Like the blood Atr got all over the nice clean concrete. Now that was just a shame dirtying something that was kept soooooo nice and tidy. Of course the marine he had sliced was badly cut, but he was now aware of the scenario going on before him and quickly turned around, ignoring the shoulder wound and pulling out a blade of his own, he dashed as quick as he could in and aimed a simple stab straight for Atr's gut. The third marine of the bunch was wising up to what was going on and assessed the power level of both people... He pissed himself. Poor sod was scared shitless of being cleaned or cut... Thomas ignored the third however as he quickly got to scrubbing the concrete to get the blood from the cut marine out.... The third took his time in slowly backing up, he was looking for his gun which he dropped near where the old woman was being held earlier. |
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| Post #5 Jan 15 2012, 07:46 PM | conthecool |
| I cut you, why not back off? Atr thought as he swiftly dodged the marines stab. The Marine put to much strength into his stab, which threw him off balance. Before the marine could cause anymore trouble he slashed the marines hamstrings, and then knocked out the marine with the cane blades curved handle. "Stupidity...." he muttered. Atr twisted around and saw a very bizzare scene. Thomas was on his hands and knees scrubbing the cut marines blood off of the cement while humming a bright tune. Next to him was an unconcuis marine covered in what looked to be soap. The final marine had peed himself. Atr shook his head "You better leave with your friends before I change my mind and kill you". The Marine grabbed his friends and was about to leave when Atr calmly said "O and gentlemen, it is not wise to prey upon women in the dark". There is always some one stronger than you out there". The Marine booked it as fast as he could go. Atr turned on his heels to face Thomas. He stuck out his hand and grinned. "Its a pleasure to meet you Thomas, My name is Atr BackSlash". |
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| Post #6 Jan 15 2012, 08:16 PM | 水MrMuffen |
| Thomas saw a hand reach down towards him, and he swiftly slapped it away and went back to cleaning out blood from the cracks in the concrete. "You've made quite a mess Master BackSlash! Let me finish my work as a proud and pious janitor of janitorial duties and I shall accept that handshake" He pointed his bazooka at the stain. "I'll MAKE YOU COME OUT BASTAAAARD" He screamed at the stain of blood in between the crack of concrete. "SOAP BLAST!" He said as a rumble could be heard from the bazooka and then a before you could say bubbles, Thomas was high into the air, a pillar of bubbles had propelled him upwards and as he landed prim and proper onto the ground he looked to marvel in the stains disappearance, to which he put a pair of gloves over his already there gloves and shook the mans hand very subtly trying not to force a grip, he then let go of the mans hands and took off the extra gloves tossing him into a nearby waste bin. "My name is Timothy Iritigod Justicar Bubbles the IV, Thomas Bubbles for short." He said nodding his head and tipping his hat. "I am a janitor of royalty, and rather OCD about things being... Clean, it sickens me when things aren't cle-." He said staring at the mans attire, he quickly allowed some bubbles to produce from his thumb as he pressed it gently against the mans shirt, he had gotten a little splatter of blood from the marine on it he then finished his sentence. "Clean." He said simply as the marines had run away. "What matter of business do you have being in a dark alley Master BackSlash." He said disposing of his bazooka, dissolving it into bubbles. |
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| Post #7 Jan 15 2012, 08:33 PM | conthecool |
| "Well if you really must know i heard that woman scream and came to help, I find marines to be quite disturbed" Atr replied as he slid his blade back into its cane. "Also judging by you abilities you are a devil fruit user, as am I". "I have the ability to generate diffrent types of Pheremones". Atr looked up and down the deserted alley which was distubingly cleaned. " you have the look of a pirate about you, are you part of a crew? "Beacause I would like to speak to your captain if you do" |
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| Post #8 Jan 15 2012, 08:45 PM | 水MrMuffen |
| "Fruit is such a clean food if you ask me... Back on subject though, yes I am a devil fruit user, I have soap!" He said lifting his arms, and moving his fingers in what a child would deem threatening way. "And pheremones... Best keep your devil origins away from filth like those dirty suits... They tend to think sea water is a clean bath for us.... It's not." He said swiftly and slightly worried on the matter, seawater was terrible to bathe in... "What makes you think I look like a pirate?!" He said lifting an eyebrow and raising his voice. "I'm very much not some simple PIRATE." He said raising his voice to a concerned spike. "I am prone to joining the Hearts Revolution under the command of Mr. 0 Lovegood, Sal Rondei for those who haven't read the news. The mans been freed from prison, right before his taking to impel down! By a group called the St. Marys, and oh what a filthy captain they have... He has to take a bath... Badly.." He said laughing subtly. "I aim to be the ships janitor... Of course, and much more, I know more than the simple art of scrubbing and washing, and all that which is shiny and squeaky! But why would you wish to speak to Master Rondei..." He said staring deeply into Atr's eyes. |
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| Post #9 Jan 15 2012, 09:06 PM | conthecool |
| Atr gazed right back into Thomas's eyes."Because I want find a certian naval officer....and that Thomas is a story for another time and because....I have no one but myself, and i am tired of being alone and I want someone to care about" Atr said with a glint of sadness.He then regained focus and his two diffrent coloured eyes turned hard again." There is always the thought of One Piece" he said, wagging his finger in the air. " I also want to become a stronger swordsmen in general, do you have any idea where the Hearts revolution is"? Atr asked eagerly. |
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| Post #10 Jan 15 2012, 09:17 PM | 水MrMuffen |
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"Of course I know where the Hearts Revolution is, if I didn't know where it was I wouldn't be playing a vital role in this story now woul-" He paused. "Oh right too many fourth wall jokes, back to seriousness... If I didn't know where he was do you think I would be searching for him! I have pinpointed his EXACT very location. To.The.Precise.X.And.Y.Coordinates... And IF I don't get to the docks immediately, those coordinates will be miscalculated, so if you wish to come we must hurry!" He said pointing forward, which forward happened to be one of the alley walls. He stared blankly at it, rather embarrassed. He grabbed Atr shirt, rather forcefully, with his left hand. "WE GO THIS WAY, NO TIME LEFT." He said forming another bazooka in his left hand. "SOAP BLAST!" He said taking him and Atr, high into the air, them soon landing on top of a building, to which Thomas slung the man to a piggy back style position and began to leap from rooftop to rooftop with finesse and speed. "Dreams are what Master Rondei specializes in... He's been in two of the most successful revolutionary groups ever, and is the ONLY one to ever survive being in them, he is the first to also escape the iron tight grips of vice admirals and men coming to bring him to Impel Down! He survives on his dream to bring the world into a glorified state! He is the harbinger of a new era itself! And you know what... He'll fight for all of our dreams, whether it is one piece, a new world, cleaning the worlds filth, performing surgery on god, or whatever crazed idea you have he will never go back on it lest it goes against his own!" HE said in one long sentence as he continued to leap building to building with extreme speed attempting to get to the docks faster. |
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| Post #11 Jan 15 2012, 09:32 PM | conthecool |
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Atr clung to Thomas and said "The only man to break out of impel down"? He laughed out loud "Thats marvelus"! "This mr.Rondei sounds like a very great person"! Atr said Enthusiastically. "How should we approach him"? "Should we just ask him straight out"? "Thats what i think we should do"! Atr sighed and looked at the sky, high up in the air was the moon. It was a full moon too. They then traveled through Lougetown like this for some time. Atr Gasped "look Thomas were at the dock"! |
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| Post #12 Jan 15 2012, 09:46 PM | 水MrMuffen |
| "Break out? He broke out by breaking the guards trying to bring him in! The man is a mastermind, the man is a monster held back by the shell of a kind man, he is an Okama, and a practicioner of the New-Kama arts, a martial arts... I've run out of M words for. Wait! Marvel! Yes, he is a marvel!" He said continuing to jump, he knew little about Lougetown but did know the docks at least... Because he did land on them for resupply. Being on the waters wasn't the safest thing for a devil fruit user. "Asking him straight up and barging onto the Saint Mary? Ohhhh Nononono, we need reason to speak to Master Sal... We must take it subtly... Of course I am a master at being subtle...." He said oblivious to his constant screaming and bewilderment "Trust me I know how to get us close!" He said as Atr pointed out the docks. "Found it!" He said making a large leap off one of the roofs and landing on the edge of his ship. Slowly his balance began to shift back and forth as he waved his hands trying to get balance. "Gahhh waggawooo!" He said rocking back and forth before he fell backwards onto the deck of the ship... "I think I overshot that leap just a few inches too far..." He said beginning to doubt some of his own calculations... Regardless... "We must head towards Reverse whenever you are ready cut the ropes that bind us to this god forsaken island!" He said pulling a compass out and beginning to franticly fiddle with it. |
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| Post #13 Jan 15 2012, 09:54 PM | conthecool |
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Atr jumped and looked around, it was a very nice, seaworthy vessel. Thomas shouted for Atr cut the rope. Atr then stopped and looked back at the city. He had grown up there and was going to miss the old mans wisdom. Well this is what I wanted abeit a bit diffrently then i thought. Atr looked up and Grinned. Then he cut the rope. |
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| Post #14 Jan 16 2012, 05:06 PM | Enlightened Monkey |
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GRADING conthecool: 3DP,  750,000MrMuffen: 3DP, 750,000
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