Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Welcome to Omega Productions. We hope you enjoy your visit.

As a guest at Omega Productions, you are unable to access some of the features available to members. If you sign up now, you will be able to chat with the current staff, submit ideas and participate in the several RPs and writing projects we have here. Members will also be informed of any new projects coming up. Thank you for reading, and enjoy your time here.

Join our community!


If you're already a member please log in to your account to access all of our features:

Username:   Password:
Add Reply
Zeik meets Naruto; The original Zeik
Topic Started: Dec 24 2009, 01:35 PM (655 Views)
Black Golem
Member Avatar
With neither Will alone nor Strength alone
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
A both a very old and new fan fick thats been sitting around my desktop for a bit. Ive been doing this since I started watching Naruto so it follows the story quite a bit (at least for part 1 anyway. Part 2 I kinda went a bit crazy) this is also the first of my many Zeik’s lol.

Act 1 – a new team?

[ a top of a building overlooking the Leaf village a young man is leaning on a railing looking down on the village. He ware’s black trousers and a Long Black Coat with Popper Front Fastening and Military Style Straps with additional Press Studs. The collar also has popper detail. The Back of the Coat has a decorative Military style Strap and there is a popper opening flap for the bottom half of the coat to allow adjusts the height of the split along. The Sleeves also have popper detail and there is a pocket at each side. There is also three leaf emblems one on the back and one on each shoulder. He also wares black fingerless gloves and his black leaf head band is tied around his eyes like a blindfold. The headband is longer then normal with the flaps on the back laying amongst his long feathered jet black hair.]

Kakashi: I thought id find you here Zeik
Zeik: im not as easy to find as you at least. Whats the deal Kakashi
Kakashi:well its that time of year where I have to test some genin
Zeik: and? they’ll just fail your test. Why tell me
Kakashi: im going to go do the introductions soon your coming
Zeik: whats the point? they wont pass
Kakashi: I think you’ll be interested in these one’s
Zeik: I doubt it but ill tag along anyway

[Zeik sighs as he gets lifts himself off the railing]
Zeik: usual spot right ill meet you there
[Zeik uses flicker jutsu to vanish]

[Sometime later Zeik is once again leaning on a railing overlooking the village Kakashi is to his right sitting on the railings while Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke are sitting on the steps behind him]
Zeik: so first impressions
Kakashi:there a bunch of idiots
[Zeik smiles while Naruto and Sakura look annoyed]
Naruto: (who’s this guy anyway)
Sakura: (he could at least face us)
Kakashi: alright why don’t you introduce yourselves. one at a time.
Sakura: introduce ourselves? Well.. what are we suppose to say?
Kakashi: things you like, things you hate, dreams for the future. Hobbies, things like that
Naruto: why don’t you tell us stuff first. I mean before we talk tell us about you. So we can see how its suppose to work.
Kakashi: me? Im Kakashi Hatake. Things I like and things I hate.. hmm I don’t feel like telling you that
Naruto & Sakura:huh?
[Zeik smiles]
Kakashi:my dreams for the future. Never really thought about it. As for my hobbies.. I have lots of hobbies
Sakura:that was totally useless. All he really told us was his name
Kakashi: ok your turn. You on the right. You first

[the three introduce themselves]
Zeik:guess that leaves me
Naruto:yea who are you!
Zeik:I was getting to that.. so shut up. Ok im Zeik. Things I like… nothing really comes to mind. As for what I hate….loud mouth brats
Naruto:….
Zeik: annoying girls
Sakura:….
Zeik: cocky hotshots
Sasuke:……
[Zeik’s words obviously hit a nerve with each of them]
Kakashi: (oh boy)
Zeik: dreams for the future..hmm I plan on simply being the strongest. Hobbies nothing really.
[a long pause as the three look at Zeik who is simply smiling. Naruto and Sakura are obviously annoyed at him]
Kakashi:ok ok Zeik you can go now. ill explain there mission to them
Naruto:mission

[watch the rest of episode 4 and 5 for the rest]

[sometime the next day after the test. Zeik is one the same building overlooking town. Kakashi appears]
Zeik:so how they do
Kakashi: they passed
Zeik:wow so I guess im replaced then
Kakashi:not quite I talked to the 3rd you will be the squad leader of team 7
Zeik: say what?
Posted Image
http://zeiksanimereviews.wordpress.com/ Current Watch though and review: G Gundam/Macross 7/CG Akito the Exiled /Jojos Bizarre Adventure
"I, too, am a true Gundam Dynasty Warrior!" - Kira Yamato
"I will fight with this sword! Knight Gundam, Launch!" - Kira Yamato
"I've finally come to understand what I'm really fighting for." - Kira Yamato
"if theres a hole a guys just got to be ready to thrust into it!" - Ryoma
"Beyond the beaten path lies the ultimate end. It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx
"No one's going to decide my future. No matter how hard, I'll choose it myself!" - Kira Yamato
"If a god gets in our way, he gets cut down! If a devil gets in our way, he gets shot up!" -Ken and Ryo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Black Golem
Member Avatar
With neither Will alone nor Strength alone
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
Act 2 – a new mission

[Ichiraku Ramen Bar all of Team 7 save for Kakashi are eating after finishing a mission Naruto has several scratch marks on his face. He touches them a wines]
Zeik:I told you shouldn’t of grabbed the cat
Sakura:even cats don’t want to be near him
Naruto: but if I hadn’t of caught him we wouldn’t have finished the mission
Zeik: idiot if you had stack to the plan then the cat would have been caught in the trap I set 3 feet away from where you grabbed it
Naruto:you never said anything about a trap
Sakura: your kidding right we watched him set it up
Naruto: what really
Sasuke: the loser was to busy moaning about the mission
Kakashi:now now play nice

[Kakashi appears behind them]
Kakashi: shouldn’t you guys be getting ready for our next mission
Zeik:you mean the great C rank escort mission the nimrod landed us.. Seriously Kakashi do I have to bother going to the land of waves I hate that place… its not like its going to be hard or anything
Kakashi:now now Zeik remember your still a Genin and now that your in a team these are the kind of missions your going to have to do
Naruto:wait what you’re a Genin
Zeik:I might be a Genin but that hasn’t stopped you from taking me on 15A and 20B rank missions 10 of those I did basically by my self I might add not to mention my previous Jonin teacher took me on Abu missions
Kakashi: it’ll be good for you to go on some lower level missions every now and then.
Zeik:then find another mission! I really don’t like the land of waves and you know why!

[the next day…….]
Naruto:YAAAAA!!! All right!
Sakura:what are you getting so excited about Naruto
Zeik:you shout like that once more ill kill you
Naruto: this is the first time I left the village. Im a traveller now believe it
Tazuna: hey am I supposed to trust my life to this rut. He’s a joke
Zeik:no your meant to trust the other three ninja with your life
Kakashi: heh he’s with me and im a jonin so you don’t need to worry
[Naruto then argues with Tazuna like in the episode. The group walk until they are attacked by two ninja who trap and kill Kakashi ripping him to pieces]
Sakura: *scream*
Naruto:Kakashi Sensai!
Zeik:what!
[Zeik is caught next with no time to move]
Zeik: (shit poison chains)
[he tries moving back but is tripped by the chain around his feet his head goes back as it does an explosion happens]
Gōzu: ?!....two down
Meizu: four to go!
Posted Image
http://zeiksanimereviews.wordpress.com/ Current Watch though and review: G Gundam/Macross 7/CG Akito the Exiled /Jojos Bizarre Adventure
"I, too, am a true Gundam Dynasty Warrior!" - Kira Yamato
"I will fight with this sword! Knight Gundam, Launch!" - Kira Yamato
"I've finally come to understand what I'm really fighting for." - Kira Yamato
"if theres a hole a guys just got to be ready to thrust into it!" - Ryoma
"Beyond the beaten path lies the ultimate end. It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx
"No one's going to decide my future. No matter how hard, I'll choose it myself!" - Kira Yamato
"If a god gets in our way, he gets cut down! If a devil gets in our way, he gets shot up!" -Ken and Ryo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Black Golem
Member Avatar
With neither Will alone nor Strength alone
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
Act 3 – Demon Brothers of the Hidden Mist

Naruto:what no!

[the dust starts to clear from the explosion. Severed chains drop to the floor disintegrating slowly. Zeik is on one knee, he gets up]

Zeik:dam looks like I got a bit too relaxed and let down my guard
Gozu:but how?
Zeik: wouldn’t you like to know heh
Meizu:whats so funny

[Zeik points behind them. They both turn to see Sasuke in mid air he swings around kicking both of them away. They both hit the ground disconnecting the chains and rushing to either side Meizu goes for Naruto Gozu for Tazuna and Sakura. Naruto freezes up but Meizu his hit by Zeik and sent flying into a tree. Zeik looks back to see Kakashi holding Gozu]

Kakashi:hi
Zeik:took your time

[Zeik knee’s down Kakashi drops Gozu]

Kakashi:Sakura go tie these to up for me they wont be moving for a bit so don’t worry
Sakura: ok

[Kakashi walks over to Zeik]

Zeik: yea I know
Kakashi: how do you feel?
Zeik: like I just got hit by the hokage
Kakashi: serves you right for using that jutsu
Zeik: yea my bad. But im ok I can still continue
Kakashi: well ok but watch your self you don’t have the stamina for that jutsu yet

Naruto:Sasuke!
Kakashi:Naruto stand still

[after finding out the truth about the mission and after Naruto’s little outburst]

Zeik:so whats it going to be Kakashi. Personally I think we can do this mission without too much trouble but its your call if you think there up to it
Kakashi: yea we’re going to continue on
Zeik:ok then

[the team continues to the land of waves]

Posted Image
http://zeiksanimereviews.wordpress.com/ Current Watch though and review: G Gundam/Macross 7/CG Akito the Exiled /Jojos Bizarre Adventure
"I, too, am a true Gundam Dynasty Warrior!" - Kira Yamato
"I will fight with this sword! Knight Gundam, Launch!" - Kira Yamato
"I've finally come to understand what I'm really fighting for." - Kira Yamato
"if theres a hole a guys just got to be ready to thrust into it!" - Ryoma
"Beyond the beaten path lies the ultimate end. It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx
"No one's going to decide my future. No matter how hard, I'll choose it myself!" - Kira Yamato
"If a god gets in our way, he gets cut down! If a devil gets in our way, he gets shot up!" -Ken and Ryo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Black Golem
Member Avatar
With neither Will alone nor Strength alone
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
Act 4 – the demon of the mist enters

[ the group walks though a forest Zeik has taken the lead after Naruto has been jumping at and throwing kuni at bushes. He is about a meter ahead when]

Kakashi: everyone get down!

[Everyone drops to the floor save for Zeik who turns around]

Zeik:what?

[ a huge sword is sent spinning at him passing over the others it heads for Zeik who bends back, the sword spins over him catching and cutting several strands of his hair, it swings up hitting a tree. Zeik bends back so he can see that the Zanbatō has crashed into a tree, and a rather tall ninja with a bandage mask covering his nose and mouth has leaped onto the handle of the sword]

Zeik: a bit close
Naruto:wow
Kakashi: I told you to get down
Zeik: hey Kakashi I think I know this guy or seen him before
Kakashi: he’s Zabuza Momochi a rouge ninja from the village hidden in the mist

[Zeik turns himself around to face Zabuza]

Zeik: ive got this then
Kakashi: fine but be careful your not a t 100% yet
Zeik:yea I know

Zabuza:no wonder the demon brothers failed. Against copy ninja Kakashi and who’s this you look familiar as well boy
Zeik: names Zeik don’t forget it
Zabuza: tough talk can you back it up

[Zeik appears in mid air next to Zabuza he swings around doing a kick to the head, Zabuza drops down grabbing his sword and caving it though the tree causing it to fall both Zabuza and Zeik land on the other side of the tree too Kakashi and the rest. the two take there stance, Zeik goes down low putting his arms in front of his face only showing his headband covered eyes while Zabuza grabs his sword and enters a crouched position]

Zeik: and I thought this mission was going to be boring
Zabuza: ha how long will you last
Posted Image
http://zeiksanimereviews.wordpress.com/ Current Watch though and review: G Gundam/Macross 7/CG Akito the Exiled /Jojos Bizarre Adventure
"I, too, am a true Gundam Dynasty Warrior!" - Kira Yamato
"I will fight with this sword! Knight Gundam, Launch!" - Kira Yamato
"I've finally come to understand what I'm really fighting for." - Kira Yamato
"if theres a hole a guys just got to be ready to thrust into it!" - Ryoma
"Beyond the beaten path lies the ultimate end. It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx
"No one's going to decide my future. No matter how hard, I'll choose it myself!" - Kira Yamato
"If a god gets in our way, he gets cut down! If a devil gets in our way, he gets shot up!" -Ken and Ryo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Black Golem
Member Avatar
With neither Will alone nor Strength alone
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
Act 5 – Zabuza the demon

Sakura: hey Kakashi sensei if this guy’s so strong why are you leaving it to Zeik shouldn’t you fight Zabuza
Kakashi: don’t count Zeik out he’s extremely strong despite still been a Genin
Naruto: but isn’t this guy a Jonin
Kakashi: don’t believe me just watch

[Zeik and Zabuza rush at each other Zabuza swings his sword vertically with great force Zeik stops just short of the blade waiting for it to pass and lunging forward with a hard punch that knocks Zabuza back but not of his feet]

Zabuza: heh not bad for a kid
Zeik: you’re a bit slow for a jonin pick it up
Zabuza: ha then try and keep up

[Zabuza performs the proper handsigns ]

Zabuza: hidden mist jutsu!

[a thick fog engulfs the area Zabuza vanishes from sight]

Zeik:heh kids games

[Zabuza appears behind Zeik and swings his sword downwards. But Zeik side steps spinning around and kicking Zabuza in the side. Zabuza swings his arm out in return knocking Zeik flying back though he recovers flipping over and sliding across the ground, he makes some hand signs]

Zeik: fire style: fireball jutsu

[Zeik sends a large fireball at Zabuza but he splashes into water]

Zeik: Water clone!
Zabuza: too late

[Zabuza is behind Zeik he swings right though Zeik who puffs into smoke]

Zabuza: shadow clones not bad

[Zaik is on a tree branch looking down]

Zeik: (wow what a hit that looked like just a tap as well better not get hit by this guy)
Zabuza: you comin down from there or will I have to come get you
Zeik:hmm let me think
Zabuza: smart-alecky little brat
Zeik: hey that’s those three not me
[Zeik rushs in]

Zabuza: hidden mist jutsu!
Zeik: what?
[the mist gets thicker when Zeik attacks with a punch he hits air then is hit hard with a knee to the chest before a backhand to the face sending him flying]

Zeik: (dam should have dodged. My bodys still not moving right)
Zabuza: haha its over

[Zabuza appears in front of him and goes to swing his blade but Zeik throws a Kunei knife at his head water pours out of the wound as Zabuza appears behind Zeik ready to swing but then a knife is held to his throat]

Kakashi: not so fast …. Looks like you needed help after all Zeik
Zeik: heh
[behind Zabuza is Kakashi with his Sharingan active. Zabuza goes to grab his sword with his other hand]
Kakashi: not so fast … now its over

[watch eps 8 and 9 for the rest of the fight Zeik is sitting down resting though out the rest of it…]
Posted Image
http://zeiksanimereviews.wordpress.com/ Current Watch though and review: G Gundam/Macross 7/CG Akito the Exiled /Jojos Bizarre Adventure
"I, too, am a true Gundam Dynasty Warrior!" - Kira Yamato
"I will fight with this sword! Knight Gundam, Launch!" - Kira Yamato
"I've finally come to understand what I'm really fighting for." - Kira Yamato
"if theres a hole a guys just got to be ready to thrust into it!" - Ryoma
"Beyond the beaten path lies the ultimate end. It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx
"No one's going to decide my future. No matter how hard, I'll choose it myself!" - Kira Yamato
"If a god gets in our way, he gets cut down! If a devil gets in our way, he gets shot up!" -Ken and Ryo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Black Golem
Member Avatar
With neither Will alone nor Strength alone
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
Act 6 – calm before the storm

[the fight with Zabuza ended in a win for Kakashi though it was a hunter ninja from the mist village that ended the fight killing Zabuza. However Kakashi figured out that the hunter ninja was actually working with Zabuza. Also Kakashi will need a week to recover and so decides to train team 7 in Chakra control.]

[day 1]
[ After the first training session Kakashi and Sakura return home and are greeted by Zeik]

Zeik:back already
Kakashi: yes
Zeik: so how did it go
Kakashi: I think they should get it quite quickly
[Sakura comes out from behind Kakashi]

Zeik:yea Sasuke shouldn’t have any problem and he should motivate Naruto… and why are you here
Kakashi: Sakura’s a natural she did it first try
Zeik: wow nice im impressed
Sakura: really
Zeik: yes took me a few goes myself and since you’re here
[Zeik holds out a shopping bag]
Zeik: you get to go shopping
Sakura: wha? But that’s what you were about to do
Zeik: yes but I want to talk to Kakashi and who’s the leader of this squad

[Sakura groans as she leaves to go shopping]
Zeik: Kakashi
Kakashi: hmm yes
Zeik: in a weeks time we’ll both be up to full strength and theres I good chance Zabuza will be as well so if we have to fight again ill probably will have to use that jutsu
Kakashi: yes I think your right

[day 3]
[ out in the forest Zeik is training he runs into a clearing and dashing forward spinning as he moves though the air he throws 8 Kunai into 8 trees around him digging the blade all the way into the tree. As he lands on the ground from the dash he back flips up into the air spinning around he draws 4 kunai and throws them in different directions before quickly throwing another 4 deflecting them off the first 4 and into each of the trees with the first 8 kunai in them just above where the first set dug in. he lands smiling straightens up before turning quickly and throwing Kunai which hits a tree further into the forest. Just besides the tree is Sasuke]

Zeik:its not nice to spy on people Sasuke
Sasuke:where did you lean that
Zeik: my old teacher taught me it, it’s not that hard im sure you could do it easy with some practice…. Tell you what come out for a meal with Naruto, Sakura and me tonight and ill teach you a bit tomorrow
Posted Image
http://zeiksanimereviews.wordpress.com/ Current Watch though and review: G Gundam/Macross 7/CG Akito the Exiled /Jojos Bizarre Adventure
"I, too, am a true Gundam Dynasty Warrior!" - Kira Yamato
"I will fight with this sword! Knight Gundam, Launch!" - Kira Yamato
"I've finally come to understand what I'm really fighting for." - Kira Yamato
"if theres a hole a guys just got to be ready to thrust into it!" - Ryoma
"Beyond the beaten path lies the ultimate end. It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx
"No one's going to decide my future. No matter how hard, I'll choose it myself!" - Kira Yamato
"If a god gets in our way, he gets cut down! If a devil gets in our way, he gets shot up!" -Ken and Ryo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Black Golem
Member Avatar
With neither Will alone nor Strength alone
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
Act 7 – calm ends

[later that night Zeik, Naruto, Sakura and Sasuke are eating out in town]

Zeik: eat up Sasuke, Sakura its on me, and Naruto watch what you eat or your paying
Naruto: WHAA?! But
Zeik: no buts you eat like a horse
Sakura: wow so whats this about Zeik
Zeik: nothing ive just thought you guys deserved a reward. Ive been impressed with how you guys have taken this mission so far, not only is it the first one out of the village but its also at least a B rank mission.

[the 4 begin eating despite Zeik warning Naruto starts eating at three times the speed of the others]

Sakura: so Zeik how long have you been with Kakashi Sensei
Zeik: how long? well I guess it’ll have been 5 years now
Naruto: how come your still a Genin
Zeik: bad timing every time the test is on I get a really good mission,
Sasuke: like what
Zeik: well one year we were hired as escorts for the Hokage when the exam was held in the mist village. Not all bad though I got to meet the Mizukage
Naruto: what? You got to meet the Mizukage cool
Zeik: no big deal ive meet all the Kages at least once apart from the Kazekage, never met him
Naruto: cooool

[they finish there meal Zeik pays for his, Sakura’s and Sasukes but when he gets to Naruto’s bill he just stares]
Zeik: Naruto…
Naruto:what hehe
Zeik: this is yours
[Zeik hands Naruto’s bill to him then uses flicker jutsu to vanish, Naruto looks at the bill ]
Naruto:WHAAA?!!!!
[he goes to look at Sasuke and Sakura but only sees the curtain wave shut]
Naruto: hey guys where you go
[the chef and his helper look over him eyes shining]
Naruto:wha?! No?! hey guys?! Come on help!!
[Zeik, Sasuke and Sakura walk back to Tazuna’s while Naruto’s shouts can be heard in the back ground]

[the next morning Zeik is slowly wakes he wears a long thin blindfold over his eyes, he gets up as Sasuke walks in]
Sasuke: you even sleep with that on
Zeik: its training ive learned a few tricks by taking away my senses one at a time, slight is my last one. In fact I can see you just fine
Sasuke: how?
Zeik: ive learned to see energy when I look at you I see a blue figure and when you do a fire style jutsu I see the red come up from with in you. I can see anything that is alive or has energy this way
Sasuke: hmmm… well you said you’d train me today so get up
Zeik: I know

[for the next few days Zeik helps with Naruto and Sasuke’s training ]
Edited by Black Golem, Jan 5 2010, 02:13 PM.
Posted Image
http://zeiksanimereviews.wordpress.com/ Current Watch though and review: G Gundam/Macross 7/CG Akito the Exiled /Jojos Bizarre Adventure
"I, too, am a true Gundam Dynasty Warrior!" - Kira Yamato
"I will fight with this sword! Knight Gundam, Launch!" - Kira Yamato
"I've finally come to understand what I'm really fighting for." - Kira Yamato
"if theres a hole a guys just got to be ready to thrust into it!" - Ryoma
"Beyond the beaten path lies the ultimate end. It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx
"No one's going to decide my future. No matter how hard, I'll choose it myself!" - Kira Yamato
"If a god gets in our way, he gets cut down! If a devil gets in our way, he gets shot up!" -Ken and Ryo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Black Golem
Member Avatar
With neither Will alone nor Strength alone
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
Act – 8 Battle on the Bridge

[day 7 after a week of training and relaxing Kakashi is finally up and about and ready to protect Tazuna. Zeik, Sakura, Sasuke and Kakashi head to the bridge with Tazuna. Naruto was left asleep…….]

[Bridge]
Tazuna: hold on what the heck is this!?

[looking on the Bridge the group sees the works all lying on the floor hurt though still alive]
Tazuna: what happened? Some was here! Someone got to them!
Kakashi: could it be?
Zeik: yea I think so

[a heavy mist rolls in]
Kakashi: this mist… Sasuke, Sakura get ready!

[ everyone gets in a protective formation around Tazuna]
Zeik: sometimes Kakashi. I hate it when your right
Sakura: Kakashi sensei its Zabuza isn’t it this is his Hidden mist jutsu
Zabuza: sorry I kept you waiting Kakashi. I see you’ve still got those brats with you. That ones still trembling. Pitiful

[several water clones appear around the group, Sasuke smiles ]
Sasuke: im trembling with excitement
Kakashi: go on Sasuke

[from this point on everything happens the same as the show for Sasuke and Naruto vs Haku. After Haku traps both Sasuke and Naruto]

Zeik:ive had enough
[Zeik rushes forward towards the Mirrors but is stopped by Zabuza]

Zabuza: hold it right there
[Zabuza swings his huge sword in an arc t Zeik who jumps back into the air throwing two Kunai which Zabuza blocks]

Zeik: fine your first.. Fire style fireball jutsu
[ Zeik fires a large fireball at Zabuza who dodges back]

Zabuza: time to finish what we started boy
Zeik: some ones in a hurry to die then
Zabuza: ha
[Zeik lands and rushes forward Zabuza swings again but this time Zeik summersaults over him kicking him in the back, Zabuza stubbles forward but spins around swinging his arm, Zeik spins still in mid air and blocks the hit with a kick, before jumping back onto his feet skidding back slightly from the last exchange]

Zabuza: your quicker
Zeik: your as slow as ever
Zabuza: ha then how about this Hidden Mist Jutsu!

[the mist the rolls in this time is much thicker then normal]
Kakashi: whats this theres no way he can see in this dense a mist
Zeik: (dam the mist is carrying Chakra all I can see is blue. This could be a problem )

[suddenly Zeik sees two black diamonds come towards him from the blue, dodges them just]

Zeik: Kunai
Kakashi: Zeik
Zeik: yea

[three more come from the mist this time aimed at Kakashi who lifts his headband up to show his Sharingan while dodging. Then Zeik appears right next to Zabuza kicking him back]

Zabuza: what?! How?!
Zeik: followed the trail
Zabuza: you what?
Zeik: Kunai don’t contain energy so to me there just black objects normal there a pain to dodge got to feel the air currents around me, but with this blue back ground they stick out like a sore thumb all I had to do was trace there origin based on there flight path.
Zabuza: just what are you
Zeik: not much point in telling someone who’s about to die
Zabuza: brave words

[Zeik runs forward and heel kicks Zabuza only to find it was a water clone]
Zeik: Kakashi! a decoy!
Kakashi: (then were will he strike) huh the Bridge Builder!

[Zabuza appears behind Tazuna and attacks Kakashi gets in the way and is hit]
Posted Image
http://zeiksanimereviews.wordpress.com/ Current Watch though and review: G Gundam/Macross 7/CG Akito the Exiled /Jojos Bizarre Adventure
"I, too, am a true Gundam Dynasty Warrior!" - Kira Yamato
"I will fight with this sword! Knight Gundam, Launch!" - Kira Yamato
"I've finally come to understand what I'm really fighting for." - Kira Yamato
"if theres a hole a guys just got to be ready to thrust into it!" - Ryoma
"Beyond the beaten path lies the ultimate end. It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx
"No one's going to decide my future. No matter how hard, I'll choose it myself!" - Kira Yamato
"If a god gets in our way, he gets cut down! If a devil gets in our way, he gets shot up!" -Ken and Ryo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Black Golem
Member Avatar
With neither Will alone nor Strength alone
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
Act 9 – Lightning blade

[Blood drips from Kakashi]
Sakura: Kakashi Sensei!
Zabuza: you were late Kakashi, you let concern for those little punks cloud your mind, adding further to the fog that already hinders your Sharingan, your eyes are sharp Kakashi but not sharp enough to read my moves, not anymore …hehe come on Kakashi I want this to be fun, I want to enjoy my self as I enact my revenge
Zeik: heres something fun for yea!

[Zeik appears in front of Zabuza crouched down with his fist pulled back]
Zeik: have some of this!

[Zeik does a powerful sr8 punch to Zabuza’s gut propelling him back, he does a flip and regains his footing]
Zabuza: dam you!!

[Zabuza retreats into the mist once more]
Zeik: you ok
Kakashi: been better ehe. Sakura stay with Tazuna!
Zeik: time we ended this right now!
Kakashi:yes
Sakura: ok

[Zeik and Kakashi run forward into the mist when suddenly they feel a dark evil chakra]

Kakashi: (is Zabuza creating this? No he’s not I know this chakra.. theres no way.. Naruto)
Zeik: we got a huge problem Kakashi!
Kakashi: I know I can feel it too
Zeik: you’d have to be dead to miss it! Dam not good (of all the times Naruto you idiot)
Kakashi: (has the seal been broken!, no its been loosened and a glimmer of the 9 –tailed fox’s chakra has slipped though but the seal still holds )

[Kakashi takes a scroll from his vest throwing it into the air]
Kakashi: (good then maybe we still have a chance.. just maybe..)

[Kakashi takes some blood from the cut on his chest smearing it down the scroll with his thumb]
Kakashi: Zabuza I don’t mean to spoil your fun I know how you like to stretch these things out but how about we put an end to this now

[Kakashi makes a hand sign with the scroll resting on top]
Kakashi: common what do you say we’re both busy people
Zabuza: hm tempting im curios to see how you back up such brave words. Show me Kakashi!

[Kakashi does the hand signs]
Kakashi: Ninja Art Summoning Earth Style: Fanged Pursuit Jutsu!
Zabuza: I don’t know why you bother of what use is your jutsu if you can’t even find me but I can find you…. Blindly falling into my trap you disappoint me Kakashi I think your right it is time to put an end to this…huh?

[tunnelling can be heard several ninja dogs burst out from the ground biting into Zabuza]
Kakashi: I realised if I couldn’t see you I’d have to smell you out. That was a summoning jutsu I was calling forth my ninja hounds they can track a scent anywhere

[Kakashi taunts Zabuza and talks about his past just like in the show]

Kakashi: alright Zabuza its time to end this
Zeik:yea I agree its about time we finished this
[Zeik looks at Kakashi and smiles,]

Zeik: alright I guess its time
[Zeik reaches for his head band taking it off his head hung low he puts it back on this time on his forehead he raises his head with out the head band covering his face he opens his eyes to show two 3 tomoe Sharingan eyes]

Zabuza: what
Zeik: my name is Zeik Uchiha remember it as the name of the one who killed you.
Kakashi: now its time we ended this

[both Zeik and Kakashi begin doing Identical hand signs lighting begins to form around them in a circle they point there hands down forming lightning in there hands]
Zeik & Kakashi: Lighting Blade!!
Kakashi: I won’t allow you to kill Tazuna, he’s a brave man with a noble dream, the bridge he’s building is the hope of this land and all its people, your like a disease by attack one you infect all and you don’t care. That is not the way of the shinobi
Zabuza: your right I don’t care! These useless little people and there petty little dreams why should they matter to me! I have a dream of my own
Zeik: sorry but dreams are something reserved for people with futures something you lack
Kakashi: your futures all used up Zabuza

[Zeik and Kakashi rush forward at Zabuza and attack]
Posted Image
http://zeiksanimereviews.wordpress.com/ Current Watch though and review: G Gundam/Macross 7/CG Akito the Exiled /Jojos Bizarre Adventure
"I, too, am a true Gundam Dynasty Warrior!" - Kira Yamato
"I will fight with this sword! Knight Gundam, Launch!" - Kira Yamato
"I've finally come to understand what I'm really fighting for." - Kira Yamato
"if theres a hole a guys just got to be ready to thrust into it!" - Ryoma
"Beyond the beaten path lies the ultimate end. It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx
"No one's going to decide my future. No matter how hard, I'll choose it myself!" - Kira Yamato
"If a god gets in our way, he gets cut down! If a devil gets in our way, he gets shot up!" -Ken and Ryo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Black Golem
Member Avatar
With neither Will alone nor Strength alone
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
Act – 10 Demon

[Zeik and Kakashi charge forward in tandem and jab forward with the double Lightning blades, but Haku has jumped in between them and Zabuza taking the full force of both attacks, Kakashi’s dogs disappear in a puff of smoke]
Zeik: the hell?!

[Haku grabs both Zeik’s and Kakashi’s arms in a death grip]
Kakashi:the boy throw himself in front of our attacks….he save your worthless life at the cost of his own…
Zeik:dam…
Zabuza:hehe well done Haku

[Zabuza swings down at them]
Kakashi: he’d hack right though the boy to take me down
Zabuza:I knew id found a treasure when I found you boy! Not only have you given me my life but these two’s as well
Zeik: not a chance!

[Zeik brakes out blood all over his hand, while Kakashi grabs Haku’s body and jumps back both dodge the attack, Zeik gets up looking at the blood on his hand]

Zabuza:hehe not bad for having a corpse in your arms
Naruto: you’ll pay for that!
Kakashi:no stay out of this! The both of you… this is my battle Zabuza’a mine
Zeik:….

[Zeik looks again at the blood before moving his hand up to his mouth and licking a bit off, his Sharingan eyes spin one rotation and he smiles before looking back at the fight, Kakashi and Zabuza clash then land facing each other Kakashi seems fine but Zabuza is on one knee panting]

Zabuza:why? Why can’t I keep up with him?!

[Zabuza charges Kakashi and goes to swing but Kakashi back hands him away effortlessly, Zabzua recovers but is hit again]

Zabuza:ill spilt you in half!!

[Zabuza swings in an arc bringing the sword over his head Kakashi hops back avoiding the swing, Zabzua swings down but Kakashi appears behind him holding his neck]

Kakashi: look at you your falling apart. I knew you didn’t have what it takes for the long hall
Zabuza:what did you say?
Kakashi:you have no idea what real strength is

Gato:well well so this is how it turns out

[Kakashi spins two kunai on his fingers and points them at Zabuza]

Kakashi:game over you lose

[Zabzua: swings his arm around so it gets hit by the kunai while he also hits Kakashi away, while losing his sword]

Kakshi:now both of your arms are useless, you can’t even make hand signs
[Gato steps forward]

Gato:did quite the job on you didn’t he Zabuza, you look like yesterdays sashimi.. I must say im disappointed
Posted Image
http://zeiksanimereviews.wordpress.com/ Current Watch though and review: G Gundam/Macross 7/CG Akito the Exiled /Jojos Bizarre Adventure
"I, too, am a true Gundam Dynasty Warrior!" - Kira Yamato
"I will fight with this sword! Knight Gundam, Launch!" - Kira Yamato
"I've finally come to understand what I'm really fighting for." - Kira Yamato
"if theres a hole a guys just got to be ready to thrust into it!" - Ryoma
"Beyond the beaten path lies the ultimate end. It matters not who you are...Death awaits you." - Nyx
"No one's going to decide my future. No matter how hard, I'll choose it myself!" - Kira Yamato
"If a god gets in our way, he gets cut down! If a devil gets in our way, he gets shot up!" -Ken and Ryo
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
Go to Next Page
« Previous Topic · Stories, Essays and Poetry · Next Topic »
Add Reply

Theme by tiptopolive of Zetaboards Theme Zone