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Nintendo's Legend; A great comic with action and other!
Topic Started: Apr 27 2008, 04:01 PM (211 Views)
ninpulse	Apr 27 2008, 04:01 PM Post #1
Administrator Posts: 204 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: Apr 20, 2008	Well I have tons of spare time, so I am creating a series of comics called, Nintendo's Legend. Casino Day - Scene 1 Back At The House - Scene 2



ninpulse	Apr 27 2008, 04:04 PM Post #2
Administrator Posts: 204 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: Apr 20, 2008	Since the comics look smashed, I would recommend viewing them by right clicking them and choosing View Image.



supersonic105	Apr 29 2008, 07:35 PM Post #3
Posts: 133 Group: Global Moderators Member #2 Joined: Apr 23, 2008	One thing (that even I am struggling with) is adding a punchline at the end of each comic. I'm not sure what you're trying to do, if it's just a storyline, or going to eventually be a rofl comic, but if anything, try and add something funny at the end. -oh and by the way, try and watch your punctuation and spelling. small things, suck as eeeekkkkk! could be changed to eeeeeeeek!, and in some cases, trade out periods for exclamation points, and vice-versa. one LAST thing. to make the comic easier to read, please make it so that the baloons are written in the order attached. Attached to this post: orderofbaloons.png (11.57 KB) Edited by supersonic105, Apr 29 2008, 07:43 PM.



ninpulse	Apr 30 2008, 05:37 PM Post #4
Administrator Posts: 204 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: Apr 20, 2008	Well my spelling is not barely wrong. And I am not making a funny comic as you can see. Some great comics I have read that gives off action does not deal with punchlines that much. And the way the bubbles are is fine. So my comic is fine the way it is.



supersonic105	May 1 2008, 03:56 AM Post #5
Posts: 133 Group: Global Moderators Member #2 Joined: Apr 23, 2008	just saying, and trying to only give constructive criticism. the comic looks like it will be awesome.



ninpulse	May 1 2008, 08:30 PM Post #6
Administrator Posts: 204 Group: Admins Member #1 Joined: Apr 20, 2008	Thanks.



supersonic105	May 20 2008, 04:52 AM Post #7
Posts: 133 Group: Global Moderators Member #2 Joined: Apr 23, 2008	ummm... it's been a while... are you going to make any more?



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