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| Milleni | Jan 30 2016, 04:26 AM Post #1 |
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Basic Information Name: Kiriyama, Jun Age: 43 Gender: Male Rank: Tsuchikage Village/Country: Iwagakure, The Earth Country Elemental Affinity: Earth, Fire, Wind Specialty: Psychology and Mind Intrusion Appearance ![]() Jun’s physical appearance is an interesting one. Due to his ability to steal and take on different identities by using the Shūshagan no Jutsu (Vanishing Facial Copy Technique,) no one is ever 100% sure what his actual appearance is – and is something that Jun likes to take advantage of frequently. Nevertheless, the leadership face that the Earth Country recognises is rather pale – so pale that it looks unnatural and sickening. He has long, curly black hair, which he maintains regularly, and yet leaves the lower features of his face slightly unshaven. His eyes are narrow and slightly curved – almost devil-like; and are of a common brown. His skin appears to be perfect, with not a single freckle or cut visible. However, his body physique is far from perfect, as he appears to be rather lanky. Despite his lanky appearance, he is somehow still capable of sending of an incredibly powerful and authoritative demeanour; quite possibly caused by his diabolical features. Jun surprisingly has a quite muscular body with solid pectoral and abdominal muscles, which appear quite unnatural on such a pale and skinny body. Like everything else, his fingers are quite long, which further extends past the cuticles by his long, sharp fingernails that he also regularly maintains. When in the role as the Tsuchikage, Jun is typically seen wearing the same attire. He wears an exposing v-neck styled, white business shirt, which seems purposely creased. On top of that, he wears an unbuttoned, black formal jacket; with the 土 character largely imprinted on the back in brown. He also wears a hoister and weapon pouch around his waist. Continuing on his smart appearance, he wears long black pants and pointy leather shoes. Yet contrary to popular belief, Jun seems to be able to move quite flawlessly in his formal attire. Even though he’s 43, he is still able to remain fashionable by customizing himself with accessories such as dirty skull necklaces and bracelets. As already mentioned above, the demeanour he sends off is rather powerful. It’s a combination of authority, fearsomeness, with a twist of misinterpreted evilness. And it’s because of this characteristic that he carries in his appearance, that grants him so much respect from the people, which ultimately leads to a stronger likely hood of having great leadership. Personality Jun’s personality is rather complex, and is difficult to understand. If you were to materialise his personality and dissect it, one of the most distinguishing factors that you’ll notice is his dark way of doing things. Although his method may seem morally incorrect at times, they would always be done with good intentions and never criminal. An example of which is his usage of the Shūshagan no Jutsu (Vanishing Facial Copy Technique). Though it is a known by the village that he is capable of such an immoral act, he would only use it when he deems necessary, i.e. infiltrating enemy territories. Despite being an expert on human psychology and social interactions, he finds it difficult to show sympathy towards others. Which presumably reflects the notion that Jun can be an emotionless soul – and is true to a certain extent. For example, he doesn’t feel any emotional strain when stealing another person’s identity. Rather the only thing holding him back from doing it more often is that it could be considered as a criminal act. And as the Tsuchikage, he tends to not push past the boundaries too much. His lack of sympathy also allows him to have a more cutthroat attitude. Meaning that if he were to notice that a person was of a hindrance to him, he wouldn’t have a problem with cutting the person down – literally or metaphorically. This also clearly indicates that he wouldn’t hesitate to kill or burn down an entire village, as long as it was to his best interest. Another dark aspect of his personality is that he may be a little power hungry. Always seeking ways to increase his strengths and authority – which isn’t entirely a bad quality, as it would expand the Earth nation. Rather, this power hungry trait has always been part of Iwagakure, even well before Jun was ever born. And much like his predecessors, Jun wouldn't have a problem with starting another Great Ninja War if it meant expanding the Earth country. But there is a lot more to Jun than just his dark persona. Though it may be hard to find at times, he actually has a good heart. He would hide the goodwill in his actions by acting cold – but at the end of the day he would have helped others, not by sympathy, but by simply doing the right thing. That said, he does have a strong sense of what is right and what is wrong – but that doesn’t necessarily stop him from doing things in the grey area. Do not let his shady image fool you, however. Jun is an expert in social interactions due to his impeccable understanding in human psychology. He knows exactly how a person is expected to react to different situations, and is consequently skilled in manipulating others in doing what he wants them to do. Which leads to his ability to attract attention from the ladies. Asides from having the looks, Jun is able to manipulate a girl’s feelings by predicting her every thought. That said, he never really had a long relationship with a woman – rather numerous short flings. Jun works quite well in a team. Despite having a slight sense of superiority over others, he doesn’t really let that get in the way of things. He rarely lets his emotions drive him in the battlefield, and hardly ever hesitates when in battle. Knowing that he’s recognised for his intelligence than his brawn, he would always have a plan and conducts his attacks based on strategy rather than brute strength. Strengths
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Biography Jun was born into a family of high nobles. From the day he was born, he had lived in a rich lifestyle where he was entitled to having anything he asked for. His father, Kiriyama Zuko, was of close affiliation with the Earth country’s daimyo, and it has always been expected that Jun would be able to live a very comfortable life without even lifting a finger. But all of Jun’s aspirations in life changed completely when he was seven years old. It was that one time when his father hired a team of A-classed ninja escorts to accompany their family across the long stretch of the Earth country. His father had an important meeting to attend to, but the content of which still remains a mystery to Jun. As their party was travelling through a small valley, a group of heavily armed bandits attacked them in attempt to steal from the rich. Jun watched in awe as their hired escorts fended off the bandits easily, even though they were drastically outnumbered. Jun thought the hired shinobi were amazing, and he envied the supernatural things that they were capable of doing by using this so called ‘chakra.’ It was from that moment, when Jun realised what he really wanted to do for the rest of his life. He begged his father to enrol him into the ninja academy. However, his father was against the idea. It wasn’t fitting for someone from his noble lineage to take up the shinobi ways – it just wasn’t tradition. But after months of begging, his father reluctantly agreed in the end. Kiriyama Jun was admitted into the academy a few days after his eighth birthday. He found it extremely difficult at the start to keep up with the rest of the students, and it was expected due to his bland family background. But Jun wasn’t going to give up his dreams so easily. With his family’s wealth, private tutors were hired to assist Jun and fast improvement was seen. His peers and teachers also noticed his vast improvement. Eventually, his private tutoring allowed Jun to excel above the average students and his formal academic life became a breeze. But even though Jun seemed to be doing well in the Academy, he never seemed to be able to fit in with the other students. Jun’s spoilt childhood had unfortunately made him appear a bit too arrogant and proud, which inevitably ostracized himself from everyone. His father was aware of this, but merely dismissed the issue and told him that he was “too good for the other students anyways.” This somewhat spurred Jun to become more absorbed into reading books as a way to counter being isolated from the other students. Even though he was only eight at the time, his reading comprehension level was quite extensive thanks to his upper class lifestyle. Jun graduated from the academy when he was twelve, and like all the other students he was allocated into a team of three. Within his team, there was a particular boy, Sakke, who somewhat influenced Jun’s life. Sakke was probably the first real friend Jun had ever made – but he wasn’t the sort of friend that every parent would be happy to have his or her child to get to know. Sakke was a delinquent and smoked heavily. He was violent and narrow minded, but due to the Jun’s sad social life, Jun started to imitate Sakke and the two bonded. Jun’s lifestyle practically did a 180 during his time as a Genin. And his father wasn’t too happy with this transformation. His father blamed the change on the ninja arts and regretted ever enrolling Jun into the academy. Angered by his father’s false accusation, Jun retaliated by saying that it was his childhood that corrupted him. Eventually, the argument ended when his father disowned Jun as his son and kicked him out of home. However, Jun still had a little bit of wealth of his own, and was able to provide himself a place to eat and sleep for the rest of his teenage years. During this time, he worked even harder on his own to excel as a Genin – determined to prove his father wrong. Even though he picked up some bad habits, he still kept some of his good habits. He still enjoyed reading, and he borrowed many books from the library. It was in his reading, when he developed an interest in psychological thrillers – and that eventually manifested a general interest in psychology and human behaviours. And his general understanding of how the average person would react in various situations paid off in missions. In fact, his team’s achievements were really quite spectacular compared to the other teams. Sakke and Jun worked extremely well together as a duo, and between the two of them they were able to defeat many unexpected enemies of a much higher rank without the help of their third member or their Jounin lead. The two aberrant Genins started to build up a reputation amongst the village. They were being acknowledged for their great success, but at the same time the villagers didn’t respect them for their delinquency. The villagers didn’t feel that Sakke and Jun were great examples, and feared that they would become bad role models when they graduate from their Genin rank. In fact, a lot of members of the community felt that they shouldn’t be able to become Chuunin until the two teenagers adjusted themselves in a respectable manner, which was what happened during their first Chuunin exam. They failed, even though their skills were obviously above everyone else’s. Since then, the two of them realised that they wouldn’t be able to progress any further until they made the change that everyone else was expecting them to make. Jun found it a lot easier to make the transition than Sakke did; but the pair of them managed to tone down their violent lifestyle, enough for them to pass the next Chuunin exam. It was during the Chuunin stage of his life, did Jun’s interest in psychology develop into more of an expertise. And this encouraged Jun to pursue into the arts of mind intrusion. He started to work with the village interrogators, and soon picked up the basics of mind intrusion. His expertise in psychology became really useful when practising mind intrusion, as he was able to break into a resisting person’s mind a lot easier by understanding how different people think. Jun spent the majority of his Chuunin career working within the Iwa Torture and Interrogation Force, and his lack of sympathy and emotions made him into a really effective interrogator. It was during the later part of his Chuunin career, did he return to doing more field missions alongside his old partner, Sakke. By then, Jun’s mind intrusion skills were mastered, and he became an asset when it came to infiltrating enemy territory. With his ability to steal a person’s identity using the ‘Vanishing Facial Copy Technique,’ and his mastery in mind intrusion, he was able to easily break into enemy bases undetected. And this was how Jun and Sakke became known for being able to take down an entire enemy base with just the two of them. Eventually the deadly duo became very well known within their village. Jun’s father was also made aware of Jun’s successful reputation, and invited Jun back home. However, the father and son relationship was still very hostile, and Jun rejected his father’s invitation. Since then, his father has been continuously trying to get in touch with Jun, but Jun rejected him every time. Despite the polarising opinions of other villagers, the former Tsuchikage took a liking in both Sakke and Jun, and saw a lot of prospect in the two of them. Even though, Jun portrayed a dark aura, the Tsuchikage could see the good nature in him, and organised for him to take a Tokubetsu Jounin exam. The exam consisted of Jun having to extract information from an underground organisation that was plotting a rebellion against the Tsuchikage. With Jun’s ability to remain undetected, he was able to extract a significant amount of information by mind reading and reported back to the Tsuchikage. The Tsuchikage was pleased with the result, and granted Jun’s promotion to Tokubetsu. Jun’s time as a Tokubetsu was rather short, as was promoted straight to ANBU by the Tsuchikage. Jun’s experience as an ANBU was a nice change to what he was accustomed to. It required him to work in a larger team, and also caused him to get involved in more direct combat. However, Jun didn’t exactly enjoy his role as an ANBU as much as he thought he would. Being required to wear a mask over his face all the time on missions, took away the thrill he got when stealing another person’s identity. It also caused people to forget about his existence – it was as though he disappeared altogether. Whilst Jun was serving his village behind a mask, Sakke was still out there being recognised by the people as a solo performing Jounin, and Jun envied Sakke’s popularity. Sure, Jun was proud of the work he had accomplished as an ANBU, but his work was never made known to the people and so he could never be acknowledged in the same way that Sakke was getting. Eventually, Jun returned his ANBU mask to the Tsuchikage and started life as a normal Jounin. Jun went back to doing what he did best during his Jounin career. Sakke and Jun were reunited once again and the pair of them completed countless amounts of highly ranked missions. Being freed from his ANBU requirements, Jun was once again able to bask in the glory of being recognised for his efforts, and was able to once again show off his skills in identity stealing and mind intrusion. During his late thirties, Jun made another significant development in his life. He met a woman called Ren. Over the years, Jun had a grand collection of experiences with many women, as he was able to charm anyone he wanted easily. However, this particular woman was different from the rest. Ren wasn’t so easily duped by Jun’s charm and mind tricks, and was playing hard to get. However, after many flirtatious attempts from Jun, Ren finally agreed to go on a date with him and the rest need not an explanation. The two fell in love. Eventually the former Tsuchikage offered Jun to take an exam to progress into an Elite Jounin. The exam this time was much different from his previous Jounin exam. This time Jun was required to demonstrate leadership and lead a team Jounin to retrieve a hostage from a band of dangerous bandits who had hired a few infamous missing-nins. Surprisingly, Jun showed great leadership by his quick decisions and was rewarded great respect from his subordinates. At the conclusion of the test, he was immediately promoted to Elite Jounin. Since then, Sakke and Jun went their separate ways without reason. Sakke continued to demonstrate his dominance in the battlefield, but sadly that was what he ever was. Unlike Jun, Sakke showed no signs of being able to do anything else other than bloodshed. Jun began life as a leader, and was placed in charge on numerous expeditions. And without a doubt, it was clear that he was a natural born leader. Perhaps, it was due to his Noble bloodline – and that Jun possessed great leadership qualities like his father. However, his relationship with his father still hasn’t changed over the many decades. Honestly, Jun doesn’t hold any resentment towards his father, Zuko. It was more due to the fact that for as long as Jun could remember, he had always hated his father, and now out of convention he still does so without any good reason. Jun held too much pride to try and contact his father to fix things – and his father had also given up trying after being rejected by Jun so many times in the past. Jun’s girlfriend, Ren, had tried encouraging him to fix his relationship with his father. But his arrogance repelled him from doing so. Eventually, Ren had enough of Jun’s egotism, and the two went separate ways. By this time, the former Tsuchikage was becoming of a great age and was looking towards retirement. However, he couldn’t do so without recommending his replacement to the council leaders. It was Jun’s name that was recommended by the former Tsuchikage; and everyone was shocked at the choice – even Jun. The leaders debated on the issue for a long time, and eventually went along with the former Tsuchikage’s recommendation appointing Jun as the new Tsuchikage. Jun felt honoured by the decision, and agreed to take on the great responsibility. After the Horsemen tragedy in Konoha, Jun realised that as strong as the Earth Country is, they were still quite vulnerable to carefully planned invasions. And so, he decided to arrange private meetings with Teijin Myoushu, the former Raikage. After two meetings – one in each respective country – the two powerful countries were officially unified. Inventory
Techniques --- Academy Student(Optional): 3 D-Rank + 1 C-Rank = 4 Techniques Genin: 3 C-Rank + 1 B-Rank = 4 Techniques Chunin: 1 C-Rank + 2 B-Rank + 1 A-Rank = 4 Techniques Tok. Jounin(Optional): 1 B-Rank + 1 A-Rank = 2 Techniques Jounin/ANBU: 3 A-Rank + 1 S-Rank = 4 Techniques Elite Jounin/ANBU Captain(optional): 1 A-Rank + 1 S-Rank = 2 Techniques Legendary Ninja/Kage: 2 A-Rank + 2 S-Rank = 4 Techniques --- ANBU freebies Spoiler: click to toggle 1. Kai Rank: D Range: Supplementary Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed hand seals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell. 2. Magen: Narakumi no Jutsu (Demonic Illusion: Hell Viewing Technique) Rank: D Range: Short Description: This is a genjutsu that reveals the fears that dwell inside people's hearts. Everyone has an image of the one thing they wouldn't want to ever see. This genjutsu is a technique that draws forth such an image from within the heart and has one mistake it for reality. First, an imaginary circle of leaves will spin around and envelop the target, falling away shortly after. After a short period, the illusion will begin. This is to make the illusion more convincing, since the user will likely have moved before the illusion sets in. If the mental image is a gruesome one, the shock will be accordingly great. 3. Doton: Shinjū Zanshu no Jutsu (Earth Release: Double Suicide Decapitation Technique) Rank: D Range: Short Description: A ninjutsu where the user conceals themselves underground and drags the object of their attack down into the earth, robbing them of their freedom. In addition, they can start another attack. This technique was originally used for torture, by cutting into the enemy's neck. 4. Doton: Moguragakure no Jutsu (Earth Release: Hiding Like a Mole Technique) Rank: C Range: Supplementary Description: This technique changes earth into fine sand by channelling chakra into it, allowing the user to dig through it like a mole. This effect goes around the body (not just the hands), making it just large enough for a person to move through. The user can pinpoint where they are, despite being underground, by sensing the magnetic forces. They can also sense what is happening on the surface and use that information to launch a surprise attack on the enemy. 5. Doton: Retsudo Tenshō (Earth Release: Tearing Earth Turning Palm) Rank: C Range: 0-20m Description: This technique causes the ground surrounding the enemy to spiral inwards on itself, burying them alive or crushing them. This jutsu is capable of causing quite a bit of damage to the area. This technique is much more damaging if used in rocky mountainous areas, or inside a cave. 6. Sen'eijashu (Hidden Shadow Snake Hands) Rank: C Range: Short Description: This jutsu allows the user to eject snakes from their wrist or sleeve, usually after a punching motion. The snakes are used primarily to attack from a distance and, being snakes, can inflict multiple poisonous wounds on the victim's body or hold them in place. This jutsu can also be classified as a variation of the Summoning Technique. Jun can summon up to five snakes with each hand. Snake Summon and Description 7. Fūton: Daitoppa (Wind Release: Great Breakthrough) Rank: C Range: Short - Mid Description:This is a relatively simple technique that creates a sudden gust of wind, but its scale varies greatly depending on the user. If used by a superior shinobi, it has enough destructive power to knock down a large tree. The wind from the squall can blow away all things in the user's line of sight. A variation of the technique involves a smaller blast of wind, which gets ignited with flame. 8. Doton: Kengan no Jutsu (Earth Release: Fist Rock Technique) Rank: C Range: Supplementary Description: By encasing their arm in rock, the user can deal a powerful hardened punch against an opponent while being protected from direct contact with their target. If necessary, the weight of the rock can be increased to further increase the punch's destructive power. 9. ADVANCED: Tsuchi Bunshin no Jutsu (ADVANCED: Earth Clone Technique) Rank: B Range: Supplementary Description: This jutsu creates one or more identical copies of the user out of mud. Oddly, there does not need to be mud nearby for the technique to be performed. The clones are physically real and can perform jutsu. When the clones are destroyed, at first they will turn into soft mud, but very suddenly it will harden up quickly into solid rock. This could in effect, immobilize taijutsu users. The rock formed is fairly hard, but can be destroyed by a powerful attack. 10. Shūshagan no Jutsu (Vanishing Facial Copy Technique) Rank: B Range: Supplementary Description: This technique was developed for spying with grisly effects. The user applies their hand onto the subject's face, stealing its features and making it their own. Since what is stolen is the face itself, the disguise achieved through facial features alteration won't reveal the tiniest flaw. The victims of this technique are reduced to faceless corpses atrocious even to look at. The user can even change their voice to sound like that of the victims, making a very convincing copy. However, with enough force, the face can wrinkle and tear to the point of the user's actual face being shown underneath. The face can be peeled off at any point. 11. Doton: Doryukatsu (Earth Release: Earth Flow Divide) Rank: B Range: All Ranges Description: By flowing one's chakra into the Dragon Veins underground, one can tear the earth apart, creating large chasms. The length, width, direction, and curve of the chasm are all up to the user. Manipulating the Dragon Veins requires fine chakra control, but if one has such skill, they can use this technique to divide the space between the enemy and their own team in two, destroy enemy camps or defences, and even to attack. 12. Katon: Gōryūka no Jutsu (Fire Release: Great Dragon Fire Technique) Rank: B Range: Long Description: The user compresses a large amount of chakra built up inside their body and changes it into a dragon-shaped fireball. The user then skilfully manipulates that great fire, and attacks their opponent. Even outside of the attack range, its power and reliability are stressed. The flames have a high temperature, as they can create an upward movement of air currents which in turn can give rise to thunder clouds. A master of this technique can fire off several flames in succession and anyone caught in the technique could potentially be reduced to ashes. 13. Eye Mind Reading Rank: A Range: Short Description: The user looks into the target’s eye and mentally enters their mind in a discrete manner. The jutsu will only last for one post and cannot be used on the same target twice within three posts. 14. Inception Rank: A Range: Short Description: The user needs to have physical contact with their target to active this jutsu. The user virtually enters deep inside the target’s mind without them knowing. The user then plants a core idea deep within the target’s mind. That idea would ultimately influence their actions and thought without them knowing. The idea could be as simple as “He’s my ally, not an enemy” to extremities such as “I’m already dead.” As this is classified as a sort of mind intrusion and not Genjutsu, the victim cannot release themselves from it through normal means. They can only release themselves from this planted idea by winning an extremely hard mental battle. The idea will naturally disappear after three posts. 15. Kaze no Yaiba (Blade of Wind) Rank: A Range: Mid Description: This technique is a pinpoint slashing strike, where the user emits chakra from their fingertips and materializes it into an invisible sword that assaults the enemy in a gust of wind and making a slicing sound. If the Sickle Weasel Technique can be regarded as a swarm of wind kunai, then this technique is an unavoidable longsword. It leaves very deep slashes on the enemy. 16. Sennō Sōsa no Jutsu (Memory-Concealing Manipulative Sand Technique) Rank: A Range: Supplementary Description: The user seals away the target's memories by burying an extremely small needle into the brain's memory centre. The memories can be restored by cancelling the technique, thereby destroying the needle. If a subordinate had this operation done on their brains and has infiltrated in enemy camp, they can safely perform spy activity over a long period of time. If the user cancels the technique, the target will once again remember their mission. 17. Chikyushin no Ikari (Earth God’s Wrath) Rank: A Range: Long Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, the user will call forth a severe earthquake over a designated area. The magnitude of the earthquake is dependant on the amount of chakra supplied by the user. It can range from small quakes that can create fractures in the earth to severe life threatening quakes that is capable of destroying structures and buildings. 18. Iwakojizai no Jutsu (Earth Tiger at Will Technique) Rank: A Range: Up to 250,000 square meters Description: A perception jutsu, where the user channels his own chakra into the earth. The amount of chakra he channels is subjective to the intended range. During this technique, the effected area of earth is linked to the user’s senses. When someone is to set foot in the area, the user will be immediately alerted of the intruder and their exact location. The technique ends when the user cancels it. 19. Kokuangyo no Jutsu (Bringer-of-Darkness Technique) Rank: A Range: Mid Description: This technique exerts an hallucinatory effect upon the eyesight, effectively blinding the opponent. No matter how skilled an opponent may be, they are forced to wait helpless in this world of darkness, as this technique allows the user to attack unseen. Although it negates sight, it does not stop the other senses. In essence, the opponent can hear, feel, and smell out the user of the technique and break its effects by landing one hit on the user. 20. Homing Earth Spikes Rank: A Range: 0-15m Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, a continuation of spikes made of earth will suddenly erupt from beneath the target, attempting to impale or at least knock the foe off balance. Spikes will continue to appear beneath an evasive target for a whole of five seconds. 21. Daino Funka (Mind Eruption) Rank: S Range: Short Description: The user must lock eyes with the target for three whole seconds for this technique to be carried out. During this time, the target will experience a sudden headache, which is an informal warning signal. The user virtually enters the victim’s mind and overloads it with mental rocks. Within seconds, the victim’s brain will not be able to tolerate the overload and consequently erupt, quite literally, causing instant death. From the outside, nothing seems to be wrong with the target until blood begins to flow out from the nose, ears, mouth and eyes. The technique can only be used on one person at a time and requires a great amount of concentration. Jun can also use this jutsu by physically touching his target’s head – and the effect of the jutsu would be instant. 22. Gansegi Fouji no Jutsu (Rock Tomb) Rank: S Range: 0-15m Description: After performing the necessary hand seals, two things will simultaneously happen within seconds. First, the earth beneath the target will tightly wrap around the target’s feet and drag them downwards at extreme speeds into the earth immobilizing them. At the same time, earth around the target will begin to flow over the target burying them in a newly formed rock tomb. The weight of the earth will crush the victim, so the result is normally instant kill. However, Jun can also control the amount of earth flowing onto the target, and can thus keep the target barely alive trapped underground. 23. Transformation: Beelzebub Rank: S Range: Long Description: This is arguably Jun’s most powerful technique. By implementing all of his different elemental affinities into this advanced version of transformation jutsu, Jun transforms his body into a powerful entity. Upon this transformation, Jun’s hair will miraculously shorten and become blonde; a black mask will also develop over his face. He will also develop large black wings from his back that will grant him the ability to fly. He will also grow a long, sharp metal tail that has the same effects as a sharp, flexible blade. In this form, Jun’s strength, endurance, speed, and defences are all increased by a factor of 5. Jun will remain in this form for a total of thirty minutes or 6 posts of Jun's, and this jutsu cannot be used in immediate succession. Spoiler: click to toggle 24. Yin Release: Augmented Reality Range: Long (100m radius) Description: A wide range illusion technique whereby Jun is able to enter his victim(s)’ minds and augment their ability to perceive their surroundings. He is able to create mirages that are visible to all his victims in unison to cause confusion. He is even able to augment reality to extremes in forcing his victims to believe they’re in a separate environment. It is impossible for observers to distinguish realistic mirages from the real thing through normal methods. This ultimately makes this technique ideal for concealing the actual location of either individual. In order to maintain the illusion, Jun must continually expend a stable amount of chakra – but the overall expenditure is not too significant. The only way to break the illusion is to stop Jun from supplying his chakra via the means of physical contact or by leaving the area of effect. Currently Jun is capable of entering up to ten minds at once. Additional Information Clan Link: None Edited by Milleni, Feb 8 2016, 03:25 AM.
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| *Amira | Jan 31 2016, 08:22 PM Post #2 |
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Hey Milleni, if you fix the coding I'll mod this. |
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| Milleni | Jan 31 2016, 11:15 PM Post #3 |
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Fixed |
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| *Amira | Feb 2 2016, 08:02 PM Post #4 |
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There are only two little things that I see here, and mostly I'm just asking questions... For your one S rank, Mind Eruption, you say that eye contact for three seconds as well as a touch is the trigger. During the eye contact trigger the target experiences a headache. Does that mean that during the three seconds they get the headache and can therefore look away to break the jutsu, or is it after the three seconds they get the headache and are already fucked? Also, You final S Rank, Augmented Reality... The only way to break the illusion is to stop Jun from supplying his chakra via the means of physical contact. Does this mean Jun must have contact with the target to enter their mind and they must break it by stopping his contact, or that they have to touch him themselves to break the illusion? |
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| Milleni | Feb 3 2016, 05:40 AM Post #5 |
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Correct. If the technique is used via eye contact, then the foe has an opportunity to escape during the first initial 3 seconds. I had to add that on, otherwise this would be considered too OP.
No, Jun does not have to make physical contact with anyone. In order for the target(s) to escape, they must force Jun to stop by landing an attack on him. This is essentially a more powerful version of Gengetsu's Demonic Illusion: Steaming Multistoried Building technique which is B rank. |
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| *Amira | Feb 3 2016, 10:10 AM Post #6 |
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| *Terran Lockheart | Feb 8 2016, 03:28 AM Post #7 |
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