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| Topic Started: Sep 29 2008, 03:06 PM (40 Views) | |
| Post #1 Sep 29 2008, 03:06 PM | +ShiningPhoeNiX |
A story I've been thinking of, hope you enjoy it  Prologue: The Beginning The Xeno, deadly insect like creatures living in huge underground colonies. The Xeno's run rampant through several planets and universes spreading death and chaos wherever they go. In such times like this the forces of the United Earth Federation mobilize to destroy the foul creatures.The marines are armed and ready to sacrifice themselves for the sake of mankind.But some wonder about the motives of the Xeno, is there more then mindless killing among the Xeno, is there a more dark and evil purpose in their minds? Only time will tell... Chapter 1: The Outpost The Marines stationed on Outpost 14 on plane Vailand II were thought to be some of the bravest. Vailand II was a Xeno infested planet and their numbers were greater then most of the discovered planets as of now. "Why do we have to be sent here", grumbled one of the marines. "Stop your complaining", said one of the sargeants, "just wait till they reconsider holding onto this forsaken dustball." The marines mumbled something then went back to their posts, "I don't get why they call this planet the most infested, there ain't nothing here"."You two!", yelled the sargeant, "go out on those recon bikes, maybe you'll find something". The two marines groaned, recon duty was even more boring then sitting out you post. After three hours of pointless reconnaseince, the marines decided to turn back. "Lets get going, its not like we'll find anything out here", said one of the marines. "Yeah, I guess so", agreed the other one. "Wait...I think I saw something!", shouted the second marine. "Its just your mind playing tricks there ain't nothing out here", grumbled the other one. The second marine ignored the other one and walked closer to where he thought he saw something. "It looks like a hole, maybe there's"-the marine let out a bloodcurdling scream as he was ripped to shreds by several Xeno warriors. "Ah ----", said the other one as he jumped on his bike to get back to the outpost as more and more hordes of Xenos crawled out of their underground tunnels. Edited by ShiningPhoeNiX, Oct 3 2008, 02:54 PM.
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| Post #2 Sep 29 2008, 03:11 PM | LunArFoX |
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Xeno? I made up that name for a city once.. I thought that putting X's in a name makes it cool, It does... Sometimes. |
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| Post #3 Sep 29 2008, 03:12 PM | +ShiningPhoeNiX |
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Yes...What you just said totally relates to my story!
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| Post #4 Sep 30 2008, 03:03 PM | +MyCoke |
| so its about bugs in an underground city? |
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| LOOK AT THE PICTURE.@(-_-)@. DID YOU LOOK AT IT... GOOD NOW LOOK AT THIS ONE.<(-_-)>..... OK THERE WAS NO POINT IN THAT AT ALL... | |
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| Post #5 Sep 30 2008, 03:12 PM | +ShiningPhoeNiX |
| PWNAGE Chapter 1 is Up. And the story is like a combined version of Starship Troopers and Starcraft. |
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| Post #6 Sep 30 2008, 03:19 PM | +MyCoke |
| cool good for u i like the story. |
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| LOOK AT THE PICTURE.@(-_-)@. DID YOU LOOK AT IT... GOOD NOW LOOK AT THIS ONE.<(-_-)>..... OK THERE WAS NO POINT IN THAT AT ALL... | |
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