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Topic Started: Dec 26 2007, 10:34 AM (144 Views)
Animeswordmaster
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Well I've been in the NAruto RPG business for a while and have a few suggestions to make yours better. I TRIED to understand your rules but it's a bit disorganized in my opinion.

Let me address some key issues:

1. Your rules and role play basics are EXTREMELY disorganized.

2. I wanted to create a character but some of the following issues should be addressed at this stage.

2a. Clans: Can you create your own or do you have to join a canon one?
2b. Ranks: What is the heirarchy and does everyone have to begin as an Academy Student? This seems a little strange because if you're a missing nin, you should be classified as a strong chuunin or jounin level at least so it's sorta weird to have an academy student missing nin.
2c. Jutsu: Is there a limit on how many jutsus you can start off with? Is there a rank limit?

3. To create new jutsu, I think it doesn't leave enough room for creativity because when creating jutsu, people tend to make godlike jutsu. Here's my advice: LET THEM! It should be an RP manager's job to help them dull down the jutsu while still leaving enough room for their own creativity.

4. Your jutsu limitations are a tad much lol. I think you should let people have more jutsu because in order to have a fun RPG, people should be allowed to have as many jutsu as they want as long as they meet certain requirements. For example, at my forum's RPG, I allow people to earn ryo (money) and they buy their jutsu. Of course there are rank limitations but I don't limit the number they are allowed to have as long as they can afford. This gives incentive for people to RP MORE.

5. Some of your rules and concepts can be condensed into single topics instead of them being random lol.

6. I don't really favor your style of ranking up lol. It's different I'll admit but I don't think it'll be too efficient.

7. 50 posts to create a clan? I like your idea of having a requirement but here's the problem. People who just come in and want to ONLY RP will not want to waste their time posting around to meet a requirement to make a clan for their character. I'd say to solve this, have maybe a 5-10 post requirement.

8. Your settings are a bit vague lol. Instead of just saying Leaf Village, you might want to create subforums inside it with areas such as the Hokage Mountain or maybe the Ichiraku Ramen Shop?

That's it for the RPG lol.

Now for the overall suggestions lol.

1. The skin is a bit drab. Maybe a few more brighter or darker colors?

2. You can rename your categories and forums a little better! I have faith in you!

3. Your board really doesn't have anything that makes it "unique". For example, you know my site is an Naruto RPG also but what will want to make people come here instead of mine? If people compared our boards, they'll go to mine more likely because mines is established and has a unique tone. We have a somewhat classy view and how many anime/random/Naruto RPG/Death Note RPG boards do you see? Make something that'll stand you out from the rest!


Look I hope this helps. Yes I understand this is some harsh critism but trust me, I know what I'm talking about. I've been there and done that. My Forum's RPG didn't become that way overnight. It took me 3+ years to improve it and I'm still going with it!

Don't get discoruaged. In fact, I offer this as encouragement instead. Good luck!
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MisaTange
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You really don't have to stick with a canon character, you can make up your own clan. You can change your rank when you're a missin nin, and it also includes Akatsuki warriors. You only have to start as an Academy when you're a shinobi.

For the skin, we have Moving UP, so we have both a dark skin, and a light skin. Besides, there's a few ZB skins that fit "Naruto" so I am looking for more.

I will compelete this when I'm done with the changes. And for the uniqueness? Well, I'd think it up quickly, and for the subforums for the RPG? Have you joined NinjaVillage Naruto RPG? Well, we're trying to be like that.
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Animeswordmaster
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Yes I see that you can make your own clan but I'm just saying you need more leeway for creativity. Also, I think that to just jump in and RP is a little rash. I believe RPers should be able to build up from ground zero lol. Oh well I'm just trying to help you but if you feel that my twenty minutes isn't worth your time then fine...
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