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| Punishing | Dec 19 2008, 04:59 PM Post #11 |
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"I never thought those guys were that strong." "But you handled them swiftly, they were like fodder to you." "I don't know what happened, I just woke up and finished them, it was like I wasn't even myself." Takumi said scrathing his head smiling, very happy that his sister was finally acknowledging him. They were on the C-rank mission they had to finish along with Rei, who like always was busy with his wax, and Keisuke. Their mission was to find a summoning scroll, lost by a Jounin during combat and return it back to the Hokage. The day was hot, the Sun's ray kept heating their heads making them wipe their forehead every 10 minutes. Suddenly Keisuke walked right into a set-up trap, but he proved to be a clone. "Don't tell me we're gonna get ambushed... again..." Takumi asked watching the trap in disbelief. "These kids? They killed D. and P.?" an old person grunted in their vicinity. Five white cloaked men appeared in front of them. "Oh man... D and P were such losers... i can't believe they were killed by these brats..." "Heh those weaklings, what a disgrace." the one who appeared to be the leader said twiddling a small strand of his hair and watching them with a calm yet threatening look. "More of these guys? Where did you all crawl from huh?" Akemi asked studying each one of them. "I can't believe these brats dare talking to me like that." the old one said trying to jump at them but was stopped by the leader who put grabbed his cloak. "Don't be a fool. Never underestimate your opponent. Besides I can smell darkness in one of them. One of them has the Cursed Seal." "WHAT?!" the old man asked. "That's how they killed Douza and Pouza." "Cursed Seal?" Akemi asked. "The thing on my chest." Takumi said on a serious tone. "Don't touch these kids."a figure behind the cloaked Creed members said. He looked pretty old. Dirty blonde hair was falling down his shoulders, a scar running across his chin and an Earth Village plate on his right leg which was cut right across the Earth symbol. "Not another one..." the Leader said watching the stranger with the corner of his eye. "Be careful, this guy has the Cursed Seal also." "And that's the last thing you'll ever see." the stranger said as the mark began spreading and he appeared right in front the old man kicking him in the belly and throwing him on the ground. Before anyone could see anything one of the Creed members jumped and put Takumi on the ground threatening to cut his throat with a kunai. "If I see another movement from any of you, the kid's dead. Got it?"He pushed Takumi's face deep into ground breaking his nose, and blood splashed the grass. "YOU'RE KILLING HIM!" Akemi shouted but couldn't move one inch. However Takumi seemed to not be very concious of what was happening to him. Everyone thought he fell uncouncious when his nose broke, however he slowly got up forcing his enemy back on his feet as he watched amazed as the mark began spreading on the scruff of his neck and up the face full off blood from the broken nose. He quickly stuck his elbow into his attacker belly making him spit blood and then quickly kicked him in the face, throwing him in the trees. The leader watched him calmly as he kept twidling his strand of hair. The stranger locked his sights on Takumi as if he saw something in him. Takumi's mark began retracting to it's former spot and almost fell again. The stranger caught him fast, as one of the three remaining Creed members tried getting to him first. "The boy must die." The leader said. "No he will not." The stranger said smirking, as his own mark retracted back and he disappeared into the distance carrying Takumi on his shoulder. |
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| Punishing | Dec 19 2008, 10:09 PM Post #12 |
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Takumi woke up in a dark chamber. He could feel something warm somewhere, and his nose was still aching. He tried to get up but felt a weird string attached to his arm. He had his hands tied by a string. "You finally woke up?" the starnger asked throwing a small piece of wood into the fire. "Who're you? Why did you tie me up?" "I saw you use the Cursed Seal. You did a great job. But it seems you have no idea how to control it. You just show small bursts of power whenever you're angry. I did a small trip in your memories while you were asleep. And I also saw the Uchiha Crest on your collar." "Small trip in my memories?" "Yea. I use a mind reading jutsu to see your past. You are weak now, you don't know how to control your power. Your sister always mocking you is what gives you pain and anguish. You know she's stronger but feel incapable of doing anything to change this fact." Takumi watched him transfigured, the stranger had described him entirely. It was exactly the way he felt, he felt helpless and couldn't do anything, he even wanted to quit being a shinobi. The stranger now knew all his secrets, everything he had ever held inside was now known by someone else, and once again he felt helpless and angry. A weird pain on the chest and a strong intention of murder came into his mind as the cursed seal tried it's luck, happy that it's owner was finally getting the feelings it lusted for. "Incontrolable... Control it kid... Don't let it eat you bit by bit. Use it as a weapon...Don't let it use you." "This t-thing ... is alive?" "As alive as you and me are." Takumi's cursed seal retracted as he fell on his back. "Why did you tie me up?" "I thought you'd run away as soon as you woke up." "What if I did? Why do you want me here." "I'm going to train you. I'm going to make you stronger than your sister." "B-but... I want to go back home. My father and mother will be worried." "Oh don't worry. You're in good hands." "But my father's gonna come looking for me, and he's strong, extremely strong." "I know exactly how strong your father is, don't worry." "You know him?" "I did, long ago." "You have to be kidding me? You knew my father? How long ago?" "The years passed. Must be approximately 17 years ago. He settled a family in Konoha, while I tried my luck and continued as a Missing-Nin." "My father... was a Missing-Nin?" "Oh he didn't tell you?" the stranger said laughing and throwing another piece of wood in the fire."He was one of the greatest people I ever knew, I remember when he seduced Yoshino the White Flame into joining us. I couldn't understand what he did until a few years ago. Very intelligent your father." he continued looking at the ceiling with a contemplative expression. "I can't believe it... Why did my father become a Missing-Nin?" "He killed someone in the village. I never knew why, he said was accidental. He probably said the truth." "You're lying... Father would never kill one of his comrades." "I don't know the details myself. But I always said his only flaw as a shinobi was his feeling of guilt towards the one he killed. Now less chatter. I said I'm going to train you. I already know your name so I'll introduce myself. I'm Zanka Dotonoda." "You can't force me to stay here..." "Oh want to see?" Zanka said on a threatening tone. "You... you can't..." "I can and I will." "You can't force me!" *Meanwhile* "I'M REALLY REALLY SORRY!! DON'T KILL ME!!!"Keisuke shouted as Adrian was holding him. "YOU IDIOT! THIS IS THE SECOND TIME YOU SCREW UP..." "Dad... I'm sorry it's all my fault, I should've protected Taku..." "I'm going to look for him." Adrian said throwing Keisuke on his back. "And starting today you're not going to be on their team any longer. If you ever come near my children ever again I'm going to personally take care of you." "I'm coming with you dad. We have to find him." "Alright, but be careful, I don't want to lose you too." "Don't worry, we'll find Taku, dad."Akemi said trying to comfort her father. "Ayame? Stop crying, we'll find him." Adrian said hugging his wife, as she cried on his shoulder. "Trust me okay?" "I do... bring him back home soon...." she said as tears were rolling and falling down her cheeks. Adrian knew he had to find his son quickly. Edited by Punishing, Dec 19 2008, 10:09 PM.
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| Punishing | Dec 19 2008, 11:12 PM Post #13 |
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Chapter 4 - Takumi Choice "Finally, I escaped from that lunatic. Now time to find my way back to Konoha!" Takumi thought victorious. While the stranger fell asleep he used a small scalpel he found near his sheet and worked over two hours on cutting the string. Now he was finally outside and was planning his escape back to Konoha. He walked slowly, watching his back carefully and pondered his steps. If he did the smallest of noise, than his kidnapper would easily come to search for him. He walked slowly in the direction of Konoha. The forest seemed extremely wierd at night. The long and loud growls were coming out from the heart of the forest were giving Takumi shivers down his spine. It all felt like a nightmare but he knew it was real, it had to be real, yet he kept walking for hours and hours, he knew he should have been in Konoha hours ago. It wasn't even looking like the morning was coming. "Where do you think you're going?" Zanka's voice made it's way in Takumi's ears as he turned back frozen. Noone was behind and him. Everything began melting, the forest, the moon making place for the dark chamber he used to be in. "You have to be kidding me?!" "Genjutsu. I told you, you can't escape that easily." "All this time...?!" "Yes, all this time. nine hours to be exact , you wandered like a blind man in my gen forest." "Why did you do that?" "To see how long you'd stay without screaming for your mommy. To be honest I didn't think you'd last this long." "It's almost morning and I haven't slept 5 minutes!" "Well how's that my fault?" Zanka asked on an innocent tone. "What do you mean what's your fault? You're the one keeping me prisoner!" "Less chatter. It's time for your training." "Training? B-but I'm tired..." "Well it was your choice to take a small night patrol right?" "I'm hungry." "Oh I'm sure you are." "So... are we going to eat something." "Of course you will. You will eat some taijutsu training for breakfast. Ninjutsu for lunch and some jutsu practice on dinner." "What is wrong with you?!" "Let me put it this way. You do well on training and you eat. You refuse to train, you're going to have to watch me eat." "What do you choose?" Takumi knew that he had to play nice for now. He just needed one small break when Zanka had his guard down and he could escape. So for now he agreed to his conditions. However Zanka's training was a huge pain. Takumi had never experienced anything like it.he had to hold 3 bowls of water. One on his head and two on his shoulders. All that while evading Zanka's attacks. Of course the bowls of water all fell down the first times. Until he was threatened to get nothing to eat he finally tried a bit more and managed to evade a few hits until all the bowls fell down. "Focus more kid, you'll never going to learn anything if you slack like that." Zanka had prepared another exercise for his student. Two big rocks were attached to his legs. He had to run ten laps with the weights. Takumi couldn't even move his legs after the exercises. Edited by Punishing, Dec 19 2008, 11:13 PM.
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| Punishing | Dec 23 2008, 01:24 PM Post #14 |
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Zanka's rough training session tired Takumi to no end. One week of tough training sessions had kept him in shape more than the trainings he had undergone in the village for 5 years. Even like that he was still looking for a small chance to escape his new master. And one opportunity came very unexpected Adrian and Akemi came searching for him right in the vicinity of the small hut Zanka had built for themselves. During the day Takumi was training with the wieghts Zanka had given him. 15 kgs on each hand, 10 on the legs and a big river stone carved like shell and tied on his back. He could barely move , but knew that if he complained the weights cantity would increase, so he just kept his mouth shut and kept training. A known voice suddenly resonated in the whole forest appealing to Takumi's ears who finally had a chance to escape his master and return to the warmness of home and the tasty meals cooked by his mother. He ran quickly with his weights considerably slowing him down but he kept going as if he didn't even care about the huge burden on his back. He completely forgot about the pain, his mind only perceiving the opportunity of returning home. Just as he was seeing Akemi's silhoutte and was delighted Zanka appeared in front him runing all his dreams like a needle cracking a balloon. "Do you really want to return? You want to be treated again like a weakling and dissed by your sister? You really want to show her that you are weak?" He asked on a serious tone as he watched him directly in the eyes. "If you really want to get back there and live in the shadow of your sister, than you're free to do so. However you're never going to grow up if you do." Zanka said. Takumi watched the ground. Zanka was right. If he returned nothing would change, he'd still be the sore loser always beaten by his sister. Here he would have a chance of becoming stronger. There... everything was in vain there. Zanka walked away and just as he pondered his thoughts Akemi kept closing in to him. He decided he would not meet her again, until he was stronger, until he was ready to prove that he would not need to live in her shadow any longer. And the only way to do so was to follow Zanka, and prove he is not what everyone thought he was. Everyone has to grow up eventually, and that's what Takumi finally decided to do, as he obediently followed his new master. Edited by Punishing, Dec 23 2008, 01:24 PM.
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| Punishing | Dec 26 2008, 10:52 PM Post #15 |
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Chapter 5 - Akemi The Chuunin Exams She thought she saw him. She knew it, he was there but dissapeared in hte blink of an eye. Akemi ran trying to spot Takumi or sense his chakra signature. However his chakra was too insiginifiant to be felt this far way, he had to use the Cursed Seal so his chakra could be sensed. Akemi gave up and stopped in the middle of the pathway breathing slowly. "Any luck?" Adrian asked appearing from a poof of smoke right beside her. "I saw him... but he dissapeared right when I was getting closer." "Which way did he go." "Right in front." "Okay, I'll go stay here and rest." Adrian said dissapearing again. Akemi sat down dissapointed. She knew she was guilty. It was all her fault for not taking care of her brother. She only made fun of him while she was told several times not to. She felt an intense pain in the stomach knowing her brother could be killed, or she will never see him again. "Damn it... It's like they vanished into another dimension. If Takumi's chakra were a little stronger, then I could feel it and find him immediately." "B-but.. why.. Why did he leave?" Ayame said as tears flooded her face. "He didn't, he was kidnapped by a weird hooded ninja." "He's going to kill him!" Ayame exclaimed. "No, if he wanted to kill him he would had done it there. That stranger wants something with him. Did you manage to see him?" "Well he had a cutted Rock Headband, blond hair and he had a cursed seal also." "No... it can't be..." "Do you know who is he dad?" "I have a suspicion, but I'm not sure." Adrian said. "I'll go searching for him again." he continued. "I'm coming too." "No, you stay here with your mom. The Chuunin exams are coming soon, so try training a little. I'm going to find him, I know I will." Adrian said watching his family. He was tired and was low on chakra reserves, yet he had to continue looking for Takumi. "Dad... You're exhausted, take a small break. Next week there are the chuunin exams and you also need to be overviewing hte forest of death part. You need to rest!" "I can't... I won't rest until I have Takumi back and well. I'm going. Take care of your mother." |
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| Punishing | Feb 10 2009, 09:04 PM Post #16 |
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Chapter 4 - Takumi Transformation The months slowly passed for Takumi and Zanka. The boy had undergone rough training sessions during these months and his body soon become to show the results. His skin was no longer fragile and soft, and become hard and enduring, his muscles grew bigger and began to outline, his eyes were sharper than ever and were no longer holding a weak and frightened expression but a calm and confident one. However his training was far from over. The only training he had so far was body training. Zanka thought it was best for him before starting advanced ninja tehniques. So the rock tight to his back was soon replaced by a heavier one, which after become to easy to carry was replaced by another. Takumi also learned Taijutsu moves from his mentor, he was now way more focused and his punches and kicks dealt way more damage than they did before. The kunai and shuriken lessons were also not forgotten, as his aim was greatly increased, everything being doubled by his Sharingan who was also trained during these sessions of training and developed a second tomoe which helped Takumi in his learning, since copying his mentor's moves was way easier. But now all this was finished and Takumi was ready to go on a whole new step. Zanka left the hut rubbing his beard and turned towards Takumi who was standing on the grass. "Get up." Zanka said on a ferm tone and Takumi executed with no complaint. "Today we're starting advanced tehniques. I already maxed you out on your body training. In time you will get much stronger, your aim and body muscles will increase aswell as your Sharingan." "That means I can finally get this rock off my back?" "No. You will keep that where it is until you're finally ready to battle someone. Until then you'll wear it." Takumi didn't say anything, he knew better than to question his master's orders. "So your chakra type is Lightning..." "Yes." "Like your father. However, there must be some other type of chakra inside your body." "My father said my second element will surely be fire, since my blood favors the Uchiha over Hyuuga." "I'm not talking about that. Those 5 normal elements are weak. And almost everyone master at least two. No, I want you to have something unique and strong different from the bandwagon." "I don't get it." "There are more than 5 elements. There are special elements." "You mean like Lava or Ice or Wood? But aren't those kekkei genkais? Like my Sharingan? You need to have it in your blood?" "No I'm not talking about those. The strongest elements there are, are Light and Darkness. However, these cannot be used alone. You have to combine them with your other element. For example." Zanka finished as his cursed seal spread over half of his body and he uttered some fast handsigns. "Yami no Katon! Goukakyuu no Jutsu!" The huge blue flames turned towards a tree burning it with a glowing ferocity. Takumi looked amazed at the huge ball of fire, which was way stronger than a normal Goukakyu. "Now you get it?" Takumi nodded. "You also have a cursed seal so you also posess Darkness chakra. However before we start training your dark chakra, you will have to master the Lightning and Fire elements." "My father had laready trained me. I can perfectly create and recompose Lightning chakra. Both me and Akemi know this perfectly." "Well then it seems, Adrian Uchiha was not growing you to become total failures. Your sister was a faster learner than you were though. Now use your Cursed Seal." Takumi's mark began burning in hope as Takumi's body suddenly stopped rejecting it. With a ferocious speed it spreaded on the whole body unrestrained and unstopped. "Control it boy! Don't let it control you!" Zanka said on a calm tone pointing a finger towards Takumi. Takumi seemed to be fighting the seal, as it retracted to half of the body and stayed in it's place like a tamed lion. "Now find the darkness chakra inside the mark. Searc for it deeply until you find it. And then get some of it and store it in your chakra circulatory system." |
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