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[Denied]Dasu, Kagen; Genin
Topic Started: May 16 2018, 08:00 PM (527 Views)
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Kage no akira Dasu
Kagen

Strength through unity



General Information
Age: 15
Gender: Male
Height: 5' 8"
Weight: 140 lb
Physical Features:
  • Face/head: Thanks to a past encounter he maintains a unanimated appearance, unless excited nearly all facial muscles are slack even when not lost in thought. Beneath his dull face length grey hair is an unmarked face with an unhealthy pale tint; housing eyes that constantly judge anything they linger on.
  • Body: His body has many aspects of a mid teen, lean and fit from regular training. Despite living his life in the desert his skin color has not changed from the pale shade he was born with.
  • Notable Features: On his right shoulder is a single tattoo of the Dasu clan’s symbol.

Clothing/Accessories: Always wearing a tan cloth band covering from hairline to eyebrows, with a matching piece covering his lower face while outside of the village, or around his neck while in.
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Personality:
  • General:To sum his personality up in one word: detached. Unless something personally affects him or those close to him it might as well not exist for all it matters. His personal drive when engaged is strong and nearly single minded bordering on psychotic. Though never above trading banter with someone he sees as at least near his own level, insults and wit are held as a beautiful artform.
  • Hopes/Dreams: He wants to rise in both personal power, and to a degree prestige. Kagen dislikes taking the spot light for himself, instead preferring to stand next to the one in the light, he hopes to one day becomes the Kage’s personal bodyguard.
  • Fears: From an early age Kagen has has a mild phobia of spirits due to a chance encounter. While he has come to terms with them during his ninja training, he always prefers to hide when they are around regardless of their allegiance
  • Combat Mentality:-Out number and overwhelm. It is better to use more than enough than not enough



Battle Information
Village: Sunagakure
Rank: Genin

  • Ninjutsu:10
  • Taijutsu:5
  • Genjutsu:1
  • Stamina:5
  • Control:10
  • Strength:4
  • Speed:2
  • Instinct: 3

Equipment:
10 explosive tags, stored in hip pouch
5 smoke bombs, stored in hip pouch
10 Kunai, stored in hip pouch
4 Kunai, 2 each stored in each sleave
16 Kunai, 8 each stored as tattoos on both arms.
30m of wire, stored in hip pouch
3 scrolls, stored in hip pouch

Ninjutsu Specialist



Companions: (0/1)
Affinity:Doton Affinity


Abilities and Concentrations
Abilities
First Ability
Souma no Kou

Second Ability
Soul fusion

Third Ability-------------


Concentrations
Ninjutsu 3/3
Doton
 
Doton Affinity
A character with this concentration is able to utilize Doton, and can make and use any custom or archived jutsu that require the doton affinity. Doton has a passive enduring effect.
Passive (Enduring)


Augment Fuuinjutsu
 
Augment Fuuinjutsu
This user is able to utilize Augment Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Augment Classification. Augment Fuuinjutsu are used to enhance or limit the power of whatever it's placed on.


Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu
 
Storage & Force Fuuinjutsu

This user is able to utilize Storage Fuuinjutsu and Force Fuuinjutsu, making it possible for them to utilize any jutsu with the Storage or Force Classification. Storage Fuuinjutsu can be used to store supplies, weapons, armor, or anything in between. Force Fuuinjutsu are used to release, counteract, and capture energy.



Taijutsu 2/2
Upper Body
 
The fundamental skill of the [Upper Body] indicates the user’s proficiency with using their arms, chest and head in various ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu.

Lower Body
 
The fundamental skill of [Lower Body] indicates the user’s proficiency in using their legs and feet in many different ways to facilitate their use of related Taijutsu.

Genjutsu 0/1
[Place them here]



Jutsu
Ninjutsu


Taijutsu


Genjutsu





History
Historical Accounts




Edited by Bonreu, Jun 9 2018, 04:02 AM.
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I apologize for the wait.

Picture <---- This is appears to be Kadaj from Final Fantasy. As we don't allow characters to use photos from popular media characters, I'm afraid you'll have to remove the photo. Feel free to keep his appearance based off of him though.

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Kagen is able to merge with his preferred host so completely that the two are practically one and the same while he is merged with them. This enables Kagen to prepare jutsu that his host then casts using their body, as opposed to BLANK having to manifest himself to cast the technique. He still must channel and/or perform hand seals however, allowing any opponents the chance to see this take place. This also enables Kagen to utilize his host's body as his own, provided his host is willing to allow him to do so. Furthermore this bond is complete enough that things that aaffect one also affect the other equally. However, this also makes Kagen completely incapable of unwilling merging, and this ability only extends to his preferred hosts.
1) I assume you meant to replace "BLANK" with his name.
2) Is he manipulating the host's body to form the handseals or does he have to manifest his own arms and hands to perform the seals in order to do this?


Fuuinjutsu • Basic Ninja writing method <--- You'll have to note that the time that it takes the seal to expand to the correct size would be the same length of time that it would take to normally draw it.

[Doton: Coat of arms] <--- You'll have to do handseals for this as it wouldn't really be considered "basic channeling" and you aren't an elemental specialist with elemental channeling.
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Nara, ShikariBanninKonohagakureMamorinuku
Enkouten, MitsuoSp. JouninIwagakureTeam 18|Jousai
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Thank you for getting to my post none the less.
The picture has been changed to something less know, but otherwise unchanged in appearance.
Thank you for catching that blank, I thought I had caught them all.
There would be no manipulation of the host, I would have to form the hand signs/channel as if I was not fused if I wanted to perform the jutsu. Would it be ok for the host to perform the handsigns of their own free will, and me supply my chakra for my jutsu for a stealthy use, assuming proper coordination?
Added the seal would expand at the user's speed to give it an actual value. Let me know if it should be diffrent than that.
I added handsign requiments to Coat of Arms
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• Fuuinjutsu • Light as a feather <-- you say "1x1" but this needs a unit of measurement. inches? feet? etc

• Fuuinjutsu • Basic Ninja writing method <--- this should only work on D ranked fuuin, I think.

• What is the difference between the clan ability and your second ability? Cause as far as I can tell, a Dasu can perform hand seals while fused and can use jutsu through the host [see: ~[Fuuton - Molecular Fusion: Twin Windmill]]
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Added inch area to the fuuinjutsu light as a feather.
Make some modifications to Basic ninja writing so that it is only usable with D rank jutsu.
The idea behind the second ability is to make the two ninja basically one for more purposes. As I understand it, by default it's basically two ninja in the same place, with only damage and genjutsu being applied to both. With this ability it would escalate it to what happens to one happens to another, while they would only count as a single person. Healing one heals both, boosts summoning, ect would help both. While using jutsu when fused is possible my understanding is that to use my partners body would require a jutsu specifically for use while fused, or for me to manifest my body and use that. I'd like to be able to hide my own presence for a degree of surprise, such as using a fireball from an Aisu's mouth instead of my own(if I picked up katon of course)
Edited by Bonreu, May 26 2018, 12:43 AM.
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Hey man, sorry for that wait time!

>Your weight states 140, I know it's probably obvious that it's "140 lbs", but please label it with a unit so we know.

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"Furthermore this bond is complete enough that things that aaffect"

>Lil typo with "affect".


Fix that and it's a 1/2 from me.
Edited by Fake, May 30 2018, 12:02 AM.
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Thank you for your post, even if your avatar might cause me some nightmares.
Both are now fix, thank you for catching those errors.
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Fuuinjutsu • Basic Ninja writing method
D-Rank Fuuinjutusu
The user preforms hand signs then channels chakra into this jutsu to make a miniature version of the intended jutsu's seal appear in their hand, up to a D rank jutsu. This miniature seal is not able to used for other jutsu, but can be transferred onto a surface via touch where it expands to the proper size ready for use at a speed equal to the users speed.

So Fuuinjutsu just can't write the seals themselves. To be able to actively create a seal for imprint, copy, and etc. would require ink style. You can write with chakra, but it dissipates if not used and can't be used to imprint. You need a sort of medium like katon to sear it, raiton to burn it, a blade to carve it, or some form of media.

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Fuuinjutsu • Light as a feather
D-Rank Augment Fuuinjutusu
After drawing an approximately 1x1inch area, commonly on the legs the user weaves the hand signs to prime the jutsu. When active the target’s speed is increased by 3 while also decreasing their strength by 3. This seal lasts 3 posts before wearing out.

Augment fuuinjutsu don't expire unless removed, damaged, or explicitly stated. So feel free to keep it, but you don't have to.

Also to clarify on your second ability. How are the handseals done? Does the host do the hand seals for Kagen?


Won't take your 1/2 my dood.
Edited by DirectorPr, Jun 1 2018, 09:20 PM.
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I do not mean to intrude, but I do not believe that shishire would simply put his soul back after taking it. That is not like his personality.
The Feral One - Kuma - D Rank Minor Country Storm Slayer - Xiao Li - Sunagakure Jounin The Abandoned - Yamanaka Inodai - C Rank Nukenin
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Replaced the fuuinjutsu writing for a collaboration ninpou that I hope should do.
Removed the duration from my augment jutsus
For hand signs Kagen still needs to channel/sign them himself by bringing out his arms so that it's still visible that a jutsu is being preformed. Would it be reasonable to give the option for the host to preform them in Kagen's place so that they don't tip their hand at being fused.
As to the background I spoke with the host(at the time not sure if it's changed in the past couple of weeks) in the CB and it sounded reasonable to them. The specifics aren't yet set in stone, but perhaps a spirit was already within and that was taken, or perhaps the Suna ninja stooped it mid way. I'll flesh out the backstory as time goes on.
Sorry for the delay is responding, work and life has been very hectic lately.
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[Ninjutsu • Collaborative Ninja Writing, Basic] <- This wouldn't go under ninpou; it'd be a Fuuinjutsu. Alongside that, it should be clear what exactly you mean when you say "Must be fused with a host with an on going jutsu that causes burns" and "the user collects some of the host's radiant energy".

In my opinion it'd be a lot more doable as a technique that has the requirement of "Host must have Katon affinity" while the jutsu entails that you just use the Katon chakra to burn something in. Alongside that, I'm pretty sure Director's previous point still stands in that you can't just have it automatically be written on your hand as a stamp. You will have to write it in using Katon as the 'ink'.

Also at your question of "Would it be reasonable to give the option for the host to preform them in Kagen's place", I think this system would work similarly to that of pet-owners forming handseals for their pets, where Kagen would be the 'owner' and the host vessel would be the 'pet'. So I would assume that Kagen would still need to form the hand seals.
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I am sorry, but the hosts do not decide the personality of the genma. As it stands your history is not acceptable from my standpoint as Suna Ooc. Please find a way to edit it, as I do not want to ruin your concept. You may pm me for further discussion if need be.
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