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[Denied]Kugeki - Void (Ability) (Pre-Approve); Isuzu Hinoshi
Topic Started: Feb 12 2018, 08:25 AM (81 Views)
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Want to do a PB for this - but wanted to get the ability approved first. If it needs to be re-worked, please let me know and I'll gladly do so:

空隙 | Kugeki - Void

Background: Kugeki's origin is not of this world. Kugeki emerged from a meteor that crashed down into the Fire Nation. Isuzu had been tracking it for months and plotted its landing spot based on trajectory and speed. He found the spot and sealed the medium-sized rock (roughly the size of the boy himself) into a scroll. He took it back to his workshop and began studying it's makeup, finding that it was much denser than normal metal found on earth, as well as being resistant to magnetic forces. The genin began breaking it apart to form weapons from it, but at the core was a dark crystal which, when cracked open, unleashed a large mass of, for lack of a better term, black chakra that entered Isuzu's body. It had no ill intent or side effects, but he found he was able to control the chakra and mold it to is will, creating solid objects from this chakra. He also found himself to have an insatiable thirst for knowledge.

Ability: Kugeki grants it's user the ability of physical manipulation of Void chakra into solid form. These forms can be anything - projectiles, weapons, barriers, etc., and are outlined by accompanying Jutsu. Or, it can be use as normal ninjutsu chakra is, in the form of blasts, auras, etc. However, Kugeki has a special property of chakra draining attached to it, meaning when it comes in contact with a foreign chakra - it will "zap" chakra equal to the rank of the jutsu the user used - 1 (so a C-rank Void jutsu would take a D-rank amount of chakra from the target upon contact). This doesn't affect the host, however, as the Kugeki is sentient in that it knows it's host's chakra signature and will not actively take away from that. Also, this chakra has the added effect of making the users chakra harder to sense than the normal shinobi. Anyone with a (wit + control) / 2 < Isuzu's cannot sense him using sensory techniques, and anyone within 5 of his control will only sense him faintly, not able to quite make out all of the details. Anyone above that can sense him normally.
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This seems to be Black Lightning basically, but a different name? Zasadel has this.
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Nakajima, HayateKumogakure9th Raikage325
Kupu KupuSunagakureA-Rank Missing Ninja200
Sarutobi, TaigaKonohagakureGenin/Jinchuuriki149
Hasegawa, YuusukeSunagakureChuunin161
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I'll look it up. Give be a moment.
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Took a look. I guess it's similar? Mine drains chakra from users, and this is only the beginning, will branch with another ability into something different.

Is it an issue if my technique is similar to someone else's? It's not exactly a novel idea - physically manipulable chakra, I mean.
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Meh, scrap this
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