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| ♦Gaia | May 31 2012, 07:32 PM Post #1 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Username: Plague Application: Fushinkou Change: Redid all jutsu and changed the wording in definitions and the clan ability. Payment: N/A App: App
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| Yasashikaze Seiken | Jun 2 2012, 07:04 PM Post #2 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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I hate to start this off on a technicality, but that symbol is a symbol for the Black Sun, a crime syndicate from the Star Wars universe. I don't know if everyone else will care, but that technically classifies it as popular media. Also, another thing that I'm seeing is that there's technically not 10 clan jutsu here. What's more, the jutsu you do have are like pocket-knife jutsu. I understand that you'd need to purchase the jutsu for each sense and emotion you want to shut off, but I coulda sworn we were moving away from single low-ranked jutsu that could do a bunch of things. As a note, you should probably specify that the Disbelief of Sense technique, if it stays the same way it is right now, cannot effect one's vestibular sense (or sense of balance). Even if one cuts off their sense of hearing, it doesn't prevent disorientation and confusion when their sense of balance is targeted or affected; simply the movement of fluids within the inner ear can disrupt one's sense of balance.
Something about this technique really bugs me. I thought we were trying to avoid jutsu that circumvented the normal systems we have in place. Don't get me wrong; it's a wonderful idea. I just think that this jutsu makes genjutsu all but useless to the Fushinkou, since they can do equally cool stuff with ninjutsu and now they don't even have to worry about putting anything into genjutsu at all. Edited by Yasashikaze Seiken, Jun 2 2012, 07:08 PM.
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| ♦Gaia | Jun 3 2012, 12:11 AM Post #3 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Removed As far as jutsu go, you said it yourself. Even though I don't technically list 10 different jutsu I do list 3 basic jutsu that cover MULTIPLE catagories. The 3 particulars (genjutsu, emotion, and sense) are multiple jutsu that each and every time you get a new one you would purchase it as a seperate jutsu all together and fill in the proper emotion, genjutsu type, or sense. So in a technicallity, it is 10 seperate jutsu. As a side note, this is pretty much the limit to what this clan can do. I listed nearly everything they can disbelieve. I'm sure someone will be enterprising enough to come in and try and find something new, but for now this is all I can think of. Also, I don't think balance would be considered a sense but I don't know. If it presents a further problem I'll edit that in. I didn't ask Orius about this in particular but I was told it is possible to effectively find means of breaking genjutsu a little easier. I took that and expounded on a jutsu that already existed and made this. I know the abuse it can present but this is the only clan that can possibly achieve such a feat. That, and if someone ran around with it active constantly that's an ass ton of chakra. If they only kept it on in battle that's still a B rank per post. And if they used it just because metagamed then I'm sorry, someone steps in and tells them to piss off. Metagaming stops. Edited by Gaia, Jun 3 2012, 07:35 PM.
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Katsu Temporary Character Placement Lee - http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/topic/4946525/1/#new Inoriki - http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/topic/5041734/1/#new | ||||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♣Crocoduck | Jun 6 2012, 11:50 AM Post #4 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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"Fushinkou (Unbelief) " <--- not important, but could you reword that to "disbelief" to make it match the jutsu and such ~Disbelief of Emotion: [EMOTION HERE] <---- Totally hate that. Just remove "emotion here" and make it "an emotion." and give examples. "Fear, happiness, sadness, curiousity, etc. etc." ~Disbelief of Sense: [SENSE HERE] <---- Have multiple jutsu for this. At most, you can have taste and touch be in the same jutsu, but Sight, Hearing and Touch are too important to all be done in one jutsu. These provide defenses against genjutsu triggers and pain, in the case of touch. Also mention how many senses can be turned off at once (I'd say 2. total) ~Disbelief of Toxin <--- Specify that the poison's effects still occur, the fushinkou just ignores it and doesn't have side effects like coughing. If you meant it to mean that they actually are immune to the poison; no. That'd make no sense. |
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| ♠Orius | Jun 6 2012, 01:55 PM Post #5 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♠Orius | Jun 11 2012, 11:59 PM Post #6 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♦Gaia | Jun 13 2012, 09:16 PM Post #7 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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I'll say this one last time and will not entertain this again. The three jutsu that have the cap locked [INSERT HERE] things are not singular jutsu. Those are meant to be taken, filled in with an emotion/sense/gen type and bought/trained as individual jutsu. Now please, stop making me repeat myself. As far as the poison thing goes. I actually was intending for them to actually be immune for the poison for a set time, having the poison start at the end of that time frame. I might need to expand on that but would the basic idea work? |
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| ♣Crocoduck | Jun 15 2012, 01:58 PM Post #8 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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I understand that, and I'm saying: no. Make specific ones and add them in. As for the poison, I think Ian should be brought in, just because I have trouble getting around the logic of it. 'cause biology-wise, that wouldn't make sense. |
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| Checkmate | Jun 15 2012, 02:03 PM Post #9 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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And, Chi, the reason for that is because then it can't be an archive jutsu. Archives have to be set. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♠Orius | Jun 18 2012, 06:09 PM Post #10 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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Bump. I'll take this over if it isn't edited in a few days. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♦Gaia | Jun 21 2012, 10:32 AM Post #11 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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I'll get this done later today or tomorrow. Just kinda pissed that this is even an issue. It's the same damn thing and the way I currently have it is much more tidy. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♠Orius | Jun 22 2012, 07:34 PM Post #12 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♦Gaia | Jun 24 2012, 01:07 AM Post #13 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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The day I posted that was hell, today I was gone. IF I don't have it done by tomorrow then I'll relinquish all rights. | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♦Gaia | Jun 24 2012, 02:11 PM Post #14 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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I made all four prime emotions I made all five prime senses I made all three genjutsu types available I did not make combinations I did not edit the toxins This is every single base jutsu the Fushinkou can get, the rest would be combinations and each additional sense/taste/gen type would increase the rank of the jutsu by 1. I do not know if they should be allowed a disbelief of sensor. I'm sure others will be enterprising and try to get additional disbeliefs and I'll handle those as they come up. Other than that, done. |
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| ♠Orius | Jul 2 2012, 07:23 AM Post #15 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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The disbelief of Genjutsu need to say they can only be used once a thread. For Toxin, make sure it's noted that it delays it, not ignore completely. Other than that, good to go. |
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| ♦Gaia | Jul 3 2012, 02:33 PM Post #16 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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| ♦Gaia | Jul 4 2012, 12:22 PM Post #20 | |||||||||||||||||||||||||||
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[b]Username:[/b] [url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/profile/974575/]Yaku[/url], [url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/profile/931693/]Plague[/url], and [url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/profile/337579/]Orius[/url][hr][b]Surname:[/b] Fushinkou [b]Traits:[/b] All members of the Fushinkou clan have [color=gray]gray[/color] eyes. [b]Village:[/b] Kirigakure [b]Clan Symbol:[/b] N/A [hr][b]Requirements:[/b] All members of the clan must have max control for their rank. [b]Definitions:[/b] The Fushinkou clan is known for their special Kekkei Genkai that allows them to ignore nearly anything. This is due to their uncanny control of the 361 chakra points that filter throughout the body. Abnormal to most humans, Fushinkou have added cells within each node that allows for them to shut off certain feelings. Their special control over [url=http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Chakra_points]Tenketsu[/url] runs throughout the body. [u][b]Bloodline Limit:[/b][/u][b] Fushinkou (Disbelief) [/b] The Fushinkou's nearly flawless control over their tenketsu allows them to completely ignore most anything they wish. This can span from simple emotions to even the effects of death itself. All Fushinkou clan jutsu last for a number of posts equal to their control stat, after a jutsu ends it requires a 2 post cooldown before the same jutsu can be used again.[spoiler=Ability nocode][nocode][u][b]Bloodline Limit:[/b][/u][b] Fushinkou (Unbelief) [/b] The Fushinkou's nearly flawless control over their tenketsu allows them to completely ignore most anything they wish. This can span from simple emotions to even the effects of death itself. All Fushinkou clan jutsu last for a number of posts equal to their control stat, after a jutsu ends it requires a 2 post cooldown before the same jutsu can be used again.[/spoiler][/nocode][table=1, Clan Jutsu][b]~Disbelief of Disbelief[/b] E - Ranked Ninjutsu This is casually done to end the effects of any of the Fushinkou's own disbelief jutsu. This requires no handseals to use. [b]~Disbelief of Emotion:[/b] Fear D - Ranked Ninjutsu By focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to completey shut down their [b]fear[/b]. This requires no handseals to do. [b]~Disbelief of Emotion:[/b] Anger D - Ranked Ninjutsu By focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to completey shut down their [b]anger[/b]. This requires no handseals to do. [b]~Disbelief of Emotion:[/b] Joy D - Ranked Ninjutsu By focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to completey shut down their [b]joy[/b]. This requires no handseals to do. [b]~Disbelief of Emotion:[/b] Sorrow D - Ranked Ninjutsu By focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to completey shut down their [b]sorrow[/b]. This requires no handseals to do. [b]~Disbelief of Sense:[/b] Sight C - Ranked Ninjutsu Be focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to completely shut down their [b]sight[/b]. This completely negates all form of information transfer coming over that sensory medium. This requires no handseals to do. [b]~Disbelief of Sense:[/b] Hearing C - Ranked Ninjutsu Be focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to completely shut down their [b]hearing[/b]. This completely negates all form of information transfer coming over that sensory medium. This requires no handseals to do. [b]~Disbelief of Sense:[/b] Scent C - Ranked Ninjutsu Be focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to completely shut down their [b]scent[/b]. This completely negates all form of information transfer coming over that sensory medium. This requires no handseals to do. [b]~Disbelief of Sense:[/b] Touch C - Ranked Ninjutsu Be focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to completely shut down their [b]touch[/b]. This completely negates all form of information transfer coming over that sensory medium. This requires no handseals to do. [b]~Disbelief of Sense:[/b] Taste C - Ranked Ninjutsu Be focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to completely shut down their [b]taste[/b]. This completely negates all form of information transfer coming over that sensory medium. This requires no handseals to do. [b]~Disbelief of Genjutsu:[/b] Status B - Ranked Ninjutsu By focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to more easily recognize and break genjutsu. This effectively allows the Fushinkou to deal with a(n) [b]status[/b] genjutsu by substituting their ninjutsu for the genjutsu stat and control for their wit stat. This requires no handseals to do. All disbelief of genjutsu jutsu may only be used once per thread collectively. [b]~Disbelief of Genjutsu:[/b] Illusion B - Ranked Ninjutsu By focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to more easily recognize and break genjutsu. This effectively allows the Fushinkou to deal with a(n) [b]illusion[/b] genjutsu by substituting their ninjutsu for the genjutsu stat and control for their wit stat. This requires no handseals to do. All disbelief of genjutsu jutsu may only be used once per thread collectively. [b]~Disbelief of Genjutsu:[/b] Hypnotism B - Ranked Ninjutsu By focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to more easily recognize and break genjutsu. This effectively allows the Fushinkou to deal with a(n) [b]hypnotism[/b] genjutsu by substituting their ninjutsu for the genjutsu stat and control for their wit stat. This requires no handseals to do. All disbelief of genjutsu jutsu may only be used once per thread collectively. [b]~Disbelief of Toxin[/b] A - Ranked Ninjutsu By Focusing their tenketsu the Fushinkou is able to ignore the effects of any toxic substance based upon their control. This requires no handseals to do. This only postpones the effects of the toxin. Once this jutsu is canceled the toxin takes effect as if it had just been introduced into the body. [list][*]1-3 D [*]4-6 C [*]7-9 B [*]10-12 A [*]13-15 S[/list] [b]~Disbelief of Death[/b] S - Ranked Ninjutsu This is the epitome of the Fushinkou clan's abilities. Upon death the Fushinkou clan member will continue to fight for a number of posts equal to their stamina as if fully alive. Sensor and medical ninja will know these people are dead. After this technique is expended the clan member's body becomes inert and completely lifeless as a normal corpse.[/table][u][b]Clan History[/b][/u] The Fushinkou Clan holds a very long and prideful history within the Mist Village. A practice that has been passed down from generation to generation, the Fushinkou Clan expresses strong emphasize on the rules of the Shinobi. Most prominently, they focus on the three... Rule 4: "A shinobi must always put the mission first." Rule 25: "A Shinobi must never show tears." Rule 36: "A shinobi must never show attachment." Their upbringing and foundation has raised some of the most ruthless and calculating Ninjas of Kirigakure, but are always known to 'get the job done.' Failure of any missions are met with extreme punishment and resentment from the clan. Signs of emotion is looked down upon and the Clan is known to use old practices to exhert their bloodline into the young. Their beliefs are highly popular and recognized in the Mist Village and throughout history, it is fairly common to see Fushinkou Clan members in high ranking positions of the Village. Their Clan were one of the many founding clans that started Kirigakure and has had a significant impact on politics since its birth. After a strong distrust towards Kekkei Genkai began to appear, Fushinkou Clan was highly persecuted for their cold demeanor and abnormal resistance, but not without retaliation. Under strong leadership, the clan survived and actually did fairly better than most other clans and still prides itself as an elitists clan in Kirigakure. Edited by Gaia, Jul 4 2012, 12:25 PM.
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