|
[Accepted]'Ere he is
|
|
Topic Started: Feb 28 2012, 11:15 PM (314 Views)
|
|
Saranm
|
Feb 28 2012, 11:15 PM
Post #1
|
|
Self Proclaimed P.I.M.P.
- Posts:
- 178
- Group:
- Members
- Member
- #777
- Joined:
- Jul 11, 2010
- Event Points
- 2
|
Username: Saranm
Application: Chewwy Change: Reactivation Payment/Mission: N/A
App Change Username: SaranmPoints: 0/0 Companions: Kaguya, Chuushin
"I'll never be a monk for just three days!" Never give up, never falter, keep trying, through all the hardships... Triumph is only inches away... General InformationAge: 14 Gender: Male Height: 5' 7" Weight: 166 lbs Hair: Pale white in color, kept in a short ponytail in the back. Eyes: Deep blue Physical Features: A bit of a 'heart' shaped head marks the features of this young man in the making. A short forehead brings a start to a somewhat handsome face, largely unblemished by any scarring constantly seen on many ninja. Semi-thick, long eyebrows stretch across the expanse of his face, with rather large eyes beneath them. Chuushin's eyes are almond like in shape, and unless there is something important to focus on, they tend to jump from point to point, examining everything. While not excessively muscular, his arms are well toned, and are certainly not skimpy by normal standards. As with his arms, Chuu's chest and abs are muscular, but certainly not to a point of someone who trains hardcore everyday. As is standard of his clan, there are the two red dots on his face. His particularly resting on his forehead, in areas where one might presume horns to grow on demons. Clothing/Accessories: Typically, Chuu can be seen wearing tight-fitting, solid color shirts. White, black, blue, green, even pink have all been worn at one time or another by him, of all lengths and sizes. Occasionally, a casual black blazer is worn over his upper body, usually on colder days. Worn below is typically some pair of dark colored, loose, trousers. On his feet, Chuushin typically wears a pair of light colored wooden sandals. Forehead Protector: Usually worn as it is meant to, on his forehead, though it is often moved from area to area. Personality: Many would call him a little... hot headed. Shin is certainly an impulsive person, acting on first instinct, and rarely thinking too far ahead. However, this is during the case of an endangering situation. In times of peace, he is much different, often being much the opposite to his 'in battle persona.' While he may be loud and a little boisterous at times, he is just as often silent and ponderous of his surroundings. On a social stand point, Chuushin is usually very friendly, and not afraid to make himself known in a crowd. If he has a question for someone, he will ask it, and typically not beat around the bush much. He tries to follow a "gentlemanly conduct" as shown to him by his father, and tries to put that above his personal feelings. This usually doesn't stop him from acting as he is. He tends to be a bit flirtatious with women, though it's usually on more of a "try and fail" basis. While fighting, Chuushin likes to distract himself. He feels that by removing his mind from the fight, and leaving his body to the action, the fight will work better in his favor. Doing so makes him less likely to worry about failure, while the rest of him focuses on victory. This prevents nervous jitters and other things of the sort. He does this by speaking things that usually fester in his mind. His thoughts on society, people, clans, things, everything. Chuushin would hardly ever move first in combat. As was taught to him, to never make the first move, but to always make the first strike. That being, he focuses less on the counterattack, but more on eliminating the threat before it becomes worse than it can be. Battle InformationRank: Genin Village: Kirigakure Chakra Affinity: SuitonSecond Chakra Affinity: N/A Stats- Ninjutsu: 2
- Taijutsu: 3
- Genjutsu: 3
- Stamina: 4
- Control: 4
- Strength: 2
- Speed: 3
- Wit: 3
Equipment:Chuushin keeps two dozen shuriken, and a single kunai in a pouch on the right side of his right leg, right above the knee. Five more kunai surround his left leg, above the knee, held in by individual ringlets for each one. One lighter, the kind that you click on and it stays on until burnt out, in each pants pocket. (Two in total.) The lighters are about three inches tall, and one and a half inch wide. Jutsu InformationAbilities: Shikotsu Myaku Corpse Bone Pathways The Kaguya have the unique ability to completely and ultimately control their bones. They are capable of altering the shape, size and density of their bones through abnormal control of their body. This can prove them to be very dangerous adversaries; being humans that are literally walking weapons, utilizing nothing more than their bones. This bloodline limit is governed by both its stamina and control. Those with this trait who have low stamina tend to die young due to the toll the bloodline limit takes on the body. Those with with low control often die as a result as well. As their control determines the speed with which their bones replace themselves, having low control often leads to the body collapsing on itself in an excruciating death. As a side effect, their skin closes around puncture wounds caused by their own jutsu, at a rate comparable to the speed of their bone reproduction. Unlike their bone regrowth, a clan member is unable to control the manner and speed at which their skin closes. Jutsu:Clan Relevant Jutsu
~Novice Bone Density D-Ranked Ninjutsu Novice Bone Density is one of the passive bone density jutsus that can be used simultaneously with another of the Corpse Bone Pathways jutsu. The bones produced in said jutsu are the density of a normal bone. Bones of this density are able to be used against most weak jutsu without breaking. An attack of a strength equal to the average of the user's stamina and control stats, up to a max of 3, will break a bone of this density.
~Dance of the Willows D-Ranked Ninjutsu Dance of the Willow is the first of five dance forms. Using their ability to manipulate their bone structure, the clan member will grow and extend a ulna or radius (through their palm of their hand and elbow), fibula (through their knee caps), and clavicle bone (through their shoulder) through their body parts to form a stabbing instrument. These bones can be grown up to twice their original length and retracted after being grown. Using fluid and precise movements, the user can then begin to impale their opponents. It should be noted that these bones are only pointed, not bladed. One of the bone density line jutsu must be used simultaneously with this jutsu to determine its durability.
~Metacarpal Bone Claw D-Ranked Ninjutsu Using the ability to manipulate their bone structure, they will cause up to all five of their metacarpal bones in each hand to extend outward in the form of a claw. These claws are roughly eight inches in length. One of the bone density line jutsu must be used simultaneously with this jutsu to determine its durability.
~Proximal Phalanx Bone Senbon D-Ranked Ninjutsu Using the ability to manipulate their bone structure, they will remove their proximal phalanges bones in the form of senbon from their fingers.They are able to create up to four senbon each time they use the jutsu. The senbon vary in length but are usually between four and six inches long. One of the bone density line jutsu must be used simultaneously with this jutsu to determine its durability.
~Average Bone Density C-Ranked Ninjutsu Prerequisite:~Novice Bone Density Average bone Density is one of the passive bone density jutsu that can be used simultaneously with another of the Corpse Bone Pathway jutsu. The bones produced in said jutsu are the density of rock. Bones of this density are able to be used against most medium strength jutsu without breaking. An attack of a strength equal to the average of the user's stamina and control stats, up to a max of 5 will break a bone of this density.
~Dance of the Camellia C-Ranked Ninjutsu It is the second of five dance forms. Using the ability to manipulate their bone structure, the user will remove their femur in the form of a sword. The femur can be manipulated to be up to 6 feet long. The blade is as sharp as an average blade, but one of the bone density line jutsu must be used in conjecture with this jutsu to determine its durability.
Suiton Jutsu Suiton • Suiren [Water Element • Sleeping Lotus] E-Ranked Ninjutsu Suiren is mainly a technique that acts as a basis for many other techniques. The user makes use of very little water to form a delicate and hollow construct of water, in the shape of a water lotus. This first stage has no applicable combat benefits, and only acts as a first stage for a series of techniques. The user performs the required handseals and the lotus forms one foot in front of the user. Suiren lasts for as many posts as the users stamina, with a maximum of four.
*Umbrella Defense D-Rank Suiton Ninjutsu After performing a set of seals, the user will be able to create a solid, yet watery defense. Once the seals are performed, the user will spray water created from the inside of their chest through their mouth. Once the water is expelled, it will form sort of an umbrella shape that is concave to the user and about two meters in diameter. This defense can be formed in any direction the user can spit, up to two meters away. Once created, it lasts for three posts before falling lifelessly to the ground.
Suiton • Ikiren [Water Element • Breath Lotus] D-Ranked Ninjutsu Prerequisites: Suiton • Suiren By using Suiren as its base, Ikiren acts to expand the lotus, forming it into a hollow bubble. This bubble is primarily to be placed over ones head, giving them enough air for two extra breaths while underwater. However, this can also be used as an interrogation and/or torture technique, by slowly draining someone of their air supply. Breaking the Ikiren is easy, doable with a minimum strength of three, wherein it pops like a bubble. The user must perform the required handseals before the intricate petals expand to make the bubble shape. Much like its predecessor, Ikiren lasts for as many posts as the users stamina, with a maximum of four.
*Dense Cannon D-Rank Suiton Ninjutsu Replacing speed for power, this technique creates a dense ball of water meant to cause heavy blunt damage. Once the seals are formed for this technique, the user will create a ball of water from within their body and will expel it through their mouth. The ball sits at about two feet in diameter. It will travel at a speed of three, up to five meters, but strikes with a force of four.
HistoryThe Boy, The Past Chuushin, like most others of his clan, was destined to be a fighter. From a young age, he determined that he rather enjoyed the fighting. It brought a closeness to his brothers, sisters, and parents that he felt many others didn't quite get. As his father once joked "You can never truly know a man until some of his blood has been on your hands!" This spoke legions of truth for the young boy as he entered the academy. He didn't exactly have many fans in the way of teachers, being that he spoke his mind more often than not, though this made him relatively popular among his classmates. The Blade, The Future At the young age of nine, Chuushin was promised a weapon. 'Promise,' however, is a loose term, used to describe the fact that he, as the first born son, is meant to receive it. This blade, owned by his father, and his father before him, is supposed to be handed down to whoever is most worthy to wield it. Chuu's father believes this to be him, but he has yet to prove it, yet to earn the right. The Graduate, The Present Chuushin, having his fathers training, along with the academy's, passed with flying colors. Having learned the basics of the Gozu Hisuiryuu Ryuu, along with several clan, and non-academy techniques. Along with this newfound power, came resolve. He resolved himself to be the best he could be, to be something for his family to be proud of.
Edited by Saranm, Mar 6 2012, 08:39 AM.
|
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!" The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
|
| |
|
♠Zangy
|
Feb 28 2012, 11:27 PM
Post #2
|
|
- Posts:
- 23,059
- Group:
- Admins
- Member
- #2
- Joined:
- Nov 24, 2008
- Event Points
- 25
|
Here's the nocode:
Spoiler: click to toggle [b]Username:[/b] [url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/profile/1330196/]Saranm[/url] [b]Points:[/b] 0/0 [b]Companions:[/b]
[hr] [center][big][big][b][url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/topic/906124/1/#new]Kaguya[/url], Chuushin[/b][/big][/big]
[b]"I'll never be a monk for just three days!"[/b] [i]Never give up, never falter, keep trying, through all the hardships... Triumph is only inches away...[/i][/center] [hr] [center][b][big]General Information[/big][/b][/center]
[b]Age:[/b] 14
[b]Gender:[/b] Male
[b]Height:[/b] 5' 7"
[b]Weight:[/b] 166 lbs
[b]Hair:[/b] Pale white in color, kept in a short ponytail in the back.
[b]Eyes:[/b] Deep blue
[b]Physical Features:[/b] A bit of a 'heart' shaped head marks the features of this young man in the making. A short forehead brings a start to a somewhat handsome face, largely unblemished by any scarring constantly seen on many ninja. Semi-thick, long eyebrows stretch across the expanse of his face, with rather large eyes beneath them. Chuushin's eyes are almond like in shape, and unless there is something important to focus on, they tend to jump from point to point, examining everything. While not excessively muscular, his arms are well toned, and are certainly not skimpy by normal standards. As with his arms, Chuu's chest and abs are muscular, but certainly not to a point of someone who trains hardcore everyday. As is standard of his clan, there are the two red dots on his face. His particularly resting on his forehead, in areas where one might presume horns to grow on demons.
[b]Clothing/Accessories:[/b] Typically, Chuu can be seen wearing tight-fitting, solid color shirts. White, black, blue, green, even pink have all been worn at one time or another by him, of all lengths and sizes. Occasionally, a casual black blazer is worn over his upper body, usually on colder days. Worn below is typically some pair of dark colored, loose, trousers. On his feet, Chuushin typically wears a pair of light colored wooden sandals.
[b]Forehead Protector:[/b] Usually worn as it is meant to, on his forehead, though it is often moved from area to area.
[b]Personality:[/b] Many would call him a little... hot headed. Shin is certainly an impulsive person, acting on first instinct, and rarely thinking too far ahead. However, this is during the case of an endangering situation. In times of peace, he is much different, often being much the opposite to his 'in battle persona.' While he may be loud and a little boisterous at times, he is just as often silent and ponderous of his surroundings.
On a social stand point, Chuushin is usually very friendly, and not afraid to make himself known in a crowd. If he has a question for someone, he will ask it, and typically not beat around the bush much. He tries to follow a "gentlemanly conduct" as shown to him by his father, and tries to put that above his personal feelings. This usually doesn't stop him from acting as he is. He tends to be a bit flirtatious with women, though it's usually on more of a "try and fail" basis.
While fighting, Chuushin likes to distract himself. He feels that by removing his mind from the fight, and leaving his body to the action, the fight will work better in his favor. Doing so makes him less likely to worry about failure, while the rest of him focuses on victory. This prevents nervous jitters and other things of the sort. He does this by speaking things that usually fester in his mind. His thoughts on society, people, clans, things, everything.
Chuushin would hardly ever [i]move[/i] first in combat. As was taught to him, to never make the first move, but to always make the first strike. That being, he focuses less on the counterattack, but more on eliminating the threat before it becomes worse than it can be. [hr] [center][b][big]Battle Information[/big][/b][/center]
[b]Rank:[/b] Genin
[b]Village:[/b] Kirigakure
[b]Chakra Affinity:[/b] [url=http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/topic/3328609/1/]Suiton[/url]
[b]Second Chakra Affinity:[/b] N/A
[b]Stats[/b] [list][*][b]Ninjutsu:[/b] 3 [*][b]Taijutsu:[/b] 2 [*][b]Genjutsu:[/b] 3 [*][b]Stamina:[/b] 4 [*][b]Control:[/b] 4 [*][b]Strength:[/b] 2 [*][b]Speed:[/b] 3 [*][b]Wit:[/b] 3 [/list]
[b]Equipment:[/b]Chuushin keeps two dozen shuriken, and a single kunai in a pouch on the right side of his right leg, right above the knee. Five more kunai surround his left leg, above the knee, held in by individual ringlets for each one. One lighter, the kind that you click on and it stays on until burnt out, in each pants pocket. (Two in total.) The lighters are about three inches tall, and one and a half inch wide.
[big][center][b]Combat Style[/b][/center][/big] [center][b][color=#000]Hitsu no Hisui Kuroi [Head of Black Jade][/color][/b][/center] The Hitsu no Hisui Koroi branch of this style focuses on the fluid motions of water. Considering the nature of water, this branch tends to be one of the more balanced branches of the style, as water can both defend and attack. A combination of defensive maneuvers and strong counterattacks, a skilled warrior of Hitsu no Hisui Kuroi is not one to be trifled with, as water is just as much a force of destruction as it can be one of aid and health, the fluid sweeping movements brushing away defenses and leaving the opponent open for a devastating counterattack.
[center][b][big]Jutsu Information[/big][/b][/center] [b]Abilities:[/b] [spoiler=Shikotsu Myaku] [center]Shikotsu Myaku [Corpse Bone Pathways][/center]
The Kaguya have the unique ability to completely and ultimately control their bones. They are capable of altering the shape, size and density of their bones through abnormal control of their body. This can prove to be very dangerous, creating humans that can literally be walking weapons with just their bones.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Hisui Ryuu] With this ability, the user gains the ability to replace handseals with other somatic components. These components resemble martial arts kata, and allow for unusual manipulations of the elements. This ability extends to the five main branches of the style and to any personal elemental fusion and super element customizations of the style. These kata and body movements almost always take about the same amount of time as handseals, though some are shorter, and some are longer.[/spoiler]
[b]Jutsu:[/b]
[spoiler=Clan Relevant Jutsu]
[b]~Yanagi no Mai [Dance of the Willows][/b] D-Ranked Ninjutsu Yanagi no Mai is a form of Ninjutsu developed by the Kaguya Clan to take advantage of their bloodline ability. It is the first of five dance forms. Using their ability to manipulate their bone structure, the clan member will grow and extend a forearm (through their palm of their hand and elbow), fibula (through their knee caps), and clavicle bone (through their shoulder) through their body parts to form a stabbing instrument. Using fluid and precise movements, the user can then proceed to impaling his opponents. It should be noted that these bones are only pointed, they are not blades.
[b]~Metacarpal Hone Tsume [Metacarpal Bone Claw][/b] D-Ranked Ninjutsu Metacarpal Hone Tsume is a Ninjutsu technique developed by the Kaguya using their bloodline ability. Using the ability to manipulate their bone structure, they will cause his metacarpal bones to extend outward in a form of a claw. With extra chakra cost, because of the bloodline, the density of the bone can be increased many times so that it is as hard as steel.
[b]~Proximal Phalange Hone Senbon [Proximal Phalange Bone Senbon][/b] D-Ranked Ninjutsu Proximal Phalanges Hone Senbon is a Ninjutsu technique developed by Kaguya clan members by using their bloodline ability. Using the ability to manipulate their bone structure, they will remove their proximal phalanges bones in the form of senbon from their fingers. For an extra chakra cost, because of the bloodline, the density of the bone can be increased many times so that it is as hard as steel.
[b]~Tsubaki no Mai [Dance of the Camellia][/b] C-Ranked Ninjutsu Tsubaki no Mai is a form of Ninjutsu developed by the Kaguya to take advantage of their bloodline ability. It is the second of five dance forms. Using the ability to manipulate their bone structure, the user will remove their femur in the form of a sword from. The femur differs in base size depending on the users height, but it can be manipulated to be up to 6 feet long. The blade is as sharp as an average blade, but It can be made to be as dense as steel. [/spoiler]
[spoiler=Suiton Jutsu] *[color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton • Teppoudama [i][Water Element • Bullet][/i][/b][/color] D-Ranked Ninjutsu Suiton • Teppoudama is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, the user manifests a large amount of water in his mouth which he can then spit at his opponent as a large spherical projectile.
*[color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton • Kokuun no Jutsu [i][Black Clouds Technique][/i][/b][/color] C-ranked Ninjutsu Suiton • Kokuun no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique which utilizes the Water Element. After forming the necessary hand seals, a black mist will emit from his body and rise into the sky. Black clouds will form, releasing a flammable rain of oil onto his targets. These clouds will create rain for 3 posts before vanishing out.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=Gozu Hisuiryuu] [color=#000][b]Hisui Haaku [i][Jade Grasp][/i][/b][/color] D-Rank Nintaijutsu The user channels chakra into their weapon or fists and produce components for their branch's maneuvers: fire for Katon, water for Suiton, and so on. This technique must be active in order for the style's maneuvers to used. So long as the user remains conscious, this ninjutsu will remain in effect, though the user must still concentrate on focusing the chakra.
[color=#000][b]Suiton: Hisui Kuroi Dageki [i][Black Jade Strike][/i][/b][/color] D-Rank Nintaijutsu Prerequisite: Hisui Haaku [Jade Grasp] After activating Hisui Haaku, the user channels chakra into their weapon or fists and attacks by shooting out small short bursts of elemental chakra from them. The type of burst is restricted by the user's elemental affinities. The bursts extend out to five feet from the user before dissipating. Each burst is about one foot in diameter. These bursts are capable of causing minor elemental damage. So long as the user remains conscious, the ability to use these bursts of chakra will remain, though they must still concentrate on focusing the chakra and each strike takes up a small amount of chakra. Water element has the following effect: [list][*][color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton[/b][/color] - A small orb of water shoots out at the opponent, striking with enough force to cause bruises on contact. [/list]
[color=#000][b][i][Suiton: Black Jade Kick][/i][/b][/color] D-Rank Nintaijutsu Prerequisite: Hisui Haaku [Jade Grasp] After activating Hisui Haaku, the user channels chakra into their feet and attacks by shooting out small short bursts of elemental chakra from them. The type of burst is restricted by the user's elemental affinities. The bursts extend out to five feet from the user before dissipating. Each burst is about one foot in diameter. These bursts are capable of causing minor elemental damage. So long as the user remains conscious, the ability to use these bursts of chakra will remain, though they must still concentrate on focusing the chakra and each strike takes up a small amount of chakra. Suiton element has the following effect: [list][*][color=dodgerblue][b]Suiton[/b][/color] - A small orb of water shoots out at the opponent, striking with enough force to cause bruises on contact.[/list]
[color=#000][b]Suiton: Hisui Kuroi Kidou • Tsuiraku Shuuha Bougyo [i][Black Jade Maneuver • Crashing Wave Defense][/i][/b][/color] C-Rank Nintaijutsu The user brings their weapon or fists to face the attack, as they channel water-nature chakra through them and bring a small torrent of water to protect them from all sides. This technique can protect the user from small-sized and medium-sized projectiles and low level taijutsu and ninjutsu (C-Rank or lower for the two). This maneuver can also be used as a set up for one of three low-level conterattacks. This technique lasts for two posts.[/spoiler]
[hr]
[center][b][big]History[/big][/b][/center]
[spoiler=The Boy, The Past]Chuushin, like most others of his clan, was destined to be a fighter. From a young age, he determined that he rather enjoyed the fighting. It brought a closeness to his brothers, sisters, and parents that he felt many others didn't quite get. As his father once joked "You can never truly know a man until some of his blood has been on your hands!" This spoke legions of truth for the young boy as he entered the academy. He didn't exactly have many fans in the way of teachers, being that he spoke his mind more often than not, though this made him relatively popular among his classmates.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=The Blade, The Future]At the young age of nine, Chuushin was promised a weapon. 'Promise,' however, is a loose term, used to describe the fact that he, as the first born son, is meant to receive it. This blade, owned by his father, and his father before him, is supposed to be handed down to whoever is most worthy to wield it. Chuu's father believes this to be him, but he has yet to prove it, yet to earn the right.[/spoiler]
[spoiler=The Graduate, The Present]Chuushin, having his fathers training, along with the academy's, passed with flying colors. Having learned the basics of the Gozu Hisuiryuu Ryuu, along with several clan, and non-academy techniques. Along with this newfound power, came resolve. He resolved himself to be the best he could be, to be something for his family to be proud of.[/spoiler]
Now, to go through the stuff you have to fix.
You're going to need to update all your Kaguya jutsu, located here: http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/topic/906124/1/#new as they were recently updated.
You're going to need to shift your stats a bit, because Kaguya now require at least average taijutsu. You can freely decrease one of your stats to increase, this, though, since it is a system change.
Hisui Ryuu, as an ability is a nogo. You're going to need to remove it, and put hand seals back in on all your jutsu.
Jade Grasp needs to be Suiton only, no 5-jutsu-in-one. Also, the jutsu doesn't actually 'do' anything.
Black Jade Strike needs to be suiton only, removing the other bits. You need seals.
Same thing for the others as well.
|
|
|
| |
|
Saranm
|
Feb 29 2012, 12:29 AM
Post #3
|
|
Self Proclaimed P.I.M.P.
- Posts:
- 178
- Group:
- Members
- Member
- #777
- Joined:
- Jul 11, 2010
- Event Points
- 2
|
First off, you're a whore, because you personally approved that ability, but whatever.
Jade grasp WAS fixed to only include the single element, and same goes for Black Jade Strike.
Anywho, fixing.
|
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!" The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
|
| |
|
♠Zangy
|
Feb 29 2012, 12:35 AM
Post #4
|
|
- Posts:
- 23,059
- Group:
- Admins
- Member
- #2
- Joined:
- Nov 24, 2008
- Event Points
- 25
|
+3 days.
|
|
|
| |
|
Saranm
|
Feb 29 2012, 01:47 PM
Post #5
|
|
Self Proclaimed P.I.M.P.
- Posts:
- 178
- Group:
- Members
- Member
- #777
- Joined:
- Jul 11, 2010
- Event Points
- 2
|
Fixed my Kaguya jutsu.
Hisui Ryuu was removed totally, replaced the four techniques I had with two stock Kaguya techs, and two custom suiton techniques.
|
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!" The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
|
| |
|
Checkmate
|
Mar 2 2012, 02:35 PM
Post #6
|
|
Emotion in Verse
- Posts:
- 10,607
- Group:
- Valued Member
- Member
- #455
- Joined:
- Dec 8, 2009
- Event Points
- 273
|
Broken bold tag in the suiton section.
The clan requires at least average tai
Suiton • Suiren [Water Element • Sleeping Lotus]<--Seals
Suiton • Ikiren [Water Element • Breath Lotus]<--Seals
|
|
|
| |
|
Saranm
|
Mar 2 2012, 02:43 PM
Post #7
|
|
Self Proclaimed P.I.M.P.
- Posts:
- 178
- Group:
- Members
- Member
- #777
- Joined:
- Jul 11, 2010
- Event Points
- 2
|
Fixed.
|
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!" The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
|
| |
|
Checkmate
|
Mar 2 2012, 02:45 PM
Post #8
|
|
Emotion in Verse
- Posts:
- 10,607
- Group:
- Valued Member
- Member
- #455
- Joined:
- Dec 8, 2009
- Event Points
- 273
|
1/2
|
|
|
| |
|
♠Zangy
|
Mar 2 2012, 04:09 PM
Post #9
|
|
- Posts:
- 23,059
- Group:
- Admins
- Member
- #2
- Joined:
- Nov 24, 2008
- Event Points
- 25
|
This app is locked till tonight, till the +days wears off.
|
|
|
| |
|
Checkmate
|
Mar 3 2012, 11:30 PM
Post #10
|
|
Emotion in Verse
- Posts:
- 10,607
- Group:
- Valued Member
- Member
- #455
- Joined:
- Dec 8, 2009
- Event Points
- 273
|
Open again, btw
|
|
|
| |
|
CorgiBro
|
Mar 5 2012, 09:55 PM
Post #11
|
|
Former Corgi
- Posts:
- 3,256
- Group:
- Valued Member
- Member
- #668
- Joined:
- May 10, 2010
- Event Points
- 76
|
You're going to have to switch out the archived Suiton too. Black Clouds is not in the archive anymore and Bullet got updated.
|
|
| |
|
Saranm
|
Mar 6 2012, 01:44 AM
Post #12
|
|
Self Proclaimed P.I.M.P.
- Posts:
- 178
- Group:
- Members
- Member
- #777
- Joined:
- Jul 11, 2010
- Event Points
- 2
|
Fixed
|
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!" The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
|
| |
|
Checkmate
|
Mar 6 2012, 07:03 AM
Post #13
|
|
Emotion in Verse
- Posts:
- 10,607
- Group:
- Valued Member
- Member
- #455
- Joined:
- Dec 8, 2009
- Event Points
- 273
|
Control needs to be at least 1 above nin
Phantom close spoiler tag at the end.
|
|
|
| |
|
Saranm
|
Mar 6 2012, 10:02 AM
Post #14
|
|
Self Proclaimed P.I.M.P.
- Posts:
- 178
- Group:
- Members
- Member
- #777
- Joined:
- Jul 11, 2010
- Event Points
- 2
|
Fixed the stat, not seeing a bad spoiler tag anywhere... used control F to look for it too...
|
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!" The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
|
| |
|
Checkmate
|
Mar 6 2012, 11:41 AM
Post #15
|
|
Emotion in Verse
- Posts:
- 10,607
- Group:
- Valued Member
- Member
- #455
- Joined:
- Dec 8, 2009
- Event Points
- 273
|
It fixed itself. It's not there anymore.
1/2
|
|
|
| |
|
CorgiBro
|
Mar 11 2012, 01:47 PM
Post #16
|
|
Former Corgi
- Posts:
- 3,256
- Group:
- Valued Member
- Member
- #668
- Joined:
- May 10, 2010
- Event Points
- 76
|
 Your application has been accepted by the moderators and administrators. Thank you for role playing on NSRP and have fun! You can start by applying for a mission, role playing with others, or do a solo training thread. If you have problems with starting a role play, just ask on the chatbox!
This is an automated message.
|
|
| |
| 1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
|