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Topic Started: Feb 28 2012, 11:15 PM (314 Views)
Saranm
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Edited by Saranm, Mar 6 2012, 08:39 AM.
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!"
The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
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Here's the nocode:
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Now, to go through the stuff you have to fix.

You're going to need to update all your Kaguya jutsu, located here: http://s1.zetaboards.com/Naruto_Saigen_RP/topic/906124/1/#new as they were recently updated.

You're going to need to shift your stats a bit, because Kaguya now require at least average taijutsu. You can freely decrease one of your stats to increase, this, though, since it is a system change.

Hisui Ryuu, as an ability is a nogo. You're going to need to remove it, and put hand seals back in on all your jutsu.

Jade Grasp needs to be Suiton only, no 5-jutsu-in-one. Also, the jutsu doesn't actually 'do' anything.

Black Jade Strike needs to be suiton only, removing the other bits. You need seals.

Same thing for the others as well.

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Tenma Ginjiro - Special Jounin - Iwagakure no Sato
Yuuta - C-Ranked - Missing Nin
Fumei, Ishiki - Jounin - Kirigakure no Sato
Hizashi Kourou - Chuunin - Sunagakure no Sato
Senju Genji - Genin - Kumogakure no Sato
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First off, you're a whore, because you personally approved that ability, but whatever.

Jade grasp WAS fixed to only include the single element, and same goes for Black Jade Strike.

Anywho, fixing.

"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!"
The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
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+3 days.
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Tenma Ginjiro - Special Jounin - Iwagakure no Sato
Yuuta - C-Ranked - Missing Nin
Fumei, Ishiki - Jounin - Kirigakure no Sato
Hizashi Kourou - Chuunin - Sunagakure no Sato
Senju Genji - Genin - Kumogakure no Sato
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Fixed my Kaguya jutsu.

Hisui Ryuu was removed totally, replaced the four techniques I had with two stock Kaguya techs, and two custom suiton techniques.
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!"
The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
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Broken bold tag in the suiton section.

The clan requires at least average tai

Suiton • Suiren [Water Element • Sleeping Lotus]<--Seals

Suiton • Ikiren [Water Element • Breath Lotus]<--Seals

[Atsukara Yumiko]
D -|- Sunagakure no Sato -|- -0%- :M - S: 33% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Shoshiki Ai]
D -|- Iwagakure no Sato -|- 100% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Nara Shikatsuko]
C -|- Konohagakure no Sato -|- 100% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Jinrai Ayuma]
A -|- Kumogakure no Sato -|- 13% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
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Fixed.
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!"
The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
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1/2
[Atsukara Yumiko]
D -|- Sunagakure no Sato -|- -0%- :M - S: 33% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Shoshiki Ai]
D -|- Iwagakure no Sato -|- 100% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Nara Shikatsuko]
C -|- Konohagakure no Sato -|- 100% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Jinrai Ayuma]
A -|- Kumogakure no Sato -|- 13% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
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This app is locked till tonight, till the +days wears off.
Characters
Tenma Ginjiro - Special Jounin - Iwagakure no Sato
Yuuta - C-Ranked - Missing Nin
Fumei, Ishiki - Jounin - Kirigakure no Sato
Hizashi Kourou - Chuunin - Sunagakure no Sato
Senju Genji - Genin - Kumogakure no Sato
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Open again, btw
[Atsukara Yumiko]
D -|- Sunagakure no Sato -|- -0%- :M - S: 33% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Shoshiki Ai]
D -|- Iwagakure no Sato -|- 100% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Nara Shikatsuko]
C -|- Konohagakure no Sato -|- 100% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Jinrai Ayuma]
A -|- Kumogakure no Sato -|- 13% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
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You're going to have to switch out the archived Suiton too. Black Clouds is not in the archive anymore and Bullet got updated.
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Fixed
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!"
The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
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Control needs to be at least 1 above nin

Phantom close spoiler tag at the end.
[Atsukara Yumiko]
D -|- Sunagakure no Sato -|- -0%- :M - S: 33% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Shoshiki Ai]
D -|- Iwagakure no Sato -|- 100% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Nara Shikatsuko]
C -|- Konohagakure no Sato -|- 100% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Jinrai Ayuma]
A -|- Kumogakure no Sato -|- 13% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
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Fixed the stat, not seeing a bad spoiler tag anywhere... used control F to look for it too...
"It's so sad!" the reader said to the writer with a frown. "The character in my book just died!"
The author turned to her and burst out into tears, "I know!" he said, "So did mine!"
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It fixed itself. It's not there anymore.

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[Atsukara Yumiko]
D -|- Sunagakure no Sato -|- -0%- :M - S: 33% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Shoshiki Ai]
D -|- Iwagakure no Sato -|- 100% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Nara Shikatsuko]
C -|- Konohagakure no Sato -|- 100% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
[Jinrai Ayuma]
A -|- Kumogakure no Sato -|- 13% :M - S: 100% -|- [Personal Thread]
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