Welcome Guest [Log In] [Register]
Add Reply
  • Pages:
  • 1
  • 3
  • 4
Custom jutsu
Topic Started: Dec 7 2009, 01:36 AM (1,638 Views)
Tenzou
Member Avatar
Special Jonin
[ *  *  *  * ]
Im sure some of you are burning to submit your own thought out ideas for jutsu, so this will be a thread for you to do so but after submitting your idea it must be approved before it can actually be used within RP and once approved then anyone with the necessary capabilities will be free to use it.
Edited by Tenzou, Dec 7 2009, 06:25 PM.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Joninga
Genin
[ *  * ]
Where do we post our custom jutsu
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Tenzou
Member Avatar
Special Jonin
[ *  *  *  * ]
in this thread -_-
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Joninga
Genin
[ *  * ]
Ok thaink ill post mine now I didn't see a sheet for custom justu so soz if I did it wrong
Name:wind blast
Type:offensive,defensive
Rank:B
Element:wind
Distance:1m-20m
Description: the user compresses charka in his hands then transfroms it to wind chakra (but other elements can be used for this justu) the presurrized chakra is released it can be used to block or weaken the effect's of projectiles but it the chakra is made sharp it has emmese cutting power (this jutsu is a bit like the jutsu that the sound village person with hole's in his arms had)
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Tenzou
Member Avatar
Special Jonin
[ *  *  *  * ]
ok first of all well done the sheet you've created is perfect for custom jutsu infact ill probably post it as a template.

second that jutsu isnt strong enough to be a B rank it would be more in the realm of C rank, and also ill edit the description a little if thats alright because at the moment its a little vague. Also this jutsu from the description sounds like its preety tailored to wind so you dont really need the bit about it being possible for use with other elements. and finally i dont think the name is very original maybe you could think up something a bit more creative ?
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Joninga
Genin
[ *  * ]
I'm not that creative but I'm sure you could think of a good name please
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Tenzou
Member Avatar
Special Jonin
[ *  *  *  * ]

Name: Ventalating barrage
Type:offensive,defensive
Rank:C
Element:wind
Distance:1m-20m
Description: the user focusses and compresses wind natured chakra in the palms of their hands, they then perform a tai chi type thrust forward with both palms forcing a wall of air towards they're opponent, due to the wind natured chakra the wind has the abiity to slice at what ever it comes into contact with, although due to its low level of power the cuts will be mainly superficial and not deep or major. this jutsu is best used for distraction before following up with something more powerful. the wall of air does have the capability to repel small projectiles such as senbon or shuriken, but due to theyre larger mass cannot repel the weight of a kunai or larger.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Joninga
Genin
[ *  * ]
Yeah is looks and more well thought out than mine (ps can you pass me in the graduation or can only kim do it because he hasn't been on to pass me)
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Itsuki Akane
Member Avatar
Chunin
[ *  *  * ]
Name: Bladed Strike
Type:offensive, defensive
Rank:C
Element:ALL
Distance:Close Combat
Description: The user will focus chakra to his hand and manipulate it around his hands forming chakra Blades from the hands so while the opponent only see's you fist there is chakra emitting from the hand in the shape of small blades that tear flesh. whilst this could be used as a offensive attack it could also be used as a defensive as the user can manipulation the chakra to form a layer of chakra used to help block attacks so minimul amount of damage is caused.
Limits: Must be wearing Charka Gloves.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Tenzou
Member Avatar
Special Jonin
[ *  *  *  * ]
it seems this is much better suited as a design for a custom weapon rather than a custon jutsu, so ill make a thread for that.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Itsuki Akane
Member Avatar
Chunin
[ *  *  * ]
Yeah i was thinking more of a weapon type but as fists like wolverine but with chakra?
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Nara Kaiden
Member Avatar
Special Jonin
[ *  *  *  * ]
Name: Razor Wind Clone
Type:offensive,defensive
Rank: B
Element:wind
Distance: 0M
Description: The user creates a wind clone by combining wind natured chakra with the basic clone jutsu technique. When the clone makes contact with the enemy (no matter if the enemy initiated the contact or you had) the contact will result in being sliced by the thousands of tiny razor shape wind particles the clone is composed of.

(although since the blades are so small the cuts will only be shallow)
Edited by Nara Kaiden, Jan 19 2010, 02:30 AM.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Nara Kaiden
Member Avatar
Special Jonin
[ *  *  *  * ]
Name: Shadow Mummy
Type:offensive,defensive
Rank:A
Element: Shadow(Its an element on NR but don't know if it is here)
Distance: 30M(More or less depending on how much chakra you have)
Description: Your shadow extends away from you then the wrappings from around your body fly out and form a human shaped figure which the shadow then fills. The shadow mummy that was craeted does whatever is thought by the user so to use it in a fight requires a quick mind and a high intellect.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
RaikiriNara
Member Avatar
Genin Hatake Kisai
[ *  *  *  *  *  *  * ]
wow nice !!
shadow mummy ... ha and than u could youse it like gaaras desert coffin :O
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Tenzou
Member Avatar
Special Jonin
[ *  *  *  * ]
the shadow mummy jutsu would make a nice addition to the nara arsenal and on that condition its approved but it can be used by no one other than naras as they are the only shadow manipulators on here :)

Edit: name, rank and description edited on wind clone. Approved
Edited by Tenzou, Dec 11 2009, 10:46 PM.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Nara Kaiden
Member Avatar
Special Jonin
[ *  *  *  * ]
Thats not how I had planned to use the Razor Wind Clone. I didn't want it to be an explosion type attack which you made it into to. I had wanted it to be a clone that basically acts as one big one-time use weapn. The clone is made up of many miniscule winds that are being contained within the clone and once the opponent makes contact with the clone it gets hit by all those miniscule winds. Sorry if I hadn't made this clear before. Also since it doesn't risk injury to the user or allies with an explsion type attack and it would be difficult for the average ninja to keep the wind contained with the clone from creating an explosion thats why I had made it into an A rank jutsu.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Itsuki Akane
Member Avatar
Chunin
[ *  *  * ]
Name: Vapour Technique
Type: Supplementary
Rank: B
Element: Water
Distance: Low-Range(0m-5m), Mid-Range(5m-10m)
Description: The user peforms the needed hand seals then by maintaining the Horse seal the user can draw vapour from the air to create a small water source used for following attacks that need a water source. The amount of water produced varies on how much chakra is used and the level of the ninja.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Tenzou
Member Avatar
Special Jonin
[ *  *  *  * ]
i cant say to be honest i understand what your describing, ill edit the description and you can tell me if its any closer to what you meant

water vapour technique seems a little uneeded tbh since there are already jutsu for a suiton user to produce theyre own water source. e.g exploding water shockwave.
Edited by Tenzou, Dec 13 2009, 01:05 AM.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Dacian
Member Avatar
The Lonely Wanderer
[ * ]
Sounds like Kisame's Baku Suishouha, which could kinda have the same purpose. Suigetsu's hydration technique has a similar purpose, too.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
Itsuki Akane
Member Avatar
Chunin
[ *  *  * ]
Name: Vapour Senbon Technique
Type: Offensive
Rank: C/B
Element: Water
Distance: Mid-Range(5m-10m), Long Range(10m-20m)
Description: The user peforms the needed hand signs then creates a shower of water needles created from the water vapour in the air. due to the attack coming from the air the attack can come from any direction as there is water vapour in the air.
Offline Profile Quote Post Goto Top
 
1 user reading this topic (1 Guest and 0 Anonymous)
ZetaBoards - Free Forum Hosting
Create a free forum in seconds.
Learn More · Sign-up Now
Go to Next Page
« Previous Topic · Custom Jutsu · Next Topic »
Add Reply
  • Pages:
  • 1
  • 3
  • 4

PRINT theme created by tiptopolive of InkDropStyles