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| Topic Started: Nov 3 2008, 06:17 AM (136 Views) | |
| Ninjub | Nov 3 2008, 06:17 AM Post #1 |
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Name: Ninjub Age: 12 Height: 5'3 foot Weight: 56 Kg Gender: Boy Birth Country: Fire Village: Leaf Rank: Academy Student History: Aguri is a average boy with one dream, to become a ninja...And have a limited supply of bananas. He has a brother and sister and they have been ninjas for 4 years now.He has a poor famil with his parents owning a ramen shop .Ever since Ninub was 6 he a wantd to become a ninja but was pulled back because of his eyes. Parents unable to afford glasses, Ninjub tried to train himslef by trying to surving ramen blind foled but just spilt it all over the customers. After not alot of succes, Ninjub Gave up. His parents feeling sad for him they ask him if he still wanted to go to ninja school. Ninjub Accepted with joy, even though his eyes weren't the best he accepted the fact he might go blind oneday. Ninjub is now studing with everyday getting harder for him. Still working at his Dads ramen joint earning his right to become a Ninja. Appearance: White hair, short with a jumper. Primary Weapon: Rusty Katana, Secondary Weapon: Kunai Bloodlimit: none Ninjutsu Techniques: replacement jutsu, shadow clone jutsu, Taijutsu Techniques: Genjutsu Techniques: dispellment of genjutsu Element Affliction: Fire PLz? Edited by Ninjub, Nov 16 2008, 03:47 PM.
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| Marcell | Nov 3 2008, 05:55 PM Post #2 |
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Ok, this will most likely sound very mean, but here goes. I could not finish reading your history because of the laughter that ensued. How could you have a family sword, if your family was nothing but simple farmers. If they were some sort of swordsmen, good enough as to have a family sword, they would of easily been able to defeat a horde of ninja. Now, if these were more powerful ninja, more organized, such as a gang, you'd think they'd pick a better target, than some random farmers. Also, how could you be monk-like if you lived on a farm? If anything you'd be more humble, and react surprised whenever any conflict arose. Also you did not explain at all Aguri could leave a battle unscathed, however be missing his left eye. Did the man put all of his chakra into his left eye, making it some sort of bomb, ripping it out of its socket and throwing it at the enemy causing instantly to die? AAAALSO, how could a man randomly walk into a FARM, I'm assuming we're speaking of a barn. A barn, and save a kids life, and know what the ninja's intent was? More alsos: I forced myself to read the entire history. I'm assuming by "saving ninjub" you mean the ninja killed all of the assailents, or he grabbed you and ran away with you. If option 1 happened: The man who gave you the mark is dead. wtfbbq If option 2 happened: Then are you saying that you're some sort of super ninja which was prophecied to become the hokage? With the CURSE MARKS the man gave you, who supposably knew who you were despite the fact you were a loner as you claimed? I'm sorry but you're going to have to perform some miracle to fix this >_< Edited by Marcell, Nov 3 2008, 05:56 PM.
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| Tachimochi Yukusue | Nov 4 2008, 01:10 PM Post #3 |
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wow is all i can say about this |
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| Dran | Nov 6 2008, 05:16 PM Post #4 |
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I lul'ed |
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| Ninjub | Nov 18 2008, 03:26 AM Post #5 |
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OK, i have change it is anyone going to look at it even? plz |
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