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TheAmericanDream
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Hi, I'm the Americandream you can find most of my artwork either here:
http://theamericandream.deviantart.com or http://clintonwhiteartwork.blogspot.com

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Just some random artwork and sketches not on my deviant art, enjoy.
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I wanted to go down a trip to memory lane with my original character, Dobuita Mori (originally mispelled and awful Doubita Makihara)
I've recently done a lot more with her lately making a weight gain comic for her:
But Let's take a look at some of the art I made of her in the past, starting with the horrifying art of 2006!

2006-2007 (Sophmore-Junior year of college) It starts...

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Back then she was just purple haired "Baske Girl"
because I was such a fanboy of the manga Slam Dunk I had to create a sporty japanese basketball chick.
(baske being the abbreviated pronunciation of basketball in Japanese.
I still kinda miss these intro to watercolors style I had going here back in the day. Memories.

2007-2008 (senior year of college) She gets a name
You can read an UTTERLY embarrassing character profile here: http://theamericandream.deviantart.com/art/Doubita-Makihara-Super-Profile-72481955

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Oh man, I imagined her fat once, what a day, I've come so far now.
I love the way she looks actually still, I remember this was once lolsy and too fat for me back then.
Now I'm like, can't wait to draw her that fat *a honka honka* It took me 3 years to finally do it though! I think Dobuita is much better off for it though.


Edited by TheAmericanDream, Oct 25 2011, 08:33 AM.
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2009-2011 The post college years to She Had It Coming

Now is the more recent artwork, what do you think of Dobuita now that she's come this far?

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Then came the idea to make a weight gain comic about Dobuita.
I had been hiding the urge to do it for years, but I felt it was something my audience also wanted to see and could make for some fun story ideas.
So here it is. The images below are some thumbnails for cover Ideas I had for Dobuita's Weight Gain comic "She Had It Coming"
In the end I didn't go with any of these poses, but I still like a few of them.

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Character Profile Update
Dobuita Mori
Ethnicity: Japanese American
Age: in this pic 21
Height: 5'4"
Weight: 201lbs (fluctuates wildly)

Likes: Playing and Watching Basketball, Cute Guys, Barbeque, Late night snacking
Dislikes: Sore losers, other hot chicks, running

Once an ace rookie on her college's winning basketball team, Dobuita's life changed after a sports injury that left her incapable of playing for a long period of time. During this period of time Dobuita gained a massive amount of weight and a taste for junk food all around poor diet habits.

Dobuita was focused on her sport and training herself to maintain a good physique, she used to belittle those who were out of shape or overweight like her little sister Puku whom she likes to tease. With some help from her former teammates Dobuita managed to lose quite a bit of weight and now enjoys a life of partying, good meals and helping the team in anyway she can from the sidelines. Even as a bbw she retains her confident,haughty and flirtatious personality.


Now for something different here's a break down of my process for making a comic page:

I start every comic by writing the script and making tiny thumbnails for each page layout.
I think its a good idea that your panels are good clear layouts at the tiniest size.
Then I move onto the final pencil comic pages which I drew with blue pencil so its not picked up over the inks when the art is scanned.
I chose to draw the comic traditionally this time around on 11x17 bristol paper.



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please feel free to comment your thoughts. Do any of you have OC's you want to make timelines of? I'd enjoy seeing them. I'll post more concept art soon.

(for info on getting the comic for yourself go here: http://theamericandream.deviantart.com/journal/42627701/)
Edited by TheAmericanDream, Oct 25 2011, 06:47 PM.
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Really cool seeing the step by step on the comic. Your initial roughs are actually really close to the finished product.

Did you rough it out on smaller thumbnails before this or was this just really close to your script?
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So how exactly are we going to prevent what happened last time from happening again? I'm sorry if I'm not too keen on the plan.
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So do you have that Commander Mars pic? If you do, could you post it?
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KawaiiDebu: Ah, yea I briefly mention in the paragraph before the pencils that I did have a thumbnail before this. I don't think I ever scanned those in, but it was all on two sheets of 9x12 paper. The first chapter of "She Had It Coming" the Dobuita comic is 17 pages whose layouts where based off the 20 some thumbnail sketches I went through till I had the 17 I ended up going with. This includes a page that was cut entirely, and a few pages I did do overs for since I didn't like the layout. I would change the bubble placement or posing slightly on the fly. I'll post some thumbnails later if I can find em. (I normally don't treat those as sacred as sketches themselves)
Actually KD, the thumbnails posted above for the Dobuita cover is around the size/roughness I thumbnail everything think of comic pages the size of half a bookmark.


Ty, What are you not keen on? MuffinTalk? or the way I wrote or sold my comic? I think both things are fine the way they are now, and with proper management shouldn't be something to worry over.

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It stinks being requested old drawings, I guess I should take it as a sign I should draw this character again.
Edited by TheAmericanDream, Oct 25 2011, 06:48 PM.
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My concern was that for like 9 months the site was dead, but obviously it's hopefully back the way it was. I just want to make sure that we keep things active is what I mean. I think that's the problem of what happened before, almost nobody was active as the site needed to be. But like I said hopefully this wont be an issue.
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Okay, noted. There are many reasons for the old sites death, and it wasn't no one was drawing, we just weren't sharing. I've already shared a bunch of stuff I have never posted before, as well as Grim-Kun. We can only hope right now Ty.

Also I deleted the post quoting since you needn't quote posts directly above you in a forum, we know you're replying to me.
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Thanks! She's still cute! I just wanted her because I could not find her! I looked everywhere!
Edited by TheAmericanDream, Oct 25 2011, 10:56 PM.
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again same page replies don't require quoting, especially, quoting a large image on the same page.
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I was able to save a few of your pics too


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Oct 26 2011, 12:13 AM
I was able to save a few of your pics too
Same as before

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I am streaming right now. http://www.livestream.com/theamericandream check it out.
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I either hadn't seen that Bulma pic or its been long enough for me to forget it. Definitely like the boobs on that one.
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That's great its from like 2008 man.

Also let me say this now, Debulover. Let me be the one to post art in my thread, a lot of my stuff is on deviantart.com anyway. I plan on reposting all the work requested here myself.
Edited by TheAmericanDream, Oct 26 2011, 05:23 AM.
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Your OC makes me think of Ayane when colored and Hazmat when not.
And YES, FOR THE LOVE OF GOD, DO ANOTHER MARS!!!
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Good taste having the two best Jet set girls in your sig Pariah. I swear no one talks about cube and mew(Rhyth in japan)
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So what have you been up to after you blew this site all to hell, white?
Flak, don't take this the wrong way but I got a sausage over here with your name on it.
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I don't think I have ever saw Jorge's rendition of Dobuita. That's just awesome in itself.
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Moonvamp: Jorge drew that in a trade with me back in 2008 I believe. It's on his DA still.

Edited by TheAmericanDream, Oct 26 2011, 07:16 PM.
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So is that pretty much everything you submitted back in 06'?
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no. This is just a character chart showing Dobuita's evolution.
Edited by TheAmericanDream, Oct 27 2011, 02:45 AM.
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Oct 26 2011, 03:49 PM
Good taste having the two best Jet set girls in your sig Pariah. I swear no one talks about cube and mew(Rhyth in japan)
Thank you, and apparently that pic was the secret password to get Shydude to do his thing for me.
I really hope my cousin didn't sell/lose his copy, I've been wanting to play it and Timesplitters 2 for the longest.
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Shydude do his thing? Did he draw Jet Set Radio girls?

My inspiration for my character Pitstop Puddin' was the clothing styles used for that game.
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Oct 26 2011, 06:56 PM
Moonvamp: Jorge drew that in a trade with me back in 2008 I believe. It's on his DA still.

Really? I can't believe that this is the very first time I've ever noticed it. :o
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http://kaigetsudo.deviantart.com/gallery/?q=doubita#/d1k2ln7 yup right here. I remember at the time he didn't think I liked it that much (in comparison to his enthusiasm for my end of the trade) but I still hold a very soft spot for it. It brings back nostalgic memories, and at the time it was seriously the best drawing of Dobuita there was. Since I've been drawing her a lot more and putting Dobuita into my audiences memories seeing this pic again seems brand new.
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I think I will take up your HxH request now!

Okay I found a Chimera Ant girl named Hina (which would look awesome as an SSBBW)
http://hunterxhunter.wikia.com/wiki/Hina

Here's the kicker though:
As an Exorcist , Hina can remove nen-imposed abilities ultimately being stored in her belly causing it to inflate, giving her an appearance similar to that of a pregnant woman. The stronger the ability, the larger the inflation. It is also mentioned that she can not move much after she uses this ability.

YES! X3333333

Here comes the pics that I could find
http://www.mangareader.net/207-14203-4/hunter-x-hunter/chapter-194.html
http://www.mangareader.net/207-14270-3/hunter-x-hunter/chapter-261.html
http://www.mangareader.net/207-14270-4/hunter-x-hunter/chapter-261.html


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Blond haired girl in here is Hina
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Ha Ha i was already asked to draw her before. I've definitely considered it, she is already sort of an expansion character in the canon of the story. I'll see what I can do.

Also your second image isn't working, try finding another link for it and re-editing the post.

Also I'm thinking revisiting April O'Neil, consider that a heads up. http://theamericandream.deviantart.com/art/Ninja-Pizza-Strikes-Again-193139968
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You mean this one?
http://www.zerochan.net/825361
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Ah yes thanks. That's adequate Hina reference anyway.
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I'm streaming and also taking commissions for those interested and with dispensable cash for such a hobby: http://theamericandream.deviantart.com/journal/STREAMING-NOW-and-get-COMMISSIONS-265615794
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Oct 27 2011, 07:32 AM
Shydude do his thing? Did he draw Jet Set Radio girls?
Yep.
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DAYUUuum. that's sweet man. I never saw that in his gallery. I need to draw some chubby skater girls of my own. delicious Mew, she was my main in JSR for dreamcast.

also here is the April O'Neil, enjoy.

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I can't remember that far but but I'm pretty sure the horror of my disc becoming broken blew everything beforehand to smithereens....
Oh and it was a thread on Inflate-Chan about who needs more expansion and I was neck deep in nostalgia sadness that everything I like is either dead or the company behind it is refusing to give out any actual info.
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