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Issue 5
Topic Started: Apr 30 2009, 02:28 AM (239 Views)
TeraHammer
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What I liked: review dragonball z evolution
What I didnt like: The corny humor (ninjas and interview by yourself)

Suggestion: more writers :)
Come on peeps, give Mhua some stuff to work with :P

Edited by TeraHammer, Apr 30 2009, 02:29 AM.
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Apr 30 2009, 02:28 AM
What I liked: review dragonball z evolution
What I didnt like: The corny humor (ninjas and interview by yourself)

Suggestion: more writers :)
Come on peeps, give Mhua some stuff to work with :P

What are we supposed to do?
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tiana
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I gave him cool cooking recipes (and no, nothing you would expect for, but that sort that make you REALLY laugh) ... but he ignored them so far :(
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hey mhuahaha here is my doing of the newspage.... critque it as u like.. :-p


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Attachments: LANEWS.pdf (1.1 MB)
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"GA ZOINKS!!! SCOOBIE DOOBIE DOO!!!" :-D
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:wub: :wub: :wub:

I WANT! :D
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Hehehe, everything I do is for a reason you know. The recipes you sent me Tiana.....I forgot about them and some of them are too big.

The ninjas well, you'll just have to wait and see. ;)
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tiana
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The wine one is not too big ... and you can use a smaller font :P
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I can force murderus to give me hand. Like what he has done with the looks.
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You twist his arm, and I will tickle him, okay? He won't resist for too long like that and will give in soon :P
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I wasn't banned, I was jailed.
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Apr 30 2009, 12:42 PM
hey mhuahaha here is my doing of the newspage.... critque it as u like.. :-p


That looks nice, however newspapers usually use a serif for the body text and a sans serif for the headlines. Personal preference i would of also chose a gothic font for the newspaper name something like this

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Apr 30 2009, 04:25 PM
I wasn't banned, I was jailed.
I read that and lol'ed :P
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Okay... Murderus TOO BIG lol. i couldnt read it. I finally read the 5th. Sorry i havent read one sicne the 1st due to my gf being super paranoid about me adding anything even a small file to her laptop. But this cant hurt. What i laughed at :the horoscope. What i found interesting: the DBZ review. What i found could use work: not too much, would help if more people helped and had ideas. I would like to help but im not sure of any way i could. I think everyone is better at this then me. ALthough i majored in the writing arts in middleschool. long time ago...
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Apr 30 2009, 12:42 PM
hey mhuahaha here is my doing of the newspage.... critque it as u like.. :-p


wow, murderus! i'm impressed...it looks very professional. did you work on a school newspaper or something?
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Apr 30 2009, 12:42 PM
hey mhuahaha here is my doing of the newspage.... critque it as u like.. :-p


wow, murderus! i'm impressed...it looks very professional. did you work on a school newspaper or something?
If you read the interview I had with him, you'll find out he actually is part of his university newspaper. ;)
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Wow. I only just realised LA was back up, and so this is the first issue i've read. And i really liked it. Definitely up for more authors than one though. Looking at Murderus' design, I get the impression that if you were planning on printing it, it would be pretty much perfect. But onscreen, the font is a bit big. Maybe it's worth doing two versions of each issue - one printable, one on-screen?

In terms of ideas, would it be worth having a "guest writer slot" in each issue, where the best article sent to Mhuahaha would get posted, and if people thought it was good enough, they would get a permanent post?
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May 2 2009, 08:33 AM
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Apr 30 2009, 12:42 PM
hey mhuahaha here is my doing of the newspage.... critque it as u like.. :-p


wow, murderus! i'm impressed...it looks very professional. did you work on a school newspaper or something?
If you read the interview I had with him, you'll find out he actually is part of his university newspaper. ;)
yes...well you tend to miss things when you're reading the newspaper and drinking screwdrivers at the same time. :)
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I am totally up for new writers. But I had no one apply for the job besides freak and he was gone on vacation so I had to do this issue by myself.

And I also asked people to write me stuff they want posted, none of those either.

Just check the discussion board and you'll see.
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thnx for the good words guys. Yea I do understand the font is big, this was due to space. I made this in tabloid size (newspaper size 17x11 ish) and with not as many stories as an actually newspaper so i made space for what I had.

@hasten- yea a more gothix look would be good ill mess around with that.
@corkie- thank you! ;-D yea I do design a paper at my UNI that does get printed so thats what im used too doing :-P
@ellipses- thanx man :-D ive been doing stuff like this for so long its almost like cutting cheese ;-D
@deathwish- if it is to big there is a negative magnifying lens u can zoom out and not made it so large :-P
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Murderus i know :P. I was just too lazy to do so. But I wouldnt mind helping the newspaper, But i dont know how reliable i could be and what exactly i would write about.
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