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Readers comments; Who dares?
Topic Started: Apr 3 2009, 10:29 PM (149 Views)
Mhuahaha	Apr 3 2009, 10:29 PM Post #1
Herder Posts: 2,712 Group: Forum Admins Member #1 Joined: Nov 21, 2008	As any good newspaper, you have to have a section where the readers can comment on what was in the news last week, hasn't been in the news or you can comment on what a previous reader said. I give to you, with great satisfaction and delight, the readers comments section in our next issue! If you've got anything to say, just pm or mail me a letter and it might get posted!
Don't ask.... I AM MERELY A FORUM ADMIN. I HAVE NO IN-GAME POWERS.


Xclusive	Apr 9 2009, 04:50 PM Post #2
Moneylender Posts: 140 Group: Members Member #137 Joined: Feb 12, 2009	I've read the second part, and I enjoyed it very much, it has more variation then the first letter which really makes it better to read. I think the lay-out has some small probs, but that might also be my version of word . I think there is one point for criticism, I would really suggest to use LESS names in the first part of the papers, the first one allready made me read some parts twice to keep it good readable, but the 2nd edition nearly spammed me with names, which made it less clear, and makes it harder to read, give us some space to breath while reading :). A better option is : - 1st clan - 2nd clan - 3rd clan, so we can see clearly who are in the list, and what is the order of them. Also try not to talk about two clans at one moment (and talk about seperate things), cause that makes it hard for me (Maybe cause my English isn't thát great). Another thing I would like to see : "Quotes of the Week" (Like a top 5 maybe) Summary : - I liked the varation and I enjoyed both the diagram and interview - Less names could make the reading easier, and its uhmm. uhm.. to short? xD



Beamygrunt	Apr 14 2009, 10:01 PM Post #3
Famer Posts: 112 Group: Game Helpers Member #18 Joined: Nov 27, 2008	Good paper, my only problem is with spelling/grammar. I get so annoyed I can't be bothered to read it all.



Burn Jack	Apr 14 2009, 10:54 PM Post #4
Steward Posts: 137 Group: Members Member #36 Joined: Nov 28, 2008	I agree with Beamy. I think you need an editor. Also, it seems very clan-centric at the moment. Edited by Burn Jack, Apr 14 2009, 10:56 PM.



Zink	Apr 15 2009, 02:10 AM Post #5
Drawer Posts: 1,959 Group: Members Member #64 Joined: Dec 4, 2008	My favorite part is the Interview at the end...It's what I usually actually find myself reading completly.



izz-A	Apr 15 2009, 05:13 AM Post #6
Thatcher Posts: 138 Group: Members Member #45 Joined: Nov 30, 2008	yeah... the last part is my favourite.



Mhuahaha	Apr 15 2009, 04:08 PM Post #7
Herder Posts: 2,712 Group: Forum Admins Member #1 Joined: Nov 21, 2008	I still need to write the next issue. And not to sound cocky, but I believe most spelling errors are not made by me. And I am not editing quotes from other people. Seeing as I am planning on writing this one without any quotes, please expect the highest standard of British English writing I can provide. And I really want to have the readers send in letters to put into the news. That is what this thread was actually about. Another small comment, LA is clan oriented, hence why the news is as such as well.
Don't ask.... I AM MERELY A FORUM ADMIN. I HAVE NO IN-GAME POWERS.


TeraHammer	Apr 15 2009, 07:49 PM Post #8
Forum Darling Posts: 1,611 Group: Global Moderators Member #3 Joined: Nov 21, 2008	Can anyone draw a comic maybe? I tried but I suck
Conquering the Karmina System as Exar Kun this round


zelda	Apr 15 2009, 07:55 PM Post #9
Florist Posts: 771 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: Nov 26, 2008	Well i'm the unofficial grammar editor
LA wont die with yosh running it.


Beamygrunt	Apr 15 2009, 11:20 PM Post #10
Famer Posts: 112 Group: Game Helpers Member #18 Joined: Nov 27, 2008	TeraHammer Apr 15 2009, 07:49 PM Can anyone draw a comic maybe? I tried but I suck haha, Tera, your cartoons rock



zelda	Apr 15 2009, 11:21 PM Post #11
Florist Posts: 771 Group: Members Member #9 Joined: Nov 26, 2008	That comic was better than expected. I'm really starting to enjoy these papers, adds a bit more meaning to the game
LA wont die with yosh running it.


Murderus	Apr 16 2009, 10:39 AM Post #12
Tanner Posts: 1,132 Group: News crew Member #2 Joined: Nov 21, 2008	lol i like the interviews from players :-D hehe
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Readers comments; Who dares?

Topic Started: Apr 3 2009, 10:29 PM (149 Views)

Mhuahaha

Apr 3 2009, 10:29 PM Post #1

Herder

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As any good newspaper, you have to have a section where the readers can comment on what was in the news last week, hasn't been in the news or you can comment on what a previous reader said.

I give to you, with great satisfaction and delight, the readers comments section in our next issue! If you've got anything to say, just pm or mail me a letter and it might get posted!

Don't ask....

I AM MERELY A FORUM ADMIN. I HAVE NO IN-GAME POWERS.

Xclusive

Apr 9 2009, 04:50 PM Post #2

Moneylender

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Member: #137
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I've read the second part, and I enjoyed it very much, it has more variation then the first letter which really makes it better to read. I think the lay-out has some small probs, but that might also be my version of word

.

I think there is one point for criticism, I would really suggest to use LESS names in the first part of the papers, the first one allready made me read some parts twice to keep it good readable, but the 2nd edition nearly spammed me with names, which made it less clear, and makes it harder to read, give us some space to breath while reading :).
A better option is :
- 1st clan
- 2nd clan
- 3rd clan, so we can see clearly who are in the list, and what is the order of them. Also try not to talk about two clans at one moment (and talk about seperate things), cause that makes it hard for me (Maybe cause my English isn't thát great).

Another thing I would like to see : "Quotes of the Week" (Like a top 5 maybe)

Summary :
- I liked the varation and I enjoyed both the diagram and interview
- Less names could make the reading easier, and its uhmm. uhm.. to short? xD ^_^

Beamygrunt

Apr 14 2009, 10:01 PM Post #3

Famer

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Good paper, my only problem is with spelling/grammar. I get so annoyed I can't be bothered to read it all.

Burn Jack

Apr 14 2009, 10:54 PM Post #4

Steward

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I agree with Beamy. I think you need an editor. ^_^

Also, it seems very clan-centric at the moment.

Edited by Burn Jack, Apr 14 2009, 10:56 PM.

Zink

Apr 15 2009, 02:10 AM Post #5

Drawer

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My favorite part is the Interview at the end...It's what I usually actually find myself reading completly.

izz-A

Apr 15 2009, 05:13 AM Post #6

Thatcher

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yeah... the last part is my favourite.

Mhuahaha

Apr 15 2009, 04:08 PM Post #7

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I still need to write the next issue. And not to sound cocky, but I believe most spelling errors are not made by me. And I am not editing quotes from other people. Seeing as I am planning on writing this one without any quotes, please expect the highest standard of British English writing I can provide.

And I really want to have the readers send in letters to put into the news. That is what this thread was actually about.

Another small comment, LA is clan oriented, hence why the news is as such as well.

Don't ask....

I AM MERELY A FORUM ADMIN. I HAVE NO IN-GAME POWERS.