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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 12 2016, 12:31 PM (129 Views) | |
| naerrin | Jun 12 2016, 12:31 PM Post #1 |
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Hey, so I've made a start on a possible theatrical show, to be presented sometime in the fall, say maybe October or November. And yet I'd like candid opinions, Leafs, on whether this is a) something you would be interested in performing in, if you have the time, and b) if not, then is it something you would like to see, as an audience member? I don't want to waste time on it (especially since it's taking time from East of Atalantë and other things). So here's the beginning, in a very rough, unpolished form (especially the opening stanza). It will be spoken with emotes by a narrator, and accompanied by music, of course.
Then there will be a lament in the woods (Old Forest?) by Yavanna as she puts things to sleep, then Oromë will ride up on Nahar and tell her of the evil things he's been hunting. Then a scene in Valinor, with Yavanna and Oromë before Manwë and Varda and others of the Valar. Then maybe Varda telling of her plan to embellish the stars with dews from Telperion? And then Yavanna returning home to Aulë and finding that he's made the Dwarf fathers, then Aulë before Iluvatar, he returns to Yavanna, and her with Iluvatar ending with the Shepherds of the Trees... I'm not sure how far to take it, lol, Edited by naerrin, Jun 12 2016, 12:31 PM.
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| Macalaure | Jun 13 2016, 12:53 PM Post #2 |
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Your writing has just the right touch for an early Tolkien tale. It's obvious you have spent some time on this already. I am willing to help in any way I can. I would be an appreciative audience as well. Who else would donate their time to this project? |
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