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| Exactly [R]; Hopscotch through time. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 4 2010, 01:30 AM (616 Views) | |
| AzureHorizon | Jan 4 2010, 01:30 AM Post #1 |
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Kish Fic Laureate
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inspired by the song Exactly, by Ghost, a UK rapper Exactly Tongues twirl... dance Eyes locked Inebriation What is lust without love? Could still picture him now all torment and struggle and pain couldn't do shit, didn't really feel like doing much more He dragged himself down he made me the catalyst to his endless struggle in those tar pits Evidence of any of this? None. Buried in the ground, grave laid on top Flowers of disgust and self-hatred ringed it like a wreath no it's not Christmas it's a sepulcher. Gotta get him outta my head Exactly. --- Fuck he's back again See that can happen when you lose your focus; feelin' all trapped and claustrophobic ... Exactly. I can see truth in the eyes of a liar We were lovers I know you remember Deny it all you want Keep lying to yourself. But then, as if everything in time occurred all at once made into a stew of shit and brine and sorrow Somehow made some sort of truth-telling potion Now you realize you're a fag? Come to terms with it, and now you want me back? Should I lay down the red carpet? Kiss your holy feet Bend over when you want me to? Work for it, you piece of shit. ---- So you love me and I love you again A nice kitschy little present gift-wrapped and mailed to ourselves A gift not bought by money or obligation or familial duty no... it's a gift only born from realization That stuff has lingered so long That stuff we can now call love Is this supposed to be perfect? There's no such thing as perfect. And I know there's gotta be something waiting in-between the cracks With you it's not a casual trip down river rapids It's a fucking storm and I gotta hope I don't crash I did always like danger. Exactly. |
| erica | Jan 4 2010, 01:34 AM Post #2 |
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That was intense. Very intense. Very, very intense. ...But I still loved it. Great job. |
| Popey | Jan 4 2010, 02:02 AM Post #3 |
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Nothing ever stays. Everything dies eventually.
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Azzy strikes again! Very amazing my friend but of course your poetry always is. |
| WhiskeyTangoFoxtrot | Jan 4 2010, 05:06 AM Post #4 |
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The Whore of Babylon
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THIS is exactly why you must always keep writing. Because we get gems like....
Just... damn. Slammed me in the guts with the Kish reconciliation. But beautiful and honest, nonetheless. |
| 3395233954 | Jan 4 2010, 10:07 AM Post #5 |
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Zach/8675309
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:sigh: I wish i had a knack for writing anything like you can write poetry. It was such an intense poem. Loved it. |
| appleridge | Jan 4 2010, 10:25 AM Post #6 |
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Amazing!!!! |
| smuchshypush | Jan 4 2010, 11:47 AM Post #7 |
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Woot! I knew you couldn't stop writing Kish :D Well done Azzy! |
| appleridge | Jan 4 2010, 11:49 AM Post #8 |
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Awesomeness |
| rhombus | Jan 4 2010, 03:06 PM Post #9 |
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Let us frankly discuss the mad hot sex we're about to have.
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Had to take a break from work to read this. And then read it again. I actually shooed some students away and am making them wait right this very instant for help. Anyway, my point is, 1) YAY! and 2) Absolutely heartwrenchingly gorgeous. That whole part Whiskey quoted? Yeah. My favorite. Got me in my gut. Just... fantastic. Okay, the students are getting twitchy. Better attend to them. Don't they understand that I'm busy with the poetry right now??? Have they no sense of decency??? |
| AzureHorizon | Jan 4 2010, 04:37 PM Post #10 |
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Kish Fic Laureate
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you guys misinterpret me: I'm still writing, just... not really much for Kishmet anymore this is probably the last I'm gonna write until I get an idea spark, and even then meh |
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