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| My Defenses Are Down (Kish poem II); Oliver's response. | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 30 2009, 07:11 PM (538 Views) | |
| AzureHorizon | Dec 1 2009, 05:32 PM Post #11 |
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Kish Fic Laureate
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I'm willing to write a poem for whatever scene you want, either from the show or from the fics around here, by the way. I'm out of ideas on my end, for now. |
| b32guy | Dec 2 2009, 08:53 PM Post #12 |
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I love it long and wavy!
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Just super. Nothing else to say. Why don't you write a poem (or letter) to Amelia's partner (preDorian). I always wondered what Amelia said to her, assuming of course that she actually had a partner. |
| AzureHorizon | Dec 2 2009, 09:46 PM Post #13 |
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Kish Fic Laureate
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Sounds like an intriguing idea. Granted, I don't know Amelia's character well enough, but it could be... a challenge. |
| ForKyleandOliver | Dec 6 2009, 04:13 PM Post #14 |
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This was really good. I loved the imagery and the pain. Very affecting. Things like this make me have more sympathy for Oliver than I did when he was continually hurting Kyle and using Layla to hide. But this is the pain that Oliver was living in during even that time recently on our screens. It actually reminds me of a one shot that I want to do for Kish. It's similar to what I wanted to do from Oliver's pov with some Kyle thrown in of course. Edited by ForKyleandOliver, Dec 6 2009, 04:15 PM.
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| jw723 | Jan 3 2010, 09:18 PM Post #15 |
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I have to agree with this comment. Your poem captured so powerfully Oliver's inner pain and struggle. This part in particular was especially compelling:
It was a great read! As you can see, I am slowly trying to reduce my comments in response to things I read. Have I succeeded? I think I may have to stop for now... but the next time that I come back, I will read the rest! One last thing: your work is amazing and I just wanted to say that I appreciate that you're sharing it with us! |
| lasvegastony | Jan 4 2010, 12:49 AM Post #16 |
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I wanted to tell you so much that I loved you But the words were poison on my tongue They singed and burned and they shouldn't have, they should have been sweet They should have been fruit juice instead of molasses Every touch upon your skin Every taste that I didn't mind It all... was worth it Until... AH: you've made me cry . . . again. This is beautiful work. |
| AzureHorizon | Jan 4 2010, 01:03 AM Post #17 |
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Kish Fic Laureate
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oh Tony, don't tell me you cry during your classes! LOL |
| lasvegastony | Jan 4 2010, 01:14 AM Post #18 |
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Nah, I haven't done that yet. But when I start teaching a seminar on your poetry, I probably will. :wink: |
| AzureHorizon | Jan 4 2010, 01:19 AM Post #19 |
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Kish Fic Laureate
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hah, don't bestow upon me such praise, it's too much |
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