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| Are you me? Am I you?; Oliver meets Scott & Kyle meets Brett | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 19 2009, 05:28 PM (698 Views) | |
| addicted2Kish | Nov 19 2009, 05:28 PM Post #1 |
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8.20.10<3
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It was the first day of his senior year at Llanview University when the captain of the football team was Notified by mail that he’d be getting a new room mate. “Dear Mr. Fish, We are writing you to inform you that you will be getting a new room mate for this term. Please call 332-8081 for more information.” Brett Claywell, RA advisor Oliver put down the letter and dialed the number. “Brett Claywell.” “Hey Brett, my name’s Oliver Fish, I’m in room 405B. I received a letter from you that I would be getting a new room mate. I was just calling to follow up.” “Hey Oliver. Yeah, his name is Scott, he’s transferring from Stony Brook University in New York. He’s a junior, I believe.” “Oh okay, cool. When do I meet him?” “Tonight. He should be here around 5pm.” “That’s just after my Lit class so I’ll be sure to stop in.” “Okay, cool. I’ll be there as well.” 4:55. Oliver Fish raced up to his dorm. “Hey, Are you Oliver Fish?” Oliver stared at Scott for a minute or two. “Why does this dude have my face?” Oliver thought. Edited by addicted2Kish, Nov 19 2009, 05:41 PM.
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| addicted2Kish | Nov 19 2009, 05:55 PM Post #2 |
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8.20.10<3
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“Yeah. Hey, you must be Scott.” “Yeah, Scott Evans. Nice to meet you.” “hey, you ready to go?” Kyle asked coming up behind Oliver and tapping him on the shoulder. “Yeah, in a sec. Scott, this is my boyfriend Kyle. Kyle, meet Scott Evans, my new room mate.” “hey, what’s up, man?” “Nothing much. Just here to pick up Oliver, we’re going to dinner. You wanna come?” “No thanks, I’ll settle in. Brett should be here any second.” “Okay, well, see you later.” Oliver said, putting his arm around Kyle. “hey babe, was it just me or…does that dude have my face?” “He may have a gorgeous face, but he’s not you.” “Of course he’s not me!” Edited by addicted2Kish, Nov 19 2009, 05:56 PM.
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| addicted2Kish | Nov 19 2009, 06:14 PM Post #3 |
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8.20.10<3
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this isnt working... anyone else feel the same way? |
| milywritten1406 | Nov 19 2009, 06:47 PM Post #4 |
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Me >_< Sorry! I can help if you want? |
| addicted2Kish | Nov 19 2009, 06:50 PM Post #5 |
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8.20.10<3
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I'm gonna scrap it... mods, please delete this topic. Thanks |
| 3395233954 | Nov 19 2009, 07:01 PM Post #6 |
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Zach/8675309
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It's a little odd in a cute and funny way lol. |
| maskbear57 | Nov 20 2009, 01:06 AM Post #7 |
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I liked it....would have liked to see what Brett said to Scott... |
| koko wawa | Nov 20 2009, 01:19 AM Post #8 |
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haha this is kinda weird but its cute |
| kyboom | Nov 20 2009, 04:13 PM Post #9 |
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Michael
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A different idea but cool concept in a cute way! It would have been interesting to see Brett come into the story! |
| Nukester | Nov 20 2009, 05:29 PM Post #10 |
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Hey addicted2Kish, I'm glad the mods didn't get it before I read it. It's an intreaguing idea to have the characters meet there actors, only as an alternate universe of sorts,. I think it's a clever idea. In my humble opinion it isn't "working" because it isn't flowing and as a reader I'm not always being given the necessary ques to know whom to visualize talking. I certainly think it's salvageable. When I was an undergrad, a galpal of mine said I looked XZACTLY like a friend of hers and arranged a meeting at a restaurant that had a mirrored wall. We sat at a table next to it so we could see ourselves and each other. HE DID LOOK NEARLY IDENTICAL TO ME! :wow: IT WAS STARTLING FOR BOTH OF US. But they say, we all have a double somewhere. That's possiblely an underpinning to your story. The confusion to the characters could be hysterical for the readers. Imagine Ollie kissing the wrong Kyle/Brett. His embarasment would be a lot of fun to script. So if you've not quit, why not accept some help from someone? milywritten1406 offered to help you, as do I. :grin: I know! :grin: We'll form a comittee and really make a mess of your story! Edited by Nukester, Nov 20 2009, 05:32 PM.
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