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| Tweet Topic Started: Nov 14 2009, 07:53 PM (3,084 Views) | |
| addicted2Kish | Nov 17 2009, 07:44 AM Post #51 |
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thanks y'all! I'm glad y'all liked it. Kish inspires me :grin: |
| addicted2Kish | Nov 18 2009, 08:37 PM Post #52 |
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Do y'all think I should send a copy of this to Ron since I wanna write for OLTL? (I'd re-write the last scene). :LMAO: I just wanna get his opinion if i have what it takes... Do y'all think I have what it takes? |
| appleridge | Nov 18 2009, 08:43 PM Post #53 |
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Yeah why not |
| addicted2Kish | Nov 18 2009, 08:44 PM Post #54 |
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8.20.10<3
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you serious?????? Change the last scene though right? :LMAO:
Edited by addicted2Kish, Nov 18 2009, 08:48 PM.
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| appleridge | Nov 18 2009, 08:53 PM Post #55 |
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yeah maybe not so graphic i liked it abc may not |
| addicted2Kish | Nov 18 2009, 08:57 PM Post #56 |
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:). *thinks of Mickey* okay, how can I change this? lol. |
| addicted2Kish | Nov 18 2009, 09:21 PM Post #57 |
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**************REVISED ENDING**************** A few minutes later, Kyle came back with a box in his hand. “I hope you like it.” “Thank you.” Oliver opened the box and found a framed picture of him and Kyle from their college days. Kyle gestured toward the frame. “It’s a replica of the one I carry with me in my wallet. “You carried that all these years?” “Of course. It’s us. How could I not?” “I just thought…” Oliver’s voice drifted off. “I never stopped loving you, I told you that so many times.” “I never stopped loving you either. Let’s go home tomorrow. I have a surprise of my own.” The next night when they were back in Llanview, Oliver set his surprise in motion. “Ready?” Oliver called to Kyle who was in their bedroom getting ready. “Yeah.” Kyle said, tossing a brush on to the couch. “Lets go.” When they got to their destination, Oliver blindfolded his husband. “Don’t worry, I’ll help you out of the car, so you won’t fall. Do you trust me?” “With my life.” A few minutes later, Kyle heard Oliver unlock a door, and felt him take his hand. “Okay, step inside.” “It’s hot in here.” Kyle said. “I know.” Oliver kissed Kyle and gently removed his blindfold. “I never thought we’d be back here.” Kyle looked around his college dorm. Oliver put his arms around Kyle & kissed him gently. “Make love to me. I want us to make love here in our special place--and I want to remember it all.” said Oliver. Edited by addicted2Kish, Nov 18 2009, 09:23 PM.
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| appleridge | Nov 18 2009, 09:23 PM Post #58 |
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That was Fantastic |
| addicted2Kish | Nov 18 2009, 09:25 PM Post #59 |
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8.20.10<3
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thank you. It wasnt too cheesy?? |
| 3395233954 | Nov 18 2009, 09:36 PM Post #60 |
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Zach/8675309
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That was a superb alternate ending :). |
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