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| Ive Got You; A Tragic Event Brings Truths To Light | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 30 2009, 02:30 PM (722 Views) | |
| appleridge | Jul 30 2009, 02:30 PM Post #1 |
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My First Fan Fic, Hope U Like it Oliver Fish Could Not Believe What Just Came Out Of His Mouth, "Im Gay". There He Stood. His Parents, Layla and Cris All Beside Him . His Dad, George Spoke. George: What Did You Say? Fish: You Heard Me Loud And Clear George: You Don't Know What Your Saying. (Layla Spoke Up) Layla: Yes He Does. Listen To Him. Fish Went To Speak Again but His Cop Radio Went Off "Possible Hate Crime Victim Outside Rodi's and There Is another accident blocling any help. If anyone on foot hears this please respond. Fish looked sickly worried and ran out the door. As Fish was running towards rodi's he remembers a talk he overheard earlier. Nick made plans to meet Kyle at Rodi's. Fish was Frantic so much that he didint hear his parents yelling after him. He had to get there. He hoped with all his heart Kyle would not be there. When he arrived at the scene, his heart sank. There was Kyke kying motionless on the floor with blood coming from his head. Fish: What the hell happened here Roxy Balsom then came to his side Roxy: Some blond guy he was with attacked him with a brick. Fish: Blonde. Nick, That was his date Roxy: I called it in but the ambulance cant get through some other accident Fish squated next to Kyle and was glad to see him breathing. Fish: Well we gotta get him to the hospital. I'll take him myself. Roxy: But you ran here Fish: Yes and Ill Run Kyle to the hospital Fish Picked Kyle in his arms which caused Kyle to look briefly at Fish Kyle: I must be dreaming, Oliver Fish my prince Fish (softly) Its no Dream. I Got You Baby and I wont let anyone hurt you again Fish Took Kyle In Arms and started toward the hospital When he arrived at the hospital he was met with nurses and a doctor who took Kyle. Fish went to the waiting room where he met his parents George: You Ran Off Fish: I had to help kyle George: He is the reason your throwing your life away? Fish: No Dad I did that years ago Fish's mom, Barb spoke Barb: What do you mean Fish: Kyle and I were involved in college. We loved each other and had plans. Then I became a coward and threw them all away for what. I never stopped thinking of Kyle. He has always been in my heart and Im gonna start living for myself and not anyone else A Doctor came out and spoke to Fish: Doc: Your friend will be okay, he needs rest. Fish: Can i see him, he's my boyfriend Doc: Sure Fish ran in to see Kyle. George started to approach but Barb stopped him Barb: Let them be George, Let It Be. A Half hour later fish was sitting next to Kyle watching him sleep. Fish loved watching him sleep. He remembered back to college. Kyle always slept later than Fish. Fish liked nothing more that watching Kyle sleep. Kyle always had a half smile on his face when he slept. He even had that right now. Fish wondered if Kyle was dreaming of something happy. Just then the door opened and Roxy came in. Roxy: Oh sorry I can--- Fish: No please stay. Roxy Ive made a mess of this. Roxy: Kyle told me Fish: I tried to deny what happened at college put it aside but I loved him, I still do. Seeimg him with Nick. There should be no on else but us. What if I dont get that chance? Roxy: You will he's gonna be fine Fish: But what if he wants nothing to do with me? Roxy was about to speak but Kyle stole that moment Kyle: Why dont you ask me that question Rox: Ill let you two Talk Roxy left the room Fish: When I saw You tonight my heart almost gave way. I love you Kyle. I even told my folks. Kyle: Really? How did that go? Fish: I dont care. Ill deal with that later. I just wanna be with you Klye looked away Fish: Whats wrong? Kyle: I feel stupid. I was using Nick to make you jealous. Fish: It Worked Kyle: But Nick Was Using Me As target practice Fish: We Got him, Nick is in jail. Can I do you anything? Klye: Sta with me Fish: I was planning on it. That chair looks comfy Kyle: No with me Fish: I dont wanna hurt you Kyle: You wont Klye pulled back the covers. Fish trned off the lights and joined Kyle. Fish spooned Kyle. Within minutes both were asleep. Kyle felt truly safe for the first time in a long time. Fish knew he was where he belonged and was never gonna leave again. |
| FairyPixie99 | Jul 30 2009, 03:20 PM Post #2 |
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awwww this was soooooo cute! right when they said "hate crime" i knew it was kyle. that broke my heart. STUPID NICK! i hope he isnt like that on the show!
that was the cutest line ever and that he called him baby was just ugh it was so cute!!! :grin: :grin: you should write more!! |
| loveinabeerbottle | Jul 30 2009, 03:49 PM Post #3 |
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Great Job! I was hooked.. are you going to write more? yay. Appleridge has joined in the fun!!! :) |
| appleridge | Jul 30 2009, 04:06 PM Post #4 |
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Yeah Itll Be About Rebuilding Kish's Relationship |
| Nukester | Jul 30 2009, 06:07 PM Post #5 |
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Wow, what a lean, even sparce, writing style. And you're obviously a dialoge person. You let the characters lead the reader, rather than telling readers what's happening, as most of us are prone to do. Nukester: Thank you. Enjoyed it. Edited by Nukester, Jul 30 2009, 06:09 PM.
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| appleridge | Jul 30 2009, 06:56 PM Post #6 |
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Really Thanks Nukester I tought I stunk at Diaologe |
| backstreetboysfan | Jul 30 2009, 08:31 PM Post #7 |
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Great Job! |
| devillies | Jul 31 2009, 02:28 PM Post #8 |
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i really liked, ! |
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