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| the love story of kish | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 25 2009, 12:50 AM (2,741 Views) | |
| jamaicabyrd24 | Jul 26 2009, 11:51 AM Post #21 |
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kyle i was shocked to see oliver standing at my door. he still look the same as he did in college. so much like my friend i had so many years ago. but it wasnt him. this guy standing before me could never be my oliver. never. me: hey fish: i need to speak to you me: ok. what? fish: i need you to back off me and layla me: oliver i got your letter i dont need you to say it again fish: now b/c of the lies you told cris hes.... me: lies? fish: yes lies! you told him i was using layla me: you are using her! fish: no i care about her very much me: if you cared about her you would be honest with her fish: dont talk to me about honesty! me: your right. how could you be honest with her when your not honest with yourself. you care about no one but yourself. fish: that's not true! me: yeah oliver, it is. to hell with other peoples feelings and emotions. right? fish: no.. me: just as long as you dont have to deal with OTHER people opinion of you and your life. never will it make sense to me how you could care so much about what strangers think but to hell with those who love and care about you. fish: first off kyle it would do this world some good if people gave a damn about what they did and didnt do. second you dont know my relationship with layla and should refrain from speaking to people about it. me: are you happy oliver? fish: what? me: are you happy? fish: i'm making layla very happy and we're happy together. so i would appreciate if.. me: no oliver. are YOU HAPPY. fish: isnt it the same thing? me: no, no its not. fish: i'm happy. i'm very happy with my life. layla is everything i want, she's beautiful, and i'm very lucky to have her. me: who are you trying to convinced me or you? your lying to everyone one including yourself. fish: thats not true me: YES it is. if you want a relationship with layla why dont you tell her about your past. maybe if you face it.......... fish: DANM IT KLYE why cant you just leave it alone. "begans to leave" me: because your a LAIR and a COWARD and you BROKE MY HEART and could care less. fish my back was to him and i was on my way out the door but his words frozen me. i dont know what it was that made my heart drop. the liar part maybe? no i've been called that before. coward? no, another word i have heard from kyle. i broken his heart. yeah thats it. how do i live with that. i know i hurt him. i did it on purpose but i never let myself see how much i hurt him. i couldnt, if i did i wouldnt have been able to let him go. but here he was showing me his pain which he never did and i couldnt walk away. me: kyle kyle: just go away me: i had to kyle: yeah because i didnt fit in with your idea world i walked over to kyle. his guard was up. i could see that his whole body was tense. it only got tenser as i got closer. the look on his face was heartbreaking. part of me told me to run and the other part of me couldnt leave him like this. i wanted to take away some of this pain that i caused. my eyes were locked on his. so much pain in them. he didnt trust me which is understandable but it still bothered me. it shouldnt but it did. i came closer to him and gently touched his face with my hand. he was still very tense but his breathing became heavy. i leaned over and slowly glazed my nose against his. his eyes closed but i kept my eyes open and watched his reaction to my touch. i touched my lips to his and wrap my arms around his waist. he began relaxing in my arms. he kissed me back and i could feel my heart all the way in my throat. my eyes close as we kissed. i couldnt speak. i didnt know what to say. i couldnt think, i never could when kyle kissed me. i didnt want to stop kissing him and thinking was dangerous. i held kyle tighter is my arms. kyle have you ever wanted some one so much that their all you could think about. that no matter how mad you are with them and how much they hurt you, you cant seem to refuse them of anything. that was me with oliver. in so many ways i felt lost without him. i didnt want to love him. i didnt want it to be this easy for him to have me, but it was oliver. my oliver. me: hey there oliver. i said in a low voice with my face barely an inch from his. long time no see. fish: hi kyle. beautiful beautiful kyle his lips touched mine once again much more passionately this time and than his phone rang. fish i pulled away from kyle in a daze to answer the phone. it was layla. fish: hello. i said hoarsely. layla: i wanted to know if you wanted to grab lunch with me? fish: um.... yeah. sure. layla: ok my lunch hr begins in half an hour. fish: ok i'll be there. layla: bye fish: bye i had to go. i couldnt look at him. what the hell was i doing? why did i kiss him. what was i thinking. i should of never came here i had it right with the letter. they was no need for a face to face talk. layla is counting on me and i do this to her? kyle i could see it. oliver was gone and fish was back. i knew what he would say i knew what he would do. fish: i got to go me: yeah fish: look kyle we cant, i cant me: its ok i watched him run out my door. it wasnt ok but what was i going to do. Edited by jamaicabyrd24, Jul 26 2009, 04:46 PM.
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| FairyPixie99 | Jul 26 2009, 03:56 PM Post #22 |
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wow poooor kyle! :'( :'( that was heartbreaking but im glad oliver finally kissed him!! :woo: :woo: great writing! :grin: |
| devillies | Jul 26 2009, 05:07 PM Post #23 |
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ITA , loved it very well written |
| backstreetboysfan | Jul 26 2009, 05:39 PM Post #24 |
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Love it, Great Job |
| jamaicabyrd24 | Jul 26 2009, 05:40 PM Post #25 |
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you guys are to kind. thank you very much. i'm very glad you like it. :$ |
| appleridge | Jul 26 2009, 10:22 PM Post #26 |
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That Was flippin Awesome. Is There Gonna Be More? |
| jamaicabyrd24 | Jul 27 2009, 01:06 AM Post #27 |
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yes. i plan on writing the break up that happen in college but it wont be in the next part. i want to write more about their college days. i really dont have a plan when i'm writing. i just make it up as i go. but know that at the very least you guys got at least 2 part left to the story. Edited by jamaicabyrd24, Jul 27 2009, 01:07 AM.
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| appleridge | Jul 27 2009, 08:00 AM Post #28 |
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Sounds Good 2 Me |
| devillies | Jul 27 2009, 12:18 PM Post #29 |
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oh , thnx :grin: |
| Nukester | Jul 31 2009, 01:36 PM Post #30 |
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Howdy goldenangel24, I've never read a story, where the author narrates it first person and then flips to another character's viewpoint. You've created something entirely new to me. TWO first persons on the same page. You made me work -- think out-of-the-box. You might really have something there. Thanx! Nukester |
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