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| the love story of kish | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 25 2009, 12:50 AM (2,737 Views) | |
| jamaicabyrd24 | Jul 25 2009, 12:50 AM Post #1 |
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ok so i kind of suck at writing but i'm to damn opinionated not to write my own stuff. so bare with me and know i'm just jumping in here. ok here i go. i own none of these characters. kyle today isnt a very good day for me. its rebecca's birthday aug 2 and she's gone. i still cant believe what rebecca did to all those people and i wouldnt believe any of it if there wasnt so much proof. she may have been a psycho and a killer but before that she was my big sister. i remember when we were kids growing up in foster homes in the early years we were always together. when i was 5 and rebecca was 10 we moved in with the millers. i cant really remember were we lived before that only that i didnt like it. the millers was an old couple who really didnt pay any attention to us. it wasnt necessary a bad thing. they werent cruel. they feed us made sure we had cloths to wear and we never went to school dirty. me and rebecca shared a room and i remember being woke up from my sleep because i felt a heaviness on my chest. it was rebecca. me: what are you doing becky? i asked sleepily. rebecca: listening to your heart me: what its saying? rebecca: i'm listening to your heartbeat. giggled rebecca. it doesnt talk it beats. me: why are your listening to it? rebecca: well i wanted to make sure it was still beating. you know to make sure you were alive and breathing. me: well is it? i'm still alive and breathing right? rebecca: yep! me: can i listen to yours? rebecca: sure. just hold you breath y'all be able to hear it better if you do. me:ok. i remember listening to becky heartbeat. it was the first heartbeat i ever heard. i pop up gasping for air and said. me: your still alive and breathing. rebecca: WHEW! i was worried there. you sure? everythings ok? me: yep. i'm sure. rebecca: one day i'm going to be a doctor. me: i hate doctor's! they always give me shots that hurt and nasty medicine. yuck! rebecca: yeah but they give you that stuff for you wont get sick. me: i still get sick. i think i like that better then the shots. rebecca: doctors also save lives. you remember that stray dog that always used to run around at our old house? me: yes rebecca: remember when he got hit by that car... me: and we thought he was going to die like that cat did? rebecca: yeah. but he didnt die because of the veterinarian that lived next door took care of him. he saved his life. you know what a veterinarian is? me: a dog doctor. rebecca: close. its a animal doctor. they save the lives of animals. i want to be a human doctor. i want to save lives! me: if i was doctor could i save your life? rebecca: yep. and if you ever got really sick or hurt i could save you to. me: well i want to be a doctor too! rebecca: ok. but you must take it seriously. when we grow we can be doctors together. me: i promise to take it seriously and if we become doctors together we'll always be together. rebecca: right. me: if mom and dad had a doctor maybe they would be here with us. rebecca: yeah. "says rebecca sadly" i wish i was a doctor now. i could of saved them. me: i know you could. if anybody could save them it would be you becky. rebecca leaned over and kiss my forehead rebecca: gets some sleep kiddo we got shcool tomorrow. we have to be very smart if were going to be dotors. me: ok "yawn" goodnight becky rebecca: goodnight kyle. it was me and rebecca against the world. we were very committed to becoming doctors. we would stay up and watch ER together we even took notes. sometimes the people died and other times they didnt. for 2 years we lived with the millers and than mrs. miller died. it was very sad and mr. miller cried alot. we would hug him and he would hug us back. which was something we never did. we really missed mrs. miller. 2 weeks after miss miller died me and becky came home from school to find social servers in our home. all our stuff had been packed and we were once again moving. the social worker " cant remember her name" told us that mr. miller couldnt handle us on his own and we would be moving. we had lived here for 2 years it was the closest thing to a home we had . that was the longest we ever stayed in one place but the most devastating news was when they told us we werent going to be living together. they told me there wasnt room for becky at the house i was moving to. translation " the foster parents didnt want a teenager on there hands" me and becky was heartbroken. me: i want to live with becky! SW: sorry honey but you cant. me: no i'm not leaving my sister! rebecca: we'll see each other again kyle me: all the time? rebecca: yeah. when we get older we've going to become doctors and work together just like we plan. so even when we're not together we must stay focus and committed. ok, me: ok. hey becky? " i said with tears in my eyes" rebecca: yeah? me: when will i see you again? tomorrow? rebecca: maybe not tomorrow but soon. i should of been able to tell she was lying but i believed her. she knew the truth and didnt have the heart to tell me that this could very well be the very last time we saw each other. i hugged her goodbye afraid to let go. i later found out that becky didnt even live in this state anymore. it was many years before i saw rebecca again. i was 18 when she found me she was very different, so was i but i remembered her. i remembered that day of losing my big sister. if i had known she would be gone for such along time i would of held on to her for dear life and never let go. i remember crying for her every night when i was a kid and wanting to be a doctor so badly for i could be reunited with my sister once again. Edited by jamaicabyrd24, Jul 25 2009, 12:58 AM.
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| jamaicabyrd24 | Jul 25 2009, 01:00 AM Post #2 |
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i think its important for us to have a backstory so we can see what formed the people we see today. fish is next. i hope this fanfic comes out well! |
| jamaicabyrd24 | Jul 25 2009, 02:04 AM Post #3 |
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the only way i seem to be able to get a story out is if i tell in the form of the charactors speaking directly to you. i dont know what style that is. i dont own any of these charactors fish i got a call from my mom today asking when i was coming home for a visit. it had been i long time sense the last time i was there and life hasnt been all that great with layla thinking i'm gay and cris watching my every move. then their's kyle. always their in the back of my mind. my dad was a man that believed what he believed. there was no changing that. i remember when i was in high school and dad throw a dinner party with his friends mike and rich and their wives. rich was a doctor. after dinner the woman went to the kitchen to clean and the men stayed behind and talked. i still remember that conversation. its forever burned in my brain. rich: the parkers boy came into the ER last night badly beaten. mike: yeah i heard about that. dad: well i think a good old butt kicking is what he needed. him being queer and all. rich: yeah i feel bad for his parents having a gay son, dad: i dont. i blame the parents. they should of beat his ass their selfs when he started listening to spice girls and not left it up to some high school boys who could of killed him. mike: i hear he was beaten pretty badly rich: i wasnt on the case but the police are getting involved. mike: yeah the parkers are looking to press charges dad: to little to late. they should of sit him down and told him little boys dont go around touching and kissing other little boys. god put women on earth for reason. mike: i have to agree. if tony came and said he was gay i would kill that boy, rich: could you imagine having a gay son? dad/mike: no! mike: how's baseball going oliver? me: good. rich: i heard the team went coed me: yaeh dad: what i didnt know that? why the hell is the girls playing with the boys? me: b/c there wasnt enough girls to sign up for the girls team or enough for the boys to sign up for the boys team. so they combined them. dad: there shouldnt be a team then. those girls shouldnt be on a team with the boys. its like waving a white flag with the word loser on it. me: our team pretty good dad dad: it would be even better if it was the way it should be, all guys. why are these girls trying to be man anyways? they should stick to homek [sp] me: the school dont have homek classes anymore dad: what? mike: they havent had it for years dad: why the hell not? me: well our school is a collage prep school. they want to get us ready for college not for cooking good....meals, dad: that class was more than a cooking class! it showed girls how to be women and take care of their home and husbands. only woman who cant find a husband go to collage. rich: now thats not true. beth went to college. dad: yes but now she's your wife and taking care of home like she should. oilver i dont want you on that baseball team. me: but dad! dad: my son wont be apart of a losing team the team won 13 straight games that year and won the championship. dad wasnt so bad he loved sports as much as i did. he always took me to games and we played basketball, football, and baseball alot. in high school i dated tracy wilder. she was the reverend daughter. very nice and well manner. dad liked her and so did mom. i remembered kissing her and it being nice. i remembered how she wanted to wait until she was married to have sex and i was fine with that. i remember when she sent me a email breaking up with me 2 months before school ended. i remembered how i felt.......panic that my dad would find out. i finally told him and his words to me was. dad: good your going off to college and you need to play the fields a little more, me: right dad: one day your going to find a woman who makes you as happy as your mother makes me. me: i hope so dad dad: now remember always wear a condom and try not to break to many hearts me: i'll be sure to remember that. when i got college things were very different from home and i liked that. i was 18 and finally i could do what i wanted. i wasnt sure what i wanted but i loved college from the first day i step on its grounds. funny thing i never told my dad i wanted to be a cop. its been my dream forever! i never told my dad because if he didnt agree with my choice i didnt want to have the conflict between us. Edited by jamaicabyrd24, Jul 25 2009, 02:13 AM.
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| loveinabeerbottle | Jul 25 2009, 06:55 AM Post #4 |
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This is interesting. I am looking forward to see were your story will go! I think it's called writing in the first person but i'm not sure lol |
| appleridge | Jul 25 2009, 07:37 AM Post #5 |
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I really Like This. Great Jon So Far. |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 25 2009, 08:07 AM Post #6 |
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Wow, I always imagined Kyle having a really painful childhood. Good job. |
| jamaicabyrd24 | Jul 25 2009, 09:07 AM Post #7 |
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is my stroy kyle does have a painful childhood and it starts when him and rebecca are split up. he's force to face the world alone. rebecca was always there to take care of him and now she wasnt. he lost her and his parents. |
| FairyPixie99 | Jul 25 2009, 09:12 AM Post #8 |
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loved this!!! can't wait for more! :grin: |
| jamaicabyrd24 | Jul 25 2009, 12:36 PM Post #9 |
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i own nothing! fish things had been very quiet at home. no one seemed to be speaking to one another. cris was mad at me and layla thought i was mad at her. cris and layla wouldnt so much as look at each other. it was a long weekend. this morning cris left out early and layla finally spoke to me. layla: fish how long are you going to stay mad at me? i said sorry and i really mean it. fish: its ok. i'm sorry for being such a jerk about the whole thing. layla: its my fault. i tend to ruin everything. fish: come on dont start beating yourself up again. i over reacted and it wasnt fair to you. layla: you had a right to be mad. fish: well i'm ready to put it all behind me. what do you say? layla: yes i dont want to ever think about that fight again. it was our first couple fight. fish: LOL really? i always thought couples fights were louder and messier than that. layla: they can be. layla said a bit sadly. fish: layla you ok? layla: yeah. so whats up with that guy kyle lewis? whats his deal? my heart skipped a beat. fish: he's bad news and i get the feeling he likes you. layla: he doesnt even know me! how could he like me. fish: your beautiful. it cant be that hard to believe. a smile creeps upon layla face. layla: when you put it that way. fish: i'm sorry about that guy. now he's got cris angry at me... layla: well next time you see him tell him i'm your girl. i'm still you girl right? fish: yeah your still my girl. layla walked over and kissed me. i kissed her back. i felt bad for making her feel bad and she deserve more for her boyfriend. i vowed to treat her much better. it was very important to me to make her happy. fish: what you got planed for today? layla: oh i have to work remember? fish: oh yeah i forgot. i dont got to be in until later. layla: speaking of work i need to get ready and i'll see you later? fish: yeah ok. i watched layla go off to her room. just then cris walked through the door. he didnt stay quiet for long. cris: you talk to your buddy kyle lately? fish: he's not my buddy. cris: i find that funny, what happen to make you guys not friends anymore? fish: you grow up, things change. cris: maybe. it seemed like he was holding something back when i talked to him last. almost like he was trying to protect you. now why would a guy who's out to get you would do that? fish: more like he was trying to rise suspension and it seems to be working. i got up from my chair unable too look cris in the face. why did kyle insist on ruining my life. why couldnt he leave me alone. things were going just find until he came around. layla's thinking i'm gay and cris thinking i'm slim. i look up at cris and said. fish: i have to get ready to go. cris: ok. i was very afraid to knock on the door. i could hear was my heart pounding in my chest. but it was necessary for me to talk to him. he needed to understand. college was over. i tried hard not to think about college but i couldnt stop the memories from coming back. i remember when i first met kyle. we were pledging KAD and were very excited about the fraternity house and really looked forward to the whole thing. we became quick friends. kyle was the only person i had ever meant more passionate about his future than i was. freshman year we didnt live in the KAD house but after that we were able to move in. me and kyle shared a room which was cool b/c at that point we were best friends. kyles nick name was trouble maker. when we went to war with other frat house's "which was often" kyle was always the ring leader. we played a lot of pranks and got alot played on us. kyle stayed in trouble but he never cross the line, occasionally put a toe or two over it but nothing to far. kyle also loved sports and was almost as good at playing them as i was. we were the best of of buddies. things change between me and kyle when we went camping with the house at the beginning of the school year. school was a week away and the camping trip was a way of celebrating the pledges who had made it into the house, me and kyle were accepted as a KAD brother. while camping we we're out hiking and some how we got lost. we couldnt find anyone. we had been walking around for what felt like hrs and we finally set down for a break. kyle: try the phone again me: nope still no signal and the battery about to... yep it died. kyle: great just great me: maybe we should yell out more kyle: its hot and were almost out of water it would just make our mouths more dry me: how did we get lost? kyle: i dont know. we were a little a head of everyone else but not that far ahead. me: if they followed the path they would be right hear where we are now kyle: so maybe its them that's lost me: that'll be my guess kyle: than we shouldnt move. we should give them a chance to catch up with us me: ok we have anything to eat kyle: the foods with kevin me: great. kyle: i have a candy bar you can have it. its really melted. me: we can share kyle: alright kyle and me eat the candy bar and it was gone to quickly. we set side by side against a log under a oak tree trying to keep cool. talking about dumb things as always. kyle: which was better scary movie 1 or 2? me: 2 kyle: what? how could you even say that? me: it was much funnier kyle: dude scary 2 was ok but 1 was by far the best. me: scary move 2 had better actors, storylines...... kyle: no no and no. dude i dont ever know you rigth now me: i'm just busting your chops. 1 was so much better. kyle: LOL i'm glad you think so b/c i was going to have to disown you. me: ghostface was the best kyle: you mean scream me: i notice people calls him that. when really its the ghostface mask. kyle: he was the killer in scream so it makes sense for his name to be scream me: ghostface sounds better kyle: best part was when scream rapped. me: "i'm going to slash and gash and cut another hole in you ass, spill blood on the walls and play tennis with your balls, if the phone ring dont answer the call, going to slit you throat and F like a goat peel your foreskin off and make a winter coat peace" kyle: wow i'm really scared and amazed that you know that whole thing me: we went to see it like 50 times you know the whole thing too. we start laughing and then out of no where kyle leaned over and kiss me. i remember being really shocked but i didnt stop him. i kissed him back. everything else faded away but me and him. i felt dizzy. i didnt know if it was because of the heat or the kiss. it was really hard to breath and think. i pulled away slowly unable to open my eyes. i inhale deeply and than i leaned back in to kiss him. i could feel my heart racing but i could feels his racing to. i dont know how long we kissed but it seem both of us was incapable of stopping. i was shocked when kyle pulled away. kyle: you hear that? me: huh " clears throat" hear what? kyle: someone called my name me: i didnt hear........... kyle: there it goes again. hey we're over hear. yelled kyle. me: over hear! it tooked the guys five mins to appear. kevin: what the hell happen to you guys? me: they know! i though to myself. what do you mean? kyle: you guys are the ones who got lost. kevin: i do not get lost kyle: right. laughed kyle i was unable to talk. i was scared that everyone could see that i had just got done making out with my follow frat brother. larry: you ok there fish? me: yeah its just hot and we've been waiting on you guys forever. larry: haha well here drink some water b/c if you past out i dont want to have to carry you down. me: yeah right. we know your the fainter in group. as i collected myself and joked with the guys i look over at kyle. our eyes met and he smiled a small smile that got my heart racing all over again. Edited by jamaicabyrd24, Jul 26 2009, 09:12 PM.
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| jamaicabyrd24 | Jul 25 2009, 12:45 PM Post #10 |
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i'm doing my best y'all LOL. i wanted to show how different fish is now from when he was in college. for those who want to know. yes fish is still outside of kyles door and no fish is not done reminiscing about his past kyle more to come. |
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