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| The Break Up (Last chapter up!) | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 19 2009, 09:29 PM (2,475 Views) | |
| appleridge | Jul 23 2009, 08:09 PM Post #41 |
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Damn its so good but sucks for whats about to happen |
| devillies | Jul 24 2009, 09:48 AM Post #42 |
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yh i loved it too but, wats abt to happen is gonna suck |
| FairyPixie99 | Jul 24 2009, 11:19 AM Post #43 |
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i loved this chapter and your writing is amazing as per usual but im so gonna cry in the chapter because we all know whats going to happen! :'( |
| kishfan | Jul 24 2009, 05:03 PM Post #44 |
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Another great chapter. My heart went out to Fish and Kyle! I don't want to read the next chapter. . .I don't. . .I don't. . . .I don't! :grin: Okay, I will, but I'm going to have a box of Kleenex handy. : |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 24 2009, 06:19 PM Post #45 |
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Thanks FairyPixie, kishfan, devilies, and appleridge. Part 6 is up! Part 6 Note: I don't own these characters. 28 June 2000 D2, Graduation day should be a day of celebration and happiness at the new opportunities we can pursue after college. I will enter the police academy next week to start off my chosen career. Things in my professional life is falling into place rather neatly. My personal life, um, not so pretty. Kyle and I left early from a graduation party and headed towards my new condo to unpack my things. Our conversation is included: Kyle: Now, it’s all over. Me: Don’t say that. We can finally get things going in our respective fields. Kyle: You’d make a great cop. Sure, we might not see eye to eye when it comes to the law, but I will be behind your every move. Me: Hey, you play your role in society too. Doctors save lives. Kyle: Well, I don’t do it necessarily to play a role in society. That’s not how I understand it. I chose medicine because it’s my passion. Me: Have you chosen where to go for med school? Kyle: Yup, Oliver. A university in Antwerp accepted me just 3 days ago. I held the announcement until today. Me: Belgium? That’s in Europe! Wow, that’s great. I always knew you were going places, but Europe? You hit the jackpot! Kyle: I would like it if you’d come with me. To Belgium. *gets on his knees and pulls out a ring* Oliver Fish, will you marry me? Me (stunned): I don’t know what to say. There’s nowhere on earth we can get married. Kyle: Belgium is well on its way. It will only be a matter of time there. What is your answer? Me: No. Kyle: Have you thought this answer out, Oliver? Me: I actually have. I’m sorry you have to hear this now, but I have to break things off with you. Kyle: Oh, you need to take a cool-off period while you settle your feelings? Me: You don’t get it, Kyle. I have already decided. I meant forever. Kyle: Why? Me: This thing we have…it is just a college fling. Nothing more. Kyle: No, that’s your dad speaking. This is not you, Oliver. Me: This is the real me. Get used to it. Kyle: Well, your real self sucks. Me: What sucks even more is me lowering myself to be in this kind of relationship. You have no clue how dirty I feel knowing I let you…penetrate me. Kyle: So I’m dirt now? Me: No, you’re not. Don’t ever say that. I’m the one that should be ashamed. You can’t help yourself. I can. I will begin romancing women starting now. Kyle: Do you really want to be with chicks now? Me: It’s not what I want, but I’m gonna do it anyway. Kyle: I’d like to see you try to forget me, but you can’t. Even if you are making out with a girl, all you’ll think about was how I did it better. All you will see is my face. All you will hear is my voice. You can’t ever have it with a woman. Me: Watch me. Can you leave now? Kyle: I will leave. Just remember this moment, cause this is the last you’ll see of me. I abhor dealing with people who cannot deal with themselves. *walks out and slams the door* How can I move on, D2? Kyle has been a big part of my existence for the last 4 years. This is not how I’d like to see things end up between us. I really thought we could stay friends. I guess that will no longer be a reality. Devastated, Fish. Point of View Switch to Kyle 17 August 2010 Hey Diary (or D2, as Oliver called you), You might be wondering who I am. I am Kyle Lewis, a cardiologist in Llanview hospital. I’m the same Kyle that Oliver, your previous owner, was mentioning in his entries to you. If you were wondering what happened to Oliver…he died a few weeks ago in the middle of a dangerous drug bust. He never recovered from 3 gunshot wounds to the head. His father, Tayv, contacted me and invited me to be a pallbearer at his funeral. I didn’t know if I would be in the right emotional state to attend, but my fiancé, CJ Roberts, encouraged me to go in order to make my peace with him. After the service, I had the chance to speak to his father. I will write down what we said: Me: My condolences, Octavius. Your son died a hero doing the job he loved. Take solace in that. Tayv: I don’t know how I can go on without my only son. Thank you, Kyle. I missed you and more so, Oliver missed you. Me: He did? Tayv: I cleaned up the apartment he lived in and found this journal (this is you, D2) in which he wrote everything that happened during your last year of college. You meant everything to him. He hated losing you. Me: For the risk of sounding melodramatic, that really gives me comfort. Tayv: He was something to you, am I right? Me: He was…No, he is something to me, Tayv. Tayv: I realize that. No tears were shed on my part during the funeral. I wanted to show strength, for Oliver. However, as soon as I could go home alone, inconsolable was my state of being. I yelled. I bawled. I even flipped over the couch and broke some plates. There’s only one regret I have in my life... The regret is that Oliver died unhappy and alone. Sincerely, Dr. Kyle Alexander Lewis III, M.D. THE END Note: Thank you for all your support. Edited by OliverFishFan, Jul 24 2009, 06:22 PM.
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| appleridge | Jul 24 2009, 07:51 PM Post #46 |
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Damn Fish Died, Damn |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 24 2009, 07:53 PM Post #47 |
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It was the hardest thing I ever had to write. Thanks for always reading, appleridge. |
| appleridge | Jul 24 2009, 07:55 PM Post #48 |
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Not a problem. It was an excellent story. Lets just hope Fish dont die on OLTL |
| FairyPixie99 | Jul 24 2009, 08:24 PM Post #49 |
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:'( :'( amazing. simply amazing. brought tears to my eyes. i also hope fish doesnt die in the show |
| loveinabeerbottle | Jul 24 2009, 09:27 PM Post #50 |
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AWW why did fish have to die, I dunno what tore me up worse Fish rejecting Kyle or Fish sleeping with the fishes.. :LMAO: You write so wonderfully. I hope you have more to share with us in the future! |
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