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| The Break Up (Last chapter up!) | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 19 2009, 09:29 PM (2,476 Views) | |
| devillies | Jul 22 2009, 02:05 PM Post #31 |
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im looking forward to it, love u fanfics |
| FairyPixie99 | Jul 22 2009, 03:42 PM Post #32 |
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ha! i love this story and it has some very well written humor! :LMAO:
:LMAO: :LMAO: those literally made me laugh out loud! anyways love the story and i love the little preview for part 4! cant wait! :woo: :woo: :dance: :dance: |
| loveinabeerbottle | Jul 22 2009, 04:06 PM Post #33 |
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yay can't wait for part 4 you have me sucked in...love seeing your spin on olivers family |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 22 2009, 10:24 PM Post #34 |
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Thanks appleridge, kishfan, devilies, FairyPixie, and loveinabeerbottle. This is Part 4! Part 4 Note: I don’t own these characters. 4 March 2009 D2, I don’t want Daddy to die. Petrified, Fish. 6 March 2000 D2, About my last entry? I better begin with Saturday morning (March the 4th). My dad was cooking pancakes for Kyle and I. The conversation is included. Dad: With your mother being out for a book club meeting, I will be the chef for today. Kyle: What will be your dish, Tayv? Me: Tayv? Kyle: Short for Octavius. You don’t mind, do ya, Tayv? Dad: Not at all and my offering for today is some pancakes with real butter, bacon, and some mashed potatoes with, you guessed it, real butter. A real masterpiece, if you asked me. Me: Yum! Kyle: Not so yummy when you think about clogged arteries. Me: You’re no fun. Dad: It’s alright, Oliver. I made some oatmeal for Kyle and I. We care about our heart. Me: You guys can care about your hearts all you want. My tastebuds come first. Dad: Leave it to Oliver to be so voracious. When he was a little boy, he kept begging me to buy the kiddie cop set, with a pellet gun, plastic badge, and some handcuffs. I bought it for him, but he ended up cuffing himself. *laughing* Me: Dad, you’re embarrassing me. Kyle: Keep it up, Tayv. I’m amused. Dad: I’ll think of some more. I gotta take an aspirin first. Headache is killing me. *Leaves the kitchen* Kyle: Still got those handcuffs? Me: What have I told you, Kyle? You can’t get kinky with me here. After breakfast, Kyle and I worked on my dad’s car, which was broken. My dad despises heavy manual labor and made some real insensitive remarks about hiring illegal aliens to fix the radiator for him. I was about to get really angry at him when Kyle stepped in to offer to fix the radiator free of charge. I was gonna be Kyle’s assistant. My dad insisted on paying Kyle $100 for the job. Kyle turned down the money. I volunteered to get the $100 for Kyle, to the combined laughter of Kyle and my dad. After about 3 hours of work, Kyle and I were exhausted. After a shower (If you were wondering, no, Kyle and I didn’t share the shower), Kyle and I hung out in my room looking at old pictures of me. The conversation is included: Kyle: This is you on a bike? You were such a small child. Me: My first growth spurt was amazing. Everybody in 7th grade made fun of me for being a midget. Everybody in 8th grade made fun of me for being a bean pole. Kyle: *sighs* My baby pictures were lost when I moved from my parents’ house after they died. Me: So all your memories are lost? Kyle: They don’t matter. I can make new memories with you…Ok, that was mushy. Me: It was. Hey look! Here’s a pic of me when I got my braces. My dad put them on. Kyle: He did them very well. You have great teeth now. Me: The better to eat you with. Kyle: Whoa, and you call me kinky. Me: I said it in a low voice. Kyle: Yeah, right. Hey, here’s a picture of you and your Freshman Social dance date. Who is she? Me: Amanda Watkins. She was really nice. My first real girlfriend. Kyle: How did it work out? Me: We could never really get close. Towards the end, she just pulled away, like she was sick of me. Kyle: Oh, well. You were a boy back then. What I see before me is a man. Me: You’re trying to turn me on with compliments? Kyle: What else am I doing? Me: You can wait until we get back home. Right now, you and I need to keep it on a friendship-only basis. Kyle: Your mother is out in the mall with your sister. Your dad is downstairs watching the news. Me: So, what have you got planned? Kyle: *pulls out condoms* These. Me: Um, no. Kyle: I have been waiting for so long. I am so into you figuratively that I want it to be literally as well. Me: That would be the end of my youth as I know it. Kyle: Same with me, but we’re ending it together. Me: Does…sleeping with you mean that I’m… Kyle: Homo? Yeah. You don’t think it makes me homo too? Me: This is not happening. I can’t go through with it. Kyle: So we’re back to square 1 again, I see. You don’t want to confirm it to yourself, so you’re not going to go to the last frontier with me, and I don’t mean Alaska. Me: Why are you forcing me to make a decision? I’m between a rock and a hard place here. Kyle: Why be between a rock and a hard place when you can be between me and the bed? Me: You’re trying to break me down. Kyle: It’s working. Sooner or later. He goes to wrap me in a cuddle. I give in. By giving in, I actually mean giving in… In the biggest shock of my life, the door opened and my dad came rushing in. It didn’t take him long to realize we were in the middle of something. The conversation we had is included: Dad: I heard a noise coming from here and I was wondering…what is going on? Kyle, why are you naked and on top of Oliver like that? Me: It’s not what it looks like. Kyle: *gets up and walks toward my dad* Tayv, it’s exactly what it look like. Your son and I were in the middle of something, so if you can please just wait out in the hallway till we’re through and we can discuss this. Dad: I don’t understand. *clutches his chest* Why are you doing this, Kyle? I thought so much better of you. How could you seduce Oliver like that? I trusted you. Kyle: Guess what, Tayv. I’m in love with your son. If you have a problem with that, I will leave. Dad: Don’t leave. I will talk you out of this. Oh, man. My lightheadedness is coming back. I need to take another aspirin. Me: Dad, are you OK? Dad: I’m fine. Don’t worry about me. I’ll worry about you two. *he gasps* Sleeping together! You’re both male! *another gasp* That doesn’t even register in my mind. I never felt so shocked and dazed ever. Kyle, I can’t believe what you’ve done. My poor, poor Oliver can never get his virginity back. *his breath becomes labored and the gaspings become more frequent* Kyle: Tayv, you really need to relax. Something’s wrong here. Dad: There’s nothing wrong with my health. There is something wrong with what’s going on with you. *gasp* Kyle, you are confused. You have really corrupted my son and that breaks my heart. I loved you like my own son and you do this to me? I think I’m gonna cry really hard. Ow! *he clutches his chest and left shoulder* I gotta go. *runs out* My dad got on his newly repaired Mustang and headed off. I later heard that he had a heart attack on the road and got into a wreck. His condition is stabilized now. Thank goodness, my dad had an injury to his right arm only. I’m gonna visit him in the hospital later today. Freaked out, Fish. End of Part 4 Edited by OliverFishFan, Jul 22 2009, 10:29 PM.
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| OliverFishFan | Jul 22 2009, 10:57 PM Post #35 |
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Preview for Part 5: *An accusation is made. *Fish goes to see his dad. |
| loveinabeerbottle | Jul 22 2009, 11:05 PM Post #36 |
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:nervous: WOW! I can't belive you had his dad walk in on them doing the deed..how awesome. i can't wait till the next chapter. BTW i love your previews |
| appleridge | Jul 22 2009, 11:10 PM Post #37 |
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Keeps getting Better |
| devillies | Jul 23 2009, 09:18 AM Post #38 |
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omg ! When fishs dad walked in I was like omg! Can't wait 4 more |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 23 2009, 09:38 AM Post #39 |
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The previews help keep me focused. I write stories without knowing what happens at the end, so I usually write as I go. Thanks a lot, loveinabeerbottle.
Glad you think that, appleridge!
Stay tuned! hehe |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 23 2009, 07:41 PM Post #40 |
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Part 5 10 March 2000 D2, Here’s an update on what happened during my trip to the hospital 4 days ago. Kyle drove me to North Winchester Area Hospital since I was too torn-up to drive myself. Our conversation, as always, is included: Kyle: Oliver, I wish there was something I could do to help. Me: You’ve been more than supportive, Kyle. I’m forever thankful. Kyle: I should have seen the warning signs that day. The heavy breathing, the cold sweat, and the chest clutching all were signs of an impending heart attack. Me: Dad wasn’t exactly in a mood for listening to you. Kyle: The circumstances was unfortunate, but you should be happy that he’s still alive. Me: Yeah. I don’t want to lose him, Kyle. Whether I like to admit it or not, he shaped me to be what I am today. I could never aspire to be an orthodontist like him because I know I couldn’t compete with his brilliance. He has a wonderful life. Big house, swanky sports car, hot trophy wife, and at least one of his kids turned out alright. I can never live up to what he is. Kyle: Well, you don’t have to. You are your own man. Just because his version of a flawless existence does not jive with yours does not mean you are any lesser of a human being. Me: I wish you’re right, Kyle. I want you to be right on that. Kyle: I’m always right, Oliver. The difference is whether you listen to what I have to say or not. Me: You can make me grin even in times like this. I rushed into room 508, where my dad was resting in. My entrance to the room was blocked by my sister and my mother, who looked furious. The convo is included: Chelsea: Just who do you think you are, waltzing in like this? Me: Pardon? Chelsea: You know d*mn well why Dad is in there right now. Mom: Chels, honey, your language. Me: Don’t go pinning this on me! Chelsea: I told Mom what went down between you and that Kyle freak. She doesn’t even want to speak to you. Me: To think I shared that to you in confidence! Chelsea: Well, I told Mom about Barry too. I let go of my secret, thus I’m under no obligation to keep yours. Mom: That Barry will get what is coming to him for being a treacherous snake. Now, it also seems like we have one of those vipers in our own family! Chelsea: Yes, mom, Barry has done some unbelievable things to me. All you queers are the same, Barry, you and Kyle. Uncaring, horny jerks who hurt and destroy families! My marriage is in shambles because of my fruitcake husband. Our family is in shambles because you, little bro, like a dog in heat, were demanding that Kyle slam his man bits into your @$$! You and Kyle could have done it elsewhere, but NO! You just had to do it in our house. You don’t know how broken our dad has become. Our dad! Me: Well, I came here to see him. Last I checked, any family member of a patient can. *I go inside the room and see my dad lying in a hospital bed. He was awake, but exhausted and confused.* Dad: Who is it? Me: It’s me, Oliver. Dad: Who are you? Me: Um, you don’t know me? Dad: Doesn’t look like I do. You remind me of a son I used to have. His name was Oliver too. He was about your age. Me: What happened to him? Dad: He died the afternoon of March the 4th. I saw it happen with both of my eyes. Me (realizing something): Dad, this fake amnesia is lame. Dad: Well, what were you expecting? Ever since Kyle raped you, you are absolutely different in my eyes now. Me: It wasn’t rape. Dad: There’s no need to defend Kyle. I saw him thrust himself at you and you moaning for help. Me: I was moaning because…I was turned on. That wasn’t rape you saw, that was consensual. Dad: That means you actually wanted Kyle to do those…outrageous practices to you? Me: Please, it’s complicated. Dad: You’re young, Oliver. You’re at the age when you are questioning everything that happened to you in your younger years, yet you have no actual life experiences that allow you to answer those questions. At this most vulnerable phase of your life, Kyle took advantage and tried to use your confusions for his own physical fulfillment. Me: I never thought of it that way. Dad: It’s perfectly alright for you to be friends with Kyle, in fact, I encourage it. I love Kyle. However, that should be the extent of your relationship. You’re at the age of your life when you are the most virile and fertile. There are many girls out there wanting a man like you. Grow up and stand up for yourself. Make me proud. Now is the time to do so. End things with Kyle and start a relationship with a nice girl. I can think of a few daughters of my colleagues I’d like you to meet. Me: Thanks, dad. Dad: I need to make some changes in my life too. No more meat. My heart comes first now. Me: You’re gonna be a vegetarian? Wow, you love barbecued sausage. How could you give that up? Dad: You love Kyle’s sausage. How could you give that up? We’re gonna get through this together, OK? Me: That’s what being a Fish man is all about. Dad: I taught you well, son. So, yeah. Things between Kyle and I have gotten weird since since then. Later, Fish. End of Part 5 Note: The next part will be so painful for me to write. Part 6 is the last of this series. Thanks for all the love. Edited by OliverFishFan, Jul 23 2009, 08:04 PM.
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