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| The Break Up (Last chapter up!) | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 19 2009, 09:29 PM (2,477 Views) | |
| kishfan | Jul 21 2009, 11:47 AM Post #21 |
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Another great chapter! Kyle going to Oliver's family home?! :nervous: I don't forsee good things happening! : Can't wait! |
| devillies | Jul 21 2009, 11:59 AM Post #22 |
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lol, i dont forsee good things either |
| Adriana | Jul 21 2009, 09:53 PM Post #23 |
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LOVED part 2!! =D Can't wait for more! |
| loveinabeerbottle | Jul 22 2009, 06:40 AM Post #24 |
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I'm loving your fic cannot wait to see where you are headed. :) |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 22 2009, 09:18 AM Post #25 |
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Thanks devilies, appleridge, Adriana, kishfan, and loveinabeerbottle. Part 3 will come...eventually. |
| devillies | Jul 22 2009, 09:36 AM Post #26 |
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lol can't wait |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 22 2009, 10:33 AM Post #27 |
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Part 3 3 March 2000 D2, It was a great day today. After our last respective afternoon classes, Kyle and I hurried to pack clothes and stuff for our stay at The Aquarium (AKA the Fish family home). He kept trying to distract me in various ways, but I told him to chill and remember what we agreed upon. During our stay at my folk’s house, we are only going to be best buds and nothing more. Been that way since the first time Kyle visited there with me. The ride to the house was uneventful. When we came to my folks’ house, my dad and mom sat at the front porch drinking Piña Coladas and chewing on some English muffins. When they spotted Kyle and I, they greeted us fervently and immediately apologized for not coming to visit us at the frat house. Our following conversation is included: Dad: Hey, boys! How are my two sons doing? (Ever since my Dad came to know Kyle, he felt he gained another son. Since Kyle is planning on being a cardiologist, my dad took a real liking to him. You see, my dad is an orthodontist and always wanted me, his only son, to carry the family tradition of medicine. He was let-down when I announced my intention to join the police academy. Being a cop, he felt, was a dirty blue-collar job, thus it was beneath me.) Kyle: Nobody has ever called me son since my parents died. Thanks, Dr. Fish. Dad: What have I told you, Kyle? You can call me Octavius. (My grandparents were history freaks.) Kyle: Sure, thing, Octavius. *I crack up at Kyle saying my dad’s name with a straight face.* Dad: Well, Oliver. You’ll be glad to hear that Chelsea has come back to live with us? Oliver: Kyle, Chelsea is my sister. I don’t think you’ve met her? Kyle: Nope Mom: Chelsea’s scumbag husband thought it right to see another on the side. She’s getting a divorce. Oliver: Oh that’s sad. Mom: Let’s get you boys and your suitcases in here. We then entered my house. My mother is an interior designer and insists on buying the only the best for our house. She makes it out like some kind of castle. That’s the problem with my mother. She is so status-conscious and thinks herself better than everybody else. I still care about her, though. Once we were inside, my mother quickly left for a spa appointment and my dad and Kyle chatting in the living room. I saw my sister sitting in the kitchen eating some brioches. Once she recognized me, she ran like a cheetah and gave me a hug. Our conversation is included: Chelsea: Little bro! I’ve not seen you in ages. Me: Neither have I. I hear you’re back from Dallas for good. Chelsea: Yeah, I’m sure you’ve heard about Barry and his infidelity. Me: I’m sorry. Chelsea: It wasn’t gonna work out. Me: I hope you find someone worthy of you, Chelsea. Chelsea: How’s your love life going, Holler Oller? (Holler Oller was my nickname during my younger years. My mom always told me it was because I was a loud baby.) Me: You are lucky Kyle isn’t around to hear that. I’ll die of shame. Chelsea: You didn’t answer my question, Oller. Are you seeing some girls? Me: Well, the funny thing is that I haven’t had the chance to date any. Chelsea: I know you had at least four girlfriends during high school. What changed? Me: I don’t know. Guess I got more busy? Chelsea: Busy, huh? With classes and all? Me: I guess. Chelsea: Are you really close with this Kyle person? Me: Sure, we’re really good friends. Chelsea: Really good boyfriends? Me: What makes you think that, Chels? Chelsea: I’m not that dumb, Oller. Just nod your head and say yes. Me: Dad and mom can’t know, sis. They love Kyle so much. If they knew what’s going down, no pun intended, not only will they reject Kyle, they’ll lose me. Chelsea: In that case, little bro, there’s something you must know about my divorce. Me: What? Chelsea: Our parents think Barry left me for another woman. Barry left me for another guy. It was ugly. Me: He what? I’ll kill him. Chelsea: I think Barry has suffered enough. If mom and dad find out what really happened, they will make life miserable for Barry. All I want is some peace in my life after my husband’s betrayal. So you keep quiet, OK? Me: As long as you do the same. Chelsea: Deal. After we spent the night at the movies, all five of us, we all headed home. Kyle and I shared my old room. I set up the water bed at the floor for show. Little do my parents know that there will only be a need for one bed for Kyle and I tonight… Night-night, Fish. End of Part 3 Note: I appreciate the support and comments. I couldn't do any fics without you guys. Thanks. Part 4 coming up! |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 22 2009, 10:37 AM Post #28 |
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Preview for Part 4: *Fish gets the scariest news of his life. *A choice is made! |
| appleridge | Jul 22 2009, 11:42 AM Post #29 |
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Oh soo Good and Im anxious for part 4 |
| kishfan | Jul 22 2009, 11:56 AM Post #30 |
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I can't wait for chapter 4! When I first read that Oliver had a sister, I thought you were going to have her put the moves on Kyle! Phew! I glad to see that she is going to be their friend. |
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