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| The Break Up (Last chapter up!) | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jul 19 2009, 09:29 PM (2,478 Views) | |
| kishfan | Jul 20 2009, 11:07 AM Post #11 |
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I see you're off to another great fic! As always, I can't wait to read the next diary entry. :nervous: The letter was also my first male-male fanfic. I agree with Adriana, as long as the characters and their love story is captured, gender shouldn't matter. Love is love. . .and it's what makes the world go round. :$ I think you're doing a great job. Keep up the great writing! P.S. I got my Kish Valentine's surprise! :wub: |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 20 2009, 11:36 AM Post #12 |
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Thanks! |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 20 2009, 11:37 AM Post #13 |
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| devillies | Jul 20 2009, 05:03 PM Post #14 |
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omg i already love cant wait 4 next one |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 21 2009, 07:52 AM Post #15 |
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Part 2 Disclaimer: I don’t own these characters. However, if I become rich one day and buy ABC, all bets are off. 18 February 2000 D2, Sorry for not reporting for the last few days. School has been such a drain. I scheduled some group study sessions with the other guys since I often get distracted when I’m alone with Kyle. I bought Kyle an Anti-Virus program for his laptop after I accidentally downloaded an infected file on it. He was thankful, but I had to explain everything to him. The one thing I’m better at him at: Computers! Kyle, if you happen to be snooping at this entry, you know I’m just kidding. Later gator, Fish. 20 February D2, Kyle and I got into a really bad fight. Can’t write. Sorry, Fish. 22 February D2, You deserve an explanation for what happened a few days ago. Kyle and I were busy looking on the internet for a place for Kyle to live after we graduate this spring. I, the cheapskate, suggested a small studio apartment in West Radcliff Heights. He, big surprise, wanted a downtown condo. I asked him why as to why would he need all that space since he had relatively few funds. The following conversation we had is included… Me: You can’t afford this. Kyle: I’m waiting for my crazy Aunt Melissa to croak. Me: That’s mean. Kyle: Hey, I was only saying. She said so herself that she’d give me, and only me, all of her inheritance. *he smirks* Becks ain’t getting a single cent, though I wish she got Aunt Mel’s cats. They’re so smelly. Me: Have you heard from your sis? Kyle: Not really. I think she’s out in New York. I heard she’s a shrink, or something. Me: Well, back to my question? Kyle: What was your question? Me: Why would you want some expensive, big condo? Kyle: Coz I need space for all my pals to hang. Besides, that will be our little love nest, Oliver. Me: Um, no. Kyle: You’re trippin’. If you have problems with the cost, we can always go for the studio in Kirkwood. Me: There is no…”we”. Kyle: Please clear something up for me, Oliver. There is a “we”. What part of committed relationship do you not understand? We’re in this together. Me: Well, you see, we’re just fine right now. We’re in the confines of the frat house. We know everybody here. What happens when we get to the outside world? Everyone will start raising eyebrows, especially since we’re two young single men sharing a dwelling? Kyle: Since when has that bothered you? Me: Since always, Kyle. People will start asking questions. My family will not be pleased at this…relationship. With my new career of law enforcement, I need to be the honest cop. How can I be honest if I always have to hide? Kyle: That is so messed up, Oliver. In so many ways. Me: You’re being irrational. It’s harder for me than it is for you. Kyle: You don’t think it’s hard on me too? Having to deal with your new-found wavering? Why now? You surprise me every day, Oliver. At that point, he was so angry at me that he asked me to leave his room. The one time I found the nerve to come to him with my feelings and he bites back. Why does he have to treat me like dirt? Am I just a human sex toy for him? Those were legit reasons for concern, yet Kyle chose not to even listen. The biggest worry is that I have no one else to turn to with my problems, since I thought Kyle would be the most understanding. Sad, Fish. :-( 29 February D2, It must have been the leap day. Everything seemed to turn around for the better. Kyle said sorry to me and gave me a classic Super Mario Bros. cartridge for Nintendo 64. We then played with it for a few hours then played with each other. I told him that I was gonna stay with my family for the weekend and that he was invited (I live just a few minutes away from the frat house). He agreed! Yeah! Excited for the weekend, Oliver Fish-Lewis :-) Edited by OliverFishFan, Jul 21 2009, 08:09 AM.
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| FairyPixie99 | Jul 21 2009, 08:06 AM Post #16 |
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i loved this chapter! and oh the fight was horrible but you know fish and kyle both make good points. but i love how fish is worrying about being just a sex toy for kyle and thats how he's treating kyle today on the show! :LMAO: and i predict a problem because they are going to fish's house and if kyle is going, he probably expects that fish's family will be supportive of them but i predict a fight! :fight: but i am sooooooo waiting for the next chapter! :nervous: but anyways amazing chapter! :woo: :dance: |
| OliverFishFan | Jul 21 2009, 08:08 AM Post #17 |
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Thanks, FairyPixie! I really enjoy it that Fish and Kyle have two VERY different personalities. So much fun to write! |
| FairyPixie99 | Jul 21 2009, 08:16 AM Post #18 |
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i love also that they have different personalities! like Kyle breaks the law and Fish IS the law! but i think their different personalities will keep this storyline very interesting! :grin: :woo: |
| devillies | Jul 21 2009, 10:25 AM Post #19 |
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loved it! can't wait to see wat happen's at fish's house |
| appleridge | Jul 21 2009, 10:28 AM Post #20 |
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Part 2 Was Great |
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