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| Tweet Topic Started: Jun 23 2009, 10:57 PM (729 Views) | |
| Adriana | Jun 23 2009, 10:57 PM Post #1 |
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**Author's note: The setting of the story is this: Fish is a cop in Llanview. John McBain is still a cop and Fish is his right hand man. Kyle hasn't arrived in Llanview yet. Fish has went out on dates with Layla, but then finally came out as a gay man. Layla is with/dating Cristian. Fish is currently dating CJ Roberts (about 4 months now). Their relationship is public. And here we go!** Officer Oliver Fish has always wanted to be a police officer. It's his dream job. He finally got a promotion and is now John McBain's right hand man. John has the greatest respect for Fish; he likes a man that takes his job seriously. Bo Buchanan gets an emergency 911 call and he sends John & Fish out to handle it. A gang got out of hand and two people were shot. John is used to handling such crimes on the street, but this is all new for Cherryville's Fish. But he's up to the task. They get to the scene of the crime and John dives right into the action. A fight ensues and that's when Fish notices a gang member pull out a gun. Fish is too late to stop him so he jumps in front of John. The unthinkable happens. Fish takes a shot for John and the gang members flee, leaving them behind. John immediately calls 911 and has Fish rushed to the hospital. ** In Kyle's Apartment** Kyle is packing up to move to Llanview, PA. While packing his things together, he has the TV on. A marathon of One Tree Hill is on, but he isn't paying that much attention to it. Though that Tim guy sure looks fiiiine. A breaking news story interrupts the marathon. **This just in. A gang fight broke out in Angel Square in Llanview, PA. Two police officers arrived to the scene and one has been reportedly shot. Officer Oliver Fish is in critical condition.** "Oliver Fish? No, it can't be..." He looks up at the screen and sees a picture of Ollie on screen. Kyle jumps up and immediately calls a cab to speed up his travel to Llanview. He hopes he isn't too late... **The Hospital** CJ Roberts rushes to the hospital when he hears about Fish; his heart pounding. Viki is with him for moral support. CJ rushes about the hospital, looking for anyone who can give him an answer about Fish's current state. He finds a nurse who tells him Fish is still in critical condition and he can only have one visitor at a time. Currently John McBain is in with him, so CJ has to wait. He paces back and forth. ** In the room** John walks back and forth in Fish's room, not able to look at Fish for too long; knowing that very well could have been him in that bed. He finally stands still by his bedside. John: "Fish. You know I don't do too well with words. So I'm only going to say this once. You need to wake up, man. Now. You need to snap out of this hell hole and get back to being my partner on the job. You took a bullet for me...why, I'll never know." He pauses. "No, wait, I do know. You did it because you're a man of your word. You had my back. And I would have done the same for you. So let me have that chance, Fish. Let me have your back. Wake up." John looks at Fish - still no change. John is reeled with guilt for what has happened to Fish. He leaves the room. ** Back out in the hall ** John steps out of the room. CJ: "It's about time! How is he? What happened?" John: "CJ...I'm sorry. We were breaking up a gang fight and Fish...he took a bullet for me. He needs you right now." Without another word, CJ rushes inside Fish's room. Seeing him hooked up to so many machines hurt CJ so much. He hates to see him hurting. He sits beside Fish's bedside and takes a hold of Fish's hand. CJ: "I rushed here the second I heard...Fish, I love you. I need you. You can't leave me, not now. You're everything to me. My life changed 4 months ago, the moment I laid eyes on you. I knew there was something there. You changed my life forever and I can't have my world turned upside down again. So snap out of this. Wake up. Wake up for me, for us." He looks at Fish, no reaction. He plants a gentle kiss on Fish's lips. "You'll always have my heart." CJ steps out of Fish's room, feeling tears welling in his eyes about to pour down his face. Viki sees him and holds him in her arms, trying to sooth him. Kyle Lewis arrives at the hospital and asks for Oliver Fish. No one will give him any information. "God, what do I have to do to get some answers around here!!" CJ hears the commotion and looks up. Kyle is talking to a nurse, "Please. I just want to know if Oliver Fish is ok." "He's in critical condition, Mr. Lewis and only friends and family are allowed to see him." "But I am..." He pauses. "What?" "Nothing, never mind." He sighs and walks away. CJ walks up to Kyle. CJ: "Why were you asking about Oliver Fish?" Kyle is taken aback and doesn't know how to answer. CJ: "I heard you ask about him. I just want to know how you know him." Kyle: "He and I...we...never mind. We were...friends in college." CJ: "What's your name?" Kyle: "Kyle, Kyle Lewis." CJ: "Holy shit." Kyle: "What?" CJ: "THE Kyle Lewis?" Kyle: "As opposed to..?" CJ: "Oliver...he's my boyfriend. Before we became official, he talked about you." Kyle: "He did?" CJ: "...yea..." Kyle: "What'd he say?" CJ: "He said you were the first real love of his life." Kyle's heart skips a beat. Kyle: "Is there anyway I can see him? Please?" CJ pauses before answering: "I'll see what I can do." CJ walks off and talks to Fish's doctor. He tells him he can allow Kyle Lewis to see him. CJ walks back to Kyle and gives him a nod. Kyle: "Thanks, man. Thanks a lot; it means a lot to me." Kyle walks inside Fish's room. CJ is back outside the room with Viki and is speechless. Viki: "CJ, honey, talk to me sweetheart." CJ: "I'm afraid of losing him." Viki puts her arm around him and rests her chin on top of his head. Viki: "I know sweetheart." CJ: "But I'm afraid..." He pauses. Viki: "Afraid of what?" CJ: "I'm afraid he wasn't mine to lose in the first place." Viki: "What do you mean?" CJ: "I mean...I think...no, I know. I know his heart always belonged to someone else." **Inside Fish's room** Kyle is pained to see Fish like this. He always pictured what their reunion would look like. This wasn't it. At all. He takes a seat beside Fish's bedside. He cradles his hands in his own before speaking. Kyle: "Fish...it's me. Ky." Fish's heart monitor goes off, signaling his heart skipping a beat. Kyle: "I know...I know it's been a while since I last saw you. Graduation in fact. And man, Fish, how I missed you. I missed you so much." He says as tears well in his eyes. "Fish, I need you to come back to me. You know, you ruined my whole reunion plan. I pictured something a whole lot nicer. It also involved you being awake. So can you at least do that for me? Can you open your eyes? Those beautiful, piercing blue eyes." He pauses again before talking. He leans a little closer and pulls Fish's hand up to his chest. "You feel that? Feel my heartbeat? That's where you always stayed with me. You own my heart, Ollie. Always have, always will." He places Fish's hand back down. "Now I know you're with another guy...CJ. Seems nice, you did good for yourself. He's pretty cute. And he cares about you a lot, man. But...and I don't mean too sound full of it here, but I really don't think he'll ever love you half as much as I did. I know, I know, who am I to say? I haven't seen you in years. But it's true. God, is it true. Because I'd take another chance, take a fall, take a shot for you. And I need you like a heart needs a beat, but it's nothin new. I love you so much, probably more than you'll ever know. But I want to get to tell you face to face. Wake up, Ollie." He pleads. He then leans down and plants a kiss on Fish's lips. Fish's heart monitor signals off again, but this time, he fully responds. He opens his eyes. Kyle pulls back from the kiss and opens his eyes to see Fish's eyes looking straight back into his. Kyle is about to speak, but Fish signals for him not to. Fish: "I love you, too. Always have, always will." Kyle smiles a huge grin and plants another kiss on his lips. Kyle: "Do you have any idea how long I've wanted to do that?" Fish: "I have an idea." He pauses. "I always wanted my prince charming to come find me. He finally has." Kyle: "And I'm not going anywhere." |
| OliverFishFan | Jun 24 2009, 06:36 AM Post #2 |
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Not only did you have CJ in the story (big plus with me), but you found a way of sneaking in Tim Smith. :P Good job. |
| kishfan | Jun 24 2009, 07:02 AM Post #3 |
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Another beautiful fanfic! I loved the nicknames: Ollie and Ky! I've always loved the use of nicknames. To me, it signifies something unique and special between two people. CJ knows Fish so well, "I'm afraid he wasn't mine to lose in the first place." "I knew his heart always belonged to someone else." At that moment, I felt sorry for CJ. He knows Kish is destined to be together. I brought out the Kleenex for Kish's hospital scene. Keep them coming! :wub: Edited by kishfan, Jun 24 2009, 07:03 AM.
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| Adriana | Jun 24 2009, 10:12 AM Post #4 |
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Thank you!! =D kishfan, I feel the same way about nicknames. =) CJ knew Fish so well and that makes the letting go part harder. I think whoever they cast to be this 3rd guy involved with Kish, I will feel sorry for since Kish is (and should be) the end result. So hopefully the 3rd guy knows/senses that Kish always came first to each other. Glad you liked this fic! =D |
| devillies | Jun 24 2009, 06:55 PM Post #5 |
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aww .. i prefer this to u r older one but, i liked that too |
| Adriana | Jun 25 2009, 11:16 AM Post #6 |
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Thank you! =D |
| Nukester | Jul 26 2009, 12:36 PM Post #7 |
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This was the first fanfic I've read on this board. I can see i've got a lot of catching up to do. So said... I feel bad for CJ. Are going to leave him by the roadside as Kish drive off into the sunset? Kinda unfair. :$ maybe there's an alternative? :$ Thanx! Nukester |
| b32guy | Aug 3 2009, 06:34 AM Post #8 |
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I love it long and wavy!
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I loved the OTH, Tim Smith trick as well. Very cute! And very nice writing. Very real emotions came forth. Thanks! |
| Adriana | Aug 10 2009, 09:26 AM Post #9 |
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Thank you!! =D |
| appleridge | Aug 10 2009, 07:49 PM Post #10 |
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That was awesoe |
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