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Owari's Writing Rambles
Topic Started: May 27 2010, 05:13 PM (302 Views)
Owari
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I write stuff. It is what I do.

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[Origional Story] Artificial
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Edited by Owari, May 27 2010, 07:50 PM.
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Sajmo
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I like 'Knife' and 'Heart's Price' the most. :D I like how short all of them are, too. :]
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Owari
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Thank you so much. I love to write and I especially love when people give my writing feedback.
Why did you like those two the best?
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I like 'Knife' because at first it seems a murderous weapon, but I interpretated the last two lines as if the knife took the souls of bad guys.

As for the 'Heart's Price', I like that one because of the relation between the gemstones and gold to features of the guy. Normally you buy those for cash, but in the poem (obviously) it's all about the guy's looks. (It's kinda hard to explain, sorry)
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I like your interpretations. One of the things I love about writing is how there can always be a million different ways words can be interpreted. Oh by the way I just posted up a short story I wrote. Enjoy.
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Hah, I really liked the story :D It's original, and your writing style is fairly easy for me to read quickly (and you should know I'm a slow reader, because I hardly read).
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Thank you very much.

Pffft. I read all the time. :P

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