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[Completed]All's Fair When Love is War
Topic Started: Feb 23 2018, 03:55 PM (653 Views)
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"Sorry uh...-oof!." Roy exclaimed as he was struck by the white haired woman. Though her abilities seemed out of this world to Roy. It apoeared....as if she lacked any real power. Roy felt the punches of her soft hands and even with her aura the strike was almost...laughable...

Roy held up a hand in front of one of her punches it struck his hardened palm. He peered into her white siren eyes and said. "Harder."
Edited by Roy, Jun 13 2018, 08:17 PM.
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Dorn's eyes narrowed. "I'm.. hitting.. as.. hard.. as .. I .. CAN!"

Each word was emphasized by a pathetic whop of her dainty fist. Frustrated and tired, she stood there panting for a moment before turning her back to Roy. "I don't need this shit. I've have enough for one day thank you very much."

With a final hmph, she started to walk away. Two paces and she turned with a condescending look. "Oh and I know you're lying about the bra, but that's fine. Keep it. I don't care."
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"..." Roy wasn't sure how to respond to that. So...he would probably just let it slide for now. He also resisted a bit of a chuckle at the accusation. He guessed that if he did end up with anyone's bra it probably would be hers though...Shaking his head of those strange thoughts Roy saw Dorn halt her leaving. He would remain in place but say to her.

"I could teach you. You have all the ability you need, you just have to practice a bit. I bet if you did you could punch me out in no time." Roy was being entirely sincere when he said this. If Dorn really did train...well. She had already kicked his ass multiple times. Come to think of it why did he just offer that...shit.
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"Ha." She lifted her chin higher. Hands rose to rest on her hips and a smirk. "I see what you're doing, Roy. I see what you're doing, and I don't buy it. I'm not some freakish warrior on the side like you and everyone else. I'm me and I'm fine with that."

Scowling at the other, Dorn cringed at her word usage and chose to clarify.

"I have my own way of getting shit done. I don't need to hit." her delivery faltered at the end, and Dorn looked away. She was puny as fuck and she hated it. It would be so satisfying to fucking backhand someone for once. A real backhand.

"How long would it take?"
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She was a proud one, but he knew that. Or...did he? He didn't know a lot about her if he was being honest. Everytime he thought he was getting somewhere, she snapped. Maybe that was her thing. Soon as someone started to catch on to her, or get closer to her, she snapped and ran off. Possible? Sure. Certain? Who the fuck knew honestly.

She finished her tyrade, and Roy closed his eyes as he remembered the way she punched. She hadn't moved her hips, she hadn't punched through him, her toes were off. But all of that physical ability, that raw talent, she knew how to move. She had perfected her body in her own right. But just not in this area.

"Not long." Roy spoke as he walked forward, looking around. "You'd be surprised by the progress that you could make in one week. If you have the patience. One month. At most. Dorn, your kind of a natural. Even if you don't know it." Roy held back his but, for now. He would train her, he was willing to put up with her unusual characteristics. But he wanted something in return. He wanted to learn about aura. He had to learn more about it. And this woman, was a natural and a genius if he ever saw one. He looked at her with a small smile.

She could probably tell what he was thinking.
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"God, you're so full of shit." Dorn's scowl loosened up. The aroma of coffee beans was winning. It just so happened that they stood outside a bakery. Her stomach gurgled. Loudly.

"Tell you what." She avoided his smile and his eyes. "I will give you a week because you owe me for wasting my fucking time on getting those stupid chains. I don't think you realize what a pain in the ass that was."

A cloud passed in front of the sun.

"If I don't see improvement, I'm done." She stood as tall as possible and tossed her hair. Dorn didn't like showing her stupid side, and the thought of Roy of all people seeing her do something unfamiliar and awkward was a bit terrifying.

"I need coffee."

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Roy heard her insult him, but then saw her scowl appear to diminish. Ah she was an interesting creature. But she had agreed to give him at least a week. He could do a lot in a week, and she would likely be shocked by her own progress. Roy inahled deeply through his nose to take in the scent of the coffee. His own smile shifting into a contented look. Resisting the urge to smirk at the rumble of her stomach.

He nodded when she mentioned coffee, opening the door to the shop for her. He would not smile as he said this, once more fully serious. "I apologize for ruining your plans Dorn. I really did want to finish your training. I won't ask you for a second chance. But...well maybe if you like what you see we can try aura practice again."

Roy would enter the coffee shop and pull out some of the money he had taken from the hotel room, a small stash left behind by it's former resident. And order something for himself. "Can I get you something?" Roy would ask Dorn.

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"I WAS GOING TO DO SEXY SHIT!"

A glass shattered. A barista overfilled a cup while an old man's danish went unbitten; they as well as everyone else had paused in their activity. Dorn tucked a strand of hair behind her ear while walking into the bakery; her eyes flickering up to Roy as she passed him. "It was supposed to super naughty and amazing."

Ignoring the stares, she walked up to the counter. "I'll have the Colombian Supremo. Hot. Extra cream and sugar, please."
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Roy cringed as she shouted at him. Yeah. He figured that was what she was up to. Would have been pretty interesting to see it through, but he had fucked it up. The hell was wrong with him, was he actually regretting that? Struggling to assemble his thoughts for a moment Roy's cheeks had just the barest hint of red appearing on them. It had been a long time since he had been confused like this.

But ignoring that, he put some money down on the counter and grabbed his black coffee, waiting for Dorn to decide where they should go. Roy didn't say anything. He honestly didn't know what to say, he was never at a loss for words usually. But this was...an odd predicement.

He choked out an embarresed "Sorry." Before looking away. Finally after downing some of his coffee, he was able to gather himself just enough to look at her and say. "But you won't regret this. I'll make it up to you." Roy had already started forming plans for her training...
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If I were to encounter such a monster, I would likely be eaten by it. Because in truth, I am that monster.

General Thoughts: Unfortunately the thread seemed to lack direction, and I'm kind of confused on how the events took place. It didn't seem natural to either character to get together like that, felt kind of forced. Also, small note of the ending, it feels a bit rushed.

Reward Table
Member Name:
Roy
Character Name:
Roy Zimmerlan
Standard Reward:
4.75 SP, 11.875 RP, 1,375,000 Jenni
Content Bonus:
Good Content (15%)
Effort Bonus:
Good Effort (5%)
Event Bonus:
X
Mission Bonus:
X
Arc Bonus:
X
Mentorship Bonus:
1.5675 SP, 3.91875 RP, 453,750 Jenni
Total Rewards: 7 SP, 18 RP, 2,103,750 Jenni
--IC Notes--
--Comments to the Roleplayer--
Roy felt somewhat out of character during this thread to put up with so much shit from Dorn. Like, she's beating him to death with a chair, and he knows that she tried to get him to eat someone, and wanted to kill Motto, but accepts Nen lessons from her? In my purely subjective taste, Roy was far too adept at Nen for someone who was awakened a day prior, even if you tried to play it off like he's bad at everything except Ren and Ten. During the parts where Roy was lamenting how bad he was, it almost felt like you were speaking OOC, as if to reassure that he's not really that much of a genius. Of course that's just my taste, I'm not gonna mark you off for it or anything. On the flip side, I find it ironic that the thread ended the same way it started, in a coffee shop. I was a fan when Roy came to his senses as Dorn was bashing his head in, and the flashback with his father, though I'm gonna be honest, I was rooting for Dorn ;)
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Member Name:
Gon.Pro.Hunter
Character Name:
Dorn
Standard Reward:
4 SP, 10 RP, 1,000,000 Jenni
Content Bonus:
Great Content (30%)
Effort Bonus:
Good Effort (5%)
Event Bonus:
X
Mission Bonus:
X
Arc Bonus:
X
Mentorship Bonus:
1.32 SP, 3.3 RP, 330,000 Jenni
Total Rewards: 7 SP, 17 RP, 1,680,000 Jenni
--IC Notes--
--Comments to the Roleplayer--
As with Roy, the events between the two felt a bit contrived. However, I did enjoy Dorn's role in it. Her hatsu use was fun, and I was rooting for her when she was bashing Roy's head in with the chair. I can't believe that guy thought apologizing would be a good idea. Classic Dorn with chaining Roy to the bed, though I'm glad that there weren't any, uh, graphic 18+ descriptions at that point.
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