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[Incomplete][OPEN] To the murderer nextdoor
Topic Started: Jul 24 2017, 09:52 AM (190 Views)
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"I don't care!!! How long is this going to take?!! I had enough of this, you bunch of ignorant good for nothing bloody fakes!!! Do you know how much time I wasted on this?!!" The large mid age man in a suit yells at the people standing in the office, panting a bit while taking a tissue from the box to wipe at his forehead.

"My Dear..." A mid-age woman begins hesitantly.

"Mr. Washington, please calm down, we have upgrade all the system to the newest model, specially custom made for this mission, reinforced bullet proofed window, the checking system is in placed. The hacker will not be able to hack into the system and there will not be a power outage. This time, we will get them." A man in a suit states.

"That's what you said last time!!" The large man, Mr. Washington, took a look around the European and Modern hybrid style office, five people stood in front of him. To his right, Mrs. Celina Washington stood there elegantly wearing fancy dresses and fur shrug, in front of him stood Mr. Gundor Hunta, the recently hired and the team captain to his body guard team. Further away from him and sitting on the sofa looking at his phone was yet another recent hired, Eden Yatsu, the bastard haven't even done anything beside sitting there since he came in. Lastly, standing closer to the door, is the previous team leader Mr. Yavin Waskin. Mr. Waskin was part of the original body guard team and has been a loyal servant to the Washington family for many years, but unfortunately that also means he had the most encounter with the assassins' team, by the look of things, it increasingly looks like the assassins are recruiting and exchanging their members, updating their strategies as well.

It all started about a month when a fire break out in the Washington mansion,, forcing everyone to evacuate outside, when a sniper tries to took a shot at Mr. David Washington, shielded by a now retired guard. Since then, the Washingtons have boost the mansion's security considerably. There are now guards patrolling everywhere, electronic security lock on every lock, combined with security cameras, the latest anti poison venting system and more.

All of those helped the Washingtons escaped each attempts, but they never managed to capture a live assassin. During the last assault which wiped out most if not all of the original body guard team, the Washingtons are forced to recruit new members. And now, even Mr. Waskin is retrieving due to injury, this entire team is newly put together.

"I have had enough of this, those old bastards from the other estates, they are laughing at me I'll telling you! You can't catch those f**king assassins, then I'm not being caged here like some farm animal! I won't be a laughing stock, and I'm going to the fundraiser event tonight!" Mr. Washington yells at the room.

"My dear, it is safer here, we have all these technologies...." Mrs. Washington was looking at Hunta, begging him to say something and keep her husband from going outside of the mansion.

Gundor Hunta "...well, I understand that reputation is very important in your line of business." he turns to look at Eden. "Are you confident that we can protect him outside of the mansion as well?"

Eden blinks, a little surprised that the conversation has suddenly turned to him, he was silent for a bit before replying. ".....The fundraiser event hosted by the Blake family is also heavily guard, sure." and he returns to his phone once more.

"Mr. Yatsu.." The lady begins in disbelief.

Just then, sounds of light footsteps can be heard outside of the door.

Waskin walks over to the door, "I believe that will be the new recruits." and open the door.

Eden turns his head slightly away from his phone, to looks at the door with the corner of his eyes.
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Cain walked in pockets in hand a small smile on his face 'this is gonna be fun' he thought as his dog Shadow walked in after him.

Cain looked at the people in the room there was a large man who walked around like he owned the place there was also a lady probably his mistress Cain couldn't really remember, a man on his phone who looked strong and Waskin the only person he remembered from the briefing.

Cain didn't know what to do from there so he just walked over the the guy on his phone and sat down with his legs crossed, Shadow following silently behind sat next to him and licked Cain gently on the knee a few times Cain in response patting her whispered "Its okay girl i know your nervous its fine... But I had no where else to take you, sorry".

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"So...I have another mission for you..."

"I don't like the sound of this already" The Blonde Hunter mumbled into his phone already shoving more food into his mouth. He knew that his lunch was about to be cut short.

"You're not going to enjoy it" The voice on the phone trailed off, whining already.

The giant of a man pulled to phone away from his ear as he heard the tell-tale ding of a text message, the location of the job. He spun around and began to walk in the direction "Get it over with Smalls..." He chided the girl on the other end of the phone.

"So there is this man, Mr. Washington" Smalls began but was cut off as Gil groaned "Is he fat?"

Silence.

"Does he bitch a lot"

More silence.

"I'm going to hate him aren't I?"

Finally the voice on the other side pitched in "We could really use the money big guy, and it seemed simple enough! Just for tonight and then you can forget all about it"

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No matter how softly Gilgamesh tried to walk his foot steps echoed throughout the Foyer of the large house. Compared to his booming voice they were but whispers.

"Why the hell would I find anything enjoyable about babysitting a fatass!" His voice bellowed as he yelled at his phone "No, don't give me that bullshit, we're dealing with mobsters and assassins they ARE NOT monsters. No that was one time! ONE TIME! It was a complete fluke! That little shit was a Majyuu masquerading as a human! That don't happen often"

Gilgamesh walked into the room with the others after the doors opened almost running over a dog in the process, what the hell was a dog doing here?

"Listen I'm here, I need to go 'be an amicable person'" He mocked smalls his eyes narrowing on the one person he could assume was Mr. Washington "This ain't over Smalls" He hung up the phone letting out a loud sigh. A large grin spread over his face as he stuck his hand out to Mr. Washington "Gilgamesh Harlett, I hear people are trying to kill you"
Edited by Grandmapancakes, Jul 27 2017, 08:28 AM.
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When the door opens, a young man with a dog enters the room. Eden's eyes followed him in boredom as he walks over and sit beside him, the dog sit beside the boy's feet and licked its owner a few times on the knee.

Eden watches the dog for a brief moment before turning his glance back towards the door. There is a stomping sound and loud voice echoing just outside, loud enough to even the untrained ears.

Not a moment later a large man walks in, almost tripped over the dog, but manged to catch himself in time.

Eden titled his eyebrow looking at the man who can only be described as a giant, and shakes his head silently. Where do you even find these people...

"Listen here...you boar...I ain't gonna stand here, and let you take that tone with me ...." Mr. Washington begins, but was cut off by a hand on his arm. Hunta gently guided him into a sitting position in the chair.

"Where did you find these people..?! Didn't hear what he called me just outside..?!" Mr. Washington still has much to say.

"Sir, please rest assured that they are all recommended by an agency that I used often, and are picked for this specific mission(lies)."
Hunta says calmly before walking around the desk to stand at the center of the room, facing everyone. He coughs once to get everyone's attention.

"Now now. As you may know, I am Gundor Hunter, the team leader for this mission. Under normal circumstances, I would do the introduction and have everyone get to know each other. But since you are all professional hunters, I don't believe that I need to play camp supervisor. We are all here to do a job, which is to ensure the safety of the Washington family." Gundor Hunta begins, he looks as Waskin, the latter understood what he meant and begins produce folders from thin air, and then proceed to hand everyone a folder. "Inside the folder, you will find the the gust list and the building layout of the event that Mr. Washington wishes to attend tonight, along with the briefing. Although each guest is entitled to bring a few bodyguards, and in addition, there is also an undisclosed number of temporarily staff, you should still familiarize yourself with the layout and who may be there."

Hunta pulls out his phone, and begins text each of them. "I am just texted each of you, each other's contact information, kept your phone close to you and maintain communication throughout this event. Unfortunately, do to the nature of the event tonight, we will not be getting back up support so I rely on each of you to perform your job and guard Mr. Washington with your life if necessary. Eden, Cain, Gilgamesh, I want you to go and survey the building and wait at the site in three hours. Use the time to prepare yourself if needed..."

Eden frowns at that and asked. "...What will you do at the meantime?"

Hunta titled one of his eyebrow at Eden, a bit surprised to be interrupted during the briefing. "Why, guarding Mr. Washington of course, I am his primarily body guard, I will guard him and escort him to the event. Waskin will also remain at the estate to guard Mrs. Washington and the young lady Coco."

Waskin nods in compliance.

Eden's frown deepened. This...somehow feels wrong...Eden looks away. There was nothing in what was being said that raises his suspicion, furthermore, as a recently hired it was not his place to say something to begin with. However, the uncanny feeling would not go away, he felt like he missed something, but the feeling was so baseless that it was closed to a prime instinct that probed him to speak again.

"In that case, I volunteer to stay behind at the mansion to help with the security." Eden said without emotion.

Hunta tiled his eyebrows again, and appears to be a bit annoyed. "Nonsense, we don't need further security at the mansion, enough as been invested in the current security system. Unless you know of something, in which case I'm sure, without having to tell you, that you report to your team leader a.s.a.p. If you have nothing further to add, I trust you to follow your orders and go survey the site." Hunta stated annoyingly.

Eden has nothing to say to that, and eventually, he nodded. After it becomes apparent that he wasn't going to say anything further, Hunta waves his arm around, signalling to the group that they have been dismissed.

Eden signed a bit silently as he gets up from his seat, taking a glance at who now known as Gilgamesh and Cain, he walks out of the room.
Edited by stelium, Jul 27 2017, 03:39 PM.
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Due to the Extreme Incompleteness of this thread, all rewards have been reduced by 50%.

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--IC Notes-- Seems like this thread could have gone somewhere interesting, especially with Eden's suspicions concerning the head bodyguard towards the end. However, there's not much I'm able to say with how incomplete this thread ended up being.
--Comments to the Roleplayer--

However, I can say a couple things concerning your RPing; specifically speaking, Eden could have been fleshed out a little more rather than concentrating so much on the NPCs. I understand you prioritized the NPCs and the storyline, which is admirable, but too much NPC priority leads to little character progression. Just two posts though, so no big deal.

A final note I'd like to address was when the head bodyguard lied about this "reliable source" from where the PCs were hired from; instead of putting in (parenthesis) that he "lies", you could have added a little bit of character using slight hints like body language or something...less blatant.


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--IC Notes-- Not much plot progression from your end unfortunately, though with just one post I can't blame you.
--Comments to the Roleplayer--

Cain could have been fleshed out more, even with just one post. I can't understand much from Cain as a character. All he does is show up with his pet, sit down, and say some stuff. The pet was more fleshed out than Cain, but only marginally so.


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--IC Notes-- Got a little bit of plot stuff from your character simply by being who he is around his employer, Mr. Washington. Though with just one post, there's not much to say.
--Comments to the Roleplayer--

I roughly understood the kind of person Gilgamesh is, which is great for a starting post. Describing your character in a non-blatant way without using too many, if any, metaphors is wonderful in my opinion. Though, I would have liked a little more "thought bubbles" coming from your character (probably just my personal taste). Seeing inside a character's head helps to flesh out a character far more substantially than yelling and screaming into a phone.
Edited by Flame Ingot, Aug 13 2017, 07:30 PM.
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

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