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[Incomplete]The Grip of Death and the Feathers of Freedom; For Natsu_Yagami and GonProHunter
Topic Started: Oct 4 2016, 08:10 AM (518 Views)
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Natsu groaned from the pain but mostly from frustration. After thinking about the guy for a few seconds, Natsu heard a young voice next to him. The injured kids looked to his right and saw a young winged boy. Stuck to? Oh, yeah! I flew into him, and Ethijax must have froze us together. Then a dark thought past through Natsu's mind. His eyes darkened and he aimed his malice towards the kid in the bed next to him. "Did you come to help him? I'll kill than him!" The young assassin was prepared to attack Go Go any second.

After a few seconds of staring at Go Go, he remembered that he didn't complete him mission. "Shit! I needed that money!" Natsu exclaimed with his anger flaring up again.
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Go Go choked on his own spit when the other’s darkness manifested and was directed at him. Coughing stupidly, he flapped his wings and tried to kick off his sheets only to become tangled up in them. He lost balance and fell backwards off his bed. Go Go’s feet remained on the mattress inside a tight ball of sheets and one of his wings whacked a monitor; it’s alarm going off as a result.

“NO WAY! I DON’T KNOW THAT GUY!” * He finally wheezed from where he lay panting.

The second flare caused Go Go to squirm around to look at the kid again.

“Hey! Calm down would ya? I’m just a kid like you! I watched over ya and stuff! I even held your hand once!” *

The nurses rushed in and shut off the buzzing monitor before staring at the strange pair. One had fallen out of his bed and was yelling. Quickly they exchanged glances and nodded. That one needed to be sedated. They left and returned with two more male nurses who lifted Go Go and held him firmly against the mattress as one approached with a syringe.

“HEY! IT’s HIM YA GOTTA…DO THAT…TO! NO! NO! Don’t do ….that…” * The winged boy went limp and in silence they restrained him with several belts over his chest arms and legs.
Edited by Gon.Pro.Hunter, Oct 19 2016, 08:32 PM.
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Natsu calmed down when he saw how the boy reacted. Then, nurses came in and put the displaced kid back onto the bed. And, they began trying to sedate Go Go. Seeing this, Natsu stated urgently, "Stop! I made him freak out. There is no need to do that!"

The nurses paused to look at Natsu questioningly. And the blue-eyed boy said again, "He freaked out because of me." After hearing it again, all of them stopped to think. After several seconds, they helped Go Go get comfortable and fixed the blanket and pillow. They also reconnected the monitoring equipment and left. "Sorry, about overreacting, Go Go," then he paused, "my name is Natsu."
Edited by Natsu_Yagami, Oct 19 2016, 06:27 AM.
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“Thanks.” Go Go sighed in relief. That had been close and highly unpleasant. He noticed the brunette was much calmer and he grinned. “It’s ok. You were fighting that guy pretty hard.” *

He glanced at the boy’s bandages and remembered how he threw an impressive kick at the ice man. It looked like such a cool attack. But the guy was super strong and caught Natsu’s leg with ease..Go Go remembered the sound that followed. He cringed a little and wondered about the boy across the hospital room. That guy’s crushing grip must’ve hurt real bad. It looked like Natsu had a bunch of injuries.

“That was a pretty bad fight. I wonder why he didn’t just kill ya. Us. Uhh.. you know?” *

He was feeling a little drowsy from his minor adrenaline rush and shifted in the soft hospital bedding reserved for VIP patients. Go Go looked down. The sheets weren’t the thin papery kind he had seen before.. and he had what.. three pillows?? All of them were luxorious and.. scented. There were large floral arrangements and come to think of it that huge basket of exotic fruit wasn’t the standard sort of thing either!

How the heck did they end up in such a fancy situation? Nasty injuries aside..
Edited by Gon.Pro.Hunter, Oct 19 2016, 08:34 PM.
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"He probably would have killed me, if anyone. You just got caught up in it, so I think you would have been left alone. I knew he was going to be strong, but I didn't think that strong," Natsu responded with a relaxed smile. After a short pause Natsu informed Go Go, "I was contracted to kill him. Ha, and look where that got me. In the hospital with nearly no money and a hurt leg." The annoyed boy sighed at the last part.

He was going to be stuck here for a while. Natsu removed the blankets to look at his leg. It was a deep red and purple, and heavily swollen. The kid closed his eyes and took several deep breaths, focusing on his pain tolerance. Then, he opened his eyes and began to inspect his leg. He began with gentle rubbing and prodding. The was trying to jackhammer his mind, but with the combination of the drugs and his pain tolerance it was almost unnoticed. Then came the deeper scan. Oh god, this is going to suck! Natsu said with a loud sigh. Then, he pushed hard into his thigh and searched around. This to no surprise caused his nerves to scream with a new intensity. Natsu was forced to shut his eyes and grit his teeth. He felt his muscle and bone thoroughly. It was bad, the guy did some serious damage. After a couple of minutes, Natsu stopped, and finally took a pained breath.
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Go Go watched in horror as the other boy began to poke and push at his injured leg. Natsu was contracted? That sounded like grown up stuff. A billion questions flooded his mind as he watched the other silently felt around in what looked like a methodical but excruciating way. How much money did he make off of killing people? Was that guy his first ever contract? Why didn’t that ice dude kill him anyway? Why on earth was Natsu doing that to his leg?? When was lunch? Why didn’t Natsu just get a regular job if he needed money so badly?

He gagged a little as the other boy probed deeper into his damaged leg. Go Go turned away and hugged his legs close. It would probably take a while for Natsu to heal up. Maybe he could find him some money. He was feeling better than last night so maybe he could sneak out and … The raven frowned. He never really had money either. In fact he never had money. One time a lady gave him some for helping her with apple picking but he gave it to a little kid later that day. They were crying and he felt bad. The shiny coin certainly did the trick though. And now Natsu was hurtin’ and needing money too.

“I’ll be back.” * Go Go’s feet touched down onto the cold floor and he was surprised at how much it bothered him. That ice guy really froze him good. Padding quietly to the window, the winged youth wrestled to open it.
Edited by Gon.Pro.Hunter, Oct 27 2016, 02:20 PM.
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The conflict between Ethijax and Natsu was not resolved, Go Go wants to help Natsu but we didn't get to see what kind of action that he wants to take. I view this as Very Incomplete, the reward has been reduced by 40%.

Reward Table
Member Name:
Natsu_Yagami
Character Name:
Natsu Yagami
Standard Reward
2 SP, 5 RP, 240,000 Jenni
Content Bonus
X
Effort Bonus
Good Effort: 40,000
Event Bonus
X
Mission Bonus:
X
Arc Bonus:
X
Mentorship Bonus
X
Total Rewards: 2 SP, 5 RP, 280,000 Jenni
--IC Notes--
The story ended before any conclusion can be made, not sure where Natsu will go from here, will he chase after his target? Will he befriend Go Go and try again in another post? Only time will tell...

--Comments to the Roleplayer--
Some of your posts are less than 200 wc, but since we went into combat I did not count it against you.

I can see a clear effort that went into this thread, things are always happening in almost every one of your posts, and it was really intense. Natsu got hurt badly by Ethijax, people are talking about death in the very beginning of the thread. However, it felt like things are moving way too quickly without proper build up, Natsu and Ethijax engaged in PVE in the first post, and Natsu was hospitalized few posts later without much effort from Ethijax. They were transported to the hospital, NPC medical staff shows up in one sentence and they moved to another scene in the next sentence. Things are moving too fast for the content to properly sinks in, in fact, too many contents are squished into one post, and despite how grim Natsu acts in the post, it still looks somewhat unrealistic. But I did not count this against you.

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Reward Table
Member Name:
Gon.Pro.Hunter
Character Name:
Go Go
Standard Reward
2 SP, 5 RP, 240,000 Jenni
Content Bonus
X
Effort Bonus
40,000
Event Bonus
X
Mission Bonus:
X
Arc Bonus:
X
Mentorship Bonus
X
Total Rewards:2 SP, 5 RP, 280,000 Jenni
--IC Notes--
You tried your best to help out, what happens next will reveal itself inside your dream (probably)

--Comments to the Roleplayer--
Not much to say, I can see a clear effort that went into keeping up with Natsu, but there was a feeling of disjointed in the emotions between the two characters. Natsu's reaction was always intense and extreme, and although Go Go tried to raise his emotional level, there was a disconnection between the two character. Although, I applaud your effort to try to help out in this situation, especially towards the end.
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Edited by stelium, Aug 13 2017, 10:01 PM.
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