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[Approved] Miyu Tanaka[Archived]
Topic Started: Jan 12 2015, 06:26 PM (216 Views)
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× General Information

Name: Miyu Tanaka
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 135lbs
Species: Human
Appearance: Miyu is a lithe young girl with pale skin, grey eyes, and short dark brown hair which is often died at the tips. She usually wears a red cloak, black blouse, and a skirt with red trimmings. Her entire apparel is made up of shades of red and black, with black on the main suit and red on the cloak and hood with cross shaped pins holding the cloak to the shirt. Around her waist is a belt which holds large cartridges in individual loops, a magazine pouch, and what appears to be a Latin cross. Beneath her clothes is a special harness with a large magnet to hold her sword against her back in lieu of a sheath.

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Profession: Hunter
Reputation: 18 (Rank H)
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× Physical Statistics

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Aura: 9
Might: 16
Agility: 10
Endurance: 11
Accuracy: 11

× Nen Techniques

Basic Nen Techniques

Hatsu Affinity: Reinforcement

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General Hatsu Description:
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× Non-Nen Techniques

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Edited by Asylum, Jan 14 2015, 05:43 AM.
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

For Hyper Repair, go more into detail in what constitutes as minor and what as minor. Maybe make a little chart similar to this:

Minor (Examples of what would be minor here) = 1 post
Medium (Example of what would be medium here) = 3 posts
Major (Example of what would be major here) = 6 posts.

Not exactly that, just a rough draft for you to get the idea.

Your second hatsu lacks a name. To get it as strong as you want it to be, you'll either have to get a lot more/stronger conditions (Tip:In the system it's mostly > Rank = Complexity and versatility and Conditions = Power) Or you can make it stronger later by adding TP into it. For now I'd advise getting a lower amount and making them buffable with TP.

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I've tried my best to define Hyper Repair, and I scrapped the second one for now as I'm kinda unhappy with its general principle, so I'll wait and see how I go.
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

Oh yeah and make it r3.

Consider it 1/2ed after that is done.
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Done I think
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?

1/2 approved
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Prone to Madness

Approved 2/2.
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