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| [Approved] Yiashi Satsugaisha (Ready for review!)[Archived] | |
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| Tweet Topic Started: Jan 11 2015, 06:05 AM (214 Views) | |
| Yiashi | Jan 11 2015, 06:05 AM Post #1 |
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× General Information Name: Yiashi Satsugaisha Gender: Male Age: 19 Height: 5'10" Weight: 158 lbs Species: Human Appearance: Image Profession: Exorcist Reputation: 0 (Rank H) Background Backpack × Physical Statistics [0/0] [50/50] Aura: 14 Might: 8 Agility: 10 Endurance: 10 Accuracy: 8 × Nen Techniques Basic Nen Techniques Hatsu Affinity: Conjurer [5/6] [0/0] Hatsu Theme: Aura stealing/transferring/exorcism General Hatsu Description: The majority of Yiashi's abilities will revolve around the creation of objects that can be used as a medium to store and transfer aura from one person to another, or simply to be bottled up for future usage. This theft of aura can be used offensively, defensively or supportively. With this concept in mind, some catalysts made are also proficient in sealing away or removing Nen curses from objects or individuals. General Hatsu Conditions: While the general conditions vary from object to object, most will involve polite manners at the bare minimum. The catalysts created will require Yiashi to give his name out to an individual. Hatsu Abilities × Non-Nen Techniques [12/16] Techniques Edited by Yiashi, Jan 12 2015, 07:57 PM.
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| Asylum | Jan 11 2015, 01:42 PM Post #2 |
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Prone to Madness
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I can't allow this effect. I also take it that each effect reduces the counter by said requirement? Wouldn't make much sense otherwise. You will need to put a limit on how high the counter can go (however, you can increase that cap by investing TP later), and a cooldown for each effect. Need a range for the emitted attacks, and you should keep in mind that one's aura defenses would have an effect on how deep said attacks would go. As for the summoning condition of one post: if he can just maintain it permanently afterwards I don't see that as being very strong. You say that he can't drain aura from non-nen users or those who don't meet the name condition, but can the sword's effects be used on these people? |
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| Yiashi | Jan 11 2015, 04:44 PM Post #3 |
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Edited changes and added additional conditions. I also reduced the range to Kutone's dissipation to 15 meters. |
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| Asylum | Jan 12 2015, 02:49 AM Post #4 |
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Reduce the Counter total to 5, and maybe 1 TP investment per extra increment. At what kind of rate does maintaining the sword tire him out? Is it like constantly exercising, or maybe maintaining aura? I assume you mean it to discourage him from maintaining it, so I want to make sure its not something you can just ignore. Also, you can get rid of the cooldown for the r5 ability, since its pretty simple and doesn't need much of an activation condition. |
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| Yiashi | Jan 12 2015, 07:57 PM Post #5 |
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Edited~! |
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Jan 13 2015, 01:31 PM Post #6 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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About your hatsu, if you really want the absorption to be a factor in tiring the opponent out, you´ll have to specify imagery to that part. Other than that I don´t see much wrong. |
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| Asylum | Jan 15 2015, 03:43 AM Post #7 |
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You've answered all my concerns. Approved 1/2. |
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| :)Westborn | Jan 17 2015, 01:21 PM Post #8 |
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The Most Responsible Adult in your Living Room
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2/2 Welcome. |
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