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| Haku | Jan 11 2015, 03:29 AM Post #1 |
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× General Information Name: Wintrow Belleren Gender: Male Age: 22 Height: 1,75 metter Weight: 68 kg Species: Human Appearance: Brown bright eyes, straight hair groomed backwards, an attentive look with a welcoming smile was how Wintrow usually was around people. As a medical student, he wore a semi formal outfit, a plain shirt and darker trousers, wearingthe typical white coat most of the time. . Generaly he is tought to be very carefull and professional with hospital aquired infection, as he always keeps at least his left hand glove. Outside, or when travelling, he wears black resistant gloves in both hands, most of the time, and a dark hooded long coat. He's fit, compact built. Image Profession: Virus Hunter, physician in training Reputation: 49 (Rank H) Background Backpack × Physical Statistics [0/18] [0/68] Aura: 15 Might: 12 Agility: 15 Endurance: 13 Accuracy: 13 × Nen Techniques Basic Nen Techniques Hatsu Affinity: Manipulation [5/6] [0/3] Hatsu Theme: Pandora's box (パンドラの箱) General Hatsu Description: Wintrow's aura is able to control the properties of infectious virus, microbes and small multicelluar parasites, being able to modelate their agressivity, virulence and growth. These infectious agent, by the ability to cause damage can be divided in three classes: 1- Non-pathogenic in the environment- , can't penetrate skin, need intensive stimulation (from Wintrow's nen) or massive and repetive ammount) and contact with oponent's "inside" (wound, aspiration through to the respiratory or digestive tract) to cause disease, and are found everywhere, need a open wound (cut, insect bite) or to be ingested, needs direct contact with wintrow to cause disease;2- pathogenic environment microbes- present in specific vectors (insects and blood sucking) in tropical and subtropical areas, contaminated swams and stagnant water and venomous rare plants- they all need too a open wound, ingested or to be rubbed, to be infective, as they have intrisically virulent; 3- fulminant organisms- very rarelly found in the environment, only very unique organisms can carry them, or isolated in laboratory- these one can by themselves create a path and infect the organism. Contamination of water scources, food scources or vectors are all routes to be contaminated by this ability plus a pathogenic species. General Hatsu Conditions: There are several conditions he needs to fulfil: extensive knowledge of the microbe, the presence of the specimen, and that he is close in contact with it. Depending on the class, different conditions apply. Hatsu Abilities × Non-Nen Techniques [16/24] Techniques
Edited by Westborn, Jun 29 2015, 12:27 PM.
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| Haku | Jan 11 2015, 03:51 AM Post #2 |
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Ready for approval =) |
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| Asylum | Jan 11 2015, 04:00 PM Post #3 |
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Make Physician's repertoire and Basic Survival Skils rank 4. If you kept them to being able to perform first aid and identifying symptoms, that would be fine, but performing surgeries, having an extensive herbal knowledge, and creating poisons/drugs will cost you something. Acquiring the properties of viruses and whatnot sounds a lot like Transmutation, not Manipulation. Inside Corruption: They just have to be in En range for him to constantly damage them? That's way broken imo; I would at least require that he need to make physical contact with the target. Going further, how does he apply the microbes? Do they already have to be present in the environment? Does he need to splash them with a test tube? |
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| Haku | Jan 11 2015, 04:49 PM Post #4 |
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Thank you for checking it! I changed Physician's repertoire to be able only to recognize symptoms. But keeping the basic survival knowledge r4 and not changing it, so when i have the new year's event, i might use it, is that okay? Inside corruption: I'm sorry, what i meant it was i'd have to keep En activated and to keep an aura connection to keep it growing, but at a slower progression. I had Pitou's En to be able to deform my en to keep like a rope to the affected area, it would work synergitically. Anyways, i changed it to must be in contact, but the progression wil be faster right? I was thinking of having a really slow progression if only EN (activated) was in contact with a wound and a faster more effecient if the character was in contact with it ( i only edited the contact condition. and i will remove pitou's en if i can't use it this way) I changed from aquiring do control- i wanted to ask something, in order to, further in life, to be able to create monster from these micro organisms, what type would you reccomend I was not clear, i'm sorry again, for the technique to work, he has to be in contact with the microbes: being it in a laboratory or in the environment. I have now several examples in the case inside corruption , requiring presence of three elements: open wound or viscera; solid or aqueous scource of microbes (Only class 1- infectious agents. There must me a direct contact between the afected area ( with a open wound or ingested) and aquous or solide scource of infectious agent ( "example: a watersplash from environment natural water, ate something sick, fezes or soil, faeces, animal secretions) and touching or almost touching; Also, i divided them in classes: class 1-non pathogenic, require direct contact with the inside, require wintrow's contact (the only one im able to control now)- found everywhere; class 2- pathogenic, require direct contact with internal structures or need to be rubbed, found only in propicious environments (listed before) 3- fulminant- can cause themselves a wound, fatal, very fast progression and very rare, need a container. I won't have a container for a microbe, if i want the item, i'll ask late,r when i have jenny to expend. The point was that if i had the container, it'd be a lot more effecient as the microbe would be already deadly The rest of them could be in the environment,and would require longer time or aura intesity to work. Edited by Haku, Jan 12 2015, 12:53 AM.
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| Asylum | Jan 12 2015, 03:12 AM Post #5 |
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I recommend changing Basic Survival Skills to r1 (the first half of what you mention is fine there) and at least noting that he doesn't have the rest of it yet. My suggestion would have been that he needs to make contact with (or close enough), and apply an aura to the microbes in order to accelerate their growth. The more aura he applies, the longer the effect, since the aura is being consumed as energy for the microbes. One thing I'd like to ask you is if you plan to manipulate the microbes directly. Not enhancing their growth/power, but for instance drawing them to him, and preventing them from harming/spreading. If you want to use Oddly-shaped en to have that kind of precision then I say to forget En altogether and make an ability where he simply makes tendrils of aura out of his hand or something. If it doesn't have any direct combat effects, it can be r5, but since Manipulation doesn't really fit I suggest keeping it as Specialization. A monster... either manipulation or enhancement would fit best, imo. Manipulation by drawing many together (and with the bonus of being able to control it), Enhancement by simply enhancing its size to gargantuan levels. |
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| Haku | Jan 12 2015, 07:49 AM Post #6 |
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Okay then, i have changed it to r1,the condition to only while close enough, and removed Pitou's en. If it is possible, i plan to use it with in "reverse", in a way i can stop them from harming, it's not only killing implicited, the tech, more of subjugation. And, if i'm able to drawn them near me, like make them move? I'm sorry i had to take this long to reply Edited by Haku, Jan 12 2015, 07:52 AM.
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Jan 13 2015, 01:38 PM Post #7 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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You could probable use them in reverse but you'd have to add that to the description. Edit that and I'll 1/2 |
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| Haku | Jan 13 2015, 03:34 PM Post #8 |
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I've edited to "Wintrow is able to use it in reverse, draw them to him, stop the progression and keep them from harming". Thank you =) |
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Jan 13 2015, 03:36 PM Post #9 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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1/2 approved |
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| Asylum | Jan 14 2015, 01:49 AM Post #10 |
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Actually I disagree. If Inside Corruption is for amplifying their growth, then I believe stopping progression and drawing them to him should be a separate ability (one ability gives you straight up control and immunity, while the other intensifies their growth). Furthermore, you only describe that effect in the general hatsu section - which doesn't give you anything on its own. Another you should add to your conditions is that since they're feeding on his aura in order to grow, the more he uses this effect the more tiring it is for him. |
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