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[Approved] Kyan Galileo[Archived]
Topic Started: Sep 12 2014, 08:30 PM (516 Views)
Entropy
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× General Information

Name: Kyan Galileo
Gender: male
Age: 16
Height: 5ft5
Weight: 105ib
Species: Human
Appearance: Has a slender build. His blonde hair goes past his shoulders halfway down his back and he has an innocent yet mischievous face with blue eyes. He wears a black jacket with a long sleeved white turtleneck underneath. He has his cased telescope slung over his back and his maps stuffed into the interior of his jacket. His rapier is sheathed on his left hip. He has long dark gray semi formal pants and black sneakers. Some would refer to him as appearing somewhat "feminine" though courtesy dictates that it is not said directly to his face.

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Profession: Star Hunter
Star Hunter

Reputation: 53 (Rank H)
Background

Backpack


× Physical Statistics

[0/22]
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Aura: 16
Might:10
Agility: 15
Endurance:10
Accuracy: 21

× Nen Techniques

Basic Nen Techniques

Hatsu Affinity: Emission


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[0/11]


Hatsu Theme: Astronomy
General Hatsu Description: Various skills based around astrological bodies and their behavior
General Hatsu Conditions: N/A

Hatsu Abilities


× Non-Nen Techniques

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Techniques
Edited by Asylum, Jun 27 2015, 07:03 AM.
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.

Sweet char, like the abilities! (Sword-user bias is real xD)

1) All i'd probably say regarding your hatsu is this: Have two modes that change depending on the starlight for both abilities. So that it can only penetrate to a certain extent under the starlight and less so during the day. (Maybe add a small clause saying that the sun doesn't count as a star so there is no smartassery xD) When you do this give us an idea of what exactly the thrust can penetrate, for instance "Pierces like an ordinary rapier usually, but can pierce wood like butter in the starlight" along those lines.

2) Change 0/16 to 16/16 and 0/6 to 6/6


Otherwise this looks sound to me.
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Entropy
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Fixed and added specificity to the differences in power with and without stars
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Kain
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Tiger Lord aka Star Lord aka Vigo aka Chocolate Thunder

Seems good to me, 1/2
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I say to make your non nen techniques each rank 4, as that's the level required for mastery.

Also, are the abilities empowered at night in general, or does starlight actually need to be shining down on him? Let's say he's deep underground or in a dark forest at night - would it be the same as if he were using it in broad daylight?
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Fixed and with the stars it functions so they have to be visible, so indoors, underground, or even cloudy nights would prevent effectiveness. Similarly, in a place like York Shin City where the lights from the city prevent one from being able to see the stars, he would not receive any empowerment.
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Prone to Madness

You can make Thrust Rank 4, and I'll 1/2 this.
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Taking Notes

Fixed
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Prone to Madness

Approved 2/2.
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