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| [Approved] Void Lightning Adjustment: Part One of Two | |
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| פּFlash | Sep 4 2014, 01:49 AM Post #1 |
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.
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Hatsu Adjustment, Removing Avatar, Avatar Replacement still in the works for now so i might as well get this sorted. Old Technique Name: Void Sparks Type: Supportive Technique Category: Transmuter Technique Rank: 3 Description: Through his extensive exposure to varying levels of electricity throughout his life, Aiza is able to transmute his aura into raw electrical energy and direct it as he pleases throughout his body using his aura as a sort of conductor, though all of which originates from his palms. Aiza is able to manipulate this electricity through his movements and is able to electrify his Fulmenite blades "Phobos & Deimos." Aiza's fierce electrical abilities have special properties though, due to the nature of his aura. Instead of the usual blueish white hues that electricity usually has, Aiza's "Void Sparks" take on a deep black colour, with a white glow at the edges. Due to the effects of his fear inducing Aura, Void Sparks take on the properties of that aura, inducing fear in those that come into contact with it. Aiza's usage of Void Sparks take on different forms depending on how he decides to use it, the names of the three current applications are: Malign Discharge, Virulent Current and Sinister Static. Conditions: Naturally, Aiza is only able to use one application of Void Sparks at a time, due to the nature of the abilities which require dedicated usage of the hatsu. Aiza's actual application of Void Sparks requires various charge times and have their own conditions all of which drain his aura by a rough amount: [/font] Malign Discharge Virulent Current Sinister Static Range: Short to Long Effect: Malign Discharge: Aiza simply gathers Void Sparks in his palms and fires it in a helix of electrical energy. The size and intensity of the blast is determined by the time spent charging. These blasts may be fired from the end of Aiza's sword, due to them being incredibly strong and quick conductors, though any other weapon will require him to use Shuu on the weapon, it must still be able to conduct electricity. Virulent Current: By charging Void Sparks for a minimum of five seconds in each hand, then placing his palms together, Aiza pulls his hands apart, creating a long, snake-like stream of void lightning, which is as long as he extends his hands away from each other before turning his palms facing toward the side of the stream. By turning his palms so that hey are both facing outwards, Aiza is able to move and control the stream by moving around both hands, controlling the direction of either end within a five meter radius. Sinister Static: Aiza, by electrifying his palms and then directing the electricity throughout his aura, is able to lightly electrify his aura in it's entirety causing it to be essentially a low-powered void lightning field of sorts. The electrical power that his aura will have as a whole is dictated by the amount of time spent charging electricity in his palms, before spreading it evenly throughout his body. He is able to control the strength of this by directing his aura as he would normally through Ryuu or Ko increasing the amount of aura in an area of his body and thus the electrical strength of that area. Naturally, whilst his aura isn't concentrated in a particular area, the electrical and fear inducing effects of Void sparks, due to being spread thinner across the whole body, will not have as potent an effect on contact, though the effects of Void Sparks will apply to all contact made with Aizas aura. His swords remain electrified in this state (Strength of the electrification is dictated by aura levels around his hands). By using En to deactivate sinister static, Aiza is able to use a weak area of effect blast, causing a chill to run down the spines of his opponents and making their hair stand on end. Idea of what the electricity looks like Cooldown: 1 [/spoiler] New: Technique Name: Void Lightning Type: Supportive Technique Category: Transmuter Technique Rank: 3 Description: Through his extensive exposure to varying levels of electricity throughout his life, Aiza is able to transmute his aura into raw electrical energy and direct it as he pleases throughout his body using his aura as a sort of conductor, though all of which originates from his palms. Aiza is able to manipulate this electricity through his movements and is able to electrify his Fulmenite blades "Phobos & Deimos." Aiza's fierce electrical abilities have special properties though, Instead of the usual blueish white hues that electricity usually has, Aiza's "Void Sparks" take on a deep black colour, with a white glow at the edges. Aiza's electricity is able to disrupt aura slightly, in larger amounts it is able to fragment it, allowing it to affect aura based abilities. Aiza is able to utilize his aura offensively through charging electrical energy in his palms and unleashing it in various ways: Void Lightning - Void Sparks: Aiza's original ability and his most basic application of void lightning. Void Sparks is the root of most of Aiza's abiltiies. Aiza transmutes the aura around his hands into raw electrical energy, which he is able to direct and fire at his opponents through his hands or the tips of his swords. He his also able to maintain the charge in his hands, essentially augmenting them with electrical damage. Should he maintain this charge with Phobos and Deimos in hand, they will remain electrified for as long as he maintains it. (Charge Times and Effects) Void Lightning - Umbral Surge: Aiza charges electricity in his hands before clapping, causing his aura to explode in a blast of electricity all around him. This blast has the electrical power of a tazer and explodes in a 10 meter spherical radius, knocking opponents back and electrocuting them. To use this ability, Aiza is required to charge his aura for a time (4 posts) should Aiza use this ability, he is unable to use Void Sparks for 1 subsequent post. Edited by Westborn, Oct 14 2014, 09:38 AM.
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| קּParadox | Sep 4 2014, 09:25 PM Post #2 |
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First off change your seconds to post, seconds is like the biggest loophole ever we dont do time. Rank it up or lose the effects on opponents add harsher conditions to it actually there are none at all you just charge it. Add conditions harsh ones change the seconds to time after you do that then we will get in to the nitty gritty stuff ok.
Edited by Paradox, Sep 5 2014, 12:02 AM.
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Sep 5 2014, 06:51 AM Post #3 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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Meh, I think the high costs and charging times are a good enough condition, though how long can he electrify his weapons? Not sure what I think of the seconds charges, I don't have anything against it so ask the other mods I guess. |
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| פּFlash | Sep 5 2014, 07:12 AM Post #4 |
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If he's maintaining a charge, then the swords will be electrified because of the nature of Phobos and Deimos' construction, like it was before. |
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| פּFlash | Sep 9 2014, 03:05 AM Post #5 |
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.
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Gonna bump |
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| Asylum | Sep 16 2014, 01:53 PM Post #6 |
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Prone to Madness
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Sorry this took so long. I'm going to say that Draconvergence should really be a separate technique. If you removed the aura dissipating effect and made it rank 2, then I'll allow it. Reduce the duration of the final level of Void Sparks to 1 post. |
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| פּFlash | Sep 18 2014, 03:35 PM Post #7 |
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I'm going to remove Draconvergence for now and add it separately later. Just for future reference though, what rank would you put it as it is now on its own? Draconvergence
Edited by Flash, Sep 18 2014, 03:35 PM.
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Sep 26 2014, 03:41 AM Post #8 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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The 1 post for each hand cooldowns is practically nonexistent, you can just fire from one hand, fire from the other in the next post and repeat. I'd be okay with it if you made it 2 posts for each hand, this way you can still fire twice in two posts but the cooldown would.. You know.. Actually exist? For the more powerful void sparks I want a definite cooldown. Not per hand. During the charging of Umbral Surge, how would we charge? Just charging his aura around him and he wouldn't be able to use void sparks? Or you just need to state that he charges and then continue blasting? I like the former better. |
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| פּFlash | Sep 26 2014, 04:35 AM Post #9 |
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If he's using the charge for Umbral surge then how could he use other abilities without having to charge again? You need to charge with both hands, removing any ability to use other versions whilst charging for it, unless he uses something else. And i won't move on the per hand thing. As for the one post thing, It's one post for each currently and it's a weak blast anyway unless anybody else really has a problem with it, but to me that's always been his fundamental ability and it's been fine, even with the fear oppression that it previously had.
Edited by Flash, Sep 26 2014, 04:35 AM.
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| הּKen sweatshirt | Sep 26 2014, 05:34 AM Post #10 |
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Everyone's always telling you to be humble. When was the last time someone told you to be great?
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I think it was you who said to someone else that said it had previously been fine: "I didn't comment on it then" Same applies here. What do you mean, you're not moving on the hand thing? Because I'm not moving with it either. You can have that shit on lower levels, but the two strongest of void sparks are too strong for my opinion to be just used twice like that. I'm not going to dismiss it just like that. Let's ask the other mods opinion. |
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