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[Approved] Natsu Yagami[Archived]; My Hunter x Hunter character!
Topic Started: Aug 9 2014, 10:11 AM (408 Views)
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× General Information

Name: Natsu Yagami
Gender: Male
Age: 12
Height: 4' 11"
Weight: 97 lbs
Species: human
Appearance: He has many long scares all over his body, two on his face; one that goes from his hairline down to mid-cheek over his right eyes. The other travels diagonally across his lips, over his chin and down his neck.

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Profession: Assassin
Reputation: 0 (Rank H)
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× Physical Statistics

[0/0]
[0/50]

Aura: 1
Might: 11
Agility: 16
Endurance: 11
Accuracy: 11

× Nen Techniques

Basic Nen Techniques

Hatsu Affinity: Unknown


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Hatsu Theme:
General Hatsu Description:
General Hatsu Conditions:
Hatsu Abilities


× Non-Nen Techniques

[16/16]
Techniques
Edited by Natsu_Yagami, Aug 13 2014, 10:50 AM.
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Yeah, it's ready for review! Is there anything I need to work on?
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The Most Responsible Adult in your Living Room

Change the x/16 on your NN techs to 16/16

Otherwise, 1/2 approval.
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.

You might as well just make the hoe grab rank 4. Having it at R5 isn't really giving you anything. As for reverse spin and spinning top kick, make those R1 because you could probably perform those without too much trouble irl in your back yard xD That should give you 8 TP to work with still.
Edited by Flash, Aug 13 2014, 08:38 AM.
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Done with that, I edited my character again!
Edited by Natsu_Yagami, Aug 13 2014, 09:41 AM.
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.

You might want to put some examples of attacks that he isn't going to feel as much, just to give us a better idea of how much he can resist. For instance, a strike from a hammer, a punch from mike tyson, that type of thing.
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Those whom the gods wish to destroy, they first make mad.

Sound, 2/2 Approved
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Prone to Madness

I need to add some comments here. For one, Assassin's instinct concerns me for several reasons. Rank 4 is pretty low rank, and you describe it as a special form he can enter whenever he wants with no drawbacks. You also just state that his speed and strength increase with no physical explanation as to why nor any specifics. I can't accept that so I'm going to have to deny it, you can create an adjustment to replace it later if you want.

Next Hoe grab and spinning top kick, I actually have the exact same techniques based from the same source ranked 2 and 4 respectively. I can see Hoe grab being higher if you want a specialty in grab based skills so you can keep that as is, but I do recommend you increase spinning top kick in your next adjustment.
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